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Fan Fiction Kaisi Yeh Yaariyaan 2

We are engaged (Part 1)

ShrukarBy ShrukarMarch 11, 201716 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hey guys shruti is here. I have decided to write another ff on manan because for u all. U loved me & my ff a lot & i am sorry for disappointing u people eith just a short love story but now it is a big story & i assure that u people will feel the thrill too.

So lets in.

A big hospital is seen where a wife & husband is holding a baby girl in their hands & waiting for doctor while crying.

Mother’s prologue

I stared down at my daughter thay lay asleep in my arm. I blinked several times trying to make the tears go away.

Then doctor & said

“I have some news regarding your daughter mrs.murthy. A group of doctors at this hospital ran multiple of tests on your daughter & we still haven’t figured out what is wrong with your daughter’s body. ”

Mrs.murthy: Is there any way to find out what’s wrong? I cried.

He shook his head and said “no i am sorry. You have to let her go. There is no way of saving her now. She only has a few days left “.

My heart squeezed & the more i tried to hold in the tears the more my eyes burned.

Let my child go? I thought.

The doctor quietly exited the room.

Let my first child go? And only a few days left? I thought.

I squeezed the only daughter that i have in my arms & kissed her forehead as tears rolled down my face.

The door of the hospital room quietly opened. I looked up & it took a few seconds to see clearly that it was the most famous pediatrician Pranav Malhotra who was standing infront of me.

Doctor malhotra’s quite steps approached me.

“Doctor Malhotra” i whispered as i grabbed his arm, “Doctor Malhotra please help me ”

“She must be the one ” Doctor Malhotra said to himself.

“Please help me please. I will do anything. I will do anything. I can give you all of my money. I can give you my house. I do anything , just help my daughter. Please help me. ”

Malhotra : I will tell you what. I will take her with me & i will see what I can do about this because I think i know the problem here.

My eyes widened.

Malhotra : Please remember to hand in your family record to the nurses at the front desk under my name.

Tears began to form again. ” What can I do for you in return? ” i asked him.

He thought about it for a second & he whispered it. I agreed quickly because in that moment all i would cared about saving my daughter.

My one & only daughter.

Thats it guys . Thanq please comment.

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    16 Comments

    1. raji-tamil magal on March 11, 2017 10:42 pm

      hey sruthi u made a grt start man… really superb episode… waiting for nxt episode ma… r u writing tat raglak ff….?

      • Shrukar on March 12, 2017 2:45 pm

        Thanq raji but no dear i have not started raglak ff i thought this story for them but it suits more for manan than raglak. I will think another story for them soon.

    2. raji-tamil magal on March 11, 2017 10:43 pm

      sruthi…thank u for another ff on manan.. u made a grt start man… really superb episode… waiting for nxt episode ma… r u writ

      • Shrukar on March 12, 2017 2:46 pm

        Thanq raji ?

    3. inu on March 12, 2017 7:05 am

      Superb start. Interesting.

      • Shrukar on March 12, 2017 2:48 pm

        Thanq inu ☺

    4. Aashi on March 12, 2017 1:40 pm

      Hey Shruti dear thanks a lot for another manan ff interesting concept update next part soon

      • Shrukar on March 12, 2017 2:49 pm

        Thanq aashi?

    5. Pani_mananfan on March 12, 2017 1:41 pm

      Great start interesting

      • Shrukar on March 12, 2017 2:51 pm

        Thanq pani ☺

    6. Pani_mananfan on March 12, 2017 1:43 pm

      Great start interesting eagerly waiting for next part

    7. Pani_mananfan on March 12, 2017 1:44 pm

      Great start interesting eagerly waiting for next part

    8. Pani_mananfan on March 12, 2017 1:45 pm

      Hey dear I want to ask something if u don’t mind r u on wattpad to?

      • Shrukar on March 12, 2017 2:52 pm

        Sorry yar i am not in wattpad.

    9. Manu on March 12, 2017 7:45 pm

      Hey shruthi nice start dear… keep going..

      • Shrukar on March 12, 2017 9:11 pm

        Thanq manu ?

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