Hi i am Sakash.Love you all.Here i am back with TS.Hope you all will like it.It may end in two or three shots.Please give your valuable comments and likes if you like…Thank you…
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I am writing TS on present situation in SDCH(Serial)…When Ayesha shoots Saanchi?
(AUTHOR’S NOTE : In serial they paired Saanchi and Veer.But we all are KAANCHIANS(Kaanchi Lovers).This TS is totally opposite from serial.I know you all are disappointed.To chill all your moods “A small gift from my side”.Hope you all will like it…)
“Faith and Hope”…
The story starts :
A beautiful mandap is shown,decorated with beautiful flowers.
One side,Saanchi is coming to the mandap area with her Mother Jaya.
And the other side,Kabir is coming to the mandap area with his Mother Kusum.
Both are looking beautiful in their marriage dresses.But one thing is missing in their faces that is their beautiful smile.
Both lost in their own thoughts.
(Kabir in mind : Today Saanchi is looking more beautiful in her wedding dress.I don’t know,how to react to the present situation?One side i am going to marry a girl whom i love?Other side she loves someone else.This hurting me much.She is doing this marriage for her Mother Jaya.I looked into her beautiful big eyes,which are filled with tears,guilt and pain.I can’t neither stop this marriage nor can say whole truth to Veer.I am helpless…)
(Saanchi in mind : Don’t know from where to where my life journey going on?I am going to marry Dr.Kabir in few minutes.It’s killing me from inside.I can’t digest this fact.I Love Veer but i can’t confess him.Really God!You are great…What fate you wrote on my forehead?I am troubling that pure soul(Kabir)one side.What i did to him?Nothing…But he always supported me in my good times and bad times…I am so sorry Dr.Kabir for spoiling your life…)
Both reached Mandap area with their mothers.
Kusum keeps her hand on Kabir’s shoulders.Kabir came back to his senses.
Kabir is sitting in Mandap.
Jaya made Saanchi sit beside Kabir.
Kabir looks into Saanchi’s eyes.Saanchi too looks into Kabir’s eyes.
Just then,
Pandiji started Pujja with Veda mantras.
Panditji gave flower petals to Kabir and Saanchi.
They are performing Pujja.
Jaya and Kusum are so happy.
Panditji asked Kabir and Saanchi to stand up for pheras(rounds).
Panditji explains these seven vows along with seven pheras is the most important ritual for wedding as it sanctifies the union of two souls and also gives social recognition to the marriage.
Jaya ties their ghatbandhan.
(NOTE : I explained all seven vows.If you are interested you can read it?Otherwise read how they promised each other in mind?)
FIRST VOW :
GROOM PROMISES HIS BRIDE…
Kabir promises Saanchi that “I WILL CHERISH YOU AND PROVIDE WELFARE AND HAPPINESS FOR YOU AND OUR CHILDREN”.
(Kabir in mind : I don’t care if you love me or not?But i will do all my duties as husband.I will try my best to keep you happy.)
BRIDE COMPLIES IN RETURN…
Saanchi promises Kabir that “I WILL TAKE THE RESPONSIBILITY FOR OUR HOME AND ALL HOUSEHOLD,FOOD AND OUR FINANCE”.
(Saanchi in mind : I don’t love you but i care for you.I will do all my duties as wife.I will try my best to keep YOU and your MAA happy.)
SECOND VOW :
Kabir promises Saanchi that “WE WILL PROTECT OUR HOUSE AND CHILDREN TOGETHER”.
(Kabir in mind : What ever the situation might be?I will protect you.)
Saanch in return promises Kabir that “I WILL BE THERE BY YOUR SIDE AS YOUR COURAGE AND YOUR STRENGTH”.
(Saanchi in mind : In your tough times i will stand as your strength.)
THIRD VOW :
Kabir promises Saanchi that “WE MAY GROW HEALTHY AND PROSPEROUS AND STRIVE FOR THE EDUCATION OF OUR CHILDREN”.
