Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be?
(Segment 20)
Here’s the link for the previous segment:
Segment 19 Part 1
Segment 19 Part 2
This segment is in Twinkle’s voice. Hope you all weren’t confused all this time I’d been writing this fan fiction.
Well, excited for the last segment? Let’s start then.
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I came downstairs clipping my hair and walked towards the kitchen. I entered the kitchen and found the breakfast ready when Kunj came and hugged me from back. I placed my hand on his as he said, “Happy anniversary darling!” I smiled and replied, “Happy Anniversary Kunj!” He kissed my left cheek and resting his chin on my shoulder said, “So, where’s my gift?” “Where’s mine?”, I questioned back. He turned me around and lifted me. “Kunj, what are you doing?”
He made me sit on the counter and moved closer to me. “I’ve prepared everything for you on our fifth anniversary also”, he whispered. I wrapped my arms around his neck and remarked, “Oh really?” He nodded his head in a yes as I added, “But, that’s not the gift. I know you very well so, don’t try to act smart.” He smiled and took out a beautiful bracelet from his pocket. It had two hearts attached beside each other with one of them made of a pearl in a heart shape and the other one outlined with embedded stones . He made me wear it as I squealed, “This is so beautiful!” He smiled and touched his forehead with mine. I hugged him tightly and said, “Thank you so much Kunj!”
(Here’s the link for the bracelet:
http://g01.a.alicdn.com/kf/HTB1dq4YKFXXXXcIXFXXq6xXFXXXn/Free-Shipping-Wholesale-Fashion-Jewelery-Decoration-Alloy-Bracelet-Ladies-Hand-Bangle-Gold-Plating-Heart-Designs-12pc.jpg )
“Mumma”, shouted a girl from behind. I pushed away Kunj and quickly got down from the counter. “Yes Naina”, I said as she came running to me. “Mumma”, she remarked. I kneeled down in front of her and replied, “Yes my baccha, tell.” “Mumma, two months to go for my fourth birthday”, she said. I smiled and settling her hair asked, “Really? Daddy, when is Naina’s birthday?” She lightly slapped her forehead and said, “Mumma, you forgot Naina’s birthday?” I smiled as Kunj lifted up Naina and said, “Princess!” “Yes daddy?”, she replied as Kunj pointed towards his cheek. She kissed his cheek and said, “Daddy, do you remember my birthday?” I giggled as Kunj said, “Ofcourse I remember my princess’ birthday.” Naina smiled as Kunj added, “Even Mumma remembers.” “But, mumma told umm..umm..Mumma, what did you tell?”, replied a forgetful Naina. I smiled and taking Naina from Kunj pulled her nose. “Mumma, don’t do that. It will becomes this long”, she said spreading out her arms. “Okay, mumma won’t do it now”, I replied kissing her right cheek. “That’s like my good girl”, she remarked as I laughed. “You forget everything then, how do you remember your birthday?”, I asked. She smiled and cutely replied, “How can I forget my birthday? After all it’s your birthday as well.” I smiled and said, “Mumma loves Naina!” “I love you more mumma”, she replied kissing my cheek. “What about daddy?”, Kunj asked standing behind. Naina hugged me and replied, “Mumma more.” I laughed as Kunj frowned.
“Okay, why is Naina not ready for school?”, I asked. “Mumma, I’m not going today”, she replied. “Why?”, I asked pulling back from the hug. “Mumma, it’s yours and papa’s anni.. anni..What was that?”, she replied. I giggled and said, “Anniversary.” “Ya, that only. So, Naina won’t go today”, she replied. wi, get ready quickly”, I said making her stand. “Mumma, please?”, she begged. “No baby”, I said. “Mumma, please, please, please?”, she begged again. “Okay, I was thinking of getting Naina her favourite ice-cream today but, if you’re staying at home then, no ice-cream”, I said. “No, mumma. I’m going na. Who said I’m not going?”, she replied. I smiled as she ran out of the kitchen quickly. I turned around as Naina came back. “Mumma!”, she called out. “Yes baby”, I replied turning back. “Happy anni mumma and daddy!”, she greeted us. We smiled and said together, “Thank you baby/princess!” She smiled and ran out of the kitchen.
