hey guys iam back with new episode….guys iam updating in watty also…go check it out @suma_0795 (id)
thanks for ur comments ..and love u all…
hope u liked the intro….
here is my episode…
Here AP and DP are parents of LAKSH
SUJI & RP are parents of SANSKAR.
A Mansion is shown…where ladies(Ap,suji)are in kitchen busy packing some food …
Door bell rangs….
RP goes to see who is dat..
man (from their office) – gave a packet and left…
Rp (came in )-and says Beta ur passport and visa came get ready still an hour left to catch ur flight…
A voice from Room – Yes papa coming….
mean while Suji and Ap came to him and asked beta did u packed ur things ….
while turning towards them he (our handsome hunk Laksh) – yes maa …
AP – Eat well, dont neglect ur health take care beta…(All pampers lucky a lot)
lucky – yes mom i will…
suji – and study well too.. dont roam untill late….bla bla ..
lucky – oh common maa ..still ur thinking that am a kid and going to kindergarten..i know maa….iam not a kid….
suji – yea yea i know ur grown up …but to us ur kid….
lucky – “oh god started their sentimental dialogues ”
Ap – come beta have your bf..i have packed some food while u reach london…eat..
laksh – “omg wat will dat food become till i reach london …but i cant deny dem ”
ok mom coming..
@dining
after break fast
RP – this is ur passport, ticket and visa..get ready its already gettin late..
laksh – yeah papa..and goes to DP and take his blessings
Dp – god bless u beta…take care…while u reach there call us..
laksh – ok dad…
AP – while reach you there make him to call us…
suji – yea he totally forgot us …by looking over business there…
RP -he asked us that he will look after their business over there…but now he not even calling us once for month…
laksh – sure maa and papa i’ll…and took blessings of ap &suji Rp
Rp- ok lets move laksh beta..
laksh took all his luggage and reached airport..and then london…
@london airport
lucky – Finally reached London……
took his luggage and waiting for his bhai…
after waiting for some time…
he is thinking “Did bhai forgot that iam coming ..he doesnt even came for airport to recieve me..
though i know the address”
ok chalo lucky beta …grab a car and go….
he got into cab and came home …
@home
door was not locked…
lucky – seems strange that bhai didnt even lock the door …its alredy late..
laksh entered home and shocked to see druken empty bottles and some clothes over there..
laksh pov :
“awww , Bhai is this u who kept this home like this ..really ur were so clean and want everyone to be …then
but iam shocked to see like this..”
end of pov.
lucky get into house and go to room and cleaned that room …after that he took his luggage and arranged his wardrobe…
he came out after refreshing …..and was searching for him..but he is no where to be found..
he called sanky…. but he is not attending d call…
laksh – bhai wer r u its already late….. still u not yet came…while moving to his room..
he noticed some sound is coming from bathroom in sankys room..
he walked to it and knocked…
bhai are u there????
No one responds!!!!!!
bhai…….
……..stranges….den he knocked again…..
suddenly a girl comes through washroom…
laksh was shocked to see her…….
To be continued…………..
Hope u guys like it………….
thanks for ur support….
8 Comments
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Nice
Oh dear!!!!!!!!!! awesome , a girl coming frm sanky’s washroom !!!!!!!!!! oh my maata , if it’s ragu then ok , anyways update soon sweetheart even i love ragsan a lottttttttttttttt , i am toh just mad for them and abt ragsan ff’s , though they r very less in number , but all worth reading , ek se badke ek hai saare ff’s google ragsan ff and os , u will get a list of wonderful stories from equally wonderful writers .
awesome
totally amazing!!