FALLING FOR YOU
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Mishu n veer gets shocked hearing sanky’s voice.. Sanky was fuming in anger..
Veer: (stammers) sans sanskar…. le.. let me explain..
Mishu is even puzzled seeing sanky’s reaction..
Mishu: bhai Wat hap
Sanky:(interupts) just, just shut up.. Wats going on here??
Veer: sanskar, listen to
Sanky: (cuts off) stop it veer.. I dint expect this from u…
Mishu: (pleading) but bhai
Veer:(gets teary eyes) sanky, just once..
Sanskar turns away showing his hand to stop from speaking further..
Swatan comes hearing their voices.. They could see sanky making faces n mishvee tensed face.. Mishvee could see sankys back n swatan are opposite to the trio.. So they could see everyone’s face…
Veer: sanskar, I dint mean to hur
Sanky :(interupts) u hurted me veer.. I just can’t forgive u.. How could u.. ??
Mishu: but bhai u were hap
Sanky:(cuts off n turns) shut up mishu.. I dont know my sister is grown up so much tat she have started hiding big things from me..
Mishu widens her eyes.. N swatan were giving reaction like someone snatched their chocolates.. Swara couldn’t take it anymore seeing veer’s teary eyes.. She rushes towards him..
Swara: sweetu, relax..
Veer: angel, I really dint mean to hurt him..
Sanky : don’t bring her in between veer. I just can’t believe my best frnd did this to me..
Swara : enough sanskar. Can’t u see him.. He is
Sanky: stop it swara.. I dint know, u will also support him..
Swara: sanky.. Wat the.
Sanky: look veer, becoz of u ,she is fighting with me.. My swara is fighting with me, becoz of u… All are against me,just becoz of u.. . I just(stamps his foot) I hate u all.. (leaves from there…)
Veer gets totally shattered.. He keeps on denying the fact.. But as soon as sanky leaves,he gets shocked..
Mishu: veer he is just ac
Veer:(cuts off) enough mishu.. I lost my frnd.. This is wat i was scared of..
Swara: sweetu just don’t believe him, he is
Veer: no swara, I did wrong.
Tannu: arei, duffer.. Can’t u see his fa
Veer: (cuts off) I just need to talk to him… I have to..
He leaves swamishtan in dilemma.. After he leaves, the trio burst out laughing..
Swara: this sanskar na.. I will just kill him, for making my sweetu sad.. Huh
Mishu: haan yaar, there is a limit for joke.. Now look ,my love story came to a stop even before it could begin. Bhai bhi na.. (pouts)
Tannu: Aww.. Meri bhabhi.. Don’t worry, ur darling will come running to u, after being pranked.. ?
Mishu blushes..
Meanwhile veer goes to Sanky n tries to talk to him.. Sanky keeps On making excuses..
Veer:sanskar, I dont want to spoil our frndship, so I have decided something..
Swamishtan comes at tat time.. Mishu gets shocked hearing him..
Sanky: I don’t want to listen any of ur decision..
Veer: no sanskar.. Its necessary.. I will try to forget mishu I mean mishti from now on..
Sanky gets shocked n turns to him..
Sanky: Wat the hell veer.. Is this a joke for u.. Whenever u want, u will say I love u,n when u r over with it, u will say it was just for fun.. Huh.. I dint expect this from u..
Veer: sanskar.. I truly love her.. I dont know from when this feelings started, but
Sanky:(cuts him) oh.. Ok.. I get tat, u don’t know when this feeling arise in u.. But when u got to know abt those feelings, u should have told me first.. Those devils got to know first.. N im being ur buddy, knowing at last.. How mean.. I just dint expect this from u..
Veer: I was scared to tell (realises) wat the. Wat did u say.. Those devils.. (holds his shoulder) sanskar, wat do u mean.. N u know this.. Errrr(holds his head) wats happening..
(someone shouts) idiot, he was fooling u..
Veer turns n finds a angry mishti shooting draggers at him.. N Swasantan bursting out laughing… Veer turns n look at sanskar with an unbelievable look who was smiling sheepishly .. He couldn’t digest the fact..
Swara: sweetu, he already knows everything.. He was just pulling ur leg..
