Hello everyone!!
After a long am writing so this might not be so good rest I don’t know🥴
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‘Vansh’ she said while laughing as he was tickling her right now knowing very well how much ticklish she is..
‘Vansh stop..it..na’ she said while trying to catch her breathe
Atlast he stopped tickling seeing her state and lyed beside her on the bed
‘So how was the tickling session’ he said with a playfull smile lingering on his lips.
‘Arghh I just hate u for this’ she said hitting him with a pillow which soon turned into a pillow fight scattering the cotton on the whole bed. And when the fight was over both laughed and lyed on the bed. His arm around her pulling her near him.
‘I love you’ she said while drawing patterns on his chest.
‘I love you too sweetheart’ he said pulling her more close to his heart and kissing her forehead softly.
‘Vansh how it started and how it’s now na’ she chuckled. He also let out a chuckle thinking abt their first meet.
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Vansh raisinghania the most popular hunk of the college and why not.. having a well built body with white skin tone. His dark black eyes with long eyelashes. Board shoulders with well built muscles. Light pink lips. And his perfectly trimmed beard and jawline. Overall a s*xy devilish look. Girls always went gaga over him. But the only thing was that he was a highly disciplined. A person who didn’t liked mess things
And on the another hand it was ridhima a bubbly,chirpy and fun-loving girl. From her room to her bag everything is totally messed up. A simple yet beautiful girl over whom boys go mad. Her big brown colour eyes with long natural eyelashes. Her pink lips always looking beautiful. Long silky hair reaching her waist. Her cute little nose which gets red in anger which make her look cute. Overall a heavenly beauty.
These two were opposite polls. One an army officer and one a doctor(both have started their careers now). Meeting in her hospital as doctor and patient.
Walking inside the hospital searching files from her bag she suddenly bumped into a wall oops not a wall but 6ft 3 inch human or can be called as a walking wall.
He looked at a tiny panda who bumped into him oops not a panda but a 5ft 5inch petite figure. Firstly getting lost into her his thoughts were broken by her words
‘Can’t you just see that who is coming from front and walk properly’ ‘useless walking giraffe’
She mumbled
‘Oo hello miss it was you who was not paying attention and walking I was toh standing here’ he said in angry voice ‘and giraffe walks only not fly’ he said in a sarcastic voice and expression.
‘Whatever’ she mumbled
She was going when he blocked her way.
She looked at him irritated.
‘Say sorry ‘ he said with a smirk on his face.
‘And sorry for what’ she said crossing her arns over her chest.
‘For bumping into me and then talking rudely’
‘Listen mister am srsly not in any mood to argue with you’
He was going to say something but a nurse called her and she went not before giving him a winning smirk
Opening the door of the doctor cabin he went inside to see the same girl with the doctor.
‘Come mr. Vansh’ the doctor said indicating towards the stretcher indicating him to lay down on it.
The doctor checked him up and asked ridhima to take out some medicines and give it to him while he will check some reports of him.
Nodding at the doctor she went to take the medicine. Coming close to his ears with medicine bottle in his hand she said
‘Galat medicine de du sidha upar tapak jaoge’
{Should I give u wrong the medicine then u will up(with god)}
‘Galat faida nhi le rhi tum apne kaam ka’
{Aren’t you taking wrong advantage of ur work}
‘Whatever’
He took the medicine from her
‘Galat di hai ya sahi’
{Have u given the correct one or wrong}
‘Agar kal ki subah acche se aur aaram se dekh li toh sahi di nhi toh..’
{If you saw tmrw’s morning peacefully then they are right one and if not then..}
He shook his head at her and left after talking to doctor(abt his reports)
Eventually they started bonding as he came to the hospital oftenly.
Exchanging their phone numbers to meeting each other regularly they became really good frnds then into bestfriends and finally to lovers.
