Link to part 1…
#FALLING_IN_LOVE_WITH_MY_LITTLE_BRIDE
#Stella
HAPPY NEW YEAR everyone…!! for all those who are waiting for Mitwaa… I’ll be posting it after my exam that is on 8th Jan…!!
There is a surprise for all of you on the special occasion of New Year…!! You can find about it at the end of the update…!! I hope you will like this part as well as the surprise…!! So, here we go…!!
********* PART 2 *********
After two days…
Swara is arranging the clothes in the cupboard in her room when Sanskaar comes with a huge bag and keeps it in front of her…!!
Swara: What is this…??
Sanskaar: Look for yourself…!!
Swara opens the bag and gets surprised to see the bag full of books…
Sanskaar: This also…!!
Swara lifts her head up and looks at Sanskaar who is holding a hand-bag…
Swara: What is all this Sanskaar Ji…??
Sanskaar: (keeps the bag and moves closer to her) What did you say…??
Swara: (moving back) What is… all… this…??
Sanskaar: No, after that…!!
Swara keeps moving back until she gets blocked by the cupboard…!! Sanskaar keeps both his hands on the either side of her head. Swara’s heartbeat accelerates the instant he moves closer to her such that their bodies are almost touching…
Sanskaar: So, what did you say after that…??
Swara: Sans… kaar… Ji…!!
Sanskaar: You took my name…!!
Swara: You only asked me to call you by your name…!!
Sanskaar: But as far as I remember I don’t think so there is any ‘JI’ before or after my name…!!
Swara: Umm…!!
Sanskaar: Call me by my name…!!
Swara: I did right now…!!
Sanskaar: No… no…!! I mean just by my name without any ‘JI’ before or after…!!
Swara: Sans… kaar… (he smiles) Ji…!!
Sanskaar: Again JI…!! (he moves a bit more closer so that his body is slightly pressed against hers) Say it again…!!
Swara: (lowering down her head so as to avoid eye-contact) Sanskaar… Ji…!!
Sanskaar moves even closer so that there is no room for air in between them… He places his hand on her waist and pulls her closer…
Sanskaar: Say it again…!! And remember every time you’ll add a ‘JI’ I’ll keep moving closer…!! And you know…
He pulls her towards him tightening his grip on her waist… Swara looks at him with a shocked look plastered on her face…
Sanskaar: Stop staring at me and do what you are asked to do…!! Say my name and this time without any JI…!!
Swara takes a deep breath and closes her eyes…
Swara: Sanskaar…!!
She smiles as soon as his name escapes her lips… But the next moment her heart takes a 360 degree leap when she feels a pair of lips against her forehead giving her a light kiss. Swara opens her eyes and looks at Sanskaar giving her a smile she has never seen on him before…
Sanskaar: Those books are for you…!! You are going to college from tomorrow…!! It’s a lateral entry and you’ll be entering the second year directly…!!
Swara: But…
Sanskaar: No ifs and buts…!! Your graduation is more important than anything else…!! So get your things ready and tell me if you need anything…!! I’m going to office right now…!!
Swara smiles and nods her head. Sanskaar moves away from her and goes out of the room. She picks up the bag and starts looking at the books. Just then she hears Sanskaar calling her name…
Sanskaar: Swara…!!
Swara turns to look at him… The moment she turns he kisses her forehead again…
Sanskaar: I forgot to tell you something…!!
Swara: What…??
Sanskaar: I have ordered a few dresses for you to wear at the college because obviously you can’t wear these sarees at the college… and since I had no idea what I should buy I have asked for all different types of clothes so you can wear whatever you want…!!
Swara: (smiles and nods her head) Thank you…!!
Sanskaar: This is last time you are thanking me…!! No sorry or thank you between us…!! Now I’m leaving I have an important meeting…!! See you in the evening…!! Bye…!!
Swara: (smiles) Bye…!!
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At night… Sanskaar is sitting on the bed and working on his laptop whereas Swara is arranging her books…
Sanskaar glances at her for a while and notices her looking at the laptop but as soon as she looks at Sanskaar she avoids eye contact and starts looking at the books…
Sanskaar: Swara…!!