(Kabir in mind : I will take care of your health and will try to keep you happy.)
Saanchi promises Kabir in return with utmost difficulty and with teary eyes that “I WILL LOVE YOU FOR THE REST OF MY LIFE AS YOU ARE MY HUSBAND.EVERY OTHER MAN WHO EXIST IN MY LIFE WILL BE SECONDARY.I ALSO VOW TO REMAIN CHASTE”.
(Saanchi in mind : I can’t love you?But i promise i will live as your wife and will die as your wife.)
FOURTH VOW :
Kabir promises Saanchi that “YOU HAVE COMPLETED ME AND BROUGHT SACREDNESS IN MY LIFE.
WE BE BLESSED WITH NOBLE AND OBEDIENT CHILDREN”.
(Kabir in mind : It’s true you completed my life.I can’t go that much far…I mean CHILDREN…If it really happens means i am the luckiest person in the world.)
Saanchi promises Kabir in return that “I WILL SHOWER YOU WITH JOY AND WILL STRIVE TO PLEASE YOU IN WHICH EVER WAY I CAN”.
(Saanchi in mind : I don’t know what happiness i will give you?But i will try to keep you happy.)
FIFTH VOW :
Kabir promises Saanchi that “YOU ARE MY BEST FRIEND AND MY WELL WISHER.YOU HAVE COME INTO MY LIFE AND ENRICHED IT”.
(Kabir in mind : It’s true…)
Saanchi promises Kabir in return that “YOUR HAPPINESS IS MY HAPPINESS AND YOUR SORROW IS MY SORROW TOO.I WILL TRUST YOU AND HONOUR YOU AND FULFILL ALL YOUR WISHES”.
(Saanchi in mind : I will be with you in every situation.I will try to fulfill all your wishes.)
SIXTH VOW :
Kabir promises Saanchi that “NOW THAT WE HAVE TAKEN SIX STEPS TOGETHER.YOU HAVE FILLED MY HEART WITH IMMENSE JOY”.WILL YOU DO THE KINDNESS OF FILLING MY HEART WITH SUCH HAPPINESS ALL TIMES?
(Kabir in mind : We have taken steps together.I am so happy.You no need to keep me happy all times?
I just want your happiness.That’s it…)
Saanchi promises Kabir in return that “I WILL ALWAYS BE BY YOUR SIDE”.
(Saanchi in mind : It’s true.)
SEVENTH VOW (LAST VOW) :
Kabir promises Saanchi that “WE ARE NOW HUSBAND AND WIFE FOR SEVEN BIRTHS AND ARE ONE.
YOU ARE MINE AND I AM YOUR’S IN EVERY WAY”.
(Kabir in mind : I am your husband and you are my wife.But i am promising you,i will never try to take this as advantage.We are one for name.When you will accept this relation?Then we will become one in every way”.)
Saanchi promises Kabir in return that “AS GOD IS WITNESS,I AM NOW YOUR WIFE.WE WILL LOVE HONOUR AND CHERISH EACH OTHER FOREVER”.
(Saanchi in mind : I am your wife in all ways.I can’t love you but i will respect you and will keep your respect.)
“7 Vows with 7 Pheras(rounds) completed”…
Panditji asks Kabir to make Saanchi wear Mangalsutra.Kabir makes Saanch wear Mangalsutra and fills her maang with Sindhoor.Saanchi closes her eyes.
Panditji says this marriage is completed.You both are husband and wife from now onwards.Kabir and Saanchi looks at each other.
Jaya and Kusum looks so happy.
Just then,
Ayesha comes there with anger.
Ayesha : Saanchi i did wrong by trusting you.Veer left me in Mandap because of you.Here your marriage completed.You don’t have any right to stay with Kabir happily.
Ayesha shoots Saanchi in anger.
She shoots Saanchi near heart.
