Shot.6:::
Abhi: Bhabi….. R u ready???? …. Abhi shouts as hez waiting for them in the hall for more than 1 hr…..
Archa: haa abhi… just 2 mins…… we will come…. Just 2 mins….
Abhi” dono know…. Why this girl takes this much time for evrything…. I know they will take time for shopping,, but now they are taking time for getting ready for shopping… I think ua booked abhi….. No one will save u from them today….. I agreed as bhabi asked me fr d first time that to take her shopping.. But I donooo these all idiots are also accompaning her“ as abhi is thinkng…. Archana nd tanu comes down…..
Abhi:ufffff… finally u came…. Soo shall we start now…..
Tanu: nooo bhai…. Bul nd pra didn’t come yet…..
Abhi thinks” thank god… now I have to convince bhabi… nd will take her nd tanu.. Soo that I can escape from that devil….. “: bhabi this is not fair…. I agreed for only u… not these all…. See its getting late now… Soo bettr we will goo…. Nd drags archana….
Pra: how u will goo without this…. Pra says by raising her eyebrow nd by holding car keys nd makes it swing to nd fro motion….
Abhi stares at her… pra smirks….
Archa: abhi…. Soo now we will gooo….
All starts…..
In shopping mall….
Archana, tanu nd prabul are seriously doing their shopping… asusal abhi lossing his patience,, just roaming all over shopping mall….
Then abhi sees a beautiful saree,, peach colour with golden stone work borden…..
By seeing that,, he unknowingly imagines pragya wearing that saree…..
Abhi was lost in her beauty… he lost in her thoughts….
Suddenly a hand kept on abhi shoulder…. Abhi comes to sense,, he thinks why doo I imagined her….. Abhi in dreams also shez not leaving u… bettr u avoid her….. He turns nd sees archana who is asking him where he lost…
Abhi says nothing nd asks whether their shopping finished…
They all said yaaaa… nd they started to home….
In car…..
Pra sits beside abhi….
Nd all ladies sits back….
Pra: am feeling hungry….. Why don’t we have something……???
Abhi: what…. U just now ate na,, befre coming to shopping….
Pra: yaaa,, its been soo long… nd my energy has been in low mode now…. As I have used it in shopping… now I have to boost it other wise I cant doo anything….
Abhi: how much u will eat daily….. I think u should marry a person who owns a restuarent….. U can eat all they prepared nd aftr that eat his brain also… then aftr eat him completely…. They he will leave rest in peace…
Pra: am a vegetarian… I hate non-veg….. Sooo bettr stop at veg dhaba…..
Abhi gives impossible look…. Nd stops near a veg restaurant….
All goes in…. Abhi asks them to order what they want….
Abhi wonders as pra is eating like a person who is eating aftr many days,, nooo aftr many months nooo nott aftr many years….. His eyes widened…. Abhi unknowingly smiles by looking at her….
All finishes… They start from their…. They reached MM…..
Aftr sometime…. Archana asks abhi to drop pra at home…
Abhi denies first nd then accept gor it….
There is a pin drop silence between them….
Abhi raised d accelerator nd its speed has increased…..
Pra getting scared… Nd asking him to slow down…
But abhi is only looking in front direction…. Nd ignoring her…
Pra closes her eyes nd shouts to stop him…. Abhi stops suddenly….
She gave a deadly look to him…..
Pra: uuuu….. Don’t u have sense or have uost it somewhere…. Frm how long am asking u too slow down….
Abhi: just hold on…… nd get out from my car miss pragya arora…..
pra looked out nd realised that he stoped d car as they reached her home… not bcoz by Iistening her shouting…..
Pra frowningly gets from d car….. Abhi smirks nd starts his car … but sanjay comes nd asks him to come in….
Abhi couldn’t say noo and he too comes in…
Abhigya enters at a time…….
Abhi takes sarla blessings nd wishes sanjay…..
