Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be?
(Segment 14)
Hello, I’m back. Thank you for all your comments and support. They really made my day. I’m glad you all are liking the way the story is shaping up.
Well, here is the link for the previous segment:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/everything-really-perfect-seems-segment-13-ria/
This segment is in Kunj’s voice. Twinkle’s voice would be reintroduced again. I wrote this one on your demands. Anyways, hope you all aren’t getting confused with the way I’m writing.
Are you all excited to read what’s in stock? Let’s start then.
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I entered the room and found Twinkle and di talking. “Can I come in?”, I asked. Di and Twinkle looked at me as Twinkle rolled her eyes while di said, “Ofocurse Mr. Sarna.” I narrowed my gaze at di as we both burst out laughing. “Come, sit here”, di said. I went and sat beside di as Twinkle said, “I’ll go bring coffee for the two of you.” She got up and was about to go when di said, “Twinkle, you sit. I’ll bring it.” “No, it’s okay”, replied Twinkle but, di walked out of the room ignoring her. “Di”, she called out and was about to go when I held her wrist.
She turned around and said, “Leave my hand.” I nodded my head in a no and walked closer to her. She tried freeing her hand but, I tightened my grip and pulled her towards me. I softly held her hand behind her back and said, “You didn’t answer my question.” “I said no”, she replied trying to free her hand. “But, your eyes say something different”, I said and pulled her closer to me. “K..Kunj”, she called out. “Do you love me?”, I asked. “No, I don’t”, she replied looking straight into my eyes. “Does it not affect you when I come closer to you?”, I asked after she lied. “No”, she replied as I pulled her even more closer making her front touch mine. “Not even now?”, I asked. “K..Kunj”, she said. “Does it not matter to you when I’m close to you?”, I repeated myself. She pushed me away and said, “Kunj, just be in your limits. I’ve already had enough of you and I’m not going to take it anymore.”
I walked towards her while she moved back. “Kunj”, she said as her back touched the wall. “Kunj, see”, she said pointing her finger at me as I moved towards her and placed my finger on her lips. “Twinkle, please give me a chance”, I said. She pushed away my hand and said, “Don’t tell me that you want me to be here with you.” I lowered down my gaze and said, “What I did was wrong but, can’t I get another chance?” “Apply for the divorce. I’ll go before di and bhai’s wedding”, she replied pushing me away. “Twinkle, please”, I muttered but, she walked out of the room. I clenched my fist and hit it against the wall. “Kunj Sarna, you’re wrong. How could you do that to her?”, I said to myself and after sometime walked away to our room.
I was in the washroom washing my face when someone knocked the door. I quickly swiped the water from my face and opened the door. I saw Twinkle standing at the doorstep. “Your coffee”, she said. I turned around and said, “Can you please keep it on the table there?” She placed the cup on the table and was about to go when someone said, “Oh Twinkle, you’re here. Actually, I wanted to talk to the two of you.” It was maa’s voice. I turned around and asked in a choked voice, “What happened?” “Actually.. what happened Kunj? Why are your eyes so red? Did you cry?”, maa asked. I smiled and said, “Nothing. Something went into my eyes and I was constantly rubbing my eyes so, it just became red I guess.” I looked at Twinkle who was staring at me with me a surprised face. “What did you want to tell?”, I added. “Ya, I’m going to talk to Leela ji tomorrow. We’ll decide Mahi’s wedding soon”, maa said. “Maa, why so soon?”, I asked. “It’s not early at all. In fact, it’s pretty late. Anyways, I need to go downstairs. I’ll talk to both of you later”, maa said and walked out of the room.
“Did you cry?”, asked Twinkle. A faint smile covered my face as I replied, “I applied for the divorce.” She looked at me with a shocked face as I walked out of the room.
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Happy Birthday Rashi! Hope you’ve a great day and an amazing year ahead. You’re one of the first few friends I made from TU. Do stay in contact forever. Love you lots!?
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In case if someone missed out on this article, I request all of you to go through it and let me know your views. Here is the link below:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/love-twinj-journey-comeback-authors-note/
36 Comments
Oyyee hoeee baby doll
U rocked it
Seriously I was braced up throughout
Loved it to the core
Love u load???