Ridhima was the one to propose first as he was just thinking how to tell her his feelings and gathering courage but ridhima was now getting impatient for his proposal so she herself proposed him first which he ofc happily accepted
2 years of their relationship. Seeing so many ups down but they never left each other’s side.
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Their thoughts were broken by the ringing of his phone. Getting up a little he picked up his phone
‘Hello’
‘Captain Vansh raisinghania’
‘Jai Hind sir Captain Vansh raisinghania speaking’. He said getting up from the bed and saluting the officer on the call.
‘You are asked to come now to the headquarters for some meeting jeep will be there in the evening be ready’
‘Yes sir’
‘Jai Hind’
‘Jai Hind sir’
He cut the call and ridhima came near him wrapping her arms around his neck she raised her eyebrows.
‘Going in the evening today, call from headquarters’ he said putting his arms around her waist pulling her closer to him.
She nodded putting her head ner his heart listening to her favourite music his heartbeat
‘When will u come back’ she mumbled against his chest.
‘Don’t know but maybe it will not take long time as am going for a meeting’ he said kissing her temple. She nodded snuggling more closer to him.
Swaying for some time in the same position he broke the hug and lifted her chin and said
‘Don’t get worried it’s just a meeting okay’
‘Hmm’
‘Accha now am going to pack my bag hmm’
She nodded.
Evening time
Army jeep stopped infront on raisinghania mansion.
He bid bye to everyone(his mother, father, twin brother vihaan) and came near ridhima who was standing at a side.
‘Ridhima I will come jldi pakka and ya you have to take care of urself okay. Not like everytime when you just take care of others not urself. Understood’
She nodded hugging him tightly. He also hugged her tightly.
Breaking the hug he kissed her forehead softly. Bidding final bye to everyone he sat in the jeep not before giving a assuring look to ridhima.
2 days later
These two days were too hard for ridhima to pass. She always kept looking at the door always of VR mansion when she was there(they aren’t married and she has her room in Vr Mansion for when she stays there)
She came to VR mansion on her scooty parking it on a side. The watchman gave him a big smile not the as usual one. She looked at him confused and gave him a small smile.
Walking inside the mansion whose environment looked much more happier than other times
‘Why everyone is so happy’ she said to herself
‘Bcs am back sweetheart’
The voice she wanted to hear. He is back. She turned around and saw him (with his family). She ran to him and hugged him tightly.
‘Are u fine’ she said breaking the hug and checking him.
‘Haan baba am totally fine’ he said assuring her
She again hugged him tightly and he also hugged her back. Few drops fell on his chest. He lifted her chin to see her crying
‘Hey why are you crying now am back see full fit and fine’ he said assuring her. She nodded, he slowly wiped her tears gently kissing her forehead.(sorry for so many forehead kisses but am obsessed with their forehead kisses😌)
‘Arre ridhima don’t cry see he is fit and fine’ his mom uma said.
‘See who is speaking who was continuously crying from the time he has returned’ his father ajay said in sarcastic voice.
‘Aap bhi na’ she slightly hitted him on his arms and wiped the tears on the corner of her eyes.
‘Arre why everyone is crying vansh has come back let’s take a group hug only’ his twin brother vihaan said dragging his mom dad near ridhima and vansh.
Everyone had a group hug with clicking some selfies as happy moments/memories.
7 days later
Ridhima’s pov
This week me and vansh spent most of the time together. This week was so memorable. We went to different places,movie theater, long drives, beach.. overall we enjoyed so much. He is on a call right now with some other officers am just waiting for him here..
Pov end
Vansh came back after attending his call with a worried face. Ridhima on seeing him tensed cupped his face and asked
‘What happened vansh’
‘Ridhima due to some issues my break is over and I have to go back to duty after 2 days’ He remarked gently taking her hands in his
‘Koi baat nhi{It’s okay}vansh I understand’ she said pressing his hands assuring him.
She didn’t said so much bcs she knows and have seen his holidays getting over a sudden and he back to his duty. She understand him and his profession and supports him.