Sarla asks pra to get some juice for abhi…..
Pra stares at him…. She goes to kitchen nd curses abhi…
She knowingly adds salt instead of sugar in juice… She comes out with an evil smile on her face….
Sarla asks pra to give it to abhi…. Abhi smirks
She gives it to abhi obediently…. Abhi feels something fishy….
Here pra is excitedly waiting for abhi expression….
Abhi unwillingly takes a sip nd his face of expressions…..??????????…. Awwwwwww… mixed reactions…. He see pra… she smirks at him….
Sarla: what happened abhi….. Don’t u like this juice…..
Abhi: Nooooooo….. Voooo…. Yessssssss…. Accctualllyyyyyyy… iiii…. Lovedddd ittttt…..
Pragya chuckles????????….
He hardly finishes it by closing his eyes…..
Abhi couldn’t stand there anymore and says bye to them nd rushes to his car…..
Sarla nd sanjay looks confused about his behaviour….
Pra feels happy as she took revenge on what abhi did to her just befre…. She feels relaxed nd goes to her room….
Abhi was peak of anger at pra…. He is moving here and their in his room… he gets an idea…. But thinks how to execute it tomorrow as hez feeling very tired by their shopping….
Next day morning….
Abhi wakes up early and gets freshen up nd
He then goes to archana room….
Abhi: bhabi…..
Archa: haa abhi….. Bolo…..
Abhi: Is their any plans like Shoping today….????
Archa: nooo abhi…. Actually all are busy today…. Sooo nothing for today….
Abhi: its boring bhabi… y don’t we plan something….
Archa: yaa but bul nd tanu are Going out for some project….. But pra is coming home for sometime… soo we May have some chitchat with her…
Abhi gets an idea…: bhabi…. That’s great then we will have great time with her….. Y don’t u we out fr movie????
Archa: but abhi…. I cant as dadi will be alone at home na….
Abhi: hooo… okkk then we will watch movie here itself…
Archa feels excited….
Abhi says okk bhabi,, I will make arrangements… u call her but don’t infrom her that about it… archa nods….
Aftr Sometime…pra reached MM…..
Archa nd pra have some chitchat…
As per abhi he made all arrangements…. He came nd said to archa…
Archa infrmed pra nd she feels something fishy….
She doubfully entered in to d room….
Archa, abhigya sat,,,abhi played a horror movie…. nd just then lights off….
Pra feels scared…. Pra: whats dis di….. It is soo dark…
Abhi: don’t worry pra, we are her naa…. It will be intresting if we watch in dark….
Archa too supprts him…
Pra: but diii….
Abhi: I think shez scaring….. Sooo lets stop here bhabi…
Pra: Noooooo… whoooo… whooo said am scared…… she says in a nervousness…
Abhi: okkk then lets continue… he raised d volume….
But as per pra shez acting as she not at all effected by that….
Suddenly archa gets a call from akash nd she asks them to continue nd she leaves from their….
Abhigya was alone in d room… wPra was seriously glancing at movoe,, while abhi thinks to goo out from d movie…. As per his plan,, pra is alone nd he goes out nd locks d foor from out….
Pra thinks dat abhi is beside her…. But to her shock there is noo one in her room…..
Except she nd loud sounds coming from d movie…
Shez screaming a loud to help her…… abhi is feeling supper happy by her screams…..
Pra tries to open d door, but it was not opening then she realised that it all abhi’s plan in taking revenge….
Aftr sometime abhi realised that there is noo sound coming from inside…
Abhi opens d door nd finds pra fainted…
He rushes to her nd lifts her head nd keeps on his lap nd pats her cheek…
He was panicked to see her in that state….
Abhi: praa get up… dnt play with mee… get up yaarrr…. Plzzzz…..
He takes some water nd pours on her face… she slowly gains conciousness nd opens her eyes slowly…..
Pra with mixed reactions lools at him…
Abhi looks at her nd asks r u okk…
Pra gets scared nd screams not to come near her… nd moves away from….