Sanky: haan but still I hate u.. These devils got to know first n me at last.. (pouts)
Veer: sanskar ke bache.. U just scred me to death…
Veer just grabs sanky n starts beating him.. Sanky escapes from his clutches n runs.. Veer chases him n atlas sanky slips n falls down.. Veer grabs this opportunity n sits over him.. Some students widens their eyes seeing veer sitting on sanky..swamishtan burst out laughing seeing them..
Sanky: arei veer.. Don’t play with my dignity.. Oh my god.. Evryone is seeing Us.. Who will marry me!!! Utja veer…
Veer: my angel is their.. But I wont let u marry.. U idiot,duffer..
Sanky: Haaaww.. How mean.. I will run away with her.. Aur haann, Meri Izzatka sawaal hai.. Utt
Veer : very funny..
Sanky: Acha chal, I will make u marry with mishu.. I dont like seperating lovers..
Veer: tch tch tch …ab aaya unt pahaad ke neeche..
Sanky: huh… U know wat i should be the one who is suppose to know abt ur love.. But u dint even told me..
Veer: Im sorry sanky.. But in my Frnds u r the first one to know..
Sanky: but those devils….
Veer: don’t think abt them.. Just think they are from mishus side.. N u r the one to know from my side..
Sanky:(smiles brightly) ha; veer.. (pulls his cheeks)
Tannu: arei romeo Juliet.. If ur romance is over, Pls get up from the floor.. Evryone is giving disgusted look..
Both sanvee realises their position n gets up immediately.. They smile seeing their respective partners who were giving them death glare..
Sanky: abt kya hua..
Swara: I just hate u.. (stamps n goes away)
Sanky widens his eyes..
Veer: Wat happened to her mishu…
Mishu: just shut up.. I hate u more..
Veer widens his eyes..
Sanvee looks at eachother n looks at tannu n ask her..
Sanky: tannu,care to explain wats happening.??
Tannu: why should I..
Veer : tannu, Meri behna, my sisso..
Tannu: omg.. I wont come in ur cheesy words..
Sanvee looks at eachother n smiles.. .
Sanky: OK. No cheesy words.. But..
both sanky n veer takes out big chocolate n shows her.. Tannu grins seeing those chocolate n snatches from them..
Sanky: ab to bata!!
Tannu : they are angry with both of u..
Veer: kya??? But y??
Tannu: this answer is enough for this chocolate .. Bye..
She runs away… Sanvee goes towards Swamish who were waiting for them in the parking.
Sanky: swara, my sweetheart Wat happened..
Swara: sweetu,i want to go home..
Veer: angel, wat happened..!??
Swara: are u going to start or not..
Veer: angel, plsssss. Wats our mistake, in this.. (looks at mishu)
Mishu: mistake.. Bhai u guys r impossible.. Bhai let’s leave to our house…
Sanky:arei let us know our fault.
Swara : fault.. .??? Huh.. First u make my sweetu cry n u r calling us devils.. U duffer.
Sanky smiles naughtily n goes towards her ..
Swara: just stop smiling n don’t dare to come close ..
Veer: OK. Now wat did i do.. ??
Mishu: wah.. Wat did u do.. ?? U told him, tat u will forget me !! I just hate u!!
Veer: arei mishu, I’m sorry..i dint mean it..
Mishu: swara, ask them to start the car..
Swara: they won’t start mishu, come lets go by bus..
Sanky: no need of tat.. Get in..
The whole time tannu was busy eating the chocolate.. Swamishtan gets into the car along with sanvee..
Tannu: veer, wat abt our car.. (while eating chocolate)
Veer:(gives her death glare) I wil get it later..
Tannu:hokay…
The whole drive sanvee n Swamish were having eyelock through the mirror.. Sanky plays “kaise batayen ki Tujko chahe, yaara batana paaye ” in the car..
Swamish melts a little… Evryone reach Swamish house. Mishu goes with swara to khanna house, leaving sanvee behind.. While tannu informs her mom tat she is going to swara’s house.. The girls goes to swara’s room n settle themself. They start eating the chocolate snatching from tannu.. The whole way ,they were controlling themself for their stupid ego..
Now they are back to their own avatar n troubling tannu for their share.. Shemish n sinson have went out of station n will return after two days…. Sanvee comes n peeks in their room.. They get shocked seeing these girls laughing n giggling leaving them in a sad mode..
Sanvee plans to convince them at any cost. They bribe tannu with chocolate n ice cream.. Atlas Tannu agrees n takes mishu to guest room with an excuse.. Tannu pushes mishu in the room n locks from outside..
