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HAPPY RAKSHABANDHAN TO ALL OF YOU. I HOPE SO YOU ALL HAVE HAD FUN AND LOOTED YOUR BROTHERS AS MUCH AS POSSIBLE ??. So here is RAKSHABANDHAN SPECIAL EPISODE FOR ALL OF YOU. ENJOY…
@PART 15…
Janvi comes back smiling at the table after talking to someone.
Tej: Who was on call Janvi? You seem quite happy.
Janvi: It was Prinku’s call she is coming for rakhi here.
Everybody smiles.
Sukanya: Who is Prniku?
Shivaay: Our sister.
Rudra: I am so happy she is coming after such a long time.
Gauri: Yes, being in same city also she barely visits us.
Bhavya: Correct Bhabhi this time we will surely complain to jija ji for not sending her here.
Rudra: Me too. I miss her a lot.
Om: Mom are Naira (PriVeer’s daughter) & Pratik (PriVeer’s son) also coming with them.
Amanat: Obviously papa they will come after all we have to tie rakhi to Pratik and Naira di has to tie rakhi to brothers.
Dadi: This years rakhi is so special. Our entire family is together and this is Suk’s first rakhi with all of us, so we will celebrate it with full pomp and show.
Sukanya and Atharv look at each other and exchange a meaningful smile.
Sukanya: Dadi what’s the need for pomp and show we should celebrate it with our family only.
All smile at her as she too doesn’t likes much pomp and show like her parents.
Dadi: Fine puttar as you wish.
Bhavya: So we all should go for shopping.
Shivaay gulps remembering his previous shopping expedition with Sukanya: Shopping???
Rudra: Relax bhaiya we all know you must have to go for some important business meeting.
Rudra says mocking a taunt at him.
Shivaay: Shut up Rudra.
Om: Yes Rudy don’t say a word to the busy man.
Shivaay aims a spoon at the duo which misses the perfect hit and OmRu share a hi-fi chuckling at him.
Anya: But I want to go for shopping above all the useless brothers of ours even need to buy us a gift. Telling for a reminder as I know how appreciable your memory power is. (taunts them at the end.)
Advik: You girls always need a reason to shop and make poor boys like us, bankrupt.
Amanat hits him while he squeals dramatically: At least have some shame we are your sister we will tie rakhi to you and you can’t even give a gift. Kanjoos.
Advik: What do you girls even do just tie a rakhi and above that we boys promise to protect you, rather you should give us a gift.
Anya: Who needs you to protect us. We girls can protect ourselves. You boys should find someone to protect you. Scary crows.
She remarks angrily.
Atharv: I agree. Why should we boys only give gifts and these girls make us spend our entire year’s pocket money on their silly dresses and Barbie’s. Do we save so much just to spend it in a single go for them.
Krish: Thanks bro actually these girls really need to understand this thing.
Sukanya: You are talking as if you earn money on your own, you guys also take money once from mummy and then from papa and only then you save it.
Manik: So what at least we save it.
Sukanya: You know what the actual problem isn’t spending money. But the actual problem is to spend it on your sister if in place of sister it’s your girlfriend you can spend money like water.
Anya taping her hand on the table: Exactly right.
Aditi: Di you remember on previous friendship day this Krish was running with friendship bands in his hands. From where did you get those bands. You bought them with your money only. And when ever nani ma asks you to buy vegetables you always do hera pheri with
money.
Krish: Di please don’t tell that to nani ma.
Amanat ignoring Krish’s words: Ya when on Riya’s birthday bhai had to gift her a present he used his entire pocket money for that but didn’t complain once and even forgot to buy a gift for my birthday. And that girl went slamming him off. Ladki toh pati nahi par kharcha pura kiya janab ne. (He couldn’t convince the girl but he had spent whole heartedly.)
Gauri: What? Riya? Who is she?
Says as her possessive mother avatar gets switched on.
Advik smacks his head.
Rudra: Wah mera sher tun toh bilkul sahi raha pe hai.
(Well don son you are on right path.)
ShivKara hit his head: Shut up duffer.
Bhavya: Rudra hum apko dafa 220 ke tehat jail me daal denga bachon ko galat raha dekhane ke jurm me.
(Rudra I will put you behind bars for misguiding children.)
Gauri: Vo sab baad me. Advik hume sach sach bataiye kya apki koi girlfriend hai. Jhoot bole na toh ek jhap me dewaar par sata denge aapko.
(Leave all that. Advik you tell me do you have a girlfriend. And don’t you dear to lie otherwise I will slap you.)
Advik: Mom relax she was my friend and I just gave her a birthday gift but your darling daughter is used to stretch everything like a chew gum.
Amanat shoots a glare at him.
Manik: I don’t get it why you girls are so adamant and irritating.
Atharv: Right dude. Whatever we may try doing they won’t acknowledge it but once even we speak against them they will eat our head.
Sukanya: Waah bada experience ha dono ko.
(Great both seem to have a lot of experience.)
Atharv and Manik looking at their respective mothers who were ready to shoot them with their questions spoke in rush together: I never had a girlfriend.
Sukanya: Oh let it be go and lie to someone else. (mimicking someone) Athu baby did you eat food? Cutie pie did you take your shake? Baby shall I accompany you? (Atharv coughs listening to her.) and Manik you toh let it be. Hindustan ke itihaas me itna raja nahi honge jitni tumhari girlfriends reh chuki hain. (Manik you let it be there wouldn’t be so many kings in the history of India as many girlfriends you have had.)
Anika and Meher together taunting their respective husbands and sons: Like father, like son.
Both Shivaay and Abeer look helplessly at each other passing “what did I do?” Look.
Atharv: Four of you will get your gifts but stop opening our secrets for gods sake.
The girls pass a victorious smirk to each other.
Amanat: If you boys know that at the end of every argument you can never win then why do you waste your and our energy.
Advik pulling her cheeks: You will never understand the fun of irritating your sisters.
Amanat smacking his hand away: Fun. You boys find fun in irritating us.
Boys nods.
Anya angrily: You boys are useless.
Manik mocks: As if you girls are debating on economic growth and development issues.
Sukanya: Whatever we may do we are better then you.
Atharv with attitude: Really.
Sukanya with same attitude: Doubts are your problem not ours.
Anika: Enough of you guys end your lunch and get going for your respective works.
All nod.
@ PLAY ROOM
@LAST FLOOR
Sukanya is pacing to and fro waiting for someone.
Atharv and Manik come there together.
Manik: What happened why did you call us here?
Sukanya on seeing them rushes to the door and closes it.
Sukanya: Actually we have to do something.
Atharv: What?
Sukanya little carefully: Steal.
Manik & Atharv freaking out: WHAT? HAVE YOU LOST IT?
Sukanya: Think whatever you want to but we have to do this and you both have to accompany me at any cost.
Manik: No ways.
Sukanya: I am not asking I am telling you both.
