heyy hii everyone i am here again to distturb you but this will be the last time…..as…….i am quitting tellyupdates as a writter……i will not irritate you with my articles.itss my last update…..and thanka to all of u to gve me so much love…….i know many are there who dont like my articles………..so sory to them to dissapint u……and a special thanka to anahita anee and rishika for particptating in os competition…..by sorry to u both i could not post and complete the competion as there was inly two entries……..sorry to disspaoint you…….so bye…….and here i m saying bye with a small os….on kanchi……….
The whole room is decorated beautifully..with beautiful setup……a girl Is seen wearing a red saree….decorating the rooms with candels to glorify the room……….suddenly someone opens the door………a smile crepts on her face……her heart beat starts rising…….the person closes the door and comes near his wife……..the girl is none other then our sanchi………but the boy is here veer
(authors note- I know you all were expecting kabir……..but don’t worry I will not disappoint you…..just wait and read)
Veer come and hugs sanchi from behind……..both veer’s and sanchi’s heart beat start rising………… sanchi turns and puts her arms around veer…..
Sanchi-your heart beat….
Veer-yup……..u know today I will tell you a secret……..you know whenever…….you are near me…….my heart beat start raising………
Sanchi-ohhhooo what a joke……
Veer(seriously)-no sanchi….i m serious…..when I saw you first time that time also…..it happened and always happens…….so I was telling u if ever I die will donate my heart to someone…and then you can identify me by my heart beat……..which will always beat for you…….
Sanchi becomes teary eyes….ad hugs veer…….while veer smile seeing her care…
Sanchi-plzz don’t say like this I will die without you……I am nothing without you…….i love you a lot veer…..
Veer- I love you too baby…….lets have dinner…..
They does the dinner……..and then sleeps in each other’s embrace…..
Next day sanchi was working in hospital……..suddenly someone calls sanchi she is shocked and runs towards the hall…where everyone is gathered…..she pushes everyone and sees veer lying on stretcher…….with all blood on his body……someone informed he had met with an accident while coming to hospital………sanchi cries hard……and falls unconscious……..
After 1 hour sanchi gains conscious and looks for veer……..she rushes to hall where she sees her friend pragya and isha and others….are sitting numb……..savitri and anand are also their….they all looked teary eyes towards sanchi…….
Sanchi goes near savitri…
Sanchi-maaa where is veer……….
Listening to this savitri starts crying bitterly…….anand consoles her…..pragya and isha informs sanchi veer is no more…..
After 1 year…
It’s a normal day for everyone…….sanchi after the death of veer became almost dead…but pragya and isha together help her to become the old sanchi……..so now sanchi lives in hostel……….but still not the same bubbly sanchi as she was before…….as she still could not completely forget veer…every night she cries for him………but doesn’t show her emotions infront of anyone………..
So it was a normal day……everyone was working…….outside a boy came out of his car…..he removes his sunglasses and looks at sdch…he puts his hand on his heart…..and smiles………..and starts moving towards sdch entrance……..
Sanchi in her cabin suddenly starts feeling restless…..her heart beat starts raising…….she puts hand on her heart………
Sanchi-v.eer…are you there……..
Sanchu runs outside……..
Otherside the boy is revealed to be kabir..kabir kapooor a new doctor in sdch……the girls sees kabir…….and gets mesmerized………sanchi come to hall and sees everyone gathered…their….suddenly she remembers veer death when she came running and found veer lying on stretcher……….she closes her eyes in pain ……..and then controls her feeling….and pushes everyone to see what they are looking at…..
Kabir and sanchi faces each other……..they both don’t know what feelings are attracting them towards each other….they both move towards each other…….their heart beats fast and fast…..
Kabir takes out his hand for a handshake…..but sanchi is still staring kabir..kabir then shakes her….to bring her out from her dreamland…….
Sanchi feels embarrassed……..
Kabir forwards his hand….
Kabir-hiii…I am kabir kapoor…..sorry dr kabir kappor new doctor of sdch….cardiolgy department……and I think you are sanchi mishra dean of sdch…right…
Sanchi shakes her hand and smiles..
