Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be?
(Segment 20)
Here’s the link for the previous segment:
Segment 19 Part 1
Segment 19 Part 2
This segment is in Twinkle’s voice. Hope you all weren’t confused all this time I’d been writing this fan fiction.
Well, excited for the last segment? Let’s start then.
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I came downstairs clipping my hair and walked towards the kitchen. I entered the kitchen and found the breakfast ready when Kunj came and hugged me from back. I placed my hand on his as he said, “Happy anniversary darling!” I smiled and replied, “Happy Anniversary Kunj!” He kissed my left cheek and resting his chin on my shoulder said, “So, where’s my gift?” “Where’s mine?”, I questioned back. He turned me around and lifted me. “Kunj, what are you doing?”
He made me sit on the counter and moved closer to me. “I’ve prepared everything for you on our fifth anniversary also”, he whispered. I wrapped my arms around his neck and remarked, “Oh really?” He nodded his head in a yes as I added, “But, that’s not the gift. I know you very well so, don’t try to act smart.” He smiled and took out a beautiful bracelet from his pocket. It had two hearts attached beside each other with one of them made of a pearl in a heart shape and the other one outlined with embedded stones . He made me wear it as I squealed, “This is so beautiful!” He smiled and touched his forehead with mine. I hugged him tightly and said, “Thank you so much Kunj!”
(Here’s the link for the bracelet:
http://g01.a.alicdn.com/kf/HTB1dq4YKFXXXXcIXFXXq6xXFXXXn/Free-Shipping-Wholesale-Fashion-Jewelery-Decoration-Alloy-Bracelet-Ladies-Hand-Bangle-Gold-Plating-Heart-Designs-12pc.jpg )
“Mumma”, shouted a girl from behind. I pushed away Kunj and quickly got down from the counter. “Yes Naina”, I said as she came running to me. “Mumma”, she remarked. I kneeled down in front of her and replied, “Yes my baccha, tell.” “Mumma, two months to go for my fourth birthday”, she said. I smiled and settling her hair asked, “Really? Daddy, when is Naina’s birthday?” She lightly slapped her forehead and said, “Mumma, you forgot Naina’s birthday?” I smiled as Kunj lifted up Naina and said, “Princess!” “Yes daddy?”, she replied as Kunj pointed towards his cheek. She kissed his cheek and said, “Daddy, do you remember my birthday?” I giggled as Kunj said, “Ofcourse I remember my princess’ birthday.” Naina smiled as Kunj added, “Even Mumma remembers.” “But, mumma told umm..umm..Mumma, what did you tell?”, replied a forgetful Naina. I smiled and taking Naina from Kunj pulled her nose. “Mumma, don’t do that. It will becomes this long”, she said spreading out her arms. “Okay, mumma won’t do it now”, I replied kissing her right cheek. “That’s like my good girl”, she remarked as I laughed. “You forget everything then, how do you remember your birthday?”, I asked. She smiled and cutely replied, “How can I forget my birthday? After all it’s your birthday as well.” I smiled and said, “Mumma loves Naina!” “I love you more mumma”, she replied kissing my cheek. “What about daddy?”, Kunj asked standing behind. Naina hugged me and replied, “Mumma more.” I laughed as Kunj frowned.
“Okay, why is Naina not ready for school?”, I asked. “Mumma, I’m not going today”, she replied. “Why?”, I asked pulling back from the hug. “Mumma, it’s yours and papa’s anni.. anni..What was that?”, she replied. I giggled and said, “Anniversary.” “Ya, that only. So, Naina won’t go today”, she replied. wi, get ready quickly”, I said making her stand. “Mumma, please?”, she begged. “No baby”, I said. “Mumma, please, please, please?”, she begged again. “Okay, I was thinking of getting Naina her favourite ice-cream today but, if you’re staying at home then, no ice-cream”, I said. “No, mumma. I’m going na. Who said I’m not going?”, she replied. I smiled as she ran out of the kitchen quickly. I turned around as Naina came back. “Mumma!”, she called out. “Yes baby”, I replied turning back. “Happy anni mumma and daddy!”, she greeted us. We smiled and said together, “Thank you baby/princess!” She smiled and ran out of the kitchen.
