a boy named sanskar maheswari from a well statused family father is ram maheswari and mother sujatha maheswari as they are leading a happy life but one incident change their life upside down
as sanskar is studing in collage their a girl ragini khanna also studing she loves sanskar and one day she proposed him but he refused as he want to focouse on his studies not anything this hurt ragini ego and she want to take revenge from sanky and disscus with her friend pooja and one fine day ragini call sanky to empty classroom as sanky enter from behind ragini closes the door sanky get shock and tell ragini what she is doing to which she smirk and says sanky you hurt my ego by rejecting me accept to otherwise
sanky:otherwise what i am not scared of u ok
and to which ragini angered and tell then now bear result and she smeared her lipstick and tore her cloth and smeared her kajal and messes her hair sanky get shocked seeing this
sanky: ragini what are u doing
but she come near him and scratch on his hand and sanky let out a painfull scream and then ragini goes and open the door and run out and seeing this sanky come out of shock and run behind her and she goes in collage campus crying all see her and pooja come near her
ragini sliently: lets start pooja
pooja asked what happed as all gathered teacher as well as student and sanky come their and ragini see this and point towards sanky
ragini: you know pooja he proposed me when i said no he start forcing himself on me and start crying all see sanky hatefull and this is shock for sanky and pooja goes near her and slap him
pooja: you blo*dy cheapster dont you have sister or mother chi
and all start abusing sanky tear come in his eyes while ragini and pooja smirk unseen by other but sanky see this sanky tell everyone but one one listen to him only telling that he is culpirt and after this they call police and they take sanky but their is no one who listen sanky sanky father and mother called to police station their ragini also present they both plead that their son cant do this and cry sanky cry seeing them and police tell them that if ragini take case back then he released otherwise matter go to court sanky parent plead to ragini but she samelessly go from their and then sanky meet his parents and tell them everything and all cry after that sanky parents go and inspecter tourte sanky for the crime which he doest do and beat him and hear sanky parent try almost all thing to release sanky but nothing happen it has been thee days sanky is jail but their is no one who heard his story all only blamed him as news publised in newspaper all badmouth abouth sanky and family and sad for ragini by this humiliation sanky father get depresed and they go to ragini and tell her to take case back for which she tell them to sit on knees and ask they do it and she samlesly tell them to give 1 lakh to relase sanky and case back sanky parent give all their saved money anf jewllery to her and then she take case back by saying that this punshiment is enough and after sanky came out she tell
ragini smiling: see what happend na sanky if you accept me then this will happened na
and go from their all abused sanky and sanky doesnt get admission back in collage and he locked himself him in room by seeing his son state and humilation sanky father get heart attack and he died and after that sanky and his mother shift to another city and sanky start doing a part time job with private collage as he now intract with others less and scared of girls and is living only for his mother and the family who is happy now tured into sad their is no celibration while the ragini is enjoying her life
so gyus we all talk about equality but where equality goes when its a matter of boy we all get silent in matter of boy why can you tell me a reason i am also a girl but i think some girls used boys for their benifits and this should not happen not every boy is rapist and not every girl is victim we only talk equality but when stiuation come then where equality goes we should hear both boy and girl not as girl is telling so she should be always right our one wrong step make boy life hell he cant do anything after that as this happen with boy some do sucide and some ileageal activity or some parents dont let their son go out equality is only stablised when their is equality btw boy and girl i am not telling all girls age like this only but all boya are also not rapist
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???awesme superb i agree with u
Its really awesomee dearr u said righttt boys also become victim but then alsoo they called as culprits… many girls take advantage of the facilitira which is given to them as a girl and use them against those boyss who r in actual victim not culprit… u wrotee sooo welll ?????
Its really awesome dear, in todays generation not every girl is so sober.