Saanchi was about to fall down,Kabir holds her.
All shocked to the core.
Kabir cries and says “Saanchi you can’t do this to me?I LOVE YOU SAANCHI.I LOVE YOU SO MUCH.I CAN’T LIVE WITHOUT YOU.SAANCHI…PLEASE OPEN YOUR EYES…PLEASE…
Tears falling continuosly from Saanchi’s eyes listening to Kabir’s words.
Ayesha Laughs…
PRECAP : Dr.Kabir saves his wife.Ayesha truth out.Ayesha tells whole truth to everyone about Gayathri and Malohtra.
……NEW BEGINNING……
I hope you all like it.I know this is short one.I just showed their feelings.Please give your valuable comments if you like…I will post next part tomorrow…
Till then,KEEP SMILING HAVE A GOOD DAY…
LOVE YOU ALL…BYE…TAKE CARE…
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40 Comments
Superb and awesome..
The description of the vows was fabulous… Post soon.. Take care…
Hi Aafiya.Thank u so much dear.Glad u liked it dear.I will post soon.Bye.Take care???
Wonderful superb the pheras part was just remarkable post soon
Hi Sanu.Thank u so much dear.Glad u liked it.
I will post soon dear.Bye.Take care???
Heyy!!! sakash u wrote each and every scene very beautifully dear….but today/ tonight it’s black day/night for all of us…..so mood abhi tak theek nahi hua…so I hope u understand for not giving u good comment…..sorry friend.
Hi Anee.Thank u so much dear.Glad u liked it dear.Yes dear whatever u said is true.I can understand dear.According to serial,they paired Sanveer.We can’t do anything?But we can write stories on Kaanchi.You gave me good comment dear.No need to say sorry Friend.Bye.Take care dear???
Thank u so much for this one…let’s the makers do whatever they want hum kanchi ko. Kisi book ki lead pair ki tarah imagine Kar lenge
Hi Srija.U most welcome dear.Hum kuch bhi nahi karsaktae according to serial track.But Kaanchi pair is best.Yes dear whatever u said is true.And thank u so much for commenting.
Bye.Take care dear???
Atleast this gave us relaxations
Hi Pari.Thank u so much for sharing ur view dear.I am glad that my TS gave u relaxation.
Bye.Take care dear???
Thanx for this but I’m truly upset with today’s episode i mean every thing was going perfect but they did what they want to i seriously don’t want to think about it…. But ur fs is really nice i wonder why they don’t put such interesting things in show anyways know its just fanfic. …plz try to post regulag kyonki ab yahi ek sahara h
Hi Apsara.U most welcome dear.I can understand dear.Yes everything going perfectly.But they did what they wanted?We can’t do anything according to serial track?But we can write our Kaanchi stories.
I will try to post regularly dear.Thank u so much for commenting and sharing ur view.Bye.Take care dear???
It did lighten the mood a little… I wished this happened in the serial also
Hi Amnaa.I am glad that my TS lighten your mood.To make you all happy i wrote this?If this happened in serial then we all celebrates this time.Anyways we can’t do anything according to serial track.Thank u so much for sharing your view dear.Bye.Take care dear???
superb story….
Hi Dhruti.Thank u dear???
thanx
i am happy to read it
plzzz post next part soon
and i want to ask when will u update ur other kaanchi ff
other than meri maa ka sapna
waiting
Hi Vanu.U most welcome dear.Glad u liked it dear.Thank u so much dear.Sure dear i will post next part soon.
I will post FF after completing TS.If i get time i will give continuous updates.Bye dear.Take care???
You create a magic today, this ts gives some kind of relief thanks for writing this. Please post next part soon
Hi Samidha.My pleasure dear.U most welcome dear.I am glad that my Ts gave relief to u.I will post next part soon dear.Bye.Take care???
good story
I wanted the serial to proceed like this but alas it’s not in our hands
anyway update soon
Hi Aayu.Thank u so much for commenting dear.Glad u liked it.Yes dear whatever u said is true.I will post soon.Bye.Take care???
