Hiiii darlings thank u very much for ur love nd support nd really very very sorry for dissapointing many of them hear no one can be mistaken its all destiny guys nd iam I want to say one thing to swara fans don’t show pitty on swara infact u all should be proud of her that she have guits to sacrifice her love insted of telling swara is suffering u should spread postively that shehas great heart.so I just want to say that bee positive nd u all know life is full of adjustments nd sacrifices some times we sacrifice our freedom for our parents nd some times for our siblings nd after marriage for our hus nd children that is life so be happy .tnk u for all the people who supported nd happy birthday anamica darling have a great day
Laksh turned towards ragini
Laksh:nice to see u after many days
Rag gave a fake smile
Sanky:u know her ?
Laksh:ofcourse very well
Sanky:how??
Laksh:thats a long story nd we should not waste our time I will tell that afterwards
Sanky saw rag confusingly rag gave a fake smile
They started their work
At 5 in evening
Rag to Sanky:I think u should leave now dii will be waiting for u on the way take tani also with u ??
Sanky:noo there is lot of work nd I will complete it nd willl go nd I know swara can understand mee
Rag:gave a smile nd continued her work in mean Laksh was continously staring at rag nd rag feels uncomfortable
Rag:Laksh plzz
Laksh:wt have I done??
(Sanky was in another room guys)
Rag:stop acting nd plzz stop all these
Laksh:I didn’t get u?(with a naughty smile)
Rag:ok let me clear u one thing iam not interested in you nd stop wasting ur time
Laksh:but y r u rejecting me now as ur sis returned there is no need to worry about tani soo??
Rag:plzz there is lot of work lets complete that nd ha tnk u very much for helping mee
She was about to go laksh hold her hand
Laksh:do u love him???
Rag was shocked
Scene shifts
Swara was waiting for sanky .
Tani:mammaa y maasi nd dad didn’t came to school
Swara:don’t know iam also waiting for them
Tani:call papa
Swara:but he is not lifting
Tani:call maasi
Swara:she is also not lifting
Tani:then they won’t come early today
Swara:what???but how do u know ??
Tani:as I know maasi very well she will not lift only when she is busy
Swara::but Sanky promised mee that he wil come early
Tani:y ?? Is there any urgent work?
Swara:ha he told he will take me out ?
Tani:ohh if u want I will accompany u
Swara:with a smile:really u will accompany mee ??
Tani:y not I used to go with maasi where ever she goes
Swara:do u love her
Tani:haa maa y not she is also my mother
.ok maa I am very hungry plzz I will eat
Swara:iam sorry I have totally forget about it come I will feed u
Scene shifts
Sanky opened the door nd saw laksh holding rags hand
Sanky ran to laksh nd released her hand
Sanky:wt r u doing Laksh
Laksh:we r talking??
Sanky:then y r u holding her hand?
Laksh:common Sanky we r friends nd its casual talk
Sanky turned to rag
Rag gave a fake smile
Laksh:ok now u tell me y u came is that any imp
Sanky:ya my work is completed just came to rag to ask her can we leave its already 9
Rag was about to talk
Laksh:actually we didn’t completed our work don’t worry I will drop her after completion of our work
Rag :looked at him angryly
Sanky(don’t know y he is not happy by their closeness):no problem I will wait nd he sat there only
Laksh came near rag nd told in her ears :ok we will continue our discussion tomorrow
Rag widened her eyes Sanky saw them talking closly nd felt bad
Scene shifts
Swara made tani sleep
Swara(with her self):y r u doing this Sanky nd u r avoiding mee??but y??I didn’t expected this from u .u were not like this then .u used to spend most of the tome with mee but now it became very diff for u to talk with mee .I don’t like this change I want my old Sanky who used to bee with me always
Scene shifts
They completed their work
Rag:ok we wil meet tomorrow for presentation
Laksh:after that we are going out nd don’t make any other plans
Sanky:out?? But where ??