Todays generation have alot of ego problems they think only their ego etc.
you are rite SMK.. sometime it’s happen…..girls took advantage for boys too..
in your case.. the girl became culprit and the boy became victims…
and society by the prove, threat girl as victim and boy as culprit…
but in real case in society, even if girl as really a VICTIM, they still taunt her as CULPRIT too..
somehow, they still threat a victim as a cheap woman too…. it’s the biggest sad point…
i dunno in your story, did Ragini got taunt as cheap girl from society (kinda some real rape victims) or not ?
but your story really awesome and agree with you that both have equal opportunity to have cruel and sadist mind…
Awsm one, your​each and​ every word was true sometimes girl also take advantage of society thinking it’s always not necessary that boy is only culprit
awesome it right we should ask for equality not for extra right. that should b the only way of living
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Seriously?? Miss saryu sometimess plz use your mind also on this serious topic u r here and crying for ragini name? Dont alwayss start crying on the name of ragini that she is not a bad character and if u r saying this much than let me remind u ragini once accused sanskar for forcing herr… that was also not a small thing.. just grow up lady.. and smk u r wroteee it sooo well… hats off to u
Uffffff if you have this much problem you can simply ignore it na who told you poke your nose here. May be really she doesn’t has any feeling like you told hater or lover. But you guys always take us wrong by the way i really wanna know why you not comment with original id. Hope i get this answer from you only not by other unregistered id member
Ups sry smk i replied her, but you really wrote so well hats off to you hope you not discourage by this single cmnt looking forwarding for more work from you
Nice one and all ur words r true girls shouldn’t take advantage of their rights, but at same time boys shouldn’t take advantage of weak girls
saryu seriously i am just giving my point i am not swara fan not ragini hater if you want to read replace ragini as swara first change your mind the serial got over so come out of this thinking i just casually use their names i didnt write tejaswi ok so show some maturity
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Saryu, I think the content of the story and the message it gives out is more important than the characters…instead of getting sad about the fact that there are girls out there who do cheap things like this, you are getting annoyed that she used Ragini’s name instead of Swara’s….and you are asking her to grow up? She is not showing her hatred for Ragini. She is just pointing out how few people are….like she said you can use some other name in Ragini’s place if you don’t like her name mentioned in such a way.It will be mature of you if you concentrate on the story rather than the characters. She can use whatever characters she wants….that shouldn’t be any of your concern…and seriously your are fighting for a CHARACTER of a serial,which may or may not exist in real life. Tejaswi was playing the CHARACTER of Ragini. She wasn’t Ragini. And smk isn’t spreading hate…it’s you who decided to see just the name and ignore the content. So now you decide who is immature and spreading hate!!
P.S. I like Swara and Ragini. Ragini a bit more than Swara. You want you can bring on your hate comments. But I seriously think fighting about the characters used in a story and ignoring the plot and the message is stupid. Afterall you can imagine your own characters while reading a story,the writer doesn’t force you to accept the characters they use!!!
hi smk, hope u r doing well, i am jasmine fan of swaragini, i like both the couples, swasan and raglak , i like swara and ragini both equally. and sanlak too. i am a silent reader till now, your story is nice and touched my heart. yes you are right, not all the time boys are wrong and girls are right. we girls also do mistakes, n its a human behaviour. i completely agree with but still you dont need to use ragini’s name on ur update, its really hurt many raglak and ragini’s fan. so they will get angry. you should understand their pov also. maybe u used her name just like that, no bad intentions behind it, its possible but its really hurt many of her fan by using her name.
i am here not becoz u used ragini’s name n i got angry and boiling now, no its not true, if u used swara’s name instead of ragini i will still react the same way. why didnt you use kavita, kavya or any other girls name. anyways i am not here to hurt u or anybody or being a reason of any fight. hope u will not misunderstand me.
Smk concept and moral of story is nice and true which really happens around i will appriciate to choose this sensitive topic to raise your voice to difference between boys and girls and injustice to boys by judiciary by some girls using law in wrong way.Till this i have will whole heartedly you and clap for you.
But can say why you choose only ragini to protray that charecter; why cant you chose swara or kavya or kavita ormansi or any normal name or nick name which we dont know.
You are not an swara lover or ragini hater by this statement you said indirectly you are swaragini lover right ; so there is an another character in this story i.e pooja so atleast why you not used swara name or any other name serial there.