I turned around and picking up three plates was about to go out when Kunj held my hand. “Kunj!”, I exclaimed. He took the plates and placed them on the counter beside. He wrapped his arms around my waist as I said, “Kunj, leave me.” He nodded in a no and kissing my forehead asked, “Where’s my gift?” “Kunj, Naina will be late. Leave me”, I replied blushing. “First, my gift”, he said. “Fine, leave me first”, I replied. “No”, he muttered. “I won’t go anywhere. Leave me”, I said. He loosened his grip as I placed his hand on my stomach and said, “You’re going to become a father again.” He picked me up and twirled me around in the air. “Kunj, Kunj!”, I remarked laughing. “Twinkle, I love you!”, he remarked. “I love you too!”, I replied as he put me down and kissing my cheeks said, “Thank you for this wonderful gift.” I smiled and replied, “Naina will get late. Let me go now.” He picked the plates and said, “You’re back to complete rest darling.” I smiled as he walked out of the kitchen.
I stood there by the counter as my mind pondered upon the same question as before, “Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be?” I smiled and muttered, “Everything is more than perfect!”
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Hello everyone! Thank you for all your comments and constant support throughout. It has been a wonderful journey and it wouldn’t have been possible without you all. Your comments have always encouraged me to write more and present before you all something which you all will like.
Well, I’m sorry for ending it without telling but, I feel most you must’ve guessed it when Twinkle and Kunj united.
By the way, the next article coming up from my side is – “I Love You” – A Twinj journey (Comeback). I’ve already uploaded the introduction and I hope you all would support me similarly.
Anyways, I would request everyone including my silent readers to comment today as this journey was for you all and you all have been an integral part of it.
Yours lovingly,
Ria?
81 Comments
Ria u cant do to me no no no
Tumne itne fab fab fab ff ko end kr diay this is not done?
Pr Mujhe pata hai ki tumhari next amazing post jaldi jaldi update hone wali hai- I love u twinj muuuahh ilove it
Hey Payal,
Thank you so much for your precious comment! I’m so glad you liked this ff. I’ll surely be back with “I Love You” (Comeback) soon. Stay tuned.
Loads of love.?
Thank u ria for giving this ff such a cute si happy ending………Thank u for such a blissful love story…..I throughly enjoyed reading each nd every part of it
Love u loads???
Hey Kruti,
Thank you so much! I’m glad this story as well as the ending. Well, I know you were mad at me bit, please be normal na. (Itne dino mein toh ho bhi gayi hogi?)
By the way, “I Love You” (Comeback) would be updated soon. Stay tuned.
Loads of love.?
Riauuu… Seriously this ff going to end… It was my favorite….????… One day every ff have to end… But still I’ll miss this ff.. This ff was the blust of this tu… My journey with this beautiful writer was amazing… Really I’ll miss this page this ff… U made us laugh cry… Simle… Thank you soo much for everything… Yaar ur outstanding… Hats off to u… Dea… I’m waiting for next ff… All the very best for it… I’ll support u… Love you lots
Hey Affaa di,
Firstly, the way you call me is just so adorable, Riauuu..aww.. Well, thank you so much for this beautiful comment! I’m glad you liked this ff throughout. It means a lot di that it’s your favourite ff. I feel so happy. I’m glad you understood me and aren’t mad at me for ending the ff. Thank you so much di!
Well, “I Love You” (Comeback) would be updated soon. Stay tuned.
Loads of love.?
Beautiful ending ria…❤❤
Naina is sooo cute..?
Loved ur story…
And ya the ending was really more than perfect..?????
Hey Shreya,
Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked the story as well as the ending. Well, “I Love You” (Comeback) would be updated soon. Stay tuned.
Loads of love.?
Awesome episode ria I loved it to core each n every epi was amazing frm start I’m going to miss dis badly
Bt plss come back soon
N last part was ssoooooooo cuteeeeeeeee
Loved it N love u
Hey Ramya,
Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked this ff right from the beginning. Aww.. even I’m going to miss this ff especially because of all your special comments throughout. I’ll be back soon. Please, don’t be upset.