Abhi is sweating hardly nd his heart is beating heavily to see her like this… he tried to touch her hand… pra moves back…
Pra is holding her hand nd screaming not to touch her nd beats him…
Abhi confusedly asks her to cool down…
Pra behaves as she have gone mad….
Abhi heart has stopped baeting,, he was shttered to see her… he really don’t undrstand what he has done to her…
Abhi triying to make her calm done,, but shez beating him hardly nd throwing things on abhi…. Shez bwhaving like a child… Abhi who saw pra state can only have tears in his eyes…
He immediately calls archana nd infrm evrything… she come their…
Archa sees pra nd shocked to see her messy hair nd her condition….
Archa holds pra tightly… she don’t undrstand…. Pra winks at archa…
Archa then undrstood its all her prank nd says abhi too take care her nd don’t let her come out nd she will asks doctor to come soon.. Archa goes out…
Abhi is trying to hold pra,, but shez not listening to him….
Abhi mentally curses himself for making pra like this…
Here pra is throwing things and running allover d room nd making d room ful of mess snd enjoying by seeing abhi worried fr her….
Its almost more than 6 hrs pra is enjoying her prank… abhi calls archa nd asks her about doctor…
Archa: hooo abhi…. U stiil didn’t find that it was all her prank…. I thought u found it nd evrything was fine now….
Abhi hangs d call without saying anything… tears started flowing through his eyes….
He turns to pra side nd runs to her nd hugs her tightly……
Pra was hell shocked fr his behaviour….
Abhi comes to his sense nd gives tight slap to pragya by realising that she played with his feelings…..
Nd he leaves from their making pra confused…..
Abhi goes to his room nd says” how can she play with me not she played with my feelings…. What she thought how can I leave if anything happened to her,, my heart stopped by seeing her in dat condition…. I love to tease her that doesn’t mean I love to see her in Pain… I cant think it in my dream tooo…. “
As this is going on,, pra with mixed Emotions goes to her hoom….
She didn’t talk to any one that day….
Pra” he hugged me nd slapped me…. What hez thinkng about me… how dare he to slap me…. But I saw him tears fr d first time… nd he too worried a lot for me….. Till now I have seen an abhi who teases me nd loves to make me cry… but now I have an abhi who cried fr me… how strange…. But I like this abhi,, who cares me, nd he bared my stupid torture more than 6hrs…. I really made a big blunder… how stupid I am to play like this…. I know he is angry on me now…. And am sure he wont talk to me anymore…”
Pra thinks to cal abhi… she calls but abhi doesn’t lift d call…
She sends a sorry message for him….
But noo reply from him….both slept with eachother thoughts…..
Next day pra went to MM,, but she couldn’t find abhi, as he went out fr some business work… she goes to his room nd keeps a sorry greeting card on his bed….
The whole day passed like many years to her…. She really missed him….
Dadi gets abhi call nd talks to him…
Pra who notices dat nd listens curiously…
Dadi: okk betaaa…. But take care aahhh… okkk… try to come soon…. She hangs d call….
Pra: dadi… whooo is that…..
Dado: abhiii…… he went out of town naa,, he said it may more 6 days for d work to complete… soo he may come next week.
Pra becomes sad,, as she gonna miss him fr next one weak..
She disappointedly goes to her room….
Days passing abhigya missing eachother nd they are spenind their only remembering eachother memories….
One fine morning…..
Abhi woke up suddenly…. Hez sweating hard….. He couldn’t breath properly,, as hez scared soo much…. He suddenly took his mobile nd called someone….
Other side…. Tringggg… tringgg…….
Pra was suppr happy to see d caller id
Pragya picked d call…..
Pra: heloooo….
Abhi: r u fine pragya??? Wr r u now????
Pra senses something wrong….. Nd she could feel abhi shivering voice….