Loved this episode.Keep writing dear.???
Hi Sanyukta.Hope you never mind by calling you by this name?Thank u so much dear.I will try my best dear.Thank u…Bye.Take care dear???
Dear u can call me anything whatever u would like to call.Eagerly waiting for next episode .Really cvs has made pappu of Kaanchi fans.
Thank u dear.I will post today.You said true dear they really made all Kaanchi fans pappu.
KAANCHI is the best pair.I don’t know why they paired Saanchi with Veer?
o7m bhai….i em happy dat u wrote dis 4 us…yesterday’s epi broke my heart hnto million pieces bt cnt do anythng…dis was grt…po6st nxt one soon…tc bhai
Hi Mannat.Thank u so much dear.Glad u liked it dear.Yes dear i wrote this Ts for all of u.I am glad that u all liked my attempt.I can understand dear but we can’t do anything according to serial track.Thanks dear.I will post soon dear.Bye.Take care dear???
mind blowing…..your TS makes me relax now….but still upset
Hi Mahin.Thank u so much dear.Glad u liked it dear.I am glad that my TS gave u relaxation.I can understand dear.I will try to set all your moods by giving nice stories.Bye.Take care dear???
Track gone wrong in the show But,here the story is on right track keep writing kanchi ff/os on TU
Hi dear.You said true.I am glad that u liked it.
Thank u so much for commenting dear.I will try my best to give u all good stories of Kaanchi.Bye.Take care dear???
just loved it..and post next one soon can’t wait
Hi Swethaa.Thank you so much dear.Glad u liked it dear.I will post soon dear.Bye Take care dear???
Hyy bhai.. I’m commenting very late… Actually I read yesterday midnight only n seriously this made me feel very light. We have a group of Tu girls on insta n some of us have made fc for kaanchi including me. N yesterday we poured out all our frustration there n the worst was that some sanveerians were consoling us… had hoti h.. sanveer mil gye phir b hume chain se nhi jeene de rhe. But let it be on TU only kaanchi will Unite. Here no one can separate them. N now I have decided never to watch RSTF shows in future.
See how much I talk.. ur ts is awesome bhai… loved your gift.. n now pls post soon. Eagerly waiting for it. Bye take care ??
Hi Priya.U r on time dear.I am glad that u liked it and feel better dear.Oh ok…So u all made FC…Oh…They are consoling us because in serial they paired Sanveer.But dear we r not that much weak.Here from starting to till now 100% are Kaanchi FF’s.Only few people write Sanveer FF’s.U said right dear in TU only KAANCHI will unite and none can seperate them.Yes she gave false hopes to fans.At last moment she changed whole story.
U r my sister.U can talk how much u want dear.As it is our TS.Thank u so much dear.I am glad u liked my Gift???Actually i tried to post today but due to some works i stopped.I will post it tomorrow.Sorry for that.Bye.Gud n8.Take care dear???
First a big wala thanks to u sakash for advice me not to leave this tu………it’s really so so amazing and superb story yaar……..it’s give me some relief about kanchi ………..kash it’s happens in real serial……….post your ff soon dear…….tc dear
Hi Anu.It’s ok dear.I don’t want to lose such a good friend like you?I am happy that my friend is back with her beautiful comment.
Dear we can’t do anything according to serial track.But we can post Kaanchi stories here.Yes if it happens in serial then all Kaanchians celebrates the day.I will post soon dear.Bye.Gud n8.Take care dear???
Yaar awesome story hai I wish serial main yeh possibility Hoti toh Maza hi aa Jata kanchi couple best hai like some prince and princess in some Wonderland
Hi Jaya.Thank u so much for commenting dear.Yes dear if this happens in serial then we all celebrates the day.Yes they are best couple.
Yes dear whatever u said is true.Bye.Take care dear???