Swara: Hmm…!!
Sanskaar: Do you know how to operate a laptop…??
Swara: No…!!
Sanskaar: Means you have never even used it…?!?!
Swara: I have used a computer for a few times at the college but never a laptop…!! Baba has already done so much for me, I didn’t want to burden him with my extra demands…!! Beside that I never felt the need of using a laptop…!!
Sanskaar: (smiles) Come here…!! I’ll teach you…!!
Swara: What…?!?! No it’s okay…!!
Sanskaar: I’m not asking you Swara…!! I’m telling you to come here…!!
Swara goes and sits in front of him on the bed and Sanskaar turns the laptop towards her…
Sanskaar: Here take a look and tell me whatever you understand about it…!!
Swara: (looks at the laptop) Everything is fine but…
Sanskaar: But…?!?!
Swara: Where is the mouse…??
Sanskaar: Mouse…?!?!
Swara: Yeah…!! That small thing we get with computer and is used for operating it…!!
Sanskaar: Duh…!! I know what is a mouse Swara…!! In the laptops we have in-built mouse…!! See this small rectangular thing down here…!! We call this touch-pad… It’s the same as laptop…!!
Swara: This…?!?!
She touches the touch-pad trying to control the cursor…
Swara: God…!!
Sanskaar: What happened…??
Swara: It’s too slippery…!!
Sanskaar: Wait…!! Let me help you…!!
He moves from his original position and sits behind her…
Sanskaar: Here…!! Like this…!!
He keeps his palm over her palm and holds her finger… Swara turns and looks at him…
Sanskaar: (smiles) What…?!?! There is nothing on my face…!! Look at the screen…!!
Swara looks at the laptop and Sanskaar teaches her the basics…
An hour later, when Sanskaar is done teaching her all the basics:
Swara: Can I ask you something…??
Sanskaar: What…??
Swara: Why are you doing this…??
Sanskaar: What am I doing…??
Swara: Why are you being so nice to me all of a sudden…?? Everyone knows that you never wanted to get married to me…!! You were forced into it…!! You…
Sanskaar: (keeps his finger on her lips) Shh…!! Why do you speak so much…?? I agree I never wanted to get married but that was before I actually met you…!! But to be honest I’m glad that you are my life-partner…!! (cups her face) You are the best girl I have met till now, purest at heart…!! And I… truly… truly want to give this relationship a genuine chance…!!
Swara: Really…?!?!
Sanskaar: (smiles and nods his head) Really…!! Will you give our relation a chance…?!?!
Swara nods her head and Sanskaar kisses her forehead…
Sanskaar: Now, sleep…!! Tomorrow is your first day at the college…!!
Both of them lie on the bed on their respective sides…
Swara: Sanskaar…!!
Sanskaar: Hmm…!!
Swara: Good night…!!
Sanskaar: (smiles) Good night Swara…!!
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It’s been a few weeks since Swara is going to the college but sill nobody is aware of the fact that she is Sanskaar’s wife… One day she goes to the class and finds some girls of her batch talking about something… Their leader Avni is showing them something… Swara sits at her regular place but still she could hear the girls talking sitting just a seat away from her…
Ritu: Avni…!! Seriously yaar, you are obsessed with him…!!
Avni: Why not…?? After all he is the most eligible bachelor out there…!!
Diya: But I have heard that he got married recently…!!
Avni: I don’t think so…!! I just hope they are just rumors…!! (looking at a pic) Just look at him…!! Gosh… How can anyone be so perfect…?!?!
Ritu: He is just not anyone Avni…!! He is Sanskaar Maheshwari…!!
Swara turns her head instantly as she hears Sanskaar’s name…
Avni: (looking dreamily) God…!! Even his name is so hot…!! Just imagine us together… Avni and Sanskaar… Av_San…!! How does that sounds…??
Diya: But what if he really got married…?!?!