Laksh:surprise for ragini ok now iam leaving meet u tomorrow ragini
Rag gave a warm smile
Rag(in mind):now wt is running in his mind how he comes to know that I love Sanky ok tomorrow after meeting I will come to know about it
In car
Rag:omg dii have called me 11 times oh noo I have kept it in silent .
Sanky:ohh even for mee I was busy soo I didn’t pick up
Rag:u should have picked it if it is emergency
Sanky:I know y she called I told her that I will take her out but I was busy soo
Rag:ohh noo now dii will be very angry I told u to leave but u….
Sanky:common I know how to convence her nd she will be happy that I became responsible
Rag:really but I don’t think sooo ??
Sanky:y??
Rag:as I know dii won’t talk wt u ?
Sanky:really?? I know her very well she understands mee well .and she can’t be angry on mee she don’t ask explaination for any thing
Rag :all the best I hope that happens (in mind):I don’t want any misunderstandings in btwn u two
They reached home
Swara was waiting
They entered
Rag:iam really sorry dii there is lot of work thats y not lifted ur phone sorryyyyy
Swara:its ok u go nd come fast Iwe will eat
Sanky:u didn’t ate till now .what is this swara u should be carefull
Swara didn’t talked to him
Sanky:u r avoiding mee???
Swara:don’t talk y u didn’t lefted my call
Sanky:I was busy nd u r continously calling mee y can’t u understand if I didn’t lift the phone that means iam busy so y u continously called
Swara:u forget ur promise?
Sanky:common swara don’t behave like chaild I know its my fault but u should understand that iam busy nd see I returned with lot of tiredness insted of talking lovingly with mee u started arguing .he left from there angrily
Swara:insted of telling me sorry u r blaming mee??
Rag came after fresh up
Rag :come dii iam feeling very hungry lets eat
Swara:I don’t want to eat u eat
Swara left from there
Rag(in mind):what happened to her suddenly
Episode ends .screen freezes with angry faces of swasan nd confusing face of lucky
Urs darling pavani
118 Comments
Pls don’t separate swasan yaar…… I think swara is feeling insecure…… Pls continue soon…..
Ha ha ha she is not insecure but only saw loving Sanky till now but she should accept the him as he is if she really love him
Yaaar..y Sanky is bak.of Rag ??.he is nt Thinking abt Swara ?? Hw cn he ??Swara is still Alive bt still he is nakmof Rag..nt good..Poor Swara..Make SwaSan as Couple Plzz its a Humble Request..Plzz N RagLak as Couple..Poor Swara both Her Husband n Child likes Ragini ..den wat abt Swara ?? Story is nt going good ..y u brought Swara Bak if both her Husband n Child likes Rag da most ?? Make SwaSan as Couple at end Plzz
Hii unknown fan how can rag is bad nd she accepted him as he is it is true love she never expected any thing from him it is not rags mistake that they love her .
Wen m telling its Rag Mistake..its jst ur story is nt going..if u wanted Rag San den y did u brjng Swara Bak ?? U cud have made her died in Coma itself…y simply u briught swars bak n showing Her Son n Husband both t behind Rag ?? Its totally Unfair wid Swara..chng da story..n Unite SwaSan n Their Son n Make RagLak..the story is really Unfair fr Swara POV…u cud have made Swara Die if at end u wanted Rag San ..
It is ragsan ff..if u want u rd u can otherwise u ignore it dear..plz dnt hurt
Oh pls stop it….. It’s an FICTION story.. Can’t u people understand????? And btw Tani love towards rag is obvious….. Hare yar khanaji Ne bhi toh yasoda Maiya Se hi toh Zyada pyar kiye the….. I mean even though he is born to devaki he is called yasoda Krishna… Y??? It doesn’t matter that who gives the place n womb is ma… Ma vo hoti hai jo sanskar deti… Accha pal poshan karti hai… So rag loved Tani more than anybody in the world… So Tani loves her…. U people so disgusting guys….. U people can’t even think that it’s just a story….. And ya he is not hating Swara first of all… Pls read it carefully…. But Tani loves rag lot than Swara… Teek hai???? And ya… If u can encourage her then encourage… Don’t bash here…
unknown fan ur cmnt shows u r very close to the story. its her story. if u dont like this plot then just quit it. ok. dont order her. swaragini team changed the story many times then u asked them to changed the plot? then y u now told her to change the plot. its her wish. got it.