Atharv: Look Doll I understand that you want to solve the matter but this is no way. You want us to steal and that’s not happening at any cost.
Sukanya: Please Athu please Manik please guys.
Manik: No no ways.
Sukanya: Athu it’s about our parents.
Atharv: Even then a big no.
Sukanya: Mani at least you try to understand you know how desperately I want to solve this out.
Manik: No not at all.
Both give their last and stern word to Sukanya.
Sukanya: Fine then don’t come but I will definitely do this so what if I have to do this all alone.
Atharv: Not happening. I am not letting you do this.
Sukanya curtly: As if by your saying I will stop Mr. Oberoi.
It’s final I will be doing it decision is on you both you both want to accompany me or not.
Manik knew it’s pointless to argue as once Sukanya has decided she will not back off without any perfect reason: What we have to steal?
Sukanya looks at Atharv.
Atharv: And when?
Sukanya: Good come I will show you everything.
Sukanya opens a big blue print like thing and keeps it on table.
Sukanya: This is blue print of civil hospital.
Manik shocked to see it questions her: From where did you get it?
Sukanya: Library.
We have to go to the record room here.
She says pointing at the record room.
Atharv: Okay and then.
Sukanya: We will have to steal the file.
Manik: Which file?
Sukanya: Mom’s file of 14 years back. When she gave birth to us.
Atharv: But why hospital?
Sukanya: The first rule of crime investigation is investigate the site of crime.
Atharv & Manik nod.
Atharv: So next.
Sukanya: Not next but first. We will talk to the ward boys there and try to find out what exactly happened years back.
Manik: Why will anybody say us the truth.
Sukanya: Money, money baby. Money also makes the dumb to speak these people still have mouths.
Manik: And from where are we getting that money from.
Sukanya: We have time till tomorrow night to arrange money we need to arrange as much as possible. But not any wrong means.
Atharv: And how will get out of THE OBEROI MANSION do you think it’s easy to get out from here.
Sukanya: I know it’s not, don’t worry I have plan for that too. Tomorrow night let’s catch up here at 10 exact.
Both the boys nod.
Atharv: Okay now let’s leave before they bang our heads.
Both nod and leave.
@HALL
Dadi: Kahan the tum teenon?
(Where were three of you?)
Atharv: We were just talking.
All nod.
Anika: Sukanya you have to help me with all the decorations.
Sukanya nods gloomily but then something strikes her head and she smiles brightly. That sudden smile gives an alert signal to the ManArv duo and both look at each other with questioning eyes.
Sukanya: I will help you mumma but what will I get in return?
She asks with raised eyebrows.
Anika: What do you want?
Sukanya: Simple 25% of the amount you take for a one day event.
Anika: Thapad dun.
(Shall I give you a slap.)
Sukanya makes ugly faces while ManArv chuckle.
Sukanya: Look mumma it’s pure business I am giving you concession as you are my mom.
Anika: Ek thapa ke saath ek free. (One slap free with one slap.) How is this offer Suk.
Sukanya: Mummy not fair.
Manik: Do you think it’s easy to get money from babes. Forget it baby she isn’t giving you a single penny.
Sukanya: Ya typical Indian mummy ji.
Sooch sooch Suk sooch.
(Think Suk Think)
Atharv: Shall I sell your phone Doll.
Suk sarcastically: Haan yeh sahi hai kal ko meri kidney bhi bech dena tum.
(Ya this is right. Sell my kidney also one day.)
Manik: Not a bad idea we call sell your blood too.
Sukanya looks at the duo shooting daggers: Kya dost aur bhai diya hai bhagwaan ne kasam se man kar raha hai dono ko khadka dun.
(What kind of brother and friend god has given me I really wish to kill you both.)
Kabhi phone beech do kabhi khoon bech do tum dono ko kya me murgi lagti hun adha kaat do nahi toh maar do aur kuch na mile toh butter chicken.
(Sometimes sell phone, at other sell your blood. Do I look like a hen to you, cut me into half or sell me and if nothing happens then butter chicken.)
Both the boys burst out laughing, while Suk gives them an irritating glare.
Krish: Guys have you lost it what are you upto.
Sukanya: Send them to lunatic asylum idiots.
Atharv: What’s the need you are with us the entire house seems to be an asylum. Right moti.
He ends up teasing her.
Sukanya: Oh really brother.
Atharv nods and runs receiving you are dead look from Sukanya and both run like tom & jerry behind each other making Manik laugh harder. Everybody looks at the duo and Manik with alien looks.
Atharv: Get aside dad.
He says as Shivaay is in front of him but soon he gets aside.
Sukanya: What the hell billu ji can’t you even hold this idiot. You are useless like him.
She rants him and continues to chase Atharv.
Atharv trips down and everyone gets scared but Sukanya sits over his stomach giving a damn to his falling down.
Sukanya beating him: What did you say I am mad. And do I look like a moti to you.
Krish murmurs: All sisters are mad.
Aditi hits his head from behind: What am I mad?
Krish: why are you asking when you know the answer. Pagal ho aap bhi.
And there begins another fight. The only person to have fun of this is Manik Malhotra who is having a roller coaster time seeing his friends being beaten up by their respective sisters.
Atharv: Stop it moti.
He says holding her hair and she holds his hair and both scratch each other’s hair.
Sukanya: Baal chod.
(Leave my hair.)
Atharv: First you.
Sukanya: You held my hair first so first you leave.
Atharv: You act like jungle billi you will eat me up I won’t leave first.
Sukanya: Oh really as if you are less then a bagad billa. Leave my hair.
On Aditi and Krish’s side.
Krish: Di why are you feeling bad after knowing the truth.
Aditi punches him on his stomach.
Krish: Dad has spoilt you. Dimaag ki gangaraam kar rakhi hai aapne.
(Dad has spoilt you. You have eaten up my brain.)
And here goes a kick from his lovely sister smacking him on the floor and he kicks her on her leg back for which the kicks keep going on.
Anika: Bas karo tum charon.
(Stop it four of you.)
Sukanya: Mummy apne ladle ko kaho pehle mera Baal chode.
(Mumma first ask your darling son to leave my hair.)
Atharv: You moti you have held my hair so tightly and above that you are sitting over me.
Aditi: This monster is kicking me with his legs and calling me mad.
Krish: Oh sorry I forgot that truth is sour.
He says sarcastically just to receive a bang on from his sister.
Finally, Shivaay pulls Sukanya, Om pulls Atharv, Abeer pulls Aditi and Rudra pulls Krish away from each other. While Manik is busy having his gala time seeing a non stop com-action sequence.
Atharv hitting Manik playfully on shoulder: You are laughing a lot today.
Manik being unaffected: Why are you having problem buddy.
Atharv: Hell with you.
Sukanya punches Manik while Aditi kicks him and both say together: Aur haso aab.
(Laugh more now.)