I turned around and picking up three plates was about to go out when Kunj held my hand. “Kunj!”, I exclaimed. He took the plates and placed them on the counter beside. He wrapped his arms around my waist as I said, “Kunj, leave me.” He nodded in a no and kissing my forehead asked, “Where’s my gift?” “Kunj, Naina will be late. Leave me”, I replied blushing. “First, my gift”, he said. “Fine, leave me first”, I replied. “No”, he muttered. “I won’t go anywhere. Leave me”, I said. He loosened his grip as I placed his hand on my stomach and said, “You’re going to become a father again.” He picked me up and twirled me around in the air. “Kunj, Kunj!”, I remarked laughing. “Twinkle, I love you!”, he remarked. “I love you too!”, I replied as he put me down and kissing my cheeks said, “Thank you for this wonderful gift.” I smiled and replied, “Naina will get late. Let me go now.” He picked the plates and said, “You’re back to complete rest darling.” I smiled as he walked out of the kitchen.
I stood there by the counter as my mind pondered upon the same question as before, “Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be?” I smiled and muttered, “Everything is more than perfect!”
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Hello everyone! Thank you for all your comments and constant support throughout. It has been a wonderful journey and it wouldn’t have been possible without you all. Your comments have always encouraged me to write more and present before you all something which you all will like.
Well, I’m sorry for ending it without telling but, I feel most you must’ve guessed it when Twinkle and Kunj united.
By the way, the next article coming up from my side is – “I Love You” – A Twinj journey (Comeback). I’ve already uploaded the introduction and I hope you all would support me similarly.
Anyways, I would request everyone including my silent readers to comment today as this journey was for you all and you all have been an integral part of it.
Yours lovingly,
Ria?
81 Comments
Thank you Ria it was amazing but I have one question can someone please tell me where’s ff of twinkj poor or rich and why isnt any apdate pls tell me that
Hey Aaliya,
Thank you so much for commenting! I’m glad you liked this fan fiction.
Well, I don’t know about the author and seems like no one else does as well.
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awesome amazing fabulous cute epi
Hey Purnima,
Thank you so much for your constant support and comments throughout.
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This is beautiful os and happy family and Kunj again becoming dad and waiting for your next ff.
Hey Sidmin23,
Thank you so much for commenting! I’m glad you liked the last segment.
I’ll be back with my next ff soon. Stay tuned.
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OMG God Ria. Imagine an 18 year old pounding n the table and throwing a tantrum and fangirling at the same time. That is me. Ria Ria Ria what do I even say anymore? U are making me act like my shoe size rather than my actual age ? I saw the “last Update” and literally screamed Nooooooo! Then I was reading and endlessly smiling. Naina was too damn cute. And her “happy anni” just killed me. I LOVE LOVE LOVED this ff and the ending could not have been any better as it is more than perfect. BTW that dp is just phenomenal. Did u make it urself? Anyways, again it was perfect. Personally, I loved how u ended it the most. Can’t wait for ur next ff. Love you ❤️
Hey Sara,
Aww.. this was the best comment I’ve ever received from anyone. You screamed noooooo.. aww.. thank you so much for the most beautiful comment one could ever receive! Well, Naina is cute after all the character is inspired from my childhood?. Jokes apart.
Well, as i told before I didn’t make the cover pic. It’s from insta. I’m glad you liked the way I ended it. The next ff is soon coming up.
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Beautiful story????it ended???????
Hey Kiara,
Thank you so much for your precious and beautiful comment. I’m glad you liked this story. Well, every good thing needs to come to an end, right? Stay tuned to my next ff.
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U can’t do this to me Ridi…
U said that there will be a shock ..but this is …to shock ka bhi bap…
I am not visiting tu visited just for ur ff …and now see my fate Ab to ff hi khatam hogya but I swear if u didn’t came up with a new story I will kill u for sure…
But how to kill as I love u so much…
Urgggghhhh….
Love u bye *still miffed*
Hey Bulbul,
You’re not angry now, right? I Love You comeback is coming soon. Don’t worry.
Thank you for this precious comment. Well, all good things need to come to an end so, can’t really help. I’ll come back soon, don’t worry.
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hey ria that’s really a very sweet ending
thank u for such a wonderful story??????????????????
but i will miss it very much???
Hey Srija,
Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this story. Aww.. don’t be so sad na.. all good things need to come to an end, right?
Well, my next ff is coming up soon. Do stay tuned.?
