Hello everyone…this is Eva….writing a OS on “RAGLAK” lol….vishwas nehi horaha hai na?Mujhe bhi nehi horaha hai…but as i promised all the Raglak fans..that i will write an OS on them….i’m keeping my promise…
This is the story of a rude and arrogant business tycoon Laksh Maheshwari …his past has made him like this….
The story starts with Laksh is seen getting ready for his office..(Total formal look)
Ap calls him downstairs….He is leaving for his office…just then Ap shouts “Laksh have your breakfast first”
Laksh:Ma..i’m getting late…
He leaves for his office…
Ap sits and cries….
Sujata;Jiji….don’t cry….everything will be fine(Universal dialogue)
Ap:My son lost his smile…..i can’t see him in this state…..
Suju:He loved her a lot…
Ap:Yes….that’s why her death has broken him…she was his life…..and how he has become lifeless…
Suju:Jiji….have fate in god…
Ap:Now there is only one way left..i’ll get my son remarried..
Suju:Jiji….Laksh manegaa?
Ap:He has to….
Laksh is in his car….just then a girl comes in between…..and the driver brakes…”What happened?”Laksh asked…
Driver;Sir..someone came before tha car..so i had to brake..
Laksh comes out of the car…and goes to the girl is sitting on the road (Girgayi hai apne app nehi bethi)
Laksh:Hey..u….don’t u know how to walk on roads?
That girl turns..
Girl:Even i can ask..don’t your driver know how to drive on the roads?
Laksh:Ek toh galti karo..upar seh ese tevar?
Girl:U r so rude….i’m new in India…i lost my way….and u…behaving like an idiot…
Laksh:U called me idiot?
Girl:Nehi tumhare bhoot ko kaha…
Te girl leaves from there angrily….
Laksh comes back home at 7…
DP:Laksh..we need to tell u something..
Laksh;Boliye papa..
DP;We want u to get remarried..
Laksh:Papa?
Dp:My friend has come from Australia….he has a daughter….and i want u to marry her…
Laksh:I can’t think of this even papa….i can’t give Swara’s place to anyone…
Laksh leaves angrily….
Its the next day….and Sunday..
Laksh comes out of his room..and is shocked to see everyone busy with works..as if there is some get together…or something…
Laksh:Ma….is anyone coming?
Ap:Ha…tere papa ke dst and his family..
Laksh:I won;t meet them….
Laksh goes back….
Just then that family comes…
Dp:Oh Shekhar…after 7 years……how r u?
They hug eachother…
Shekhar:Ha…baas….thik hii hai ham..Dp….meet her….she is my daughter Ragini….
Dp keeps his hand on her head..
Dp;Bohot pyari bacchii hai…
Ap goes near Ragini….keeps her hand on her head and smiles…
Sumi nehi hai meri story mein…
Ap,Suju and Ragini r talking..
Ap:Beta..i hope u know why we r here..
Ragini nods…
Ap;Beta….my son has faced a lot….i want his happiness now…..
Ragini’s eyes fall on Laksh pic..she gets shocked….as that’s the person whom she met the previous day…
Ragini:Is he Laksh?
AP;Ha…
Ap:Beta…we won’t hide anything from u….beta…Swara was Laksh’s first wife…they had a love marriage..Swara was Laksh’s life…Swara was the light of this house…she was an orphan…we loved her like our daughter..it has been 2 years since she passed away…
Ragini;If u don’t mind me asking….how did Swara die?
AP:Laksh and Swara were going to Lonavla….Laksh’s business rival planned an attack on them….there car was stopped by some goons…those goons have guns and they shot Laksh….Swara came in between…..andd….
Sujata;Ragini..Laksh still couldn’t forgive himself..he thinks that he is responsible for Swara’s death….
Ragini looks at Swalak’s photo…
Ragini in mind:Laksh ko Swara seh zada koi pyaar nehi karsakta hai….
Shekhar asks Ragini to come…
Shekhar;Dp…your son didn’t even meet her….i think..that..
Ragini:Papa..i’m ready for this marriage…AP aunty..can i meet him once?
AP nods…
Ragini goes to Laksh’s room…..Laksh is seen sitting on the floor..Ragini comes near him and keeps her hand on his shoulder..
Laksh gets shocked seeing Ragini..
Laksh:U?
Ragini:Yes….i’m your papa’s friend’s daughter…Ragini
Laksh:Why r u here?Didn’t ma say that i’m not interested in marrying?
Ragini:Laksh….i know u love Swara…and i promise that i’ll never come between u both…i can understand your pain…
Laksh:U can’t…
Ragini:Laksh..do u think Swara is happy seeing u like this?
Laksh looks at her…Ragini leaves….
Laksh cries….
Laksh:I don’t want to live….
He feels another hand on his shoulder..
Laksh:Just leave Ragini..
That person:I won’t…
Laksh looks at that person..full on shocked…
Laksh;Swara tum?Tum zinda ho?
Swara:Ha…in your heart…Laksh u feel that u r the reason for my death….now let me tell u..u can never be the reason for my death…tum mere jineh ki wajah thee…u r saying that u don’t want to live….remember…i gave u this life..i have more right on this life….i’m alive in u….u can;t die…tum Swara ka astitwa ho….i can never see u unhappy….remember this alway…ek insane ke jaane seh zindegi nehi rukti..paar ek ruki huyi zindegi ki wajahse bohot sari zindegiya rukh jaati hai….everyone is worried for u….u can;t hurt them..i want u to move on in your life…
Laksh looks at Swara…
Swara;I know what u r thinking….Laksh if u marry someone that doesn’t mean that u r giving my place to someone..let someone make another place in your heart….