Avni: Don’t spoil my mood Riya…!! Look I have his latest pic which was published in the business magazine…!! I took the magazine secretly from my brother’s office…!! Just look at him…!! He is totally gorgeous…!! His hairs, his eyes, his shoulders…!!
As she speaks about him she touches the pic… Swara’s blood starts boiling as she hears them talking about her husband…
Avni: I wonder how good he is as a kisser…!! (Swara’s eyes widen on hearing this) I mean looking at his lips anyone can tell that he would be wonderful at it…!!
She is about to touch Sanskaar’s lips in the pic when Swara gets up from her seat and snatches the magazine from her hand…
Avni: What the hell…!! What do you think you are doing…??
Swara: (gets nervous as the entire class looks at her) I… I was wondering… what you all are talking about… So I also wanted to see…!!
Avni: (taking the magazine back) No need for that…!! He is off-limits to you…!! (leans and whispers to Swara) You concentrate on Rohan…!! I know he is a bad boy but I think he likes you…!!
Swara: No…!!
Avni: Take a free advice babe…!! Take whatever you are getting otherwise who knows you might not get even this…!!
Before Swara could say anything the teacher comes and the class starts…
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After a few days, everyone is having dinner when Swara gives RP a form…
Swara: Papa…!! Please sign this…!!
RP: What’s this Swara…??
Swara: There is a painting competition at our college after a month…!!
Sanskaar: Wow…!! So you are participating…?!?!
Swara: (nods her head) Yes…!! This is the registration form and we need parent’s signature on that…!!
RP: I’m so happy for you beta…!! All the best…!!
Swara: Thank you Papa…!!
He smiles and signs the paper…
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Since last few weeks Rohan has been trying to talk to Swara and one day when the college gets over and Swara starts leaving Rohan grabs her and drags her to an empty classroom…
Swara: (shocked) Rohan…!! What are you doing…??
Rohan: What happened Swara…?? I’m just asking why you can’t date me…!!
Swara: I have already said I can’t…!!
Rohan: (holds her shoulders) But what’s the problem…?? I’m just asking you to be my girlfriend…!! I like you so much…!! Okay…!! I got that, do you want to see whether I’m a good kisser or not before dating me…!!
Swara: (shocked) No…!!
Rohan: If it’s anything like that then I can totally show you…!!
He starts leaning towards her lips holding her tightly…
Swara: (starts crying and pushes him back) I said stop…!!
In the tussle Swara’s dress gets torn off near the shoulder… She quickly drapes her stole around her and runs away from there…
Rohan: (shouts back) Run as fast as you want Swara…!! The day you’ll win the painting competition I’ll propose you in front of entire college…!! I know you’ll win and then you won’t be able to run at that time…!!
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Same evening… Sanskaar comes back from office…
Sanskaar: Mom…!! Where is Swara…??
Sujata: She is in the room…!!
She hands him a glass of water. Sanskaar smiles and takes the glass…
Sujata: Sanskaar…!!
Sanskaar: Hmm…??
Sujata: I think something is wrong at college…!! Since the time Swara came from the college she is in the room…!!
Sanskaar: Maybe she is tired…!!
Sujata: I don’t think so…!! She always helps me in the kitchen whenever she returns but she is acting a bit strangely today…!!
Sanskaar: Really…!! Okay… I’m going to see her…!!
Sanskaar goes to the room and sees Swara lying on the bed. He goes near the bed and touches her head lightly but Swara gets up with a jerk. She starts breathing heavily, completely covered with sweat…
Swara: (closing her eyes tightly) No…!! Don’t touch me…!!
Sanskaar: Swara…!!
Swara: (shouts) I said no…!!
Sanskaar: (worried) Swara…!! What happened…?? It’s me…!!
Swara: (opens her eyes) Sanskaar…!!
She hugs him immediately. Sanskaar hugs her back instantly…
Sanskaar: Swara…!! What happened…??
Swara: Nothing…!!
Sanskaar: (breaks the hug) Then why were you so scared…??
Swara: I just saw a bad dream…!!
Sanskaar: (not convinced) You sure…??