‘Ridhima there is something else also’ he said being hesitant a little.
‘Hmm bolo{say}’
‘Vo duty is of 6 months or maybe more in the mountains so..’
She looked at him wide eyes firstly but later composed herself taking a deep breath.
She hugged him tightly and said
‘Will miss you’ sadness clear in her voice
‘Why will u miss me am always there with you okay’ he said tightening his hold around her and kissing her temple.
Next day
Night time
Vansh has already packed his bag and was checking some files again. A knock of his door brought him out of his work and he opened to see ridhima standing there. He gave her a smile and they both went inside his room. Keeping his files on a side he sat near ridhima on the bed. Ridhima instantly hugged him tightly hiding her face in his chest. He also reciprocated the hug and gently rubbed her back and stroked her hair.
‘U will be fine na’
‘Hmm sweetheart I will be fine don’t worry ‘
‘Don’t know why am getting bad vibes this time’
‘Shh relax don’t stress much okay’
After sometime
Ridhima was playing with the button of his shirt and vansh guessed that something was there. He lifted her chin up and raised his eyebrows asking her the matter. She shook her head and was gonna put her head down again but he stopped her asking her again. She took a deep breath keeping her head on his chest drawing patterns on his back.
‘Vo.. vo..’ gathering her courage she closed her eyes ‘can we become one tonight??!!’
Vansh looked at ridhima bewildered ‘ridhima what are you saying no ridhima I can’t do this’
Tears formed in her eyes thinking that she wasn’t good enough for this. She got up to leave the room but vansh caught her arm.
‘Ridhima don’t think anyother thing and make ur theories but it just we aren’t married and I didn’t wanted to do ‘it’ with you before it bcs I know dignity matters to each prsn it justt this okay’
She looked up at her man with tears of pride in her eyes and tightly hugged him.
‘How can someone be so good’ she thought to herself with tears of happiness
‘It’s not someone ridhima it’s your vansh bcs’ she thought to herself with pride
‘Vansh but still’
‘Ridhima’
‘Vansh pls’
‘U will be okay with it’ he said on which she nodded
‘Pakka??’ He again aksed and she nodded her head a little pressing his hands assuring him. He softly kissed her forehead picking her up gently leading her to bed.
That night the moon and stars witnessed the two lovers becoming one again.
Next morning
Vansh’s pov
I woke up and the first thing I saw was her face, a perfect way to start my morning. I gently kissed her forehead not to disturb her sleep. Let her sleep some more time as yesterday night toh we didn’t but she was really a wild kitten yesterday. There is some time to wake up so am just gonna sleep again
After sometime
Ridhima woke up and saw his face firstly, the perfect way to start her morning. She then saw their state and and her cheeks were like tomato
‘U look damn beautiful while blushing and am happy that am the reason to these red cheeks’ he said staring at her. She blushed more on his compliment and her face in his chest.
‘Aww my shy baby at night toh u were wild kitten’
‘Vanshhhh’
‘Accha baba sorry’
‘And haan now get up you have tl get ready’
Evening time
Railway station
Army person were standing there with there families as now it was the time to go back to duty.
Vansh was waiting for ridhima to come and his eyes fell on petite figure running managing her as she was wearing a saree and she was none other than ridhima. He got lost in her the moment he saw her. She came near him and waved her hand in front of him and slowly asked
‘How am looking??’
‘Beautiful’ he slowly whispered still lost in her. She blushed hearing his compliment.
Now it was time for soldiers to leave. Vansh bid bye to everyone and came near ridhima wiping her tears he kissed her forehead.
‘Shh I need the same wild kitten when I come back and we get married’
She looked at him amused.
‘Yss when I will come back we will marry’
She took him in a bone crashing hug finally letting the tears fall.
