Hi ? guys.
Firstly all of you relax there is no girl other then Anika in Shivaay’s life so chill. God you all became jalkukda yesterday even Anika wouldn’t have been that much jealous as much as you all are. ??? Moreover, I said “HE” not she. So there is no separation track from here on so just relax and enjoy the suspense. In this chappy there is revelation of “MR. HE” and few funny things accept that no more revelation. Plus I have already said that Shivaay isn’t hiding anything but just finding apt moment and apt words to talk to Anika and in previous part he even told Anika that he wants to have a word with her. So isn’t hiding anything but just trying to sort out the mess as he doesn’t want to say anything false.
From this chappy all revelations will start as I don’t want to drag things much but still if you feel that I am dragging then do tell me.
THANK YOU for all your comments guys they mean a lot.
Lastly, I have had a fun time writing this part I was myself laughing imagining things hopefully you all to like this
So let’s hop to the epi.
@PART 13…
@OM
@HALL
All the children have gone to get changed while elders are in hall itself.
Shivaay: Anika I want to talk to you.
Anika nods and gets up to go with him, when they hear a voice from the main door and everyone turns to the main door.
VOICE: PAPA.
A boy enters the mansion with a broad smile and runs towards Shivaay hooping over him for a hug. Shivaay smiles brightly seeing his son in his arms and engulfs him in a hug.
(A/N:There were few of you with this guess in the comments section nearly close but not apt.)
Shivaay: Atharv.
{Atharv Singh Oberoi played by Siddharth Nigam}
Atharv: How’s the surprise Papa?
Shivaay smiling at him: Best. But you were about to come…
Atharv: By the end of the week but then I thought to surprise you by coming earlier.
Shivaay smiles at him.
The expression on everyone’s face spoke more then their actions, Shivaay’s smile was a poof of his happiness, while Pinky had a victorious smirk thinking that she got her ace card to throw Anika out, Dadi is happy but at the same time worried for Anika and Sukanya as neither of them knows the truth, while OmRuRiYa had same confused feelings like dadi, Shakti was happy to see his grandson and so was Janvi, Anika was confused but something had shaken her not the fact that Atharv called Shivaay “papa” but something else that made her eyes teary and she just couldn’t move her eyes from Atharv, while Meher is confused looking at the scenario and Abeer pats his head as for him Atharv’s arrival wasn’t a surprise but a bomb blasting shock. The first name that comes in his mind is “Sukanya” she is gone today.’ Whereas for Sahil he isn’t able to interpret anything.
Atharv walks to dadi and hugging her asks about her well being.
Pinky: My heera pota (grandson like a diamond) hows are you?
Atharv: I am all good grandma how are you?
Pinky: Till now I wasn’t that good but now you have come everything will be superb.
Atharv smiles and then meets Shakti, Janvi and OmRuRiYa finally he was standing in front of Anika.
Anika’s hand voluntarily reaches his face and she creases Atharv’s face, while Atharv becomes numb at her touch, his eyes moisten up feeling mother’s warmth for the very first time. Anika creases his face and then his hair he doesn’t speaks a word all he does is to look at her and a tear, drops from his eyes she rubs the tear before it falls and nods in no. Without other word she hugs him and he too reciprocates. There was nothing that either of the two let their brain do their emotions were at such a peak that neither of them realised what they were doing and with whom. Anika is so emotional that she is letting out her inner held love, a mother’s love out, none said a word but her heart spoke loudly that “ATHARV IS HER SON.” The son whom she had lost at his birth only, the entire world asked her to believe that her son died but her heart a mother’s heart could never believe that her son was lost, she isn’t sure but there is no reason for her to stop herself today.
While for Atharv he had never felt so peaceful in his life ever before. All his life he has yearned for mother’s love which he just got at times from Gauri and Bhavya but they weren’t always with him but Anika that warmth in her hug made him feel blissful.
Every single spectator was shocked none had a word to say the bond of a mother and child can be so eternal wasn’t known to them so beautifully. A storm of questions was in everyone’s mind but the contentment they held is incomparable.
While Shivaay’s eyes tear up he remembers the moment when Nayantara came here feign as Anika’s mother with in few seconds Anika knew that Nayantara wasn’t her mother, so how was it even possible that she hadn’t recognised her own son. How dumb had he been at times.