From this it clearly states that you love swara and you dont want to use her for evilness right! And it shows you are swara lover and dont like ragini as more of swara and swasan fans dont like ragini or raglak and viceversa.
My intention is not to hurt you ; my point is just you can use and other girl name or if you dont want to hurt any fan or any girl you can just mention girl name as girl only know which does not hurt any fan either swara or ragini or swaragini or vahe or temish or swasan or raglak.
I hope you dont do this kind of mistake in your future moral stories and rectify your mistake with out hurting anyone directly or indirectly.
If you dont like someone or something just forget about that person or thing live them in there own way just dont think about them or thing that’s it and live you in your way by forgetting them and not considering them they are there for you .
Sorry to say but it is is true you have hurted ragini or raglak or temish fans intentionally or unintentionally.
Any moral of story is nice and real. Plz dont repeat this kind of stuff onceagain to give someone pleasure to heart and give pain to someone.
Saryu! if uh didnt like then why did uh read it? after reading ragini name uh could have discontinue reading na? nd most importantly its is her work its her wish! she can use any character!
nd saryu if uh think she is ragini hater then keep on thinking because nobody can change ur mind!!
nd dear smk! ignore there comments!
Awesome do continue.. Yeah things like this happen.. And girl before accusing someone she should think about her selfrespect also… She killed her own respect saying a man forced her…. I have seen many girls playing with boys feeling and some do sucide if he is soft heart.. If not he does worst thing by morphing a girl photo and upload it in web…
Shitty crimes happen in web…
Ur story remind me of mtv – cyber show…
So continue d story…
nyc
U said right…. Many girls misuse boys…. They made them culprit….. But majority of cases girls suffer a lot…. When anything happens to boy they will forget in some time…. But when anything happened to girl instead of making her as victim they will make that girl as criminal…. They will point she is only characterless…. Still ur writing is amazing dr….. And about ragini don’t worry…. Ragini fans are talking as if they are saints…. We made ragini negative bcoz she was negative sometimes in the serial…. But the one who is talking like saints they made swara negative…. Whats that haan?? So don’t listen to them at all….. U continue ur work…. Its amazing os…..
i didnt think u all make issue just of name so its ok now i will post it on different name rather than swara and ragini and i am soory if i hurt your feeling
Hello u r right bt in our country most of the boys r of that type hm 2-3 girls ki vajah se ye nhi kh sakte ki all r innocent india mein culprit hmesha release ho jata h
N agar girls victims ho tb bhi unhe culprit ki trah dekha jata h
Exactly…well said…y everyone dont believe boys in this situation…even in serial also no body listened to sanskar,all blamed n slapped him…but swara saved him….but in real life everybody will not have a friend,wife like swara….society mind set should change…n some fans r barking here?dont give damn bcs in serial also it happened…
Even sometimes we believe on wrong one it may also be the boy who is wrong
Story is nice dear…..dont take bad words in ur heart…..n keep writing…v vll be vaiting for ur next story…take care
so i am only telling that sometime we belive on wrong also so due to which some one life get desteroyed i am not telling that every girl is faurd i know girls also face humilation but not only girls sometime boys also face humilation and due to some fraud girls real victim also suffer so i am telling that rather on coming any point and result we should anyalize the situation that if any (girlor boy) without doing anything get punsihed as wha if all say all girls are farud it hurt those who are not like this then why cant we think before telling that all boys are dogs this this they also fell hurt na by seeing this as those who are nice we also make them stand on this class is this mistake or not tell me
Ya u r right there are some bt we should not come to any conclusion without its proper knowledge
soory to all raglak fans and from next time i will keep in mind that i dont have to use their names i dont have any intention to hurt all but i have only one question are you tejaswai fan as i didnt use her name i use ragini a role played by her only a role their is no ragini its just imagniary and for that only you all are getting this much angry if i use tejaswi name then i think its not correct i am not writing this as i get angry one your comments i am asking for my curisity so please ans this and about swara i didnt have that name in my mind writing this and i am not swara fan not ragini ok and if i have swara name i should use her name also but now i get that i should not use raglak name so from now i will never ever use raglak name in my ff and os happy
Dear smk first try to understand the sistuation if some ragini fans started scolding you and there are some ragini fans are supporting you cant you see it in your anger.