While Atharv and Krish chuckle.
Shivaay and Abeer hold the girls back again.
Shivaay: Stop it girls.
Aditi: Uncle these boys consider girls weak but we will show them that we are really strong.
Manik: Yeh fight club se sidha mahila mukti morcha kahan se shuru hogaya.
(How did you get shifted from fight club to Women empowerment all of a sudden?)
Sukanya: Wait I will show you.
She says trying to get rid of Shivaay but he pulls her back.
Atharv: Control this jungle billi of yours dad.
Sukanya: Wait I will show you what jungle billi is.
Anika: Bas. That all for now. Girls to your room right now.
Aditi: Ma but why always us…
Anika stops her showing her hand and says sternly: Not a word more. To your rooms.
Sukanya: Chal Adi.
(Let’s go Adi.)
Both leave glaring the boys.
Anika with same stern voice: And three of you is this the way you behave with you sisters and friends.
Three of the boys bow their heads down.
Dadi: Puttar tomorrow is rakhi and today you are annoying your sisters this is not done.
Boys: Sorry dadi.
Anika: What sorry. Look at your conditions and Mani you were laughing like a lunatic asylum run away.
The boys burst out laughing as this was the only reason they were teasing girls.
Meher getting angry: What is there to laugh?
Boys nod in no controlling themselves.
Atharv: Actually Vo we were teasing them calling lunatics that’s why.
He says controlling his laughter while the other two aren’t able to speak even.
Shivaay: BOYS.
Boys: Sorry.
Abeer: What sorry you have made the two girls upset now convince them otherwise we will not spear you.
Boys nod.
Advik: So sad.
Anya: What sad? How bad are you boys, you don’t care for us.
Amanat: Right. And better not talk to us till you guys do not convince Suk di and Adi.
Advik face palms and looks here and there giving ‘what did I do look’, while both the girls march away.
Advik curses the three boys because of whom he even got entangled in the mess.
Shivaay: What are you boys doing here go now.
Boys leave.
Anika: This Suk and her naughtiness is increasing day by day.
Shivaay: Excuse me what did she do?
Anika: Didn’t you see how badly she had hit Atharv. This girl has gone crazy.
Shivaay: As if Atharv didn’t do anything. I know my daughter she will never begin a fight until and unless someone else ignites the fire.
Anika: Stop taking her side because of all this only she is dancing on my head. My poor boy got hurt because of her.
Shivaay: Atharv is no poor or innocent boy he is a brat.
Anika: Look don’t say a word about my son.
Shivaay: So first you back of and don’t you dear reprimand my daughter.
Anika: She deserves special treatment from me.
Shivaay: Don’t you dear touch my daughter. But I need to deal with Atharv how can he hit my angel she is so cute.
Anika: Nothing cute and all. Plus you won’t touch my son even.
Shivaay: Touch is something less he needs a lots of scolding’s accompanied by punishment.
Anika: Punish? You will punish my son.
Shivaay: Yes any problem.
Anika: Shri shri 108 bagaad billa maharaj I will not leave you if you dear touch my son.
Shivaay: Jhansi ki Rani I will see how you even say a word to my angel.
Anika: Dekhiye Shivaay aap…
(See Shivaay you…)
Shivaay: What I am not seeing anything but not a word to my daughter.
Anika: I will see who stops me.
Shivaay: And I will see who stops me.
During the entire fight spectators dodge their head like watching a table tennis match from billu to billi and back to billu. Both looked super cute fighting for their respective billi and billu.
Dadi: Bas karo tum dono yeh kya mera beta, meri beti laga rakha hai Vo dono hi tumbare bacche hain. Aur bacche aise hi karte rehte hain dekhna abhi kuch der me fir se ek dusre se baatein kar rahe honge. Aur tum done apni ladi band karo bacchon se zyada toh mujhe lagta hai tum donon ki class lene ki zaroorat hai. Kaise lad rahe ho.
(Stop it both of you and what is this my daughter, my son. Both of them are your kids. And kids are like this only mischievous just see after a while they will be talking to each other again. And both of you stop fighting instead of kids I need to take your class. You both are more mischievous. How are you two fighting?)
Rudra winking at dadi: Dadi bilkul humare billu aur billi ki tarhaan.
(Just like our cats.)
All laugh while ShivIka look here and there turning a little red.
Anika: I have some work I will go.
Saying so she tries leaving but her charm bracelet gets stuck to Shivaay’s watch jerking her. She turns to look into deep blue orbs of Shivaay both walk towards each other and share an eye lock while Shivaay raises his hand and slowly loosens the bracelet after the bracelet gets loosened still both stand in same position Anika with her hand at same position.
Rudra clearing his throat: Ummmm….. Bhaiya Bhabhi’s bracelet got removed.
Every body chuckles while the duo get out of the trances. Anika blushes hard while Shivaay smirks at her and she leaves from their running just to hear a hearty laughter behind her back while Shivaay to excuses after doing his attitude hair move but smiling shyly trying to hide from the family.
Om: Kitna kuch Badal Gaya hai ya kuch nahi badla aaj bhi yeh duno vaise hi ladte hain jaise saalon pehle lada karte the. Aaj bhi usi tarhan se chup chup ke mohobaat karte hain.
(So many things have changed yet so many things are same. Still these two fight the same way they use to do years back and they play the same hide and seek game of love like they use to do ages back.)
Rudra: After all they are made for each other.
Pinky who is irked by their words speaks in the most monotonous tone of her: Shut up nothing of this sort will happen. That low market girl will never come back in Shivaay’s life.
Gauri: Bas kijiye choti ma kab tak aap in dono ke piche padi rahengi dikh nahi raha aapko age kitne pareshaan hai Vo dono. Upar se unke bacche. Bas kijiye kab tak aap unki Zindagi ke saath khilwaad karti rahengi.
(Stop it choti ma till when will you keep spoiling their relationship can’t you see how worried they are already. Above all they have two kids as well. Now stop all this it’s more then enough.)
Pinky: O my Mata now you will back answer me. First go and see your status.
Om: Please choti ma not a word against my wife.
Rudra: And why are you saying anything to chulbul Bhabhi whatever she said she is right. 15 years of separation and pain that’s what you have gifted them. Because you a sweet family got split.
Bhavya: Rehne di jiye Om bhaiya, Gauri bhabhi aur Rudra koi fayda nahi hai inse baat kar ke aagar samajhna hota toh yeh bohaat pehle samajh chuki hoti.
(Leave it Om bhaiya, Gauri Bhabhi and Rudra it’s useless to argue with her, if she had to understand she would have understood it long back.)
Pinky: Oh now see they are speaking against me just for that road side trash.