Abhi: pra r u there…. R u listening me…. Wr r u now… tell me fast…
Pra: what happened abhi…. Is evrything okk….. ????
Abhi:first answer me idiot…. Where d hell are u….????? He shouts back at her…..
To be continued………
Note:: haiii…. Am really sorry for making u uncomfortable with my ff… if u don’t like this plot just say it to me directly,, because some one messaged me that am wasting my time in writing this stupid tracks…. Am really shocked to read dat message…. Nd Soo they want me to stop this… they are feeling as bored…nd they said that am wasting al ua time too….nd they don’t writers like me who are not at all writing anything intrestedly .. And not a worrh to write a ff in this tu page,, as they are not finding it intrestedly… am sryy but am really happened this as second time, first time as some one comment same in my another ff, nd now by pruvate message…. I dnt want to reveal their names… if its sooo plzz tell me franklyyy…. I will stop this now itself…. I really Lost my intrest to continue this now as what is d use if its boring for u all…. Sorry for boring with my stupid ff…. ??????… aftr this I want to continue as a silent reader of all ua ff..
And coming to my friends, Abhigya, shabana, reshma_pradeep, sowji,saranya,dii, b_ani, sethidisha, sugan, tisha, aiza, aneesa nd mithili,, thank you soo much fr ua love till now…. Nd sridiyasai,, am really happy that ua waiting fr my other ff can life exist aftr love failure… But aft what happened I cant continue it anymore…. Nd I too lost intrest in this…. Am sryy fr hurting anyone???… thank you for ua supprt till now…. Thank you silent readers……
21 Comments
It’s really nice..I never feel boring…keep writing…update it regularly…
What’s this samu please don’t worry for some silly messages ! I think they are really jealous of your amazing writing !
you know what you ate so best at writing !
we all will support you and your writing !
Please don’t say this on is boring we really feel very hurt please continue your writing atleast for your besties and I have that hope that you’ll continue this !
And coming to today’s update the last part was in great twist !
Love to see the caring side of abhi !
you gave the best combination of abhigya stories !
My poor pragya got an slap from my abhi but what she did also wrong na ?
Again the emotions was beautifully conveyed !
Love you so much bestie ,
Eagerly awaiting for your next update !
come on samu post soon we’re waiting boss !
Sam, am a silent reader of ur ffs…jst because sme1 said abt ur ff how could leave ur writing..do thier cmnt means much more than all those who supported u..seriously jst forget wat tey said..u no wat i really lyk ur ffs..dont think am simply saying tis..i ll b waiting to read urs..wait its actually am waiting to read urs..pls dont think of dropping ur works..think it as a request from a silent reader n a sissy
r u out of your senses ..!
for silly messages why will stop ur ff…keep writing..be the 1 u r…and coming to our private chat…I ‘ll talk with u on next Saturday…
plss write…and update next soon…
yah 1 more thing in your status only u wrote
Be the 1 and never change for any 1…
As they r jealous of ur awesom FF and to stop ur Ff they r doing all this and u r getting traped in their trap…
show them that if they mingle with u they have to pay back a lot…as we all support u
Hey baby wats tos u r such a brave girl hw can u worry fr such silly msgs they r idiots frst tell them to write one and ten talk abt u as aiza says they r jealous of u dear so dnt wry fr such useless talks be who u are and yes dnt dare to think tat u r boring u r one of my fav writer who writes practically simple to undrstand and intetstngly beautifully of course so cheer up darlimg we r thr fr u always love u loads muuaahh?????nxt time if u worry fr tis i ll kill u be my brave frnd go and thrash tat person ok cme on girl my darling?????
Are you mad why are you saying like this actually I want this and that ff and more and more ff’s of yours don’t do this again because some of them are jealous of your writing skills they can’t write like u so they did this and don’t be sad for this because this is not at all important to take at all please don’t stop this and u don’t consider their comments and u consider only are comments ur friends and sisters don’t consider that unknown and idiotic comments and I really should say that it’s interesting but with some episodes I am disappointed but I am OK with the other episodes and this episodes both of thems prank was superb and funny and please don’t say this again.