Mishu gets scared being in dark.. She bangs on the door.. But no response.. Suddenly the lights gets on n she gets happy seeing the decoration.. The whole room was beautifully decorated with red roses and heart shape balloons.. In the middle veer was standing with a red rose n an intense smile crept in his face.. Mishu gets lost in his Charm n they have a cute eyelock…
Meanwhile sanky enters swara’s room n locks the door.. Where as swara is in bathroom to freshen up.. Swara comes out from bathroom n sankys jaws drop seeing her in bathrobe which is till her thighs n his heart skips a beat.. He stops blinking n swara was humming” kaise batayen” song.. She turns n shouts seeing sanskar
Swara:ahhhhhhh…
Just then sanky breaths out.. He just turns away…
Sanky: I.. M.. I’m. Sorry.. I dint see anything..
Swara: out..
Sanky: Im sorry swara..
Swara: arei. First u go out..
Sanky: (turns n goes towards her) first u say u r not angry with me..
Swara: sanskar, if u don’t go out, I will be more angry..
Sanky:(pouts) waise u r looking hot. (giggles)
Swara looks down herself n widens her eyes.. She takes out blanket n covers herself..
Sanky smiles naughtily n goes towards her, while she moves back..
Swara: sanky, im really angry on u.. So go away..
He moves fwd n Atlas cages her against the wall between his hands.. He inhales her hair leaving his hot breath on her neck while she closes her eyes seeng him so close.. Though they have been close but the intense look in his eyes is making her burn inside n her legs are falling week ..
Where as tannu have been busy with her ice cream n chocolates..
Meanwhile veer come towards mishu.. She recalls his words n turns away.. Veer pulls her into him n she hits his chest..
Veer : Im sorry…(kisses her cheeks)
Mishu jerks him..
Veer:A beautiful rose for a beautiful girl.. (fwds the rose )
Mishu: I hate u..
Veer: but I love u.. Im ready to fight with the whole world for u..
Mishu : u will again cha
He pecks her lips leaving her startled..
Veer: I won’t…
Mishu just blinks n couldn’t get wat happened just now.. She just jerks him n turns away.. Veer gets sad..
Veer: Im sorry mishu..
He turn her towards him n sits on his knees..
Veer: I know, I did wrong. But it will be my last mistake. I promise u, to be in all ur ups n downs ..will love u till eternity. I dont know, will I be alive to spend my whole life with u, but i promise u tat, I will love u till I turn into dust..
Mishu gets teary eyes n falls on her knees n beats him on his chest. He smiles naughtily…
Veer: Will u give me the honor to love u, to hold u n ( smiles intensely) to kiss u..
She couldn’t control anymore. She just hugs him by putting all her weight on him.. He reciprocate it with equal passion .
Meanwhile, Swara was breathing heavily due to sankys closeness. Sanky touches her cheeks sensuously with his thumb.. He wrap one of his hand around her waist n pulls her more closer.. Swara closes her eyes tightly,not able to face his intense gaze.. Sanky smiles seeing her childish behavior.. He kisses her eyes.. She opens it immediately n they both share an eyelock.. He leans towards her lips while she closes her eyes again. But he murmurs sorry with an inch closer to her lips.. Both stares at eachother.. Seeing him making a cute puppy face, she smiles .. He gets happy n pecks her lips..
Sanky: thank u…
Swara: I love u…
Sanky :(pecks her lips) I love u too…
Swara: Im sorry. I just overrated..
Sanky: I know, u cant see ur sweetu crying..
Swara: haan, I dont know…. It’s just tat..
Sanky: Acha baba, I can understand.. I was just teasing him. But madam got so serious.. (hugs her)
Swara: Acha, now leave me.. I have to change..
Sanky: no need.. This is far better..
Swara: shameless.. Now let me change. Get out right now..
Sanky denies.. Swara pushed him..
Sanky : tannu have locked it from outside..
Swara: Wat. Tannu ki bachi.
Sanky: u just leave her. Now change, I wont see u..
Swara: very funny.. Oh god.. Wats this sanskar.. Acha u get inside the washroom, till then i will change..
Sanky : no.. (Denies like a small kid)
Swara sighs N pouts..
Sanky : Acha, if I go ,wat u will give..
Swara: watever u want.
Sanky:(smiles naughtily) really..