Sukanya who was coming down a while ago saw Atharv entering the mansion and ran to hide herself behind the pillar. But this moment she captured both in her heart and her phone although her first meet with her father wasn’t this emotional but she loved the way her mother met her brother and yes her eyes also became teary seeing the duo, her papa and she weren’t too emotional like her mumma and her brother.
Well this is the only heart warming and beautiful thing she has seen since morning the very scene gives her peace for life.
Finally, Anika and Atharv break the hug and before Anika questions anything Shivaay speaks up.
Shivaay: Anika we need to talk.
Anika: But Shivaay…
Shivaay holds her hand and drags her: Before you say another word or ask another question I want to talk to you and clear everything.
Anika looking at Atharv goes with Shivaay as she too has million of doubts and before cooking any story she wants Shivaay to clear up the matter.
Before Atharv says something a voice is herd and listening it the first person to sigh is Abeer who thinks “For first time my stupid son has come on time.”
Manik: Atharv Singh Oberoi.
Atharv looks at Manik and smiles brightly: Manik Malhotra.
Both flung their hands in air and shake it with great zeal and then hug each other.
Manik: I don’t believe it how come you here?
Atharv: This is my house bro.
Manik’s face changes to confused and he looks at Abeer who signs him to stay quite for the while Manik nods.
Manik: Good to see you here Athu.
Atharv: STS Mani.
Manik smiles.
Rudra: Come Atharv I will take you to your room.
Om: Rudy, Atharv’s room is locked and keys are with Shivaay you take Atharv to Shivaay’s room.
Rudy: Okay.
Atharv: One sec. Mani what are you doing here.
Manik: I have come here for dance competition.
Atharv: That’s great. Did Do…
Before he completes Abeer speaks: Manik did you get a message from bunny.
Manik being extremely confused of his father’s act: No.
Abeer signing to Sukanya to message Abeer continues: Manik you would have got a message check it.
Manik: Dad I didn’t get any message.
Beep… Beep…
Abeer: Look you have got a message you haven’t checked and you are saying to me.
Manik gives him weird look as right now in front of him only he got the message, Manik takes out the phone and checks the message. Which read something like.
“Vomr neer mw at terece.”
Manik: What’s this?
Abeer takes the phone from him and sees that in hurry Sukanya had typed all the words wrong he looks up and glares at Sukanya who gives him questioning look while biting her teeth he shows her Manik’s phone and she checks the message and pats her head, he glares her but gets back to Manik.
Abeer: Actually she said that she wants to talk to you go to terrace. Meanwhile Atharv you go and freshen up.
Atharv nods and leaves with Rudra.
Abeer: Do you need a special invitation Manik go to terrace now.
Manik nods and leaves all confused.
As soon as all leave from there Sukanya comes down running and passes Abeer but soon realises what she is doing and stops holds Abeer’s hand and takes him along with her out of the house.
All the spectators look confusingly at them and bob their head like pendulum to understand what just happened.
@GARDEN
Abeer: Stop Bunny.
Sukanya stops and starts breathing in and out.
Abeer: Relax bunny relax.
Sukanya: Swaah relax Karun yahan mujhe samajh nahi aa raha kya karna hai age aur aap mujhe relax karne ko keh rahe ho, upar se abhi tak billu ji ne toh mummy ji se baat bhi nahi ki hogi aur agar kar rahe honge toh pata nahi mummy ji ka kya reaction hoga aur aap keh rahe ho relax.
(How can I relax when I am in such a mess where I don’t even know what I have to do and how above this billu ji wouldn’t have said a word to mumma and if he is even telling her then what will be mumma’s reaction.)
Abeer: First tell me are you sure that Atharv is your real brother.
Sukanya: Yes that’s what Khanna uncle said.
Abeer: Come sit here.
He says pointing the bench and she sits.
Abeer: I think so you should talk to Atharv in person and not in front of all.
Sukanya: And I should tell him not to tell anyone that I am his doll.
Abeer: Okay as your wish.
Sukanya while pacing: I need that. I really need that.
Abeer confused: What?
Sukanya shouts: Chocolate.
Abeer sighs and gets a chocolate for her after cooling down they decide to go back before anyone gets suspicious about them.
Abeer and Sukanya enter all the kids were there including Atharv and Manik.
Atharv half shocked, half happy: Doll.
Sukanya and Abeer look at each other, Abeer quickly pushes Sukanya down without coming in anyone’s notice.
Abeer: Oh doll.
Abeer takes Anya’s doll and gives it to Atharv.