Laksh hugs Swara…just then he comes back into the reality…..Swara is gone….
AP comes there….
AP:Beta…r u fine?
Laksh:I’m ready for this marriage….
Laksh leaves….
Next day….
Ragini comes to MM house…..AP thinks of letting Raglak spend some time so she asks Ragini to take food for Laksh….Ragini nods hesitantly…Ragini takes food for Laksh….she comes to his cabin..Laksh is surprised to see her..
Ragini:May i come in?
Laksh:Yeah…
Ragini:AP aunty has sent food for u…
Laksh:I’ll have it later..
Ragini:k then i should leave now..
Laksh:Ragini…we need to talk..
Ragini:I even think so we need to talk..
Laksh:Ragini..why r u marrying a widower?U can get any man u want…why me?
Ragini:Maybe because i saw true love for your wife in your eyes..and maybe i can see this same love for me in your eyes sometime later.and i was impressed by your honesty…
Laksh:But…
Ragini;Haha..janti hu..that u love Swara only…but i’ll be happy to live with u as your friend only..itni sit oh jagah dehdo…aur patahai…if u would have forgotten your frst wife and would be extremely happy for your second marriage then i wouldn’t had married u…because then i would know that if by chance if i die then u will not hesitate to bring another one….
Laksh:Ragini…..ek acchi insane ho tum…
Ragini:Pata hai…
Laksh smiles seeing her childishness…
Ragini:Aur tum be bohot cool dikte hai jab haste ho…
After some days..your Raglak has became good friends….
They r in car…same incident takes place..a girl comes before the car…Laksh comes out…so does Ragini…and the best part is Laksh doesn’t scold that girl….he takes her to the hospital..
Ragini:Hayyy..itna change kuchhi dino mein?
Laksh:Aphiki sangat ka aasar hai Miss Gadodia..
Ragini:Oyee..call me madam….phir kyuki mujhise toh ye saab sikh rahe ho…
Laksh’s face expression changes..he has remembered something that has made him sad..
Rags:Kya huya?Did i say something wrong?
Laksh:I used o call Swara madam..when she used to show tantrums…
Ragini:oh sorry..phir mujhe….ha teacher hii bula lo…
Laksh give a light smile..
Some more days passes…Laksh and Ragini r huge cricket freaks….they were watching New Zealand VS England match…Ragini was supporting England and Laksh was supporting New Zea…England won…they also had a bet..and Ragini won the bet..
Laksh:Hamesha mere saath hii eisa kyu hota hai…..Swara ke saath bhi jab bet lagata tha she used to win and now u too…
Ragini:Aww….now as i won the bet..i want an ice cream treat..
Laksh:Ha chal…
They were going to the ice cream palour when Ragini saw ice cream stall in the road..
Rags;I want to have ice cream from there not ice cream palour..
Laksh:That’s unhygienic
Rags:Please….
Laksh:Thik hai…
Both go near the stall…..Laksh receives a call and goes other side to talk…Rags is busy ordering her fav ice cream..she turns and sees Laksh talking on phone….just then she sees a car coming in high speed towards Laksh…She shouts Laksh and pushes him…and in this process..she gets some scratches..Laksh comes and helps her to stand..and then hugs her…
Laksh:One person lost her life because of me…now if something would have happened to u then i could not live with these burdens…thank god u r fine Ragini….i lost Swara…now i can’t lose u…i love u yaar..don’t leave me……u made me live my life….don’t go away from my life..or else i’ll die….
He breaks the hug…and looks at Ragini…who got so many scratches and cuts still smiling…she was happy to hear all those words from Laksh’s mouth..
Ragini:I love u too…isiliye mein tumhe hurt honeee nehi desakti…
Laksh hugs her again…….He sees Swara behind Ragini…she has tears in her eyes and smiling at them…..
Swara;Thank u Laksh….your smile is my biggest happiness…….
After 6 years years…….Raglak r sitting for Swara’s barsi….Laksh has tears in his eyes….Ragini(in mind)That’s why i love u…..u did not forget Swara even after loving me…..
They have a 5 years old daughetr..and they named her Swara………………………lo dedi meri pehli happy ending….khush sabb?I’m sorry if u did not like it…this is a raglak os…..cause at last Raglak hii toh huya..someone told me..ff kis couple ka hota hai yeh pata chalta hai iseh ki last mein koon saath hai..so here is Raglak..i can’t write fully on Raglak..so i did this..so sorry if u r hurt…
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79 Comments
awesome
Thank u?
I like it bcoz lakh don’t forget swara
Oh…thank u ?
True love :’) <3
Nice os xd
I like the os it is so emotional !!
Awesome os
Omg ur writing a raglak os !! ☺??
Very nice usually I read only rag based ffs nd os in ur laat ff also I uaed to ask u many times to write an ff based on ragini nd when u told u hate raglak I felt bad but today by writing time u really made me very happy love u eve darling I may not be seen in ur ff comments as usually I don’t read any swara based storieds but I like u because ur ffs will bee emotional I used to folow ur samjotha but u know how hard it is to read about the pairs we don’t like nd really we need a strong heart to write that pair which we don’t like as a writer I can understand as for the first time I to wrote an ff based on ragsan nd swasan it was very difficult for me to write on swasan soo I really appreciate ur work nd sorry if I talk lot just I want to share my view think me as ur elder sis .nd not but least I see ur ff to see the comments u get really people were crazy nd silly bhi ha ha (im meture) kids .