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Noooo!!! Ria pls don’t do this… It’s one of my fav ff… I loved it… Infact we all loved it from the core… Nd u r ending it, ab ham sabka kya hoga… U r my sweet, cute, bubbly frnd na so how can u do this… I’m soo sad… Nd awesome epi… Loved it very much…
Ria dear……it was lovely …..perfect ending to a perfect story…..one of the best ff I have ever read…..amazing ……all the best for studies…..
Hey Rashi,
Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this fan fiction. Aww..it really means a lot to me. Frankly, I never thought that you all would like this story so much.
All the best for your exams and career.
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Noooo!!! Ria pls don’t do this… It’s one of my fav ff… I loved it… Infact we all loved it from the core… Nd u r ending it, ab ham sabka kya hoga… U r my sweet, cute, bubbly frnd na so how can u do this… I’m soo sad… Nd awesome epi… Loved it very much… Take care… Nd waiting for u’r other ff too…
Hey Sidhanshi,
I’m so sorry but, I can’t continue this story anymore. There’s no use of dragging it. It means a lot to me when you say that this was one of your favourite fan fiction. I really can’t ask for anymore. Moreover, all good things need to come to an end, right? So, can’t really help it.
The next fan fiction is coming up. Do stay tuned.?
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really this ff is mr than perfect…I loved it so much….waiting fr ur nxt ff….
Hey Loveleen di,
Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this fan fiction so much. The next fan fiction is coming up soon. Do stay tuned.?
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hey idiot,
It was just perfect! I loved the end. So now i know what you meant with the shock that I would get -.- Whatever now -.- I don’t think I can give a long note here (that too a sweet one) because all we do is argue with each other ? But on a serious note, since the beginning of this ff, you have made me crave to read the next segment even when there was no suspense or something to be revealed. Your writing was just enough for the curiosity in me to jump like an idiot and wait for the next segment. All I’ll say is that I won’t be missing you cause you are coming up with “I Love You” ff ?. Anyway, quickly update us with that.
Love you ?
P.S – I am so mad at you for not uploading the note of mine but it’s okay now -.- I have a big heart, unlike yours so I have forgiven ?
Hey stupid,
Firstly, thank you so much for this beautiful comment! I loved it so much. Yes, this was the shock I meant. All good things need to come to an end so there’s nothing that can be done.
Well, we do argue a lot but, it’s all because I love you like anything my stupid. I’m so glad to have you as my Friend who can just listen to all my crap, sad stories, lessen my pain and cheer me up whatever happens.
By the way, thank you so much again! I’m so glad to know that it was my writing which made you eager to read my fan fiction everytime.
I’ll be back with the next fan fiction soon. Give me some more time nah, please!
P.S.: It doesn’t really matter now.?
Loads of love my stupid.?
~ Your stupid forever.
~ Your idiot forever.?
Indeed, this stupid/idiot thing confuses you too ? Anyway, thanks for this lovely reply ?
hawwwwwwwww gandi ladki… end kar diya ????
chalo koi nei.. it was an awesome journey dear…loved it to core..
love u. sweet heart…
muaahhh muaahh
take care bubye
Hey Tara,
Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this fan fiction. Please don’t be sad. All good things need to come to an end, right? Please cheer up girl.
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Loved your ff 🙂 It had been an amazing Journey to read your ff seeing the worst side of Kunj to the best seeing the bechare Twinkle to a strong Twinkle 🙂
The episode was so cute Naina was so sweet 🙂 Love her 🙂 She remembers her birthday and not the other things selective memory even i have it 😉
Keep writing 🙂
Love you 🙂
Hey Sidmin,
Thank you so much dear! I’m glad that you liked this fan fiction. It really means a lot to me. Well, Naina is cute. I agree. By the way, I forget everything? *No selective memory*?
Anyways, I’ll be back with “I Love You” (Comeback) soon. Do stay tuned.
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Hello di..I hope to get the next post asap
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This was really cute NAD sweet…I have something to share..I am doing it here since I have no other way out..
Muah??
Hey Shreya,
Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked this fan fiction.
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C THIS IS HOW FRIENDSHIP BREAKS?
Both friends will think that they are too busy ?
They will not contact each other thinking it may be disturbing ?
As time passes, both will think… “let the other contact me” ?
After a while, each will think… “why should I contact first?” ?
Here, your love will gradually be converted to pride ?
Finally, without contact, the memory becomes weak ?
They forget each other…..❔
One day they will meet and blame one another ?
So, let’s keep in touch, my dear friend ?
I don’t wanna be one of those kind of friends ?