Abeer: You need doll. I though you are too grown up to play with a doll.
Atharv confused at his act: No not about this doll. I was talking about the girl who walked in with you.
Abeer looks at his back and pretending he doesn’t knows anything: Back… Back no girl. No girl. You might be hallucinating.
Atharv: Hallucinating???
Abeer: Ya it happens because of lag jet.
Atharv scratching his hair: Lag jet???
Abeer gulping: I mean jet jag.
Meher: Abeer are you out of your senses how are you behaving since evening.
Abeer murmurs: Yahan dimaag ka bheja fry hua hai aur yeh maharani puch rahi hai sab thik hai ke nahi. Sathya gayi hai yeh Isi umaar me.
(Over here a mayhem is created and she is asking whether I am good or not. I think so she has lost it.)
Sukanya punches him from behind the sofa as she is still sitting there hiding from everyone and she herd his words.
Abeer shout: Kya hai?? (What’s your problem???)
Sukanya hits her head while Abeer bites his tongue.
Abeer: Machaar. (Mosquito)
He says clapping in air to the questioning eyes of everyone. As all give him weird looks.
He signals Sukanya to leave, but she pulls his pant to get his attention, he finally sees her and she signals him that their is a lot of distance between two sofas.
Abeer stands in front of her and she stands behind him taking a full cover for herself. Abeer starts fidgeting slowly with baby steps passing a smile to everyone who give him alien looks. While Sukanya walks beside him with baby steps without coming in anyone’s notice and finally she crosses the distance and reaches the other end from where she crawls to the backside of the stairs and leaves.
Manik: Papa you said Suk is waiting for me on terrace but she wasn’t there?
Abeer in a rush: Look I am not everyone’s P.A. That I will know who is where when at what time. I.. I… Don’t know where sh.. She… she is and why do you want to know, here you are for your competition or to play treasure hunt go and practice.
Manik looks his father like he has right now come from zoo.
Abeer leaves from there quickly.
Meher: Manik tera baap hil Gaya hai.
(Manik your father has lost it.)
Manik: Tell something new mumma.
Meher hits him: Aise bol te hain apne papa ke bare main.
(Is this the way you talk about your father.)
Manik gives her ‘what did I do’ look.
Anya: Atharv bhaiya give my doll back are you a kid.
Atharv returns her doll and thinks “was I really hallucinating I think I should rest.” He walks to Shivaay’s room, where Sukanya is already present and Shivaay and Anika are sitting near the swimming pool entangling their hands with each other trying to find their composer in each other.
Sukanya sees Atharv coming there and bangs her head.
Sukanya: Yaar aaj yeh mera picha kun pada hua hai kahin aur jakar dafa ho jaye. Waise mai iss se Abhi baat bhi toh kar sakti hun. Haan kun nahi.
(Now why is he behind me can’t he go somewhere else. But I can even talk to him right now. Ya good idea.)
She then sees towards pool and finds her mom and dad.
Sukanya: Yaar mera ma baap ko koi dhang ki zaghaan nahi mili romance karne ke liye. Yeh pool kinaar sajan pukara kun kar rahe hain yeh dono.
(Oh god didn’t my parents get a better place to romance. Why are they singing their love songs here.)
Kuch kar Sukanya nahi toh aaj ke baad kuch karne laya Bache gi nahi tun.
(Do something Sukanya or you won’t be able to do anything after today.)
She finally goes and sits beside the bed where no body can find her.
Atharv relaxes himself in the room while Shivaay and Anika are busy with each other and didn’t see towards the room.
Amanat: Atharv bhaiya come down for dinner.
Atharv nods and leaves with her.
Sukanya finally comes out from her hiding place and sits on the bed relaxing herself. Shivaay and Anika enter the room.
Shivaay: Sukanya come lets go for dinner.
Sukanya: Umm… Ummm…. You both go I am in no mood to eat.
Anika: Are you alright Suk.
Sukanya: I am perfectly fine mummy.
(In mind) Swaah thik hun yahaan toh meri khud ki kabaar khudi padi hai. Agar niche Gaye toh marungi aur agar yahaan rahi toh chuhe pait me disco dance kar kar ke nachte nachte maar dalenga. Aab mai kya Karun bhagwaan.
(Nothing is alright. Here my grave has been dug already and my mummy ji is asking whether all is good or not. If I go downstairs then I will die and if I stay here then the mice in my stomach will keep doing disco dance and I will die dancing tonight. Now what shall I do god.)