Swara: huh.. Don’t ever think in wrong way.
Sanky pouts..
Swara: now go..
Sanky: I will select the dress for u..
Swara: OK..(realises) Wat??
He smiles naughtily.. He takes out a crop top n a small skirt till her thighs n gives it to her.. She widens her eyes n starts beating him.. He runs around while she chase him.. Her blanket falls down n she was chasing him with just the bathrobe… He finally stops n gets hit by her.. Before she could realise, he pulls her towards him by her waist.. She comes to her sense n struggles to get free..
Swara: sanskar.. Pls leave me..
She was feeling damn shy.. She hides herself in his chest.
Sanky: wifey, don’t make me crazy.. U r getting shy.. Oh my god..
He moves her hair n nuzzles his head in her neck.. She jerks him n shooks no.. While he pouts..she pulls his cheeks..
Swara: u r looking so cute..
Sanky: then Kish me.. (nuzzles his head in her neck again)
Swara: Shameless (hits his chest)
Sanky: sorry(pouts). U can change Now..
She smiles seeing him n wrap her hands around his neck..
Swara: it’s OK. But haan, don’t be sorry. It’s ur right.. But not so soon, mr.sinha..
Sanky lifts his eyebrow
Sanky : I wont leave u a single minute, when u turn into mrs.sinha… .(smiles naughtily)
Her cheeks turned red n she just blinks looking at sankys reply.. She smiles n hugs him due to shyness..
Sanky: oh, my wifey, if u stay like this, i will loose my control right now… So better, change ha..
Swara: OK hubby..
She pecks his lips n was abt to turn. Where as sanky pulls her n smash his lips on Her.. He kiss her tenderly at first n it turned out to be a desireful n a hungry one..
Meanwhile mishvee breaks the hug n veer takes out a diamond ring n slides in mishus ring finger.
Veer: I love u mishu…
Mishu: I love u too.. (hugs him)
She breaks The hug n kised his cheeks..
Mishu: thanks alot…
Veer: for wat..
Mishu: for this surprise..
Veer: its nothing in front of u. Just for time being, I did this a small one.. I hope u liked it..
Mishu: I really loved it..
Veer takes out a chocolate n gives it to her.. She grins seeing it n kisses his cheeks.. Veer pouts but suddenly she pecks his pouted lips.. He widens his eyes seeing her brave move.. She gets up n turns away.. He goes towards her n makes her face him.
Veer: very well.. I dint know my Mishu knows this things..
Mishu: I..
Before she could complete, he pulls her into a gentle kiss.. Which turns into a passionate n longing one..
After their union, evryone comes to hall n settle themself smiling ear to ear.. They had a beautiful evening with their loved ones.. This was the best day ever.. They enjoyed it by partying with snacks, ice creams n chocolates…
The next morning was yet another beautiful morning with a cold breeze flowing from the trees while the birds chirping outside.. Evryone slept at khanna house after partying.. They got up n gets ready, as today is their freshers day..
They reach college with bright faces.. Sanvee gang joins them n the girls head towards the auditorium where the freshers day was being celebrated. Sahil, farhan, Manish joins swamishtan.. They all were enjoying to the core.. So many students participated.. Tannu insist swara to take part.. But she was not interested.. Suddenly swara’s phone rings n she smiles seeing the caller id. She picks up.
Swara: haan bolo.
Sanky : where are u.??
Swara: in the fifth row..
Sanky saw her standing beside sahil.. N swara too waves seeing him..
Sanky : why u r with tat idiot..
Swara: sanskar.. U r impossible..
Sanky: Acha leave.. Y u r not participating.
Swara: Im not interested..
Sanky: can’t u do it for me..
Swara: sanky. Im telling u na.
Sanky: OK leave.. (gets sad.)
Swara : first change tat expression. Can’t see u like tat.. K I will participate..
Sanky: really!!
Swara: haan.. Toh tell me, wat should i do.. Dancing or singing.
Sanky: I heard, u r good at classical dance n as well as ,sing well..
Swara: Im not… I just knw a little.. Sweetu would have praised me wantedly..
Sanky: but he was correct, I saw ur dance in his mob..
Swara: kya(mouth open)
Sanky: close ur mouth.. (chuckles) so I saw ur dance.. I want u to sing..
Swara: OK.. Anything for u. Love u..
Sanky” I love u too..
Swara gives her name in the participants list.
