Hey guys m back with my third epi,,,i won’t say anything now..but at last i have an imp message…
The epi starts wid kunj narrating their honeymoon story and its in the form of P.O.V
When we confessed our love for each other i was very happy . I considered myself to be the luckiest man ever. Our tashan e shasdi had entered the new chapter of Ishq. I wanted to celebrate it with my Siyappa queen. So I told her about my plan. She seemed very excited …….she started packing the luggage. I told her “twinkle we still have time..u can do that later”. But she said she wants the trip to be perfect and doesn’t want anymore issues this time. Saying this she became emotional. I could very well understand what she was fearing. I sat beside her to console her. She kept her head on my shoulder. “twinkle don’t worry we will always be together”
After three days we had our flight to jammu. From there we boarded a car to our destination “PAHELGAON” Although the name suggests a village but the scenic beauty enchanted me greatly. A small valley on the lap of huge ranges seemed amazing!! I had never seen twinkle so happy. Her beauty seemed to merge with the beauty of pahelgaon and it complimented her in a unique way.
We checked in our hotel. It was completely made up of wood and our room had a small balcony attached to it which served as a giant screen for admiring the beauty of nature. Twinkle kept her hand bag and began to move around.. “kunj…its BEAUTIFUL…I loved the place..” I went towards her and slowly caught her from the back.. “me too love this place..bt not more than u..my wife” twinkle blushed and as i brought her closer she ran away…
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“kavya…kavya,,” usha calls
Kv: yeah masi..
U: its too late…go to sleep
Kv: bt i was…
U:no..no buts..see the time..kunj also have work…
Kv:bhaiyu..
K:kavya…we shall continue tomorrow…promise..
Kv:okay
She leaves reluctantly..
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Kunj takes his laptop and open the gallery to view his honeymoon photos …
Flash back is shown:
K: twinkle where are u..come fast we r getting late…
“m coming” her voice is heard.
K: uff what should i do with this girl…?? twin..(he turns back)…….inkle…tu..aa..ga..yii….( u…..ar..e….he…re..??)
Twinkle was wearing a knee length white dress with full sleeves and a pink and grey scarf was wrapped around her neck. Her hair was straightened and she was looking absolutely gorgeous. Kunj gets mesmerised seeing her. He looks on.
T: (clicking her fingers) what happened??
K:ahh..nothing!!
T:what were u thinking then?? Leave tell me how m I looking??
K: B E A U T I F U L!!!
Twinkle smiles… “really??”
K: ahh I mean the dress is beautiful!! (giving a typical kunj’s style expression)
T: khadoos sarna!! Tareef m bhi kanjoosi!! (can’t even compliment properly)
Twinkle leaves.
K:arey twinkle ……leaves
Twinkle comes down to the lobby, kunj follows her. The receptionist tells them that their car was ready for sightseeing….
Twinkle angrily rushes to the car. Kunj thanked the receptionist and went behind twinkle. Kunj knew that it was difficult to persuade twinkle but yet he thought to talk to her.
K: twinkle this place is really beautiful…
T: hmm
K: but i guess its not more beautiful than u…
T:oh really?? I thought my dress was better!!
K: c’mon twinkle …..I was just kidding
T: may be…bt m serious!!
K: acha? (really??)
T: yeah
The driver laughs
K: arey bhaiya y are u laughing??
T: y means?? Obio by looking at u..u re so funny!!
K: chalo tu ne meri tareef toh ki ..(atleast u complimented me..)
T: whatever!!
The driver stops the car… “sir ur first sight…..BETAAB VALLEY”
Flash back ends and back to present:
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Scene 2:
Twinkle in her room, along with RT and Leela.
T: maa papa, so today I wanna give u a surprise …
L: what??
T: (takes the laptop and opens it..she shows it to them) here u go…..
RT and Leela looks at it..
RT: twinkle this is…
T: this is an invitation papa…to Paris Fashion House!!
L: Paris????
T: maa u remember I took part in Ms Amritsar competition??
L: yeah..
T: there was a judge who liked me very much…mrs Sheena Oberoy!! She contacted me…she has her acquaintance in paris fashion house …she wants me to go nd perform there in the winter fashion show!! Nd u knw the best part..she is personally gonna groom me for this purpose…
L: bt puttar how can u go there?