Well, “I Love You” (Comeback) would be updated soon. Stay tuned.
Loads of love.?
Ria!!! I’ve never read such a cute epilogue!!!
Naina is so cute!!! I can imagine tht little Ria????
And such a perfect ending, for such a perfect story!!! Hate to love concepts are always beautiful! It might be sad at the beginning, but they always end on a happy note!!! And u have given this story a perfect perfect plot with hatred, love, hurt and happiness…all in one!!
Love you❤
Hey di,
Firstly, thank you so much for reading this inspite of being a swaragini fan I couldn’t have asked for more.? Well, I’m glad that you found the epilogue cute.
Aww..you could imagine me as that li’l Naina? Well, the character is really inspired by me. I mean especially that nose reaction. I used to hate it when someone did that and instantly reply this.?
Hehe..you found this ff an all in one combo? I’m so glad to know about it.
Loads of love.?
~ Your one and only Cutie pie❗?
Hawww u ended it?? ?
Anyway I’ll miss this story very very much ❤❤
I loved every damn dialogue and twinj scenes ?
Loved it to the core Di!
Excited for you next one 🙂
Love you ?
Hey Romaisha,
Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked this ff right from the beginning. Aww..you liked every dialogue and Twinj scene!! It really means a lot to me. Thank you so much for supporting me throughout.
Well, “I Love You” (Comeback) would be updated soon. Stay tuned.
Also, try uploading your ff soon. I’m excited to know how Kunj saves Twinkle.?
Loads of love.
Diii apne end kar diya hmmm but baat yeh bhi haii ke bina story ke drag karna bhi thik nahi haii anyways dii I enjoyed each n every episode of this beautiful ff it was outstanding n last lines of twinkle were gud n naina wow she was shooooooo cuteeeee awesome dii plsss post l lvu u journey also plsssss soon
Love u dii ??
Hey Thanmy,
Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked this entire ff. It really means a lot to me. Also, I’m so happy to know that you all liked the ending and found it perfect. Hehe..Li’l Naina is really cute. I’m so happy you all found the same.
Well, “I Love You” (Comeback) would be updated soon. Stay tuned.
Loads of love.?
Ria….i read it lonng ago n the only thing that came to mind was….katti!
Khatam kyun kiya???????
Maine nahin baat karni tumse! Dhamakedaar epis di…vo bhi back to back….itna pyaara saffar….climax pe tata bye keh diya??? Not fair!
Mujhe ye epi kitna pasand tha pata hai??? I know meri galti bhi hai…i did not comment par uske liya this big sazaa!!
Par promise karo di! U’ll come back with another one varna mein baat bhi nahin karungi?
Ab epi ki baat! Naina is soooo sweet! Shararti hai n kitni cute hai!!!
n naya chotu sa baby! Aap family planning ke baare mein serious ho…2 babies?
Par par….i want another ff ya iska season 2!!!!
Sorry di agar rude ho gaya to…
Love u❤️
Hey Ayu,
Thank you so much dear! I’m glad that you liked this ff so much. Aise nahi karte na. Har cheez toh khatam honi hi hoti hai na. Tum logo ne mujhe itna pyaar diya aur hamesha bola that this ff is very good, right? All good things need to come to an end, right? So, here’s the end. But, please don’t be angry or upset. I want you to have a bright smile right across your face. It would suit you more.
Family planning!!??
Well, “I Love You” (Comeback) would be updated soon. Stay tuned.
Loads of love.?
Hello, everyone!
Thank you so much for commenting and supporting me throughout. I’m really glad that you all liked this ff throughout. I couldn’t have expectated or asked for anything more. The love that you all have showered upon me throughout this journey is just unbelievable and cannot be expressed. Some things remain to be better if they’re kept unsaid; so, here’s another journey which I can’t express in words. Thank you everyone for making this journey the most memorable one. It has been an absolutely amazing jour ey and it wouldn’t have been possible without all of you. Thank you so soo much.
Also, no one’s being upset or crying over the end. I want a bright smile right across all your beautiful faces. Just a bright smile; that’s all I need.?
Love you all!?
Take care. I’ll be back soon.?