Later the singing competition was started.. Swara was little nervous but when she saw sanky in front of her. Her happiness was doubled. She let out the little bit of nervousness n was confident enough to sing.. It was her name to be called out next.. Almost sanvee n his gang cheered her, along with mishtan. Mishvee were taking glances at eachother n smiling ear to ear.. Before Swaras name was announced, sanky somehow manages to go towards her n kiss her cheeks murmuring all the best n runs away.. Swara was smiling ear to ear seeing his excitement..
Swara’s name was announced n the next moment she was on stage. She looks at her frnds n smiles.. Her eyes falls on her love n she starts her song…
Ho.. sun saathiya maahiya
Barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan
Rang jaaun, rang rang jaaun ri, haari main
Tujhpe main jhar jhar jhar jaaun
Hoon piya bas teri main
Ho chhu le toh khari main
(Toh khari main khari main…)
Ho.. sun saathiya maahiya
Barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan
(swasan have an cute eyelock)
Main ret si, boond ka zariya tu
Paa ke tujhe bheeg jaaun re
Main ret si, boond ka zariya tu
Paa ke tujhe bheeg jaaun ri
Tar jaaun tar tar jaaun
Dariya ye tar jaaun jee
Ishq ye paake main tera
Nikhar jaaun ri…
Piya bas teri main
Ho.. chhu le toh khari main
toh khari main khari main…
Ho.. sun saathiya maahiya
Barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan
Evryone applause for the wonderful song. Swara was so happy listening to the applause from the audience.. Her happiness has no limit.. She gets down the stage n mishtan gives her a bone crushing hug.. Sanky was so excited to take her into his arms but the surrounding was restricting his actions.. Their were so many students n teachers around the Audi.. The teachers compliment her..
Prince : wah princess, I dont know tat u sing so well.. Waise, I know u were singing it for me.. (smiles naughtily)
Swara: idiot..
Sanky was just staring her with so much love.. He comes beside her n holds her hand tightly without anyones notice. Veer notice his restlessness n thinks to tease him..
Veer: sanky, come we will go to our class.
Sanky: no way..
Veer: kya.. It’s badi mom’s class.. She will taunt us if we go late..
Sameer: Arei haan veer.. Chal sanky..
Sanky: I dont mind veer.. I’m going to canteen
Sanky gives death glare to veer.. While Mishtanvee chuckles..
Sanky: tu ja, I will take mishu with me.. (smirks)
Mishu: haan, I’m with my bhai..
Veer: mishu!!
Karan: Arei, let’s bunk the class.. Nyway mishti mam is on leave.. N veer u were the one who told us..
Veer bites his tongue, at tat time
Rohit: hi guys..
Veer: hi Rohit..
Sanky : OK, u guys talk, I will be back.. (he signals swara to follow him)
Veer: OK Sanky.. Bye.. Angel, come here,(hold her hand)
He starts talking with Rohit .. Sanky shoots draggers at veer.. He was taking his revenge for sterday.. Tannu n Rohit stares at eachother.. swara was being caught between sanvee.. They were just using her as a doll.. She was noticing Rotan who were busy with their eyelock..
Swara: tannnnnuuu!!(giggles)
Rohit comes to his sense n smiles.. Sanvee were busy teasing eachother, while Swamish where irritated with their talks.. Sanvee gang n swatan were engaged in talking along with Rohit.. He was a final yr student ,senior to sanvee.. But he was more frndly than his brother Vijay.. Vijay was making distance between them but he was still pissed with our devil girls..soon Rohit gets mingled with swamishtan.. They all enjoy until the result were announced..
One of the girl grabbed the first prize in classical dance.. Sanvee were closing their eyes n praying something.. Swara gets teary eyed seeing themm ,she just wants to hug both of them.. when the singing result was announced, it was Sanveemishtan who were jumping n congratulated swara, as she grabbed the first prize… Evryone were jumping along with sanvee frnds.. Taking this as a chance sanky takes swara to the back stage n hugs her…
Sanky: congrats.. Love u sooo much(kisses her forehead)
Swara:(smiles)i love u too..
Sanky gives her a chocolate n hugs her again..
Sanky :chale…
Swara:(grins) S.. N Thanku..
Sanky looks around before going n pecks her lips.. Swara smiles n runs away. They join their frnds n veer caught him n smiles naughtily shaking his head..