Awesome, just follow your heart and make it the couple you like
Tnk u Crazy darling ya I will not change my plot for others
Sorry fr asking like this u are saying abt sacrifice bla bla,if u hate swara character that then y did u make her character like this,if u are in position of swara will u leave ur child and husband to other woman,so plz dont make stupid excuses and plz plz make swasan unite, take ragini frm their life,i also like ragini and make her know abt laksh and make them couple
Oh god… U people r so ridiculous…. Strdy only somebody Ask the same qn… Y People r asking that If u were at Swara place???? May I ask one qn… Pls don’t mind… Story padne waale aap jaisa log itna soch sakte hai toh…. Likhne waale apse 75%bhi nahi sochenge kya??? Pls think before speaking… Hare yar she would have think 1000times before writing it.. Aap logon ko Batane ki zaroorat nahi… Let her say her pov… Pls let her do it…
And btw she is not making any stupid excuses…. Understand?? I won’t bear if anybody saying like this abt my sis…. Dear she is saying crct…. If u can’t understand it… Then that’s not her mistake…. Sab Aap logon ki soch mei hai… Pls stay calm… Bashing l not give u anything…. And btw if u see her excuses and explanations carefully u people l understand it…. Par aaplog toh swasan fan hokar hi sochenge toh usme unki koi galti nahi.. Galti sirf Aap logon ki…. Ek bar aapki swasan ko aside Karo… And then uski explanation ko pado.. U l understand….. Without doing that u people r always saying that my di is not doing ryt with ur swasan… Writers know what they should do…… And I request u people not to compare my di to ur so called Swara….
Hii mm ya I will not leave my hus if iam in her position as iam not mahann coming to story ya I don’t like swara but I want to give equal imp I don’t want to show her negative nd my view is diff to know it you should wait
Nice part wow sanskar for jealous good start plz update soon ragini is so understanding still cares about her sister.
Tnk u ankita darling
Hey diii… Even though I’m swasan and swara fan I’m not asking u for make swasan as couple.. Ur story ur decision….I respect it… I know u hate swara and love ragini… Me vice versa..and thanx for not making her villian … And I see many comments that saying swasan fans r emotionless so they r not seeing ragini’s pain .. For them I want to say something those who r swara fans only see her pain and for ragini fans only her pain.. Its common.. And I don’t know how u r going to make rags an pair.. I alrdy said I hate dt couple.. Bt looking forward how u r going to do so.. I truly wish swara could be dead.. Rather than sacrificing his husband and son… Don’t feel bad about comments.. They r not bashing u only critisizing so be happy for dt …
Tnk u anu darling nd ya I know they were little dissapointed but its ok I don’t mind
nice…….
Tnk u anu darling
I don’t have any complaints regarding pair akka, story is awesome, follow your heart
Tnk u lovely darling nd ya I will write wt I want
Awesome Superb
Don’t know what Laksh planning
Go on with your plot
Waiting for the next one………..
Ha ha ha tnk u sppspp darling
wow …nice story ….
Tnk u crazy darling
U r making sanskaar a characterless man instead of this you can show swara no more………….. Am not opponent of ragsan bt your story is something which is unacceptable Sry if I offended you anyway carry on your story and all the best bye
How Sanky became charecterless I don’t understand??
ragini is so caring and understanding. i can understand swara’s insecurities. may be destiny has store something beautiful for her, for all of them. but what is laksh upto?