Swara: (tries to smile) Yeah…!! You must be tired… Just go and get freshen up…!!
Sanskaar: Alright…!! You sleep for sometime…!! I think you need some rest…!!
Swara nods and lies on the bed again… Sanskaar kisses her temple and goes to the dressing room…
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DRESSING ROOM… Sanskaar finds a few clothes lying in one corner of the room…
Sanskaar: What are these clothes doing here…?? Swara has never been so careless to leave the clothes like this…!!
He picks up the dress and finds it torn at the shoulder…
Sanskaar: (angrily) What the hell…??
He instantly goes out of the room and calls someone…
Sanskaar: Hello Roger…!! Where are the bodyguards who were given the duty of taking care of Swara at the college…?? What the hell were they doing today…??
Roger: I’m sorry Sir… But it’s not their fault…!! The college management doesn’t allow them to go inside the premises and you also asked us not to let Ma’am know that we are following her for her protection…!!
Sanskaar: I don’t want to hear anything…!! I haven’t made you the head of bodyguards to hear excuses…!! I want every detail of whatever happened at the college today…!! And by every detail I mean every detail…!!
Roger: Yes Sir…!! I’ll call you in an hour…!!
Sanskaar: You better…!!
Sujata: What happened Sanskaar…!!
Sanskaar tells her everything…
Sanskaar: But I don’t understand why Swara didn’t say anything…!!
Sujata: Because she didn’t want to bother you…!! And I think its your fault…!!
Sanskaar: How is it my fault now…??
Sujata: How many times have you acted like a husband to her…??
Sanskaar: (confused) What do you mean…?? We are a bit closer than before…!!
Sujata: But that much is not enough Sanskaar…!! You both are married for almost three months now…!! Husband and wife are like one soul in two bodies…!! If one suffers, the other feels the pain…!! You have to develop such a relation with her that whether she is happy or in pain the first thing she should remember must be you…!! Once your relation reaches that level, she’ll open up to you…!!
Sanskaar: I got that Mom…!! I’ll try my best to make it up to her…!! She is a wonderful person at heart and she’ll get whatever she deserves…!! But I think it’s time to show everyone at the college who she is…!! No one dares to touch Sanskaar Maheshwari’s wife…!!
Sujata: What are you going to do…??
Sanskaar smirks thinking something…
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Next day, Swara is sleeping when Sanskaar comes out after taking a bath…
Sanskaar: Swara…!! Get up…!! Don’t you have class today…??
Swara: (pulling the comforters closely) Please…!! I don’t want to go…!!
Sanskaar: Why…?? Swara, get up…!!
He pulls the comforter…
Swara: Please Sanskaar…!! Not today…!! I’ll go from tomorrow…!!
Sanskaar removes the blanket and makes Swara sit holding her shoulders…
Sanskaar: Mrs. Swara Sanskaar Maheshwari…!!
Swara: (wide eyes) What did you say…??
Sanskaar: (smiles) Mrs. Swara Sanskaar Maheshwari…!! Do you trust me…?? (Swara nods her head) Then go and get ready…!! Believe me nothing will happened…!!
Swara: Do… you… know anything…??
Sanskaar: I’m your husband Swara…!! You are my responsibility…!! (Swara smiles) Now go and get ready…!!
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The college gets over and Swara comes out with some of her classmates when a luxurious black Aston Martin comes and stops at the college gate…
Swara: (surprised) What is he doing here…??
One of her classmates Ditya speaks:
Ditya: God…!! Look at that car…!! Who is it…??
Swara: Umm…!!
But before she could complete Ditya shrieks…
Ditya: Holy Shit…!! What is he doing here…??
Just then Avni comes there…
Avni: Sanskaar Maheshwari…!! What is he doing here…??
Ditya: (making faces) I think I said the same thing…!!
Swara looks at Sanskaar as he comes out of the car but to her surprise this time he is not in his regular formal tux but instead today he is wearing casual black jeans with black t-shirt and brown leather jacket…!!
Avni: Gosh…!! He is looking like a chocolate ice-cream…!!