Iam not supporting you nor sarayu but iam supporting the concept and moral of story which you taken which is really happens so iam supporting concept only.
Sarayu thought that you are swara lover and swasan lover so she thought you belong to some swasan fans who dont ragini and raglak ; so in there ff or os they make them to protray negative character which irked her and she commented in that way… ( viceversa some raglak fans dont like swasan)
Which means she is bad and you are good nor she is good and you are bad both are at fault and both are correct at a same time.
If she commented you in taunting way as a author its your responbility to make her understand why you have choosen only ragini for that character because no one can say what you make you to right story and why did you prefer her only for that one. Instead of that you also replied her in taunting way already she is angry and your reply made her more angry and then she believed that you are an definetly swara fan and swasan fan( as you selected sanskar as an victim)
For one or two taunting replies you cant blame all ragini and raglak lovers and taunt them as you will not include ragini and raglak in your future stories.
Yes you are author and its your story and you have only right to choose on whom you have to write but blame and include all ragini and raglak fans in this plzz its a request.
Wheather you write or not write on raglak i dont have any problem but plzz dont consider all ragini and raglak fans as haters.
And last one you said you have not used tejasswi name but you used only ragini name but when ever you see ragini name in any ff people will assume only her in that charecter same goes to swara(helly) sanskar (varun) and laksh (namish ) only come there mind that’s it because they strongly connected with this characters in reel way and real way.
And you posted this os in swaragini page so obviously people will assume ragini as only tejasswi.And there are chances to think you are an swasan when you use ragini in negative shade( viceversa for raglak )
If saryu as taunted you and shipra is supported you both are ragini fans only. So plz dont blame all ragini and raglak fans are not good.And taunt / scroll them as only they are only reason that you dont include them in your future stories its your choice and your decision i know i have no right to tell you.but dont taunt all ragini fans for one or two that’s it.
Dear don’t take it, ragini is common name which can come in any mind and lets by chance assume you purposly taken ragini name then also u haven’t done wrong u can see not exact but in serial also this tyoe of thing happened
Ragini fake molestation.
And simply there are so many serials in which ragini name is given to characters, if people have so much problem then they can think any of ragini of their choice.
All the best for your next os and ff.
Its your choice what u want to write and which characters you want to choose.
As we swasan fan we read all ff of them whether how much wrong swara or sanskar in that. Again we are fan of couple not single character.
dear in SR page, Ragini is not common name, she has name here, same goes to Swara, sanskar or laksh….they all have meaning, as lead, because it’s at Swaragini page na…
ya very happy… don’t use..
Hey dear i didn’t said something against its just if people don’t like to imagine sawragini’s ragini then imagine someone else.
And i have told that in swaragini also ragini faked her molestation on sanskar. So may be
It’s just a normal thought from my side
Oh God guyz….!!!!! one for all, in SR SERIAL…..DIDN”T RAGINI EVER DO THAT ???????
DON’T YOU ALL REMEMBER ????? SHE ACCUSED SANSKAR MOLESTED HER, RITE ??????
IT’S HAPPEN IN SWARAGINI SERIAL…. IT’S HAPPEN….
When you can imagine Ragini TO BE BED MATE of HER SISTER HUSBAND and YOU STILL INSIST TO DO THAT… WHY WHEN SMK DID THAT as MATCH AS CURRENT TRACK.. WHY YOU ALL COMPLAIN ?????
Hey dear in which ff this bedmate thing happened
huh! if only 2 ppl married, they will be bed mate rite ?
and maybe for smk..i would like if you choose Swara name instead that name to opposite Sanskar, let it be a pair story,….
your moral message will more accepted rather than screw up by fight.
Awesome…very truly said. There are girls who take advantage of guys. I have seen many cases where even boys suffered a lot bcoz of a girl. Girl or boy….they should have values. Else the opposite s*x suffers