Rudra shouts: Bas bohaat hua ek aur shabd bhi mat kehna humari Bhabhi ke khilaaf. (Om tries stopping him.) Nahi O dekh raha hai na tun bhaiya ko kitna Badal Gaye hain wo. Inki harkatoon ki wajha se itne saal tak vo humse dur rahe. Pucho inse kya Mila inhe yeh sab kar ke. Kya Mila bhaiya aur Bhabhi ko takleef de kar. Atharv aur Sukanya kya bigada tha un dono ne inka Jo inhone unko yeh zindagi di. Mubaraak ho apko aapki jeet choti ma apne apne hatoon se apne beta ki zindagi barbaad kar di. Mubaarak ho aapko.
(Stop there n then. We won’t hear a word more about our Bhabhi. (Om tries stopping him) No O don’t stop me today. You yourself have seen how much bhaiya has changed in these years. Because of her he had to stay away from us for so long. Ask her how much has she been benefited by all this. What did she get giving pain to bhaiya and Bhabhi. Moreover, what was Atharv and Sukanya’s mistake that she gifted them this life. Congratulations to you, you have spoiled their life. Congratulations.)
He says with tears trailing down his eyes.
Pinky : Mujhe maat batao ki kya sahi hai mera beta ke liye aur kya nahi ma Saab janti hun.
(Don’t tell me what’s right for my son I know it better.)
Om: Agaar aap sab jante hote toh aaj yeh halaat nahi hote. Apne Shivaay ki Zindagi ko ek khel bana diya aur sabko apni ungliyoon par nachaya. Par shayaad aap bhul gayi ke sabse bhada khiladi Vo hai (point above) Vo bhagwaan. Kab tak Bach payingi aap ek na ek din toh sab saach samne aayega us din kya karengi aap. Kho dengi Shivaay ko aap humesha humesha ke liye. Jeeta ji maar dala apne use aab apki baari.
(If you would have known everything then the condition wouldn’t have been this worse. You have made Shivaay’s life a game and you have played with every life the way you want to. But maybe you forgot the biggest player is him (pointing above) that God. Till when will you escape one day truth will be out that day you will loose Shivaay for sure. You buried him alive now it’s your turn.)
Pinky: Toh tun mujhe warnings dega.
(So now you will give warning to me.)
Bhavya: Sirf bhaiya kun hum sab aapko chetavni de rahe hain aagar aab apne kuch bigaadne ki koshish ki toh humse bura koi nahi hoga.
(Why only bhaiya we all are warning you if you try to destroy something now, then you will see worst side of us.)
Gauri: Aur jahaan tak baat hai bade bhaiya aur Anika bhojayi ki toh unhe toh hum saath le hi aayenga.
(As far as Bade bhaiya and Anika bhojayi are concerned we will get them close by all the means.)
All of them hold each others hand together.
Pinky: Ye Saab tum logon ko mehanga padega.
(This will cost you guys high.)
Om: Koi parva nahi hai. Aap already Saab barbaad kar chuki hain aur hum sab chup the kunki hume laga ki Anika Bhabhi aab is duniya ma nahi hai par aab nahi bohaat hua aapka.
(It doesn’t matter as you have already spoiled everything and we all were silent as we thought Anika Bhabhi is no more. But not now it’s too much.)
Sahil: Aur yeh full and final warning hai aapke liye mera jiju aur di ko alag karne ki koshish ki na toh iss baar iss ghar se bahar aap jayengi meri di nahi.
(And this is full n final warning for you if you dear separate my jiju and di this time you would be the one leaving the house not my di.)
Janvi: Umeed hai ki tumhe samajh aa Gaya hoga aab tak sab kuch Pinky nahi toh iss bar hum nahi koi aur samjhaye Ga aur Vo jaise samjhaiye gi Vo tum se saha nahi jayega.
(Hope so you understood everything Pinky, if not then this time someone else will explain you and the way she will explain you won’t be able to bear it.)
Pinky gulps remembering Sukanya.
All of them leave giving her a stern glare.
@SHIVAAY’S ROOM
Sukanya and Aditi are siting there after being miffed by the boys and both are joined by Amanat and Anya who tell them about the punishment allotted to the boys the girls giggle listening to that.
Boys sneak in the room extra carefully.
Sukanya: What are you doing her?
Aditi: What’s your work with mad people?
Anya: I don’t think so lunatic asylum is written here.
Amanat: And you may not like the fat girls.
Girls wholeheartedly taunt the boys.
Boys: Sorry girls.
Sukanya: No ways.
Atharv: Okay demand…
Aditi throws a pillow at him.
Amanat: What the wuck do you think of us ?
Anya: Do we look corrupt.
Boys initially nod but then say no.
Manik: Please tell us a way to pacify you girls.
Aditi: Fine. Dance.
Boys nod.
Aditi: Poll dance.
Girls laugh.
Boys: What the wuck?
Atharv: You have lost it.
Sukanya: If no then out of here.
Manik: Are you insane Suk you want us to do poll dance in front of our sisters.
Sukanya nods.
Aditi: If you aren’t forgetting then your sister only asked for it.
Atharv covering Anya’s eyes: We have kids here.
Anya pushes his hands back: I am not a kid.
Advik: Are you dadi ma then.
Amanat: No she is don.
Atharv: Please Doll.
Sukanya: No ways.
Boys look at each other hopelessly.
Krish: Play the song.
The girls share a hi-fi while boys smack his head for saying a yes.
Amanat plays Sheela ki jawani and boys widen their eyes in shock.
Manik: Suk…
Sukanya: No worries. (boys sigh) Amy play fevicol.
Girls laugh while boys give hopeless look.
Sukanya: Start boys.
Anya: What are you waiting for. Christmas?
Boys nod in disbelief.
Boys were about to start when girls burst out laughing.
Atharv: Doll you are gone.
Manik: Don’t leave this prankster.
Amanat: I swear guys you were about to dance are you nutts.
She says laughing all the while.
Advik: We can do anything for our sisters.
Boys nod making the girls go aww….
Anya: Okay then dance.
Boys: What?
Girls burst out laughing rolling on bed.
Sukanya: Come on hop on the bed let’s watch some good movie.
Anya: Suggest one.
Manik: DDLG.
Sukanya: Get lost you idiot.
Atharv: What about conjuring 2.
Amanat: NNNNNOOOOO bhai no.
She says hugging him.
Atharv nods: No Barbie we won’t watch that relax.
Amanat nods.
Advik: Tsunami.
Anya being hyper: Where?
Advik: Relax it’s a movie.
Sukanya: What about sholay?
All: Perfect.
All of them sit cuddling to each other and switch on the movie and get some snacks for themselves.
After a while all the parents were passing by the room when Anika stops hearing the loud music and sneaks in the room opening the door a little as they had switched off the lights and closed the door.
Anika: Wait all of you come see here.
Shivaay: What are you doing Anika.
Anika: Shhh… Just see.
All peep in the room and find the kids laughing and watching the movie together.
Rudra: Yeh aacha hai Hume tension de kar khud masti kar rahein hain.