Ditya: Avni…!! I think you should go to an ice-cream parlor…!! Along with chocolate you can find several other flavors also…!!
Avni: Shut up…!! Look, he is coming here only…!! Wait…!! Why is he coming here…??
Ditya: Whatever it is I’m pretty sure he is not coming to meet you…!!
Avni: So, what do you think he is coming to meet you or your not so famous friend standing next to you…??
Ditya: Why do you always keep dragging Swara in our fights…??
Avni: She only wanted to know what we were talking about that day…!! Take a good look darling because that’s the most you can have…!!
Swara: Don’t you think you should think properly before speaking…!!
Swara looks at them and then at Sanskaar… Just then he reaches near them and without saying anything he comes near Swara, holds the back of her head and kisses her forehead…
Everyone witnessing the scene gets shocked…
Sanskaar: (smiles) Hii…!!
Swara: (shocked) What are you doing here…??
Sanskaar: Why…?? Can’t I come to pick up MY WIFE from the college…!! (He leans near her ear and whispers) I told you everything is going to change from now on…!!
Ditya and Avni: Wife…?!?!
Ditya: You are married…??
Swara: (nods her head) Hmm…!!
Avni: He… He… is your husband…!!
Ditya: Now I think he is off-limits to you Avni…!! Wow Swara… I don’t believe this so your full name is…
Swara: Mrs. Swara Sanskaar Maheshwari…!!
She smiles and looks at Sanskaar who is turn pulls her closer to his side holding her waist…
Avni: But… this marriage news was supposed to be a rumor…!!
Sanskaar: (raising an eyebrow) Why is it so…??
Ditya: Looks like your Av_San is not going to happen Avni…!! But I think SwaSan suits more…!!
Sanskaar: SwaSan…!!
Ditya: Hmm…!! Swara and Sanskaar… together… SwaSan…!!
Sanskaar: (smiles) I think I love it…!! (to Swara) Shall we leave wifey…?!?! The moment Mom came to know that I’m coming to pick you up, she got so happy that…
Swara: (smiles) That she started preparing all kinds of dishes she knows…!!
Sanskaar: Right…!! So before our dining table starts getting overloaded with the dishes I think we should go home…!! (forwards his hand towards her) Shall we…!!
Swara nods her head and holds his hand and both of them leave the college premises leaving everyone gaping behind…
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At night… Swara and Sanskaar are sleeping on their respective sides…
Swara: Sanskaar…!!
Sanskaar: Hmm…!!
Swara: Why did you come today at the college…??
Sanskaar waits for a moment and suddenly turns around encasing Swara in between his body and the bed…
Swara: (blinks a few times trying to decipher whatever is happening) What happened…?? Did I say something wrong…??
Sanskaar: Can I kiss you…??
Swara’s eyes widen the instant she hears him…
Swara: Huhh…??
Sanskaar: Can I kiss you…??
Swara gulps down the huge lump forming in her throat and looks at him…
Swara: I maybe bad at it…!!
Sanskaar: (smiles) I think that’s a yes…!!
Swara avoids the eye contact and Sanskaar leans towards her lips… The moment his warm breath fans over her face she closes her eyes and the next instant his lips meet hers.
Swara’s heart starts beating crazily… She keeps her palm on his chest and she could feel his heart thumping wildly…
Swara: (breaking the kiss) Why is your heart beating like this…??
Sanskaar: Maybe because this is the first time I’m kissing the girl I like…!!
Swara: Oh… Okay…!! Wait… What…
But before she could complete he pulls her closer to him for another kiss…
Sanskaar: (whispers against her lips) I like you Swara…!!
Swara: (surprised and shocked at the same time) What…??
Sanskaar: I like you…!! I think a lot…!! And I want to give you all the rights of my wife…!! It’s been three months that we are married and if you agree I want to take our relation further…!!
Swara: You are not joking right…?!?!
Sanskaar: Do you think I’ll joke in such a case…?!!
Swara: No…!!
Sanskaar: So, what do you say…?? I mean your answer…!!