Tnk u akshita nd don’t worry he is not nnegative
Hw cn shanky talk like dis wid swara..i jus dnt like him..1st he loves her nd thn marriage thn child n thn her accident..nly bcz of accident he nw move on or shud say dnt love her anymor hw cud he do dis yaar its nt done..i jus cnt take it any more.. Nd rags cn move on wid laksh as he loves her nd befr she love him so every1 cn live happily..bt as ur rags fan ur doing dis its nt done.. 🙁 🙁
Hw cn shanky talk like dis wid swara..i jus dnt like him..1st he loves her nd thn marriage thn child n thn her accident..nly bcz of accident he nw move on or shud say dnt love her anymor hw cud he do dis yaar its nt done..i jus cnt take it any more.. Nd rags cn move on wid laksh as he loves her nd befr she love him so every1 cn live happily..bt as ur rags fan ur doing dis its nt done… 🙁 🙁
Hii kittu darling y can’t Sanky scold her she is his wife right every man expect that his wife should understanding if she only not understands him then wt can he doo
Awesome nd follow ur stry di… nd don’t explain ur self always… its totally ur pov, if someone doesn’t want to understand this… thn this is their prblm not urs…keep going
Tnk u piya darling
Yaar l want to ask something to all swara fans. Pls any swara or swasan fan can newer me this. Yaar tell me in serial when ka vita nterd the show u all said that she is becoming a hurdle on swasan life . U said that ka vita shld understand that Sanskar has move on with Swara and two years is a long time to forget sm1. So this is the same case here, why are you all getting hyper then? Sans kar thought that swara is dead and in that period he started having feeling for Ragini who was his legal wife just like swara in the serial. When he came to know that swara was alive he was happy for her just like he was for ka vita in the serial? But wasn’t he uncomfortable when ever ka vita came near him like swara is coming near him? And you cannot say he didn’t loved ka vita but just liked he loved swara in this ff? So do all ur justification for right and wrong depends on the fact the character is of Swara or ka vita or ragini? Pls pls answer me this who were a long comments in previous epi asking pavani appi that she was doing wrong.???
Exactly yar point is same but answer changer according to change of character if its ragini thn wrong but if its swara thn its totally justified
i totally agree with u amna….if swara or swasan fan can accept the fect in serial than why not here in ff….if anyone think that it injustice toward swara than it happened with kavita in original serial but still everyone accept swasan also swara…
but here they are blaming ragini for the situation n pavani for writing like that…seriously its total nonsense
sorry pavani Di…
No need of sorry darling
in the show kavita was not sanskar’s wife.. but swara was his wife.. there is huge difference in between gf and wife..
Jwala appi l respect u a lot but l totally hate this concept u shld be with a person or love a person whom you are married to. I know there is huge diff bt ween wife nd gf bt love is same in both conDitton. Nd l personally believe that it is not necessary u love the person whom u are married to.
Hii jwala my point is how they understand each other did they really know each other
Tnk u amna darling
Guys its just a story not reality… so why we r taking it so seriously… like di like ragini character more like me but it doesn’t mean we hate swara… swara is just a character… so take a chill pill..nd there r so many swasan story.. so read those nd stop bashing… nd it jst my opinion
Nice story di. Plz contine ur story as ur wish. I am waiting for next part.
Tnk u ima darling
Dear swasanians plz don’t read tis ff if u hve any prblm…..just don’t spread negativity….let her do her job in peaceful way …..I’m nt swasan hater…itz just tat I like ragsan r raglak mre….pavani akka nice episode loved it….luking forward to c hw u ill end up wit ragsan..
Tnk u s priya darling
nice episode….
don’t know what laksh has placed gore ragini…waiting for that
Its very bad to see sanky avoiding swara.. He is doing wrong with her.. It was sanky who forcefully married her.. She had to face all unexpected in life.. Her love and son is her life now.. She was never at fault.. Again if she loses them means its ridiculous.
Hope u got my point..
Plz unite swasan n ragya.. N dont let sanky fall for rags.. Let him know its juz attraction n that his life is swara..