Shivaay: If you are fine then come eat with us.
Sukanya: No no you go.
Anika holds her hand and drags her: Shut up Sukanya no excuse you do so much of dance entire day your body also needs nourishment.
Sukanya holds the bed sheet trying to stop Anika who actually stops with a jerk.
Sukanya: Mummy I need nothing I am all good stop it. I need some rest let me sleep nothing much is required.
She says holding the bed more firmly.
Anika: Shut up you will get ill.
She says dragging Sukanya who holds the bed more tightly although gets a little dragged.
Sukanya: No mummy. I won’t pinki promise.
Anika: Sukanya i am warning you come to have your dinner or no chocolates for a week.
Sukanya: Done but I can’t come for dinner.
Anika gets shocked as Sukanya gives in, in a go without another thought.
All the while Shivaay is shocked seeing mother-daughter tug of war.
Shivaay: Why the hell are you two behaving like jungles?
He says freeing Sukanya from Anika and making her stand in normal position as Sukanya leaves the bed shirt they could see half of the bed without sheet, Shivaay sighs at this jungle behaviour.
Shivaay: It’s okay Anika if she isn’t feeling like eating why are you forcing her.
Sukanya nods.
Anika folding her hands around her chest: Shivaay she hasn’t eaten anything since morning. She will get ill and that’s not good for her at least at this time.
This reminds Sukanya that why were the mice doing their own hip hop in her stomach as she hadn’t eaten since morning. Where Shivaay gets worried as well as angry.
Shivaay: Sukanya what’s this you didn’t eat food since morning. You will get ill if you do not take care of yourself
Sukanya mentally hits herself for making her father turn into a possessive father.
Her mind taunts her: Aab bhogto beta. (Now handle.)
Shivaay: Now come have your dinner and from tomorrow onwards no excuse I will check your diet plans on my own.
Sukanya: Okay do whatever you want to do but from tomorrow not today let me sleep right now I am damn tired.
Shivaay: I will let you sleep but first come eat your food.
Sukanya: No.
Shivaay sternly: Sukanya I said you have to eat your dinner means you have to not a word more come yourself or it won’t be good enough.
Sukanya gets scared with the tone of his voice but still being a stubborn head gives it a last try: Please…
Shivaay scoops her in his arms and descends down while she shouts being in his arms. Anika moves behind them.
Sukanya: Are billu ji leave me please.
She frantically hits her legs and arms to get freed from him but that doesn’t stops him.
(Poor Sukanya doesn’t knows that her mother also could never get of the grip of great SSO then what chance does she holds ???.)
Everybody gets shocked seeing the father-daughter duo.
Dadi: What are you doing Shivaay?
Sukanya: Dadi your grandson is harassing me. He has kidnaped me.
Shivaay signals Rudra to pull a chair and he does the same.
Rudra: But Sukanya what happened?
Sukanya: Rudy chachu this team of billu and billi has forcefully got me here save me from them.
Sukanya looks around and sighs on not finding Atharv there but soon she sees him coming from the kitchen and holds her neck shouting.
Sukanya: Aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh……
Shivaay worriedly: What happened?
Sukanya: My neck got sprained. I think I should leave.
She says getting up but Anika comes in front of her.
Anika: Sit back I will get ointment for you.
Sukanya: No no no…. This will be fine by morning. You stay.
She keeps holding her neck trying her best to hide from Atharv, she even covers her face with her hair.
Anika serves food in her plate and then moves to Atharv. He smiles brightly at her and she lovingly serves food to him and sits beside him.
Sukanya starts gobbling down the food as soon as possible while Abeer look at her feeling pity at her condition but he too is helpless.
Pinky: Are aram se kha Sukanya koi tera khana le kar bhaah nahi jayega.
(Eat slowly Sukanya no one will run taking your food away.)
Sukanya just smiles at her being helpless.
Sukanya after eating starts to leave.
Sukanya: I am done i will leave.
Manik stops her: Suk wait for a while let’s play some games.
He says coming in front of her.
Sukanya gives him an irritated + angry look: Manik tujhe agar kuch karna hai toh ja jakar game of thorns dekh le. Waise bhi uska naya episode aa Gaya hai.
(Manik if you want do something go and watch game of thorns it’s new episode has been released.)
Manik: But I do not watch game of thorns.
Sukanya: Tun yahaan par T.V. Dekhne aaya hai. Hum yahan competition par aye hai na ja jakar kuch practice kar le.