Veer : sanky, where were u..
Sanky: woh, woh.. I was. I went to drink water…
Veer: ohhhhh…. Water??????
Sanky: (murmurs) ghar chal, I will see u..
Veer: waise, y r u blushing sanskar.. Koi pat gayi kya.
This was it for sanskar.. He chases him around the campus n beats him all around.. Swamishtan were enjoying seeing it.. Later the prize distribution talked place n swara recieves a trophy with her name engraved.. She gives it to Sanky first n smiles.. They capture this moment in their phones..
Swasan in the middle,Tannu n Rohit were standing so close for the pic.. They realise it later n feels awkward. Veer deliberately puts his hand around mishus waist without anyones notice n squeezes it. She hits his stomach with her elbow.. Sanky keeps his head on swara’s shoulder at the time of taking the shot.. It was a perfect picture as SwaSan, mishvee and rotan were looking at eachother at the time ,when the pic was taken…
Evryone gets back to their house, sanky insisted swara to stay at his house. But swara was adament n told tat, she will stay at her house. N tannu will be with her.. Sanky atlas agrees as tannu is gonna stay with her.. Nyways shemish will be back tomorrow, so he gets back to his house with mishu.. Veer was in his house..
Later that night, sanky was sleeping peacefully in his bed, he gets disturbed when his phone rings.. His eyes popped out seeing swaras call late at night.. He immediately takes it..
Sanky: hello
Swara:(panting) sans.. Sankskar.. Sanskar. Pls save save..
Sanky: swara wat happened.. Where. Are u..
Swara:(stammers) wo woh woh, sanky, I I.. I’m i. He he will.. Sanskar.. Ahhhhh…
Sanky:(shouts) swaraaaaa
He starts sweating n immediately goes out making a call to tannu, as swara’s phone was switched off.. Tannu pics the call.. Till then sanky reaches swara’s house..
Tannu: hello..
Sanky: tannu, .where is swara.. N where are u??
Tannu: sanky relax. I’m at my home..
Sanky: waat. U were going to stay with swara right..
Tannu: haan, im just leaving to her house. I came here to take something..
Sanky: wat the hell tannu. (starts shouting at her)
Tannu: sanky relax.. Wat happened..
He tells Her abt swara’s phone call n he is in her house right now.. Tannu tell him tat she will reach their soon n cuts the call.. Sanky sees so many broken things in her house.. He runs to swaras room n finds her nowhere. He search her like mad.. But there was no clue abt her.. Then his eyes falls on a paper. He quickly rushes n takes it.. When he reads the paper, he falls on the ground with a thud…
Precap: Six Month Leap….
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Hellooooooo… Chooo Chorrrryyyyyy for being late.
How was the epi.. ??
Cliff hanger..???
God…!!! Isn’t it good. ???
Wat happened to swara???
Is it the end of swasan..??
Is the leap a good one or a bad one..??
Plss don’t throw anything at me for asking so many questions.. Just stay tuned.. Don’t no know when will be the next chappy.. But will try to post Soon..
N guys.. Oh my god.. Thanks for all ur encouraging comments.. Love u all…. Fisrt time my comments box exceeds 200.. N my FFY family it’s indeed ur hardwork.. ?…
Arei sorry for not replying to some of the comments. I really feel giddy when I open my page.. Baaapre.. Wat was tat…!!! My MIL, FIL, future FIL,my 2HS,my devar n 2devaranis,my nadans AND my Dashing Sanku… Love u all… Keep supporting..!!
Lett me know whom u want to Pair with tannu
1.Rohit
2.Vijay
3.Sahil
Start your opinion abt this chap in ur comment box…???
125 Comments
Di at last u posted
I was waiting for it frm morning
Didnt read tge epi
Will comment after reading it
Di epi is fabulous
I vote for tahit
And no ending of swasan
Had a fever
So mom didn’t let me touch the lappy
So was unable ti comment
Saw other updates
Lagtha hain aaj kal family bad rahi hain
N tapasya di and me are left out
Hope u were missing me
Bye
With love
Krishna
Huh at last u too joined me
Mujhe toh lag raha tha ki main akeli hun
Now u also joined
I am too happy now ☺☺☺
Hi Krishna,How are you?? 🙂 Your sister is so busy with exams..How’s your fever now??