(This is great after giving us tension they are doing fun.)
Ok: They look so happy together.
Bhavya: I wish they stay like this forever.
Krish sees them at the door: Very bad big people you guys are sneaking in our room. Bad manners.
This derives the attention of all the kids while parents chuckle.
Manik: What are you all doing there come in and join us.
Meher: Which movie are you watching?
Aditi: Sholay, beautiful.
Anika: Are waah kya khidkitod film hai.
(WOW it’s a khidkitod film.)
Sukanya says raising her collar: Mera idea tha mummy.
(It was my idea mummy.)
Manik remarks: Keh toh aise rahe hai jaise film tune banai ho.
(You are saying as if you have made the movie.)
Shivaay sarcastically: Beti kiski hai. (Whose daughter is she afterall?)
Anika: Apki. (Yours.)
Shivaay: I meant by you.
Sukanya: Pause lagao aap dono, yeh film khatam ho jaye fir hum aapki ladai lilla bhi dekh lainge.
(Pause both of you. Let this movie end then we will watch your fight sequence also.)
Amanat: Now sit here silently and watch.
All nod and sit to watch the movie having a gala time together.
@NIGHT
Krish is sitting at the pool side drowned in his thoughts. Shivaay sees him and sits beside him.
Shivaay: Hye young man what’s up.
Krish: Nothing.
Shivaay: So champ I have herd a lot about you. Tuttix right that’s your form.
Krish nods: Tuttix. Right.
Shivaay: So since how long are you dancing.
Krish: 3 years.
Shivaay: How old are you?
Krish: 9.
Shivaay: So in which class are you?
Krish: 3rd.
While Shivaay is trying hard to pull a conversation with Krish, but his one word answers are making it tougher for him to make a conversation. Something about the young boy is pinching him. The sadness, lost chirpiness and silence speaks volumes about him rather then the words and his other unsuccessful actions to divert himself.
Shivaay caring Krish’s hair: What happened beta you seem to be gloomy. If you wish you can share I am also like a father to you.
Krish sees him and his magnifying eyes provide him the warmth of a father making him to pour his heart out to Shivaay who hadn’t thought it would be so easy a job to crack the wall around Krish’s heart: You always remind me of my papa.
Shivaay smiles at him and he continues.
Krish: I miss mumma and papa. Mumma didn’t come to see us from past 5 years and papa he promised to come for our competition but he said that he will be late. I miss them. I herd nani ma saying that they are divorced we will never be able to live together now. I badly miss them. (he says as tears make a way through his eyes) I want both of them to be with me. Since childhood I have just seen them fighting with each other. I want to see them happy and together with us.
Shivaay’s heart breaks seeing him cry miserably he takes the boy in a hug tracing his hands up and down in the pendulum motion just to calm him and murmurs few words in his ears to calm him down.
Shivaay: No worries beta we all are here for you. Relax mera Baccha. Relax. We all are here for you.
Krish smiles hearing him as these comforting words were new to him accept for his sister he had never had anyone by his side at every point of his life and today he is really missing his parents it’s not that he doesn’t miss them always but today after seeing such a beautiful family, he is reminded of his own family with which only sour memories of his are attached. Shivaay after making him comfortable shares few words with him and then as it was late he decides it would be good if they get back to their beds.
Shivaay getting up: Come on let’s go and sleep. We need to get up early tomorrow it’s a long day to go.
Krish nods.
Shivaay: Come on stand up boy.
Krish: Not in mood to walk.
Shivaay sighs while Krish passes his cheeky smile to him, being left with no option Shivaay picks the young lad in his arms and walks to his own room.
@SHIVAAY’S ROOM
As Shivaay enters he finds Sukanya, Aditi, Amanat and Anya sleeping together he sighs seeing the girls. They had just robbed his room from him that too without his permission and poor him can’t even say a no to the girls.
Krish: So sad they took your room.
Shivaay nods helplessly: Now where will we go.
Anika comes from back: Krish you aren’t on your bed right now.
Shivaay: We were thinking about that only but I think so the bed is a long gone story.
Anika looking inside the room: Oh so sad. Now what?
Shivaay: I will go to Om’s room.
Anika: No.
Shivaay: Why?
Anika: Because Gauri, Bhavya and I are sleeping there having girls night out actually.
Atharv coming from behind and resting his head on his father’s back: What are you guys doing here?
Shivaay: Planning to sleep.
Atharv: Really does this thing also requires planning dad.
Anika chuckles: If it’s in your dad’s hand he will do everything by planning according to him wind should also follow his plans.
Boys chuckle.
Shivaay: Very funny Anika.
Anika: Vo toh hai. (that’s true.)
Shivaay: Atharv who all are in your room?
Atharv: Mani, Adu and I.
Shivaay: Okay then Krish will also sleep with you.
Atharv nods.
Anika: Mane kabhi socha nahi tha ki itne bhade ghaar me bhi kabhi kamroon ki kami ho sakti hai.
(I never thought that in this big house also we can lack rooms.)
Shivaay: Rooms aren’t a problem but if they want to sleep in different room we can open rooms in upper floors too.
Krish: No I will sleep with Mani bhaiya only.
Anika: Mani bhaiya ka chaila.
Krish: Please ma don’t tease me with that already Suk di and Adi keep teasing me.
Anika: Adi is elder to you call her didi.
Krish makes faces: No never she will start dancing if I call her di and then she will eat up my head.
Anika slaps him playfully while the other two smile at him.
Anika: Now go and sleep. Good night.
She says kissing Krish who returns the kiss with a good night wish.
Krish: Good night ma.
Atharv: Good night.
Anika kissing him wishes him good night and he smiles whole heartedly.
Shivaay takes Krish to Atharv’s room and places him on bed and wishing him good night and doing same with Atharv and after kissing their forehead leaves from there.
@NEXT MORNING
The entire Oberoi mansion is draped in white and turquoise decoration glowing exotically. Every knock and corner is decorated with utmost beauty personifying the love with which sisters have decorated the mansion the previous day.
Everybody gathers in the hall for the celebration, the hall is filled with laughter and every face is glowing with happiness the newly found happiness is enlightening everyone.
In all the hustle bustle of last minute preparation a voice halts everyone.
Prinku: SHIVAAY BHAIYA.
Shivaay looks upto the door from where his little fairy baby sister comes in wearing a beautiful simple while and red suit, her voice brings an incomparable smile on her brothers face. She goes and hugs Shivaay who reciprocates with equal affection.
Prinku: Happy Raksha bandhan bhaiya.
Shivaay: Thank you Prinku.
Prinku then sees Anika: Anika Bhabhi.
Anika: Prinku.
Both hug each other.
Prinku: When did you come Bhabhi?
Anika: Few day back only.
Prinku: And nobody told me. Very bad.
Shivaay: Are sorry baba.
Rudra: Prinku we are also here greet us too. And tie the rakhi quickly so that I can patch up with my protein shake.
