Heya Allies… Amore is back again with new chappy… today’s chappy is full of Senior citizens *wink* I miss ShiVika and MehBeer banter so here it is… hope you like it… There is so much yet to come and I am getting excited. Welcome to the world of confusions and today some hints will be given for one of the mystery… do tell me how did feel… And yeah there is a note for you all at the end of the chappy please do read it… 🙂 Enjoy…
I AM EXCITED… P.S – I dunno why is it so.
~Malhotra Mansion~
In the same way, If you study continuously, you will tend to forget whatever you read. So what you have to do is, read, and let your brain process so that whatever you read it will not spill out yet you will be able to memorize more without forgetting” says Bhairav making everyone awe of his way of explaining and all the kids jump over him shouting “THANK YOU MAMA/ BADE PAPA” and Bhairav rolls on the ground with all kids over him… and whole hose is filled with laughter…
“Wow!” was the only word Anika could muster up whereas Aryan was oddly irritated watching Bhairav because of the mess he was himself. One way he was impressed with Bhairav because of his attitude but the very same attitude ignites him some sort of discomfort too. He… “RAAAAAAAVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE” his thoughts came to halt hearing a furious shout and he saw Bhairav stilled.
“Kids, I got to go. Nitu is calling me and if I don’t reach to her before her 3rd shout I will be thrown out of this mansion please lemme go” Bhairav pleaded kids like a child making kids giggle.
“Raavee…” was the 2nd call and Bhairav ran skipping every 2 step of the stairs and reached before she called him the third time. Here Shivaye sighs audibly and says,”These two will never change”.
“But dad mamu is so cool isn’t he?” Atharv asks Shivaye in an aw-ed voice making Aryan groan almost inaudibly but Shivaye was also ‘the BILLU’ with crazy hearing ability hears him and chuckles and speaks oiling the fire, “this is just the beginning guys, just see what happens next”.
“What do you mean uncle?” Asks Manik. “Actually guys, Nitya and Bhairav’s bond is gonna be quite entertaining. It’s not that it was never so but now the situation is gonna make it different too” Shivaye widens his eyes realizing what he blabbered. He looks towards Abeer in a pleading expression who is giving him death glare. To correct Shivaye’s mistake Abeer speaks gritting his teeth, “Guys, they are friends right so its fun to see their banter, that’s it” then hurriedly adds “Now go and study. Free time over” and after dismissing them he gives a look to Shivaye as if he was ready to scold him but he starts smiling when he realized Aryan was nowhere to be seen. Shivaye and Abeer smiles widely knowing where he could be.
Meher: Abeer? What’s wrong? Mr. Oberoi?
Abeer: Nothing Sweetheart, in-fact now nothing will go wrong
Anika: What is going between you two. You are behaving as if you are pregnant.
AbVaye: (together) What the hell/ What he wuck!!!
Meher giggles
Shivaye: What do you mean Anika?? (He asks horrified)
Anika: No! actually the way you guys are having mood swing I just said…
Shivaye: JUST SAID???? Just said, Anika??? Out of everything in the world you related us to PREGNANT WOMEN???
Abeer: Damn… We are not even women, Anika. (adds Abeer horrified)
Meher: (unbelievable tone) Literally Abeer??? NOT EVEN WOMEN??? Couldn’t you come up with better words???
Abeer: C’mon Meher, I was (cutting him Meher spoke)
Meher: (angrily) you tried to insult women… WOMEN… HOW COULD YOU ABEER
Abeer: (confused) huh ???
Anika: (furiously) and you Mr. Baggad Billa Oberoi (pointing her fingers at Shivaye) what do you mean by out of everything??? Do you even know how painful is pregnancy?? You should be happy that I related you to it but you insulted women.
Shivaye: (confused) What??? I… (Cutting him Meher speaks)
Meher: (Turning to Anika) These boys are good for nothing. Lets go Anu.
Anika: Yupp Heer, lets go, I don’t want to talk to them… These boys are pathetic.
Both women stamped their foot and left their husbands stand agape with confusion.
Abeer: What was that.
Shivaye: Please tell me too if you find out.
Abeer: Damn it… Insult??? When did we insult women?
Shivaye: (frustrate) Forget about insult and all the shit Abeer. We can clear this later… but for now its important to make up with them or we will be thrown out of the house.
Abeer: Shivaye! This is my house. (in a duh tone)
Shivaye: (in the same tone) And Meher is your wife (smile sarcastically)
Abeer: Damn, yeah
Shivaye: Yeah lets go.