:)..
Tnk u siddhus I think u didn’t get my point I just want to how they understand each other nd love is also a responsibility
Nice epi. I liked how you have show the different places both Swara and sanskar are at right now. And it is real. For Swara she is still in the just married space as she would be. She was Just married for a year when she got hurt and as most husbands he was spending lot of time with her in the “honeymoon” phase. As happens when kids come in, parents become responsible and cannot be with each other always. Sanskar is in that phase now and Swara in honeymoon phase because time stopped for her during coma. Laksh doesn’t seem to have much understanding of ragini’s comfort discomfort as he pushes his wishes looks like.
Tnk u very much azure darling ya u got my point nd I also want to say love is undeerstanding
Awesome. So sanskar is jealous seeing raglak’s closeness. Hope he will realize his love for ragini. Curious to know how sanskar will he realize his feelings towards ragini. Don’t bother about the bashers. Ur story is awesome. Keep going
Bt it is fact that in serial he is nt married wid kavita nd nt having child wid kavita..so nw tell me here he is married to swara having child wid swara he loves bt nw he is nt understang her it totally nt..u shud compare kavita wid swara nd their is huge diff btween kavita n swaras situation….think abt it
Didi u r a awesome writer n don’t take their words seriously. U r the best go head didi
Tnk u shd darling
Waiting for nxt part…
Ya it will bee soon sanam darling
sorry to say.. you are making sanskar characterless.. he is a dumb , stupid and selfish in your ff.. i don’t mind if you write a ragsan ff.. but this one swara is already his wife and she loves him.. then if he leaves her then he is inhuman.. and please say if you were in swara’s place what will be your condition? how you can be so insensitive ? because you loving ragini you are doing this..
is swara also characterless in the show then? she fell for her sister’s fiance first, then was married to sankar but didnt get over laksh. now she is sort of falling for sahil during her memory loss while being married to sanskar. she didnt consider her sister’s feelings when pursuing and acting on her feelings for laksh. she continuously misjudged her so called best friend sanskar who stood by her in every moment. isn’t that selfish and stupid both??
I understand you are a big swara fan. if you don’t like the story do not read it. she is not forcing you to read it, is she? no everything in world can go only according to what you want and the story cannot go only your way because you love swara and hate ragini.
you said sometime back to differentiate between reel and real when it came to helly and swara. i was impressed by that to be honest. what is happening to you now? why so much forcing pavani over a fictional story. is this seriously not obsession over swara by all swasan fans who are showing so much intolerance that they cannot let the author write the story she wants. when she is not even forcing anyone to read it.
Hii jwala darling I can’t understand one thing how can Sanky be charecterless in ur view?
Hi di,how is ur hubby health.OK di u told swara is not understanding so it is not true love ,u wrong if she can’t understand mean no silently listen why u married rags,that she nows their any strange reason,so she trust sanskar full .OK CE to the swara call lot of time to sanskar after all one time pick it what happen to resign of call because now only she come out of comma and not to walk properly alown in house ,so it is any emergency matter,but he no cara a about her..,not only swara,he don’t care for her son ,because he not go to pick her son in school.so sanskar don’t care of anyone.he care for rags and himself ,he is so selfish. first of all swara look beautiful, hot and s*xy
in him so he give lot of love not allowed to leave oneminiuit,but now he had no time.and how rags look like beautiful, hot and s*xys*xy in him eyes so he jealous of laksh closeness, because he already told one chapter rags is beautiful and s*x
he only sees this not any love or stupid ,that only all r called he characterless. Swara and rags they were truly loves sanskar,but he is not in true for any one.di u r destroyed sanskar character fully.he around rags because he wants her .if he really care for his wife cnfirmily he attend the call.because in office he had no work,he simple sit wait for rags,that time also not call back to swara,she only ask why he not attend my call that’s it.he got angry.he want angry and shame for himself not others.and di what wrong swara come out comma now she want spend some time with her it is correct not wrong,but sanskar only not understand her.sanskar point of view is only care and responsible for rags,not swara and even son also.so that why he go and pickup his son school.that only all r told he us not responsible persons and characterless. He feels stupid jealous oh god .now I am OK swara don’t want thus type of hubby,not even she any women’s don’t want to have this type of hubby.now I am satisfied .because any one day they will rags also,that time also they r told the stupid reasons of care and responsibility. But I hate swara in this because she will destroyed rags life to give this stupid and selfish hubby.but one di swara love is only true and purr and any type of stupid attraction .but trust wrong person that’s only the biggest mistake of swara life.