Sanchi-yes I am sanchi mishra…..and welcome sir…
Kabir-sir???? You can call me dr kabir…
Sanchi smiles-ok dr kabir let me show you your cabin
While all this was happening…..three pairs of eyes were keenly watching this…..
Pragya ,isha and……….guess guess…..ohkohk….itss anand …..he is positive here…he also wants sanchi to recover from veer;s memories….
Pragya-so new lovestory is starting again…from sdch…
Isha-yeah yeah…….sdch is hospital of love……
Ishgya-so now we have to again play the role of cupid this time heroin is same but hero is different……..
Anand smiles listening to their talk and blesses them……..
Day by day kabir and sanchi came close to each other…….while otherside ishagya tries evrrything to makes them confess…….they understood that sanchi will always ingnore her feeling……so they decided to talk to kabir……….
And finally kabir accepted that he loves sanchi……….ishagya were super happy and aksed him to propose her…..
Kabir-yeah I will but before that I have very important thing to tell her……
Isha-whats that
Kabir-I came here for a purpose……
Pragya-purpose???
Kabir-yeah that is…
They listen sanchi calling ishgya…….
Pragya-ohk kabir sir we will talk to you later …….now we should leave or sanchi will kill her……
They goes out…..and kabir lokks on….
Kabir- I have to tell the truth to sanchi…..itss very important……I cant break the promise made to my friend……..i cant be selfish……
Kabir calls someone and tell him something……..
Next day at evening……kabir with the help of ishagya makes arrangements……to propose sanchi…..but kabir is still tensed…..
Pragya-now everything is set…….noow we shall bring her……
Isha-yeah lets go…….
Kabir- wait ……one thing is left.plzz wait…..it must be coming soon….wait till that……
Pragya-no no we cant wait…we are going…..
They runs from there to bring sanchi…..otherside kabir is tensed……and here sanchi doent knows their planning……she just knows its just a simple date….with a best friend…like kabir….
Sanchi comes their wearing pink saree…lookin super gorgeous……kabir looks at her……and forgets all his tensions…….and gets mesmerized seeing her beauty….ishagya leaves from their…..kabir forwards his hand….sanchi puts her hand into his…….kabir take her to the dining area holding her hand protectively……and makes her sit…..
Sanchi-wow…..what a beautiful sight….did you do it……
Kabir-ofcourse …ofcourse not……..you two vetals did it……
Suddenly sanchi remembers how veer use to tease pragya and isha by calling them vetal no1 and vetal no.2………she stands up and turns otheside…looking at the view…..kabir understands her………and takes a guitar and starts singing……….
Enna sona kyun rabb ne banaya…
Enna sona kyun rabb ne banaya…
Sanchi turns and sees kabir singing holding guitar….she smiles….and kabir too smiles seeing her smile….
Aavan javan te main yaara nu manavan…
Aavan javan te main yaara nu manavan…
Enna sona, enna sona Enna sona o…..
Enna sona kyun rabb ne banaya…
Enna sona o… Enna sona o… Enna sona, enna sona…..
Kabir puts his guitar down and forwards his hand to sanchi for dance……..and sanchi happily accepts it….. and they starts dancing…
Kol hove te sekh lagda ae…
Door jaave te dil jalda ae …
Kehdi agg naal rabb ne banaya…
Rabb ne banaya, rabb ne banaya …
Suddenly sanchi while dancing puts her hand on kabir’s chest….she feels his heart beats whch is raising very fast…..she suddenly rembers feeling veer’s heartbeats….she looks at kabir confusingly…….while kabir only smiles…..
Enna sona kyun rabb ne banaya…
Enna sona kyun rabb ne banaya…
Aavan javan te main yaara nu manavan …
Aavan javan te main yaara nu manavan….
Enna sona, enna sona Enna sona o…..
Kabir kneels down infront of her….and takes her hand……which makes her more confused…
Kabir-sanchi……I m not good at expressing but I don’t know how it happened I have fallen for you…….i want to see you smiling….i want to see you always everyday every minute and every second………….you had became my life sanchi………I love you sanchi ….i love you…….will you be mine…….