I really love this story
I like abhi’s love for pragya
And also this is a very nice story don’t think about those silly messages
Want to see more of abhigya love and also their marriage
Cant wait so please continue
Awesome….. hai dear friend don’t mind others words….. I really love it lottt ur ff…. So pls continue…. Update next part soon dear…..
Nice
Y r u bother on silly msg dr.be happy that atleast u try to write something na.that too amazing stories. So don’t care abt others words and continue ur work heartfully dr ummmmaaaaaahh,………
dont worry for what others tell samu dear. dont stop your work for one who doesnt like it…continue for the many who love it.
dont ever think of stopping this and dropping out…do write.
i…I should say we, will always love you and support you…just go on buddy…
coming to this episode, that was totally amazin…wat prags did was not really right. and the last part…again u stopped in suspense! post the nxt part without fail.
anyways…love ur work nd u too…take care, dont stress.
Superbbbbb!
hey don t feel unwanted msg ………..as we r here to support n waiting u ff 222222
love u so much dear……….pls conti yaaaaaaaa
always there 4 u dear…….pls do not stop writing ………
Hey m a silent reader you made me wrote this comment plz I request you not just bcoz I love your both ff’s but also as a human that don’t get hurt by a person see the people who are in Ur favour and see who is in majority and yes there are some negative peoples who spread negativity but plz don’t get affected by their words…….. And side by side as a silent follower of Ur ff plz upload both Ur ff’s I m eagerly waiting for them??????
Hey m a silent reader you made me wrote this comment plz I request you not just bcoz I love your both ff’s but also as a human that don’t get hurt by a person see the people who are in Ur favour and see who is in majority and yes there are some
negative peoples who spread negativity but plz don’t get affected by their words…….. And side by side as a silent follower of Ur ff plz upload both Ur ff’s I m eagerly waiting for them??????
Hello 🙂 .I am Ur silent reader of all ur ff.pls don’t stop it for some one’s bad intentions.i am sry for not typing the comments n all these days.pls continue Ur works da
nice ya . continue please
Pls don’t stop ur wonderful n amazing ff for a stupid comments…..it’s really interesting….. I just love to read ur ff., u must update it regularly… u should not stop for a idiotic person ….they r actually jealous on u,,,don’t worry. … continue this ff n defeat them..we r all supporting you …, so pls continue…. I can’t be without reading this ff…,,pls continue…,, n u must update update it regularly..,,pls.
Y r u worrying about others word…just think about who one likes this ff…don’t care about who one dislike this ff…we are waiting for your ff….I hope that u will come back soon…don’t think about dislike person.. just think about like person…u just write for that person…just think about your fan…lots of people reading your stories…always think to move on forward…just ignore dislike person of your forum…as a viewer,as a friend,as a sister…this is my advice for you…this is my comment for you…I hope you understand my points…come back soon…we are waiting for your arrival…
Superrrrrrrrrrr dr….. Pls don’t think to stop it… I share with u one thing dr… I am also writing a ff in other page…. And I am facing this situation….. For the first time I think to stop it…. But readers are supports me…. Now I had complete 27 episode…. And also she asked me sry….I think share my feelings not to hurt u more…… I know how you will at the time….. That’s why I said my experience to you…… So write more and prove her she is wrong…. Then surely she will asked sry to you….. So pls don’t take her words who didn’t know to encourage them………. Its really amazing thought….. I loved it to the core dr…. Waiting for your next episode egarly….. And I big big biggest fan Abigya….. Now yours also……Sry today only I am read this story…. Till now I had all the story posted in this page…. But from these days my health is not well…. That’s why I didn’t read this…. Now onwards I will read and comments you dr…. Can you pls accept me as your frd….. Love you dr….