Hyyy ria! I dont have words for uh❤ i mean how can uh write so well i m in love with ur ff its superrr amazing?? now I’m feeling bad for kunj? I hope u ll unite them soon? loved it to the core? please post next one asap?
Awesome???
It was awsm…..luvd the last part a loads….
Feeling very sad for kunj….it was indeed a gr8 shock…but the way u bought out his emotions were mind blowing
the last part…. ufff cant express..
it was so touchy.. i mean.. i could feel his emotions man.. wonderful episode ria..one of ur best..i must say…
kunj is sooo cute…loved it completely..
loads of love..
take care..
Hey ria
epic was awesome pls post next asap
I loved it. The last part, shit that was so touchy! I feel so bad for kunj. Loved it throughout. Write soon x Love ya idiot ?
Ria di
Geo!
No long comments.
Super shocked!
Horrified in a sense.
TU was real fast this tym, no?
Anyways, hope to see a reconciliation soon.
Love you?
Awww…..
Thank u so much ria….
Luv u loads…..
I liked the episode to moon and back…..awesome amazing….. Fantastic …..superb…..
Thanks for u lovely wishes….????
happy birthday to u may god bless u………… 😀 l have a blast……party hard……..
Happy birthday rashi??❤️❤️❤️???????
Chiku here
Happiest Birthday.
Enjoy.
Party hard.
Thanks baby, chiku and meeta for ur wishes….
amazing ria fabulus luvd it 2 d core
d sdn change oh god post nxt soon
cnt w8 emotional n cute epsidoe……
love u………. 😀
Beautiful epi… Loved it ria…
Loved it 🙂 The episode was awesome Post soon 🙂 can’t wait 🙂 Hope you won’t make me wait 🙂
Nice episode but I feel so bad for kunj omg he was crying I Hope twinkle understand kunj and twinj unite
wow just awesome
Awesome ❤️❤️❤️❤️???????
Loved it.
Post next soon
Chehak here
awesome amazing emotional epi….bechara kunj…..bt twinkle bhi sahi h…
Amazing epi.. loved twinj’s scene.. felt bad for kunj but he deserved it.. do cont soon ?
Hey ria awesome amazing fantastic fabulous superb episode…for the first time felt bad for kunj…you portrayed kunj’s emotions so well…as always damn damn excited for next episode…try to post next soon…can’t wait more…after every episode my curiosity and love to read your ff is increasing more and more…
Love you ??
Amazing epi ria…..nd d last part was damn touchy
Loved it
Post d nxt one asap
Love u?
Ria superb 1 darlo
Rashi happy bday
Awww I feel bad for kinj. U portray his emotions so well its amazing. Maybe now twinkle will understand kunjs worth and might come together during yuhis wedding. The
Epi was fantabulous!
Hi ria
Awesome episode dear
Pls asap
N happy birthday rashi
it was amazing dear as always u r divine
Wowwww
Ria diiiiii
You rocked rocked rocked it
Awesome
Amazing
Fantabulous
Awesome
Hi bq le comment kr dia
Dosti mat todna
Haath mein glass ghus gaya hai so zyada nhi likh sakti
But phir bhi ur ff is amazing
Lafz nhi hai bayan krne ko
Ati-utaam gud
Hey Ria sorry for the late comment yrrrrr…….but seriously yrrr I loved the episode a lot …..
The way Twinkle hid her pain from Kunj is amazing …
Kunj’s pain is portrayed so well yrr …I’m really feeling bad for him… hope Twinj get back together….
Anyways; it’s really a fab episode… loved it to the core ….
love you???
So sorry Ria for being late!
This part was rocking as always‼
Keep rocking this Fan Fiction like this only 🙂
Good going and reach heights 🙂
Stay blessed!
Take care xx
Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
Love u loads dear!
-Zuha
Omg dii!
God so sorry couldn’t comment earlier but u no my reason 🙂
The segment was simply amazing! Like i said i love emotional episodes so this one was just too good!
Feeling sorry for Kunj though :3…
Love you! ??