Swara smiles and nods her head… Sanskaar smiles and kisses her forehead…
Sanskaar: Then the day you’ll win the painting competition I’ll take our relationship to a new level…!!
Swara: (remembers Rohan’s words) Painting competition…?!?!
Sanskaar: Yeah… Why…??
Swara tells him everything…
Sanskaar: Don’t worry nothing will happen…!! I’m there…!!
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PAINTING COMPETITION…
Its the time for the announcement of the final result… Dean of the college announces…
Dean: And the winner is very talented, our student of second year… Swara…!!
Swara goes up to the stage to receive her prize…
Dean: Swara… We have a special guest for the competition today…!! He has decided to give a special prize to the winner…!! He is here and he wants to give the prize himself…!!
The special guest arrives and Swara gets shocked to see Sanskaar there…
Swara: Sanskaar…!!
Sanskaar: (smiles) Congratulations Mrs. Swara Sanskaar Maheshwari…!! Your special gift…!!
He gives her an envelope…
Swara: What is this…??
Sanskaar: Look for yourself…!!
Swara opens the envelope…
Swara: Plane tickets…!! Are you going somewhere…??
Sanskaar: God Swara… If I’ll be going somewhere why I’ll give this tickets to you that too as a gift…!!
Swara: Then…??
Sanskaar: We are going somewhere…!!
Swara: Where..??
Sanskaar: To the place where you always wanted to go…!! Venice…!!
Swara gets extremely delighted on hearing this and hugs him in front of everyone…
Sanskaar: (whispers in her ear) We are going on our honeymoon…!!
——— THE END ———-
This might be an end to the story but it’s definitely the beginning of the new phase of their lives…!!
The story of how a business tycoon falls in love with HIS LITTLE BRIDE…!!
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Even though my concept had nothing extraordinary in it but I still hope you all liked it…!!
And I know it’s comparatively a longer update but what to do I had so much in mind that I started writing and ideas kept coming to my mind…!! I have still cut off a few scenes…!!
And now the SURPRISE…!! It’s a new VM made by me for all of you on the new year…!! You can find it here on this page. I hope you all will like it…!!
https://m.facebook.com/story.php?story_fbid=226471194475462&id=202208170235098
P. S. : I request you guys whoever is copying my stories plzz stop it this instant…!! Just because you like the story don’t give you the right to copy…!! I have again found out that TMRDH is being copied somewhere else also…!! I don’t want any fights, any tensions from your side..!! Plzz guys, by doing such type of things you are seriously discouraging me from writing any further…!!
81 Comments
Loved it to d core…its really beautiful
Thank you so much tani.. ??
I already read this on fb but then also I read it again n its damn awsm…
All ur ffs r damn awsm..
Thank you so much dear.. ??
aawwwww love it love it love it…..thank you
happy new year
Thank you so much Mica and happy new year to you too.. ??
This was so damn amazing. Sorry for not commenting on the previous, had a busy schedule. The story was really really. I love this story. ?
Greetings for a new year!?
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• On the previous one
• was really amazing
Thank you so much Ria for commenting despite your busy schedule… And happy new year to you too… ??
awesome update. I loved it
Thank you so much dear… ??
awesome…all the best
Thank you so much dear… ??
amazing i read both the parts u r great
Thank you so much Crystal for ur appreciations… ??
Amazing ? and vm was also sooo good ☺
Thanks a lot dear… ??
Awesomeee stella ???
Thank you so much Rabia… ??
U end it too soon…… But it was awesome……
Thanks a lot Purvi and I’m planning on writing an epilogue for the story… ??
HAPPY NEW YEAR stella dr wow it was amazing ff ordinary concept but extraordinary love story mindblowing n last but not d least ALL D BEST 4 UR XAMS dr
Thanks a lot Parul and happy new year to you too… ??
Normal and casual story but u made it a clear picture.it depends on how to show cast the picture effectively from the same story and u done it.
Thank you so much Sri… ??