‘Dhyan rakhna amd jldi aana’
{Take care nd come soon}
‘You too okay’
He bid bye to everyone and left in the train
One moth later
‘Sejal say na they are telling tue wrong information tell na no war is going on there’ a crying ridhima said to her bestfriend sejal after seeing the news that war has started.
‘Ridhima relax nothing will happen to vansh’ sejal who herself was crying tried to calm her bestfriend. She rubbed her back and stroked her hair.
7 days later
2 days before the war has stopped and India won but there was no news of the soldiers. It was said that mainly all soldiers are rescued but some are still left.
Ridhima everyday went to army offce to get some news of Captain Vansh raisinghania but always went back disappointed
1 day later
‘Ridhima.. jl..di.. ghar..’ a crying voice of vihaan cane from the call.
She hurriedly took her scooty and went to VR mansion.
The sight in front of her made her numb. Her whole world came crashing down. The..re.. was the corpse of vansh lying with white cloth. Army officer standing tgere and his family near his body crying. It just felt like someone has stabbed her mercilessly and taken her life,but for her even this was not painful than seeing his dead body there.
She fell on the floor hot tears making their way out.
Ridhima’s pov
Vansh you can’t die you can’t!! You just can’t.. we were going to marry right then how why.. I know you just didn’t wanted to marry me that’s the reason you left us na.. vansh just once come back I will leave from your life just pls once come back..
Ve Methon Tera Mann Bharrya
Mann Bharya Badal Gaya Saara
Ve Tu Mainu Chhad Jaana
Gallan Teriyan Ton Lagda Ae Yaara
Ve Methon Tera Mann Bharrya
Mann Bharrya Badal Gaya Saara
Ve Tu Mainu Chhad Jaana
Gallan Teriyan Ton Lagda Ae Yaara
Gall Gall Te Shaq Kardein
Aitbaar Zara Vi Nai
Hunn Teriyan Ankhiyan Ch
Mere Layi Pyar Zara Vi Nai
Mera Te Koyi Hai Ni Tere Bin
Tainu Mil Jana Kise Da Sahara
Ve Tu Mainu Chhad Jaana
Gallan Teriyan Ton Lagda Ae Yaara
Pov end
A officer came near ridhima and gave her a letter. It read
My sweetheart,
U will be getting this letter if I won’t be there and would be far away. Ridhima u know that I am a soldier and I can loose my life anytime so stop crying and be proud that your man has saved his nation. My crybaby now when you will go in your room don’t destroy your room that much I toh have habit of cleaning it but you won’t be able to do toh don’t mess much okay. You know na that I don’t know so much to say so Just wanna say I love you the most take care of yourself and sorry but giving you the responsibility of my family and yours to you. Pls take care pls of ma and papa you toh know na maa she will just fully destroy her health and dad will not show but you know him very well. And vihaan I just want him back to his old self not depressed after my death and yss you you have to specially take care of urself not roam like depressed drone in the whole house taking care of others it’s the last time am asking you anything and my last wish I know it will be difficult for you but the day my body will be put into grave I want to see you jn bridal attire pls. Just don’t kill yourself internally after my death I want you to be proud of my death as I didn’t died I will be called as sahiad {martyr}
Yours only
Vansh
Fresh Hot tears made their way rolling down her cheeks. She kept the letter close to her heart closing her eyes
Kaash Aisa Ho Sakda
Rabb De Pairi Pai Jaandi
Teri Jagah Pe Jaani
Maut Mainu Le Jaandi
Jo Tu Na Mila Maanenge
Woh Dehleez Nahi Hoti
Rabb Naam Ki Yaara
Yahan Koyi Cheez Nahi Hoti
Ho Rabb Ohnu Kho Lainde
Jehda Howe Ohnu Jaan Ton Pyara
Ve Tu Mainu Chhad Jaana
Gallan Teriyan Ton Lagda Ae Yaara
Funeral day