Everybody chuckles. While Prinku greets both of her brothers followed by Ranveer and Naira. Kids walk in all decked up for the event and greet Prinku.
Anika: Where are Suk and Adi?
Manik: Ladkiyaan hai jaldi aa hi nahi sakti.
(They are girls how can they come early.
Abeer: Shut up idiot.
Manik makes a puppy face.
Naira: So shall we start brothers.
Atharv: Wait a minute Naira, where is Pratik?
Everybody looks around on not finding Pratik.
Shivaay: Wait I will go and check outside.
Ranveer: Bhaiya I will also come along.
Shivaay nods.
They both reach the garden where they find Anya chasing Pratik.
Shivaay: Yaar. Not again.
Ranveer sighs looking at the duo.
Ranveer: Baccha party what are you two doing?
Pratik goes and hides behind Shivaay.
Pratik: Bade mamu save me from this small ghost.
Anya: Look brother don’t call me ghost and stop teasing me.
Shivaay bends down to match their level: Both of you no fighting today. Today is rakshabandhan so no fighting and no irritating your sister get it Mr. Pratik Singh Randhawa.
Pratik sighs and dramatically says: Fine mamu.
Anya: Good enough.
Ranveer: So shall we move in now.
Both nod. While moving in Pratik pulls Anya’s hair.
Anya: Ouch…
Shivaay and Ranveer glare Pratik.
Pratik: I didn’t do anything.
Anya: Ya you are the most innocent creature in the world.
Pratik innocently nodding his head: Yes sissy.
Anya hits him on his arm: Shut up idiot. And follow me.
Both go inside leaving Shivaay and Ranveer who nod their head in disbelief.
@BACK TO HALL
Oberoi bahus are talking to their darling nanand pampering her and Naira.
Ranveer: Bohaat khatir daari chal rahi hai yaahan par.
Gauri: Aur nahi toh kya jija ji aap toh hukari nanand ko humare pass bhej te hi nahi hain.
(That’s because you do not send her here regularly.)
Bhavya: Ji jija ji hume bhi aap se iss baat ki shikayat hai.
(Yes jija ji even I have same complain.)
Rudra: Same to same.
Ranveer: I am really sorry but ask your dear nanand I have asked her to go whenever she want but she only doesn’t goes anywhere.
Aditi comes down wearing a beautiful pink and golden Anarkali.
Anika: Suk madam tayar hui ya nahi.
(Is Suk ready?)
Aditi: She is coming in few minutes.
Anika: Zaroor pajami ke saath dangal kar rahe hogi.
(I am sure she would be fighting with her pajami.)
Aditi: No not at all she isn’t wearing the suit you gave her. She got entangled in it long ago so she left that.
Anika: Now what is she wearing.
Aditi pointing towards stairs: See it yourself.
Sukanya comes down wearing a white and golden lehanga.
Anika: Where did you get this from.
Sukanya: First tell how is it?
She says flaunting her dress.
Anika: Beautiful. Now come to the point.
Sukanya back hugging Shivaay: Your pati dev gifted it to me.
Everybody smiles.
Prinku: Who is she Bhabhi?
Anika: Shivaay and my daughter Sukanya. Atharv’s twin.
The Randhawa’s get shocked hearing this.
Prinku: Really Bhabhi.
Anika nods. Prinku takes Sukanya in a hug who reciprocates.
Atharv: What’s that red red in your hands did you drink someone’s blood in moring Sukanya?
Sukanya angrily: I don’t know about somebody else but if you didn’t shut your mouth Mr. Atharv Singh Oberoi then maybe your blood will be on my hands. (she ends dangerously.)
Atharv: You are such a vampire….
Shivaay: Don’t start again Atharv.
Sukanya: Did you hear that bhai.
Atharv shows her tongue while she rolls her eyes.
Manik: Par Suk tune alta kun lagaya hai.
(But Suk why have you applied alta.)
Suk gives him are you gone look: Are you mad.
Manik: Why?
Suk: We have our competition today.
Manik makes oops face: I forgot.
Sukanya: Great do you remember what you have to perform or that too has gone from above your head.
Manik: I remember that.
Anya: Di you know even Naira di is taking part in that competition.
Sukanya: WOW that’s great.
Dadi: Chalo shuru karte hain.
(Come let’s start.)
All nod and move towards temple. All the girls pray to lord and tie rakhi first to the lords idol.
Then Prinku moves towards her brothers and does their aarti one by one. Then she applies tilak on their forehead, ties rakhi and finally feeds them sweets.
Three of the brothers hug her and give her presents.
Then Gauri does aarit, tilak and ties rakhi to Shivaay repeating her yearly custom followed by Rudra. While Bhavya ties rakhi to ShivKara after doing all the rituals. The brothers gift their respective sisters.

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BG MUSIC:
Behana ne bhai ki kalai se
Behana ne bhai ki kalai se
Pyaar bandha hai
Pyaar ke do taar se,
Sansaar bandha hai
Resham ki dori se
Resham ki dori se
Resham ki dori se,
Sansaar bandha hai
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Next is Anika and Sahil both doing some masti tie rakhi to each other.
Sahil: Di thank you for always protecting me and being there for me. Till date whatever you have done for me is so much that I can never repay for that not even in next 7 births. This is just a small gift for you.
Anika hugs him emotionally and then opens the gift it has all the memories of both Sukanya and Atharv side by side on same page. Like their puc at time of birth is on same page. While on the next page is Shivaay’s pic with Atharv and her pic with Sukanya when they were babies. Similarly all the memories are collected together as if they were together for all the years. Anika’s eyes tear up she shows it to Shivaay who to gets emotional both crease the pics lovingly. At the end is their pic together with entire family clicked a day back while watching movie. ShivIka hug Sahil for giving them the best gift.
ShivIka: Thank you Sahil.
Sahil smiles.
Sukanya: What’s this that both of you are getting emotional.
She takes the album and sees it and so does the rest. Atharv’s tears flow down his eyes while Sukanya controls herself just the way Shivaay did.
Sukanya: Stop being emotional now. Rest also have to tie rakhi.
Anika goes to Abeer and ties rakhi to him.
Anika: Abeer this time I want a big gift.
Abeer: Ask for what you want.
Sukanya: Bang on mumma today make him bankrupt.
Anika chuckles: Okay I will ask my gift when time comes give me a blank promise.
Abeer keeps his hand on her: Granted. You can ask whatever you want and whenever your brother can give life for you as well.
Anika hugs him and he reciprocates with brotherly affection.
All smile adoring their bond.
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Behana ne bhai ki kalai se
Pyaar baandhaa hai
Pyaar ke do taar se,
Sansaar baandhaa hai
Resham ki dori se
Resham ki dori se
Resham ki dori se,
Sansaar bandha hai
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Sukanya takes the aarti plate and and goes to Atharv first he smiles at her. She is reminded of the first time she had tied the rakhi to him.