Every hus do it in stress he scold his wife in frustration that will happen in btwn every couple
Dnt disappoint darling….dnt bother about basher they always like this only…plz swasan nd swara mahan fans dnt read it plz plz..dnt hurt
Venni di saw ur cmnt n last part… Haha hi-fi di……
Tnk u venni darling don’t worry I don’t mind all those comments I will stick to my story
Y dnt they(swasan,swara fams) understand ..it is a fiction not real..they wrote as they wish…
THIS IS A RAGSAN FF..IF U WANT TO READ THN READ OTHERWISE IGNORE IT..PLZ STOP BASHING
pavani dear dnt hurt..they bash not only u thay also bash dhanya(varun wife) and namish also..i dnt understand wats their problrm
Here swasan fans r not bashing anyone .. And we don’t have any prlm with rags an, if swara is dead…. It is justifying… If swara is dead and it became rags an we don’t have any prlm .. We w’ll just ignore it and read swasan ff .. Many of swasan fans trying to say unite swasan only b’coz swara is alive nd swasan have a child… And mostly even though rags an married they have no marital relation and lucky loved ragini …pavani di said that till now san having no feeling for ragini …. So make it swasan and raglak .. Anyway I w’ll not say her to make swasan .. Its her story her decision.. I respect her feelings.. We swara fans feels swara’s pain and ragini fans feel her pain.. Its natural .. Anyway looking forward how she’s going to make rags an .. No hard feelings .. And all de best diii.. Don’t feel bad for any comments they r just expressing their feelings
anu dear swasan fans are calling pavani insensitive, stubborn. they are implying a lot more things with their comments. if that is not bashing what is. just because some silly silly fans are bashing the actors (which is wrong) is no justification to start also bashing people here. and over what? FICTIONAL characters? please tell me how many of the swasan fans thing swara is going to come alive and be their best friend or stand by them when they are down or appreciate them when they do something good. the people here – the REAL people here who, if you really make friends with them, even when they are virtual will stand by you a lot more than swara, or sanskar or ragini or laksh will. fighting over a fictional character and a fictional story ending???? that is a bit too much!! would these same people who are doing this, be okay if the favour was returned to them? think about it. sharing opinion is one thing. ordering someone to behave only a certain way is quite another. think about it. i am not saying this about you. i know you are really sensible. but it is genuinely sad to see such behaviour.
Hi anu darling its ok I don’t mind
And sorry to say siri dear.. Some fans of every fandom done bashing.. Helly varun tejaswi namish and dhanya became victim of it..
Hii siri iam not hurt nd I don’t bother to those comments also
Guys it’s ff nt real story u cannot impose any writer to write as u wish .it’s her story & let her be the writter stop interfering in story & impose her to write it as usual wish & first stop Bashing! ! If u want u r own one just write up u r own story & coming to this one characters aren’t responsible it’s the circumstances which r responsible 4 the outcome. & still u don’t like then stop reading it instead of bashing. Coming to today’s epi it’s awsm as always akka & don’t worry there r lot of people liking the plot.
Tnk u megha darling
Yaa it’s just a story think abt it dnt blame anyone and di it’s good dnt feel bad listn to your heart I think u justify both the characters at the end so we have to cooperate her she didn’t completed the story nd thanks di for the nice story
Tnk u arshiiarshii darling