So here I am saying,
I miss you! And hope that all is well with you? ?☎??
Life is no fun without FRIENDS ??
It’s “World Best Friends Week.” Send this to all your good friends. Even me, if I am one of them.?
See how many you get back… If you get more than 3 you are really a lovable person…?
I am waiting!!! ?
u wil get gud news on Friday by d person u like.
and tomrow will be the best day of your life.
Dont break this chain.
snd this to 9frns in 10mins whn u read…?☺
Be brave….n snd dis 2 ua frnz n c vich 3 colours dey give u..
red…..=….i love u ❤
pink….=….u r cute?
green…=….funny..??
white…=…so good :D?
yellow…=…u r amazing.xd?
orange…..=…. sweet :)?
blue ….=….i miss u very much?
purple…=…u r gud luking ?
aqua….=…. Wanna. Marry u?
golden….=….u r precious for me??
grey….=….i don’t wanna loose u dear ?
black…= u r a crack bt still mah bestie…..?
Waiting fr ur rply
I’m so sorry Shreya. I barely get the time to message anyone. Whenever I come on TU, I’ve so many articles to be read. I’m so sorry. It’s not about a problem of being the first one to be messaging but, I don’t get much time. So sorry.
Well, for this one, here are the ones for you..
Red; Love you a lot sweetheart!
Golden; You’re really precious Shreya. Please, stay the same. I love the way you’re.
~ Ria di with loads of love.?
Riu it.. Was.. Chumz… The journey was tooo gud… Im filled with poignant emotions… ? luv u
Hey Arundhati,
Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked this entire journey. I’ll be back with “I Love You” (Comeback) soon. Do stay tuned
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Gonna miss u
Hey Roshni di,
Aww..I’m glad to know you read my ff. I’m a huge fan of ur ff, love ya fate.. aur marriage of our life. I loved that ff so much.
Well, please don’t be sad. I’ll be back with my next ff, “I Love You” (Comeback), soon. Do stay tuned.
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Hey uuuuuuuu??????????????
Omggggggg I really thought yesterday wen u told that ders some surprise that this episode may be a last one and ya it was.
So it came to an end
My fav ff came to an end
Really
Nd i am thinking now wat to say
Its an amazing ff. I really loved it from start. Twinj and naina ??
I am gonna miss this ff alot but i am not gonna miss u ? Bcz u r coming with another ff
Love u❤️❤️
Hey Chiku,
Firstly, thank you for this beautiful comment! It makes me so happy knwing that you liked my ff right from the beginning. Well, what to do! All good things need to come to an end, right? So, here’s the end. Please cheer up! Don’t be sad as I want all of you to smile while I end this ff.
Anyways, “I Love You” (Comeback) will be updated soon. Stay tuned.
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yaar kyun end kiya yaar… im really sad… aisa bi koi karthe… yaar kyun…will really really miss ur ff…aur todays epi was so cute… I loved the ending…
Hey Tamanna,
Thank you so much for this beautiful comment dear! I’m glad you liked this story. Well, don’t be so sad, alright? All good things need to come to an end, right? So, even this did.
Well, “I Love You” (Comeback) will be updated soon. Do stay tuned.
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Awesome amazing fabulous fantastic superb splendid spectacular…. Jo bhi kahun kam hi yrr….. Rlly ….
Hey Sana,
Thank you so much for this precious comment dear! I’m glad you liked this story.
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Hey Ria this ff is one of my favorite ffs…I’m sad that it ended but no worries as your coming up with I love you TwiNj journey S2…Ria reason for loving this ff like hell is your way of writing your a phenomenal writer dear…the journey of this ff was amazing and I enjoyed it thoroughly…in the last few segments you nailed it girl…coming to last segment it is just perfect I so loved little Naina,her sweet talks and the way she forgets things and TwiNj scenes too…waiting for I Love you TwiNj journey update…try to post soon…
Love you ???
Hey di,
Thank you so much for this beautiful comment! Haha.. phenomenal writer!! It really means a lot di. Thank you so so much! Your comments have always been a pleasure to read throughout. Thank you so much for supporting me constantly throughout the journey. Well, I’m glad that you liked Naina as well as Twinj and the end. Thank you so much!
Also, glad to know that you liked my way of writing. I guess I’ll be continuing to write similarly as I seem to feel more comfortable writing like this.?
Well, “I Love You” (Comeback) would be updated soon. Stay tuned.