Sanchi looks at kabir blankly but inside she was very happy……yes somewhere in her heart she also feels for him…..but unaware of the feelings…..kabir stands up……..sanchi raises her hand and touches kabir’s cheeks….kabir gets happy……..they both leads for a kiss……decreasing the closeness between them……..they kiss each other…..sanchi closes her eyes responding equally……..suddenly she gets flashes of veer’s smiling face……..
Sanchi moves back…….and stares at him blankly…….kabir looks at her confused ……..sanchi goes from their running…….she runs and runs and reaches hospital……where no one is there……she starts crying……she closes her eyes and rembers all moments with veer……….then kabir….she cries…
Sanchi’pov
Why is this happening to me……..why kabir you came in my life ……after veer’s death I was dead…….but the day you came in my life my life again changed…..you made me feel special always……..and I ……..and I again fell in love………yes I love you……but I cant betray veer……….how can I forget the promises I made to him……I promised him that I will love him always………..how come I loved you…….why why why………
suddenly someone taps her shoulder…..she see a nurse holding a file……
Nurse-mam someone came asked to give this file to kabir sir……can you plss forward this to him….sanchi takes the file and the nurse leaves….
Sanchi opens the file…….and reads and is hell shocked……….the file is regarding kabir’s heart opretion which happened 1 year ago the day when veer died………their its written in heart donar name-“ veer malhotra”…..
Sanchi remembers veer saying- I will donate my heart to someone…and then you can identify me by my heart beat……..which will always beat for you…….
She then remembers how the day when kabir came to sdch she felt restless……and felt like veer was their……..how kabir always made her happy…..how today while dancing she felt his heart beats……..the same feeling when she feels veer’s heart beats…..how everytime she was attracted towards kabir………how kabir proposed her…….she cires….with joy…and runs towards the garden where she left her heart..yes towards kabir………
She runs and runs….
Ki teri ore mujhko leke chale
Ye duniya bhar ke sab rastein
Main tujhko kitna chahti hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake…..
Sanchi runs and hugs kabir from back which makes kabir shocked…….sanch closes her eyes……
Sanchi- I love you too kabir……..i love you a lot………
Kabir becomes happy…..and turns around to look at her……she is teary eyes……
Kabir- but I nedd to tell you something very important…….
Sanchi- I know that you have veer’s heart right……
Kabir- how did you know……..
Sanchi shows the file…..
Kabir-yes I promised him that I will keep you happy……the only porpose of coming to sdch was to keep you happy…….but unfortunaltely this heart again felled for you……
Sanchi smiles……they both hug each other……and remaing like that…….the whole incident was seen by ishagya and anand and savitri who were very happy……..
Pragya looks at sky….
Pragya-veer……so you also cheated us……..here we were playing a role of cupid for them……but you betrayed us and became the cupid for them…….
Isha-yyes………kanchi are made for each other…………I know veer also must be very happy seeing them…..
Both ishagya shows thumbs up towards sky…..a shooting star passes……
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This is not fair yaar ………how could you do this yaar you left us………… please yaar don’t leave us we need you and your writing ………. please yaar don’t do this with us please please please please please please please please please please please come back soon dear…………this story is really amazing,so so appreciable…………… please yaar write some other story……….we are all eagerly waiting for you…………. please yaar don’t leave us…………love u lots yaar…………..tc dear
lovely story but why u think that we all not like ur stories i mean i love ur stories and why u think any one who not like ur writing think about kanchians…..who like ur writing please for kanchians please please please please please please please please (upto infinity)…………….come back on TU…………u r amazing person and ur stories…………r lovely…………..we all r eagerly wait for u………..come back asap……with a new story………..tc dear…………..love u a lot………………
OMGGGGG!!!! What a storyyy yaarrrr…. But khaberdaar hume chood ke jaane kii baat bhi kii toh?? samjhiii??? Tum likhogiii humare liye….. I love your writings yaarrr… plzz write more stories like this…. till than bye tc.
Hey dear,
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Please keep writing more stories like this
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