With this both husbands followed their respective wives…
Here Aryan was restless. He could not think anything beyond Nitya and Bhairav. He had left when Shivaye said, “this is just the beginning guys, just see what happens next”. He could not think anything. He left the hall when he saw everyone on their own. He could not stop himself from following Bhairav that too unnoticed to others in the hall. He quietly stood out of the side window to peek inside the room. The scene he saw burned his chest. Nitya had her arms wrapped around Bhairav’s waist and her head was rested on the chest. He could see she was tired but the way Bhairav was caressing her hair, it was relieving her and he could tell that easily because the stressed lines over her forehead were disappearing slowly and her face was turning peaceful too. He then saw them talking but could not hear as the window was pretty far. He saw Bhairav smiling at something she said and then said something then he saw her smile with familiar twinkling eyes. She stared Bhairav’s eyes directly and then smiled wide making Bhairav smile wider. Aryan’s heart soothed with her smile but then realization that the smile was not for him made his heart clench and he left unable to bear that the one
~Aryan’s Monologue~
Okay I understood that Nitya needed sleep but why did Bhairav have to pick her up in his arms? Okay even if he picked, whay the hell did he kiss My Nitya. Why was he special to her? Why was I not the one who hugged her kissed her or soothe her? It should have been me not him… Shut it Aryan what the hell is wrong with you that was a peck not a kiss. And why the hell are you behaving like a possessive lover of her? (widens his eyes and questions himself) LOVER??? Do I lov… Get a grip Aryan, you don’t love Nitya, you love Hina.
His Subconscious Mind: (sarcastically ) Really? Then what was the feeling I felt for Hina?
Conscious: Love… But I don’t love Nitya.
Subconscious: If that was love then what is this. And why the hell do I feel for Nitya like this? I am jealous in the same way I use to when boys tried to flirt with Hina.
His Conscious Mind: But how is it possible to have same feelings for two different women.
Subconscious: If it is not possible then how the hell am I feeling it.
Conscious: I don’t know. How can I feel the same feeling for Nitya that I felt with Hina?
Subconscious: You love her
Conscious: NO! I Don… (couldn’t complete)
Subconscious: Grip yourself Aryan. Find out what this is… Is it Love… Do I love My Nitya?Conscious: How can it be?
Okay guys I actually wanted to ask you all something… I got to know that some of the readers are finding the story turn boring. They told me that The story is going really slow and it has lost the charm it us to have. Is it true?
Guys, I do have different writing pattern than sparkleofnight_22. C’mon who am I kidding? Everyone has different writing ways. I prefer writing every emotion and in my works EACH SECOND COUNTS. Shivika could write with the story proceeding with speed but I cannot do so because this is not my story I cannot experiment here…
She have worked really hard for her story and I cannot jumble it up experimenting. I have to do the way I can keep it up. It is my duty to respect her work. If I move story faster I might not be able to pen the exact emotions that could reach to you exactly with the same feeling that it suppose to.. or with the feeling and meaning it was written…
I had no Idea that you all are feeling the story boring because the story is moving slowly now but please try to understand that this book was started by Shivika BUT is presently written by @amoremarine and these two authors have different writing styles. I am a human and I do need improvement a lot but for my improvement, I cannot play with Shivu’s emotions. This story was started with lots of emotions she piled up on her. It is her creativity.
You guys have been informed before that plot is still by Shivika only the words are mine. Yeah but it doesn’t mean I copy paste it. I have modified the real plot a little. Let me inform you guys that the last four chappies that I have written, she had given me to write it all in single chappy and its not even half of what she told me but I felt that portraying each and every emotions is better than moving chapter fast. She told me to continue this story with a trust that I will write chappies properly… with a trust that I will understand her effort behind improving the book for the readers. (and let me tell you it needs guts and heart to be able to give one’s hard work on other’s hand for the betterment of the audience and I am Proud of My Shivu bachha that she did it)
Come on guys, so if I feel something is good for the book, I will do it. Shivu is my baby sister. I call her bachha not because I want to degrade her but because she is my baby and this book is her baby… and I will nurture her baby for better. If there are other improvements required do tell me freely but please try to understand that if I change my writing style, I might not be able to convey you like I am doing and I cannot keep Shivu’s trust at stake… Feel free to share… Hope I did’t disappoint any of you and thank you for telling me about it too.. Because Now I will try to write with fast forwarding stories (but not this… Sorry!)
And finally a happy news… I am buying a new lappy… so after that, you might get chappies faster and you won’t have to wait for a complete week. *smile smile smile*
– Amore Marine