@FLASHBACK
@COLUMBIA
@WORKSHOP
A girl of 10 years is sitting on the side of a ground holding a rakhi in her hands tightly. Her eyes have a layer of tears but her face is blank depicting deep pain, she clutches that rakhi close to her heart. A boy who has been noticing this comes and sits beside her and keeping his hand on her shoulder questions her.
(That boy is Atharv and girl is Sukanya when they were 10 yrs old.)
Atharv: What happened why are you sitting here isolated from others any problem.
Sukanya nods in no.
Atharv sees the rakhi in her hand and touches it.
Sukanya possessively and angrily: What are you doing?
Atharv: Nothing I was just seeing what’s in your hand.
Sukanya shows it to him: This is rakhi for my brother. But I can’t tie him.
Atharv: Oh because he is at home and you are far away from him. No worries once you return tie it to him.
Sukanya: No I can never tie it.
Atharv: Why?
Sukanya: Because he isn’t with me few people say that he is with god but mumma says that he is away from us as he is with an angel, a messenger of god is taking care of him.
Atharv: Don’t worry he will be fine and the day you meet him tie him all the rakhis.
Sukanya: I miss him.
Atharv: I too miss my sisters today nobody is here to tie me rakhi.
Sukanya: Shall I .
Atharv smiling whole heartedly: Will you.
Sukanya nods innocently.
Atharv forwards his hand and she ties the rakhi.
Atharv: I will try my best to protect you always. From today you are my doll.
Sukanya smiles: And you are my bhai.
Atharv: But we are of same age.
Sukanya: So what I will always call you bhai.
Atharv nods and hugs her.
@END OF F.B.
Sukanya cries hugging Atharv remembering those moments and all the past years where she has been yearning to tie rakhi to him. Atharv consoles her as he understands her feelings but the rest get shocked seeing her cry as she is very strong.
Atharv whispers to Suk: It’s okay doll I am here and from now on you will tie me rakhi on every rakshabandhan.
Sukanya nods still hugging him.
Anika: Suk what happened Baccha.
Suk nods in no. She release the hug and runs to her room as fast as possible.
Anika: Sukanya.
Atharv: Wait.
He says knowing what his sister is upto today.
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Sundarata me jo kanhaiya hai
Mamata me yashoda maiya hai
Wo aur nahi dujaa koi
Wo to mera raja bhaiya hai
Behana ne bhai ki kalai se
Behana ne bhai ki kalai se
Pyaar bandha hai
Pyaar ke do taar se,
Sansaar bandha hai
Resham ki dori se
Resham ki dori se
Resham ki dori se,
Sansar bandha hai
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Sukanya comes after five minutes with a bunch of 14 rakhis in her hand and forwards it in front of Atharv as if asking permission he forwards his wrist permitting her to tie all of them. Every body smiles with tears in their eyes seeing the devotion of a sister even without a ray of hope of his presence still she had always kept those rakhis safe to tie it to her brother one day.
Sukanya does Atharv’s aarti followed by tilak and then ties all the rakhis to him filling half of his wrist. Finally she stuffs a huge ladoo in his mouth making everyone giggle at her antics.
Atharv feeds her with another ladoo and finally pulls her in a hug.
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Meraa phul hai tu, talvar hai tu
Meri laaj ka paharedar hai tu
Mai akeli kahan is duniya me
Mera saraa sansar hai tu
Behana ne bhai ki kalai se
Behana ne bhai ki kalai se
Pyaar baandhaa hai
Pyaar ke do taar se,
Sansar bandha hai
Resham ki dori se
Resham ki dori se
Resham ki dori se,
Sansar bandha hai
Hame dur bhale kismat kar de
Apane man se na juda karana
Sawan ke pawan din bhaiya
Bahana ko yaad kiya karana
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Then Sukanya ties rakhi to Advik and Pratik. While Naira, Amanat and Anya tie rakhi to all the brothers. Aditi ties rakhi to both Manik and Krish.
Girls: Now gift time brothers.
Boys: Forget it.
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Behana ne bhai ki kalai se
Behana ne bhai ki kalai se
Pyaar bandha hai
Pyaar ke do taar se,
Sansar baandha hai
Resham ki dori se
Resham ki dori se
Resham ki dori se,
Sansar bandha hai
Behana ne bhai ki kalai se
Pyaar bandha hai.
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PRE RECAP:
Adventure night.
Guys sorry as I won’t be able to update for quite a while now as I have some urgent work and I have to go out of station. So sorry for this. And please do comment on this part.
Thank you for reading
Keep smiling
Stay happy
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For now signing off
SHIVIKA ?…
18 Comments
It was awesome dear… I loved it… Waiting for next part…
Take care and have a safe journey…
Awwww raksha bandhan can’t be so heart warming . Thank You sooooooooooooooooooooo much di for this huge update
Phenomenal….. it was fantastic n emotional tooo…. loved it to d core…. plz try to post nxt asap…. loved d bro-sista bond…. it was amazing…
Fabulous
It’s an amazing part girlllll
So beautifully mentioned u everyone’s characters. ….. how cute suk nd atharv ……
Ur raksha bandhan special episode is de most amazing part in all
Keep writing nd wall post me de next episode’s link …..I will wait …..
It is awesome dear … Lovely update
Awesome episode…..loved bro-sis fights…..just like my brother and me…..enjoyed every bit of it…..Pinky ko kya mast jawab diya….uski to OMM hi karna…..well done
A khidkhitod update. I have to ask, is Mahi in this story as a just think that he is Krish & Aditi’s dad….don’t know why.
Awesome update.. love the bonding between all the siblings they’re so cute
Hey Shivu bachha… here is your surprise … sorry for making you wait…
Chappy 1
It started with Anika and Sukanya… I really liked Manik… his bond with anika and sukanya … Best part was manik saying FIR SE? and when Sukanya says “I promise mai Puri koshish karungi ki agli baar se Dhiraj ko vaise na marun” it was hilarious… matlab maregi par bas WAISE nahi… lol
Aadvik’s Intro was good… he was looking totally a brat… His bond with Om was not as expected, but jaise he was behaving with all was suspicious… and the way advik looks at Tej was really very different from the way he was a moment back… It was as if he was hiding something before…
Baap re baap kids are so funny… Obvio Rudy’s daughter has to be like him… TOTAL NAUTANKI…
To say about the chappy it was really a bang… sukanya and anika’s povs were so touchy… and the pov of shivaye made me feel so bad for him… (by the way I liked the names esp. director uncle). The highlight of this chappy was the family bond…
Chappy 2
The beginning of the chappy was like background which was really needed for the story… Sukanya inquiring about her stay at trustees showed us that she carries SELF-RESPECT… good job. Advik and Sukanya encounter was awesome… Why do I feel dadi sensed sukanya to be ShivIka daughter?