Di not fair how cud write such ff s
I cudn t even dream of writing such ff
The epi is awesome
Outstanding
Mishvee propsal was just fantabulous
But i hate u making my ex boy frnd cry
Di aaj kal aap meri pkd (pyaar ki dushman) bqn rahi ho aap tih baath baath mujhse mere sameer ko cheenne ki baath karthi ho
Just joking
Love u loads
Bye
Superb episode. Sanskar is so funny. Omg again twist.plz post ASAP.I’ll die with excitement. Plz plz plz I beg u post fast
Wow….???
U r really expert at writing romantic scenes…I guess ???
I am poor at guessing waht will happen in ffs but when I guess something….that will never go wrong honewali BHABI ???
BTW Enjoyed the chappy with full on mood but uh ended with a suspense *pouts*
Not fair haan ???
Lemme give u long comments till 15???……
Wahh….Sanky ka acting toh bahut achi hai…???The way he made Veer sad was really too good… (uh know we know he’s playing a prank but poor Veer…he doesn’t know na…???)
And the way they fighted…ROFL….haha ???…..
Then sanvee bribing the single girl aka Tannu ???
LOL…..very cute
After that came the romantic part…hehe
Uh r really good at that Bhabi Ji ???
And then the clg part….wow???I gave a shocked expression as I am really amazed by all those things that happened as it looked true to me not just a fiction though this is a fan fiction ???
Wanna say a lil more but will say all those in next chappy…???
Anyways superb update…???
Love u loads ???
Take care…❤❤❤
And my opinion….not Vijay ???….okay with any of the other two…???
Cutipie..Cliffhanger??I’m crying now..What happened to Swara??Who is that Swara is afraid of??So many questions.. :'( I want Rohit with Tannu.. 😀 BTW episode is awesome as always.. 🙂
Arey hum tho tumhari friends hain naa,isliye comments box ka poorna isthamal kar rahe thhe..Hehe.. 😀
As my Cutipie is here with another episode,I request all my FFY kingdom members to share their education status..I wanted to know something about you all.. 😀
As of me I’m a graduate in engineering.. 🙂
Am stepping into my class 11 (science stream – cbse)…..
Today am not available as I am going to chennai….bubbye ???
#Dharsha-Oh wow!! Science stream.. 😀 Good..Keep going.. Happy journey meri choti beti…. 🙂
Hey hii sha this episode is very nice Yarr I just enjoyed it sooo much
Sankys prank swasan and mishveer romance all things are soooo cute really I love it
But about last part now I m literally scared Yarr sooo much scared plz u know my hands are shivering now while writing this
Plz Yarr everything is going sooo nice plz don’t add any dangerous twist in it u can’t see swasan separated and morever I can’t see my shona in trouble and my sanky in tears plz plz plz
Now I m waiting for leap hope this twist will not be soo bad plz don’t make soon much suspense now okk
And yaa plz try to post soon other wise I will die with suspense
And yaa I only said that I love sanky sooooo muchhhh but I don’t want him okk u can take him but still I love him unconditionally..
Okk bye now waiting for u bye
What is this ..? where is swara??
Wowwww ! Super episode dear 🙂 swara n sanky r just awesome…. n atlast wt happ to swara ? Wt s dis leap ? Uffff so many questions r popping up in this small mind…. waiting for ur next update
Awsum yarrr……why are you not posting regularly…??? From yesterday I was waiting… Plz be post soon….plzzz….plZZZ…
I can’t wait because….I’m in love with your ff…….:p….I’ll be waiting for you Jaan(your ff)
Coming to pairs…anyone other than sahil
What happened????? Continue soon…..
It’s mindblowing…. Di how many time you will separate swasan !!! Hope this leap is for a good purpose… Rohit will be perfect for tannu…. Di try to update soon…
Rohit
Dont do something to swara.plz…….rohit is
Good for tannu….plz dr dont make something bad to swara….plz plz plzzzz
And by the way today epi was just awesome.sanvee scene was superb…..waiting fr next part…..once again dont do anything wrong to swara and swasan….thank you…..
????????? ab ye kya tha???
I felt that u will post today. I dont know how but i was missing u very much and see u r here. Great. But what was that in the end?? From where do u get such ideas. I loved the whole ep but not the end*pout*
But i am very curious to know what will happen nxt????
Plz try to write when u r free.??
Rotan is good. So i would like to see them together.???