Awesome one dear
Thank you so much dear… ??
i loved this sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much
muaahhh
love u too di
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
hope i was there to see that Avni’s face
i was just shouting at her that time
and the surprise vm just took away my heart
loved it and love u too di
all the best for ur exams
u are gonna rock the papers
come back soon
i really feel so angry and mad to know that some blo*dy cheater is again copying ur works
really they don’t have a shame
just spoiled my mood
Thank you so much dear for ur love n support…!! It really means a lot…!
Love you…!!
Happy new year… ??
Stella di?
That’s why I love you so much!!
You are a geeeeniuuuuus???
I have told all my friends to read MITWAA and they’re all huuuge fans of urs…
And me? God I am ur li’l sister! How can I be your fan only? Arey I am ur biiiigggggeeeessssst fan!!
Give me ur powers, please!!???
Come back soon with MITWAA!!
Love u?
So sweet dear… Thank u so much…!!
Love you too…!! And happy new year… ??
i loved the vm so much
they reminded me of the happy swasan moments
and i again cried thinking why did swaragini had to end
loved it so much
all the best
Awesome Stella……!!!!! But I felt that it it not the end….. U could write a still more…..!!!!!! Try for it…..!!!!!!
Thank you so much Deeksha and I’m planning on writing an epilogue for the story… ??
yes do post the epilogue
will be waiting for it
Itz beyond amazing dr….
Tc and stay blessssed….!!!!
Thank you so much dear… ??
First of all I’m very sorry for not commenting on the previous one, this one was just amazing! Seriously awesome! I loved it to the core. You have described it beautifully and seriously I have become your fan!
With Love?
Please don’t be sorry Maria and I’m glad that you liked the story… ??
CUTE LOVED IT
Thanks a lot dear. ??
Awesome????i just loved this story..
Thank you so much seebu… ??
Awsm …loved it …
Happy new year
Thank you so much Deeksha and happy new year to you too… ??
awwww dr dis one is soo beautiful one dr!
rly lv dis os!
swasan is adorable here!
dnt stop writing bz f sm ppl! they nly knw 2 stole!
keep writing dr
be happy always
happy new year!
may all ur dreams cm true!
all the best!
Thank you so much chanu for such sweet words..!!
Happy new year to you too.. ??
awesome
Thanks a lot Anu.. ??
Wow loved it to the core…. ???????????????
Thank you so much Vidhi… ??
Wow loved it…
Plz if u can write One more part plzzz
Thanks a lot dear and I’ll be writing an epilogue for the story.. ??
Wowee Stella hw do u manage to write such wonderful things u knw I obsessed to ur stories njoy reading them a lot post mitwaa soon
Thanks a lot Neha for ur appreciations and I’ll be posting Mitwaa after my exams… ??
Awesome dear
Thank you so much… ??
Hey Stella. …MARVELLOUS DEAR. …I just loved it..I want more N more of it…so plz after your FF come up with a new TS. ..N I have a small request dear that can u plz write a OS…plz plz plz. ..I knows it’s tuff for you as you are having a tuff schedule but plz…You really don’t know that j am such a big fan of your Writing. .I am following all your work on thus site…I have never ever missed any of your update I may not have commented with this name but I have commented by other names. ..
N you VM Was just ….Hmm what can I say I am just speechless in front of your talent. ..N plz if u don’t mind will u plz tell me how to make a vm. …
N ya In the end…HAPPY NEW YEAR. ..
Thank you so much Kriti…!! At first I decided to make this story an os but ideas kept coming to me and it became a ts… ?? I can’t promise but I’ll try to come up with an os as I have to write Mitwaa also…!!
And I use viva video for making the vms… It’s a very convenient app…!! You can easily make vms using it and if u face any problem you can always ask me… ??
Thank you Stella for your reply N sorry for disturbing you again. ..
dear I have downloaded the Vivo app …but I am not getting how to make a vm of swasan …like do I have to download there pics…or Videos…I really want to make a vm of them as they always remain close to me..I am sorry if I am taking much of your time..
You have to download their videos for the vm…
amazing
Thank you so much Sneha…. ??