Highlight was when sukanya shut the hell of pinky… Beechaara phone… Sukanya’s bond with others was so overwhelming… With fathers and mothers, she was sooooo good and with youngers she made me like her character more…
WHY DID DADI GAVE ONLY ANIKA’S CLOTHES????
Rudra’s single hug showed us how much he misses his bhabi… And billu and his bacchi’s meet was worth watching… WOW
Chappy 3
Manik is so good… not in that good boy sense but I like this character… After so long Dinner was something worth for oberois.. Shivaye’s pov overwhelmed me with happiness once again.. The way Shivaye woke sukanya was so fatherly…
Lol… looking hot billujii… hahahaha so funny ..
alas Shivaye learnt to say sorry in these 15 years…
“Why the hell all the girls in my life are so much out of order” you know what my thought was in this line? “As if you are in order… you can only order but being in order is not you so don’t expect from her too…”
and the best part was WILD SUKANYA… hehehe stop your sister sirjii lol..
Sukanya fooled everyone so easily… it was really funny scene.. awesome and when advik says.. see papa now you understand my value.. lol… This chappy proved that Advik is not bad…
Chappy 4
For the options you can make khichadi… I like it naa so will you 😛
I liked the way kids were describing Ragini… lol I loved the torture part (note* I don’t use the word LOVE often. It’s rare… ALMOST ENDANGERD) I am liking the kids bond.. The highlight were was… AAP BILLUJII KI BEHAN HO?… lol
Manik and sukanya’s bond is really beautiful… the way he found out pinky the reason of Sukanya murdering her phone was so good… these simple stuffs show how deep their bond is… I really liked the way SukNik understand eachother.
The Bond of family members is so good…
Chappy 5
Pinky’s WASHROOM JOURNEY hahahaha…The way family reacted ‘what the fark man…’ Was awesome.
Flashback was so beautiful… Sukanya massaging Shivaye was so overwhelming… the way you have described the suffering and pains is so well portrayed. She is inspiring him to live…. BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN…
Chappy 6
Shivaye waking sukanya and making tiffin for her… this scene was so heart whelming… I was all with ear to ear smile in the scene.. Aadvik is going through different phase… and the way you hae showed him reacting is so realistic…
Amanat is sweet.. And tiffin scene was so funny.. Shivaye coming to pick the kids ‘with’ “COOLERS” caught my attention… you wanted to show his willing participation with kids rather than feel of compulsion because of his morning convo.
And this chappy’s show stealer was Aadvik’s confession… The way sukanya stood for him and also amanat in school.. She unknowingly became GREAT WALL…
Father daughter moment swelled my heart here… their convo almost teared me up…
BY THE AY I WOULD LIKE TO SEE THE BABY TRACK… it was so good track but dunno why CVS never give space to good twist for long…
Chappy 7
Sukanya is doing all hard to make up all to her years. She is uniting the family with all her wits. OmVik convo was so emotional and after that Advik’s effort for Amanat was beautifully written..
The family moment whare Advik teases his father’ is damn funny… Whole family was shivering with shock my favorite line was
“Dadi you only told that we should learn from elders, so recently we got an elder to teach us good manners.” And also ” you know what it gives me a feeling that Billu ji is our teacher and you & Pinky aunty are those two notorious kids of class who first create problems and then like innocent kids go and complain to the teacher. I mean in my entire life I hadn’t complained that much as much you two do in one day to billu ji.
Did I tell you that these “OBEROIS” ARE ALL DEVILS.. Damn so good in planning and plotting… OmNik scene was so beautiful… I felt knot forming in the pit of my stomach with the emotions running over my head…
The realization part (flashback) was fabulous… I could picturize Shivaye’s expression… “WOW what a day my own daughter is introducing me to my wife. What a fate I have got. Brilliant.” I am all on floor with giggles…
The meet was fab.. I mean the way you described ShivIka’s turmoil was …
Chappy 8
The carry over moments were so good… revelation made all change but one thing is certain that there is more to come. The way anika reacted left me baffled. Did something else happned in the past too that we are unaware of?
The way ShivIka were reliving sukanya’s memory was so tear dropping… The best part was when sukanya scared the shit out of pinky with her indirect threat… and when she says “koi shak?” I could do nothing but feel the goosebumps all over my body.
Chappy 9
Funniest chappy so far.. Adviks interruption was fabulous but what happened then made me go all rofl… the line when advik says “Since the time I came to know about various other purposes of kitchen” but I couldn’t stop laughing when shivaye says DOOB MAR hahahah so funny.
Then was all so awaited family scene… The way anika said. No espresso for a week and the way shivaye reacted made me feel sooooooo goooooooddd.
After ragini’s entry it was little tensed but the way kids reacted was awesome… Hehehe Nagini was actually trapped in her own net…
The beach moment was awesome.. I wanna see Manik flirting with Anika often coz ot is such a boost to the story.. I somewhere feel he will play cupid between ShivIka..
And in the precap… SAHIL.. Is he?
Chappy 10
This chappy actually cahnged its theme.. From simple drama to MYSTERY.. Waooooooooooowww!!!
Going all good.. I am enjoying Manik’s expression… (I have already told you about this chappy so lets move to next one…)
Chappy 15
These kids are enough to give me goosebumps.. The mystery is gonna unfold soon.. The bond SukThav has is so oh heart… Well done bachha… The way Suk cried in Arthav’s embrace made my eyes well. These kids are so adorable and I am liking the way each chappy is moving ahead…
Keep doing.. and hope you liked my surprise… Do tell me what do you feel about it… and tell me what your first reaction was…
By the way mai ye msg 3 rd time post kar rahi hu ek baar mere net ki wajah se nai gaya fir TU ne reject kia abb jaake saayad post ho jaye…
????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????***I am dead*** ????????????????????????????????????????????
I LIVE YOU SOOOOOOO MUCH DI.
DI you were asking about my reaction let me tell you di I read this a day ago when I was returning from my trip I was hell tired nothing good had happened the entire day and after reading your comment all I was doing is to smile. The big bright smile. You wrote this thrice na di I read this thrice. I thought thousand times before replying but I seriously have no words this is the best surprise. Love you didu. Kiss urself from my side ???.
TAKE CARE ?.
Nice ….. Post next one soon
Awesome update
I think i m in luv with ur ff…… It’s just FANTABULOUS dr…..
Awwww Advik bichara bina galti ke phas gaya….
IS Krish nd Adi r MAHHI’s CHILDREN?????
Brothers nd sisters teasing moment was Superbb….. Just luv it….
Eagerly waiting 4 nxt post soon…
Super awesome update. Loved it. Hate Pinky. Hope she and Ragini will get punishment.
I am feeling that krish and Aditi are somehow related to Oberois.
Am wondering if we will see Mahi in this off?
Amazing update
Awesome…. Lovely part…
Nice.. update soon