(Are you here to watch TV no right we are here for a competition so focus on it and do practice.)
Manik: But I have completed my practice.
Now this was it for Sukanya her long held anger and frustration finally is all ready to went out on her bestie: Manik Malhotra I believe if you are done with rest of your work then go and study. We have exams on their way and if you have a little courtesy for your own self then go and study something. It’s better to gain some marks on your own in exams rather then nudging others all the time.
Finally she controlled herself although it is really hard for her but she controlled. She leaves from their leaving Manik hurt.
Manik mummers: Since morning I am being scolded it seems like the day is only bad. First I got scolding from coach because of Suk, then papa scolded me because of Suk and now Suk herself scolded me.
He sits miffed on the chair, while Abeer feels bad for hurting Manik but right now he has to deal with devil so he makes an escape while Anika pacifies Manik.
Anika: Let it be Manik. Suk has lost it she is behaving weirdly. She has gone mad.
Look you don’t forgive her this time.
Manik hugs her, while she creases his back.
@GUEST ROOM LAST FLOOR
Abeer enters with an ice cream and sees Sukanya walking like pendulum from one corner to the other of the room.
Abeer keeps the ice cream on the table.
Abeer: What happened bunny?
Sukanya: Yaar kaise ull jalul harkatein kar ke bhadi ho gayi hun mai Jo man me aata hai bol deti hun, yahi mummy ji ne Bachpan me do teen chanta jhade hote na toh aaj yeh nobaat nahi aati. Be faltu me uss par aapna pura khandaan le kar chad gayi mai. Bichare ki toh koi galti bhi nahi thi. Aur aaj toh aisi feeling aa rahi hai jaise yeh ghar nahi circus ho aur mai bandariya ki tarhan idhar se udhaar kud rahi hun.
(Dude I have grown up doing all the weird things, I speak whatever comes in my head without giving it a second thought. If mom would have slapped in childhood by now I would have been on right path. I scolded Mani without any reason. And now I am having feeling as if this house isn’t a house but circus and I am monkey jumping to and fro.)
Abeer: Calm down bunny and eat this ice cream (he hands the ice cream to her and continues). Bunny don’t worry by tomorrow I will find out a way for you to have a word with Atharv.
Sukanya gobbling down her ice cream: Pakka.
Abeer: Pakka.
Now just go and have some rest. Good night. And take care.
Sukanya nods.
Suk goes to sleep with the girls, while Atharv, Manik and Advik sleep together.
PRE RECAP:
What actually happened 14 yrs back?
Keep smiling
Stay happy
&
For now signing off
SHIVIKA ?…
24 Comments
Amazing as usual ,,,post d next soon dear ?
Really good episode.. it was so funny?? can’t wait to find out the truth. Update asap?
loved it…………
Amazinggggg dii… m still laughing like maniac on sukanya’s condition but feeling pity on well…. post nxt asap… waiting for d revelation…. plz post regularly if possible… juzz loved it….
Pity on her as well****
Awesome update dr….. Poor Manik….
Waiting 4 nxt…
Finally one mystery out, thanks for a quick update hope we will get another as soon as possible
Fabulous……eagerly waiting for next part…please post asap
Amazinggg
Update soon eagerly waiting for the next part
Yaaar this suk I just loved herrr .???? n what is the doll matter I didn’t no it actually but plz post next asap
So interesting update next one as soon as possible ………………
Amazing episode
Bechari Suk…. It was damn funny… I enjoyed reading this
Can’t wait for further episodes
Post soon
I am loving it
It is awesome dear.. Eagerly waiting for the next update….
Cant stop laughing at this..amazing update. Eagerly waiting for next part
Amazing episode..
Can’t stop laughing.. fab episode please update asap
Amazing update
Lol I seriously couldn’t control my laugh throughout the update????. Like seriously Bechara manik?? . Every one at home was watching me as if I was definitely a gone case. While reading suk ‘s part I had imagined all the antics of anika in real IB. Loved the whole update to the core , moon ,Neptune also. Thank You sooooooooooooooooooooo much for such a brilliant update ???
Amazing update..loved it so much can’t wait for revelation. Post next part soon
Nice episode..
Awesome update.. made me laugh so much can’t wait for the next episode
That was awesome hilarious update. Loved it. Looking forward to next part
Awesome yaar…. Lovely part…. Interesting too… excited for the next part..