Swasan and mishvee scenes were very sweet??. But still that end is haunting me. I hope u will post soon. By giving such a precap u have made me more curious???
Love u dear??????
ah ah nice.but don’t show rape and kidnapped scene because most of the write same
Swara kahan h?? 😮 😮
Aww….. Loved the epi as always…. These ppl are sooooo cuteeee 😀 😀 😀
I love tanu!!!! <3 <3
And yeah… no vijay… TAHIT FTW
Of c Rohit..or Vijay..but not sahil plz..meri sherni…. Hwz my jeeju? Is he taking gud care of u? Batao ke unke ek lauthi saali ek badi si “hai” boli aur apne biwi ko ache se gyaal rakho..uss Swara ke peeche bhagna chod dho…agar meri behen ko kuch ho gaya..toh keh dena ki main unki muh tod dungi… Mind it… 😛
aur meri ek special waali hug 4 Prince… My sweet roadie…meri split villa ki big boss.. If Prince needs a pair in ur ff..plz consider my name too… Apni behen ko mat bhoolna.. Its gonna b Prishu..(PRINCE N Vaishu) :-* :-* and Prince is gonna b ur jeeju… Tc.. Ramadan wishes to u n ur family n frnds. n to. All ppl who read ffy.. Luv u all
Oh my god….my dear sweetie u are the best…..awesome epi…..I know I have said it earlier too…but really are a very talented writer…
Love u
N I miss u so much….don’t be late again….u know inspite of my exams I always visit this page only n only for u::…..so don’t be late again….
N wish wish me luck for my papers…
I was waiting from long time. n finally u updated it was more den awesome…. pls update next part soon
Its goood.nd rohit nd tannu will be peefect
Di last scene was mystery
How cud u
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Swasan shud bhi always fine
Lagtha hai jiju pe sangath ka asar hain (natu di neha di and sweeti aunty )
Dadi :hai mera ghatu shaam ji yeh sanskaar toh mere natu pe lattu ho gaya aur neha bhi kam nahi har baar maari pothi aur uake pathi ko romance karthe vakth disturb karthi hain aur voh meri dusri beti ke pyaar ki dushman bani baithi hain
Kya karun ghatu shaam ji
(sry di if hurted u by this name just thought so i am writing don’t take me wrong its jus for fun )
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Aur voh sha meri
*aaj veer toh bada romantic ho raha tha mere saatg thi yeh nahi kiya
Gadha kahi ka
How will donkey know camphor s smell
Sanskaar aaj toh chaa gaya lagtha hai ki salli ka sangath ka asar hain ??
Behna.. I didn’t mind anything.. U r my lovely sissy.. I can’t be angry on u..and no sorry no thank you in our family..only love u.. Love u behna.. BTW How are u???
Awesome as usual.. Any one u wish
Hiii sha.. See again i read ur ff. Cdnt stop.. 🙁 now im going 2 handover my 4n 2 mom. If not i cdnt control my self & will faill my exams. Lols…. =_0 😀 😉
I think rohith is gd 2 tunnu.
Ur epi is awsome as always. So nthg 2 say abt it. Lv it. And dnt separate swasan. I already sad seeing it on tv.
And wt was that ha? ur lst cmnt??? I think u didnt saw my reply 😉
Here its my reply. 😉
Behen?????!!!! Sha i will kill u.. :-/ mai bhul jaungi ki mai thumara biggest fan hu.. sanky muje ye kabi nahi kehe saktha. Got it?? I think tu mere sanky ko koi wash mai dala hogi. Nahi tho wo kabi ese nahi kahonga. Shaa PLZ free my sanky 4m ur washi bandhan. 😛 😉 let him b with me. U cnt separate us. Our lv lst forever and ever. So dnd be another sahil 4 our lv. He heee. 😛 😀
As soon as i read ur cmnt i start 2 scold u.my mom ws suprised & ask wt hpn? I told her abt u and ur cmnt.my mom was laughing like hell. Tht dy wnevr she sees me she start 2 laugh. I feel vry irritate dat dy @.@ 😀
Byeee.
Lv u <3
Awsm but unite them soon n plzzzzzzzzzzz don’t show any rape or kidnapped or**** scenes
Post asap yaaryaar nice
Plz don’t.end swasan Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
I am a silent reader but i love ur ff
awesome…..tannu and rohit…..hope the leap be a positive one
i have missed you dear it was awesome