Coming in a beautiful bridal attire she made her way near his body ignoring the gossip. She caressed his face with affection stroking his hair she hugged him tightly for the last time. Kissing his forehead she came near his lips kissing them tears rolling down her cheeks. Many gasps were heard but she didn’t care. Breaking the kiss she moved back seeing him the last time she let the officer take his body. She fell on her knees reminiscing their moments tears flowing freely
Tu Sabb Jaanda Aen
Main Chhad Ni Sakdi Tainu
Taan Hi Taan Unglan Te
Roz Nachaune Mainu
Tu Sabb Jaanda Aen
Main Chhad Ni Sakdi Tainu
Teri Yaad Ne Unglan Te
Roz Nachaune Mainu
Agle Janam Vich Allah
Aisa Khel Racha Ke Bheje
Mainu Tu Bana Ke Bheje
Tainu Main Bana Ke Bheje
Haaye Ikko Hundi Ae Ve Zindagi
Tu Milna Ni Mainu Ve Dobara
Ve Tu Mainu Chhad Jaana
Gallan Teriyan Ton Lagda Ae Yaara
Ve Methon Tera Mann Bharrya
1 year later
It’s been a year of vansh death. Ridhima tried her best to make everything normal. It took time but it was now back to normal yess maybe not the same happiness but still..
Now ridhima serves to army as a army doctor.
45 years later
A old couple sitting on the bench hand interlocked together woman’s head on man’s shoulder. Clouds surrounding them.
‘I love you vansh’
‘I love you too sweetheart’♡︎♡︎
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I know I said it to post on Saturday but just got late sorry.
Hope you liked it..
Some reviews pls:-
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I know I rushed in ending but time wasn’t there sorry for that also.
Also I wasn’t getting any title so just kept this🥴
Will be waiting for your votes and comments♡︎
For tu readers I have unpublished my all books for a time as I am having schl and I don’t have time will be ending regretting my decision soon and obsession or love I don’t think I will post here later sorry for that..
Have a great day ahead☘✨
31 Comments
Awesome
Thanku
Sachi kahun toh I cried reading it. I expected mann bharreya song only n I was too damn happy ti see that song but its just soooooo painful to read this os and listen to that song. 🙂
Awiee sowiee for making you cry and for emotional os but thanku for ur review💙
Awesome one
I cried at the end
Thanku
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Lovely OS ✨.
Outstanding. Loved it 😘. It’s emotional.
Thanku
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Amazing….it was so emotional, it brought tears in my eyes.
Loved it❤
For the Very First Time I cried reading an OS😭😭. I did cry a lot, it touched my heart dangerously ❤. My heart ached when Riddhima went numb after seeing vansh lying and tears made their way as soon as I read the letter’s salutation “My Sweetheart” and didn’t stop till the end😢. This was Indeed Commendable 👏👏👏👏 Heart-warming, Heart-touching and inexpressible❤. Damn my Emotions, My Heart literally Melted💕! ! ! ! ! ! ! Such a Brilliant Author You are Dear , how beautifully you portrayed everything be it Riddhima’s emotions or Vansh’s Duty. Just Short of Words Noww 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯😍😍…………….. Best Of Luck ❤ For Future ,you’ll will definitely excell and make your Family Proud, Take Caree ✌✌ Looking forward for Further Updates 😘❤.
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Thanku so so so so much for ur words ur wishes and your review. I just love this comment 🤧♥️ and sowiee for making u cry🤧
I’m just crying 😭😭
Can’t write!
Wow .. it’s beautiful why u said so?!!
So emotional as well..
Lovely
Mujhe bhi likhna hai mann Bharrya pe🥺🥺
Wow cute love story
U know what I was reading Infront of my family. If I cry they will ask the reason but I couldn’t control my emotions atlast I cried like a crybaby.
Salute to Vikram bhatra….and salute to such a brave girl dimple…he inspired me to serve my nation….I love my india and so proud to be an indian
Amazing os
Really I cried in the end