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amazing fantastic
Hey Ayesha,
Thank you so much!?
Hey ria luvd it amazing ur ff is really awesome plzzzz write more ff like this
Hey Anayaali,
Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked this ff. Well, I’ll be back with “I Love You” (Comeback) soon. Stay tuned.?
Huh..It ended…Well jaan (I hope u did not mind and also see the reply I gave you on my FF a while ago) you ended it so perfectly 🙂 “Life is just more than perfect!” These lines of your touched my heart…There was a unique message behind this FF of yours, “Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be?” And also the title was so damn amazing that anyone will crave for this wonderful FF!! Waiting for your upcoming FFs!! Nothing more to say as I am still in the hangover state (no yaar I don’t drink!!!) But your FF was so damn amazing 😉 Love u jaan!!
Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
Hey Zuha,
Firstly, I don’t mind if you call me “Jaan”. In fact, I’d be so happy if you do. Seriously❗❗ Well, thank you for this ever beautiful comment dear! I’m so glad that you liked the end and especially the ending lines. It makes me feel that you all liked the ending. Thank you so so much!
Aww..you liked the title so much? I’m glad. I always used to think that it’s quite boring and moreover, it’s so long, people would anyways find it boring but, you changed my conception.?
By the way, “I Love You” (Comeback) would be updated soon. Stay tuned.
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Ria diii…its soooooo fantastic…yr really its wonderful…loved it to the core…come back soon wd another superbbb ff…love u darling ???
Hey Lama,
Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this ff. The next ff, “I Love You” (Comeback) would be updated soon. Stay tuned.
Also, I’d mailed you some days before. Please check your mail. I’ve been waiting for quite a long time. Hope you aren’t mad at me for not mailing you before.?
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Beautiful ending ???.. naina is soooooooo cuteee ??.. loved her n all twinj scenes n twinj-naina scenes.. I’m sad that this ff ended.. I loved it very much.. n will miss it sooo muchh.. waiting for I love you s2.. ❤❤
Hey Sidvee,
Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the ending, Twinj scenes as well as the little Naina. Don’t be sad dear. All good things need to come to an end, right? So, please don’t be sad. Moreover, I wanted to end this ff with a bright smile on all your faces. So, please smile!!
Well, “I Love You” (Comeback) would be updated soon. Stay tuned.
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Riaaaaa.
Omigod.
That was bliss.
The whole journey was wonderful.
How do you write so very well.?
Wow.wow.wow.
I love you infinity.♥♥
Hey Meeta,
Thank you so much darling! I’m glad you liked the ff throughout. Well, idk. I feel I don’t write well but, according to you all it seems to be different. So, I really don’t know.
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Why….are you ending………..hmmmm…….thus us soooooo Bas…….how can u end ..leaving us all alone haaaww???? …… I’ll miss u……really………Nd I order u to start ur next ff asap……..else….else….else…….else…..kuch ni…….I can’t do anything to my friend……..I’ll always miss you……coz u know n I LOVE YOU……..I really really really really really really really really really really really really really really LUV U………… seriously……..nd u ended it soo nicely that I can’t forget it………shi me……. I’ll miss…… obviously …u ……Nd I want a new ff as soon as possible……..Nd it’s really so perfect around u…… LOVE YOU
Hey Adya,
Thank you for this beautiful comment! I’m glad you liked the ff as well as the ending. Well, please don’t be so sad na. All good things need to come to an end, right? You people have always told me that this ff was good so, it had to end. Please, cheer up. I wanted to end this ff with a bright smile on all your faces. Please, smile bright!?
Well, “I Love You” (Comeback) would be updated soon. Stay tuned.
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Well u know how sad and angry I m rgt now..
I can’t help..they’re ur decisions! I can’t intervene!
The end was perfect, I agree, but I never thought that this’d be that surprise’
*rolls eyes*
*twitches lips*
*starts crying*
Now you handle. Bye bye.
Hey Laddoo,
Please don’t say like that na. I know you were angry and sad at that time but, what to do! Don’t all good things need to come to an end? You always told that this ff was good so, it surely needs to come to an end, right?
Well, I’m glad that you liked the end. Also, please don’t cry na bacha. (See, mumma is telling?) You know, I can never see you crying. I don’t want you to cry ever. I wanted to end the ff with a very bright smile right across your face. Please cheer up. Just a bright smile, that’s all I need.
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~ Ria dibhai