T: y not maa?? Its an international platform…nd i got a chance..y shouldn’t I??
L: i can understand ..but
T: maa please I really wanna go…u knw na modelling is my passion..
L: par…
RT: its okay leela…if she wishes to go..let her go..after all she is not a kid…
T: xactly…m nt a kid..maa
L: okay puttar
T: (smiling) THANK U MAA ND PAPA!!
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Scene 3:
Leela and RT in their room:
L: mei kya ji..is it imp to send twinkle..
RT: not again leela…whats the harm if she goes…
L: u r not understanding ji..she is..
RT: no more arguments…its quite late..lets go to sleep..
RT goes to sleep…..leela is still tensed
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Scene 4:
Kunj’s room:
Kunj is in his bed..nd thinking…
Fb is shown
T: betaab valley!! Oh wow…
K: yeah m betaab (eager) to visit it
T: -_- -_-
K: twinkle…
She gets down the car. She is totally amazed by the beauty..
(betaab valley is a small valley in the core of Pahelgaon ….which is a major tourist attraction..Its snow covered sometimes and has a narrow river flowing through it..moreover the greenery of the place merges with the blue sky..and gives an azure effect to the horizon…just a perfect romantic spot!!)
Kunj thinks something..then he goes behind twinkle and starts singing matargasthi….
## song##
Matargashti khuli sadak mein
Tagdi tadak bhadak mein
Ole gire sulagte se
Sulagte se sadak mein
Chhatri na thi bagal mein
Aaya hi naa akal mein
Ke bhaage hum ya bheege hum
Akad mein toh socha phir
Geela hua hai wo sukhana ho
Chahe zanana ya mardana ho
Attention!
Phainka naya paasa
Phir de gayi jhansa
Aive mujhe phaansa
Chirkut zindagi yun na
Tu hi hai wo
Jisne khenchi meri dhoti dhoti khenchi
Abb tu dhoonde kaha bande
Na main Kaaba, Kaashi
Main twitter pe hoon
DP meri dekho ho o..
Sunn re sun beliya
Dil ne dhokha diya
Aankhein mili tum se naazani
Mere hosh o hawaas ko gaye
Ho dil ka bhanwar boley sun sathiya
Chhup na dupatte mein tu oh chaliya
Prem pujari ke dil ka bayaan
Hota raha rota raha priye
Toh phir..
Tang tang tang ta..
Ding da ding ding da.
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Twinkle ignores . she slips and was about to fall when kunj holds her….EYELOCK!!
Sajna Ve plays.
The other people standing there start giggling and some says “aww looks at themmmso romantic”. Twinj composes themselves.
K: maaf kar de na..(forgive me)
T: (raising her eyebrow) lemme think..umm I think I should forgive u..
K: u still think??
T: yeah…
Both start laughing..
SCREEN FREEZES
PRECAP: twinj romantic moments in other places….
Okay guys I feel that this epi was enough long…nd I did it coz it was a late update..again the next one will be updated a bit late..so I hope u all will be patient..nd one more thing plzzz comments..I get really demoralized when I see less comments…the last episode of my season 1 got 63 comments..although it included my comments..bt still…it was far more than my last epi..which got only 17…m bit sad for that..may be m sounding a bit greedy..bt u all don’t know how these comments helps me in gaining confidence…moreover rakshita didn’t comment..i was a bit hurt..then I thought she might be busy…and many of u..sudha di where are u m missing u nd ur comments…plzzzzz guys comments coz if this continues i won’t be able to write ny more…sorry if I hurt someone…
Best wishes
42 Comments
tara as usual u r ff is awesome and i am eagerly wating for suspence to get revealed btw i commented on ur 2 epi on yesterday i think u didnt see it once go trough it
thanks di..u dnt knw how happy I m by seeing ur comment…that also on top….I really missed u..nd yeah I saw ur comment on my last epi..
Omg Tara I m really so sorry I did not at all intend to hurt u but u know what for my exams I wake up till 2:00 am and have to study…..Nd now I have maths..Nd that’s all….no other reason….this epi was fab…..as far as cmmnt are concerned I totally agree with u in my last ff I only got 20 cmmnts Nd I m really annoyed…..btw Plss cme online on hangouts Nd do reply my msg and guys I will be making tei WhatsApp grp this cmng Friday so those who still have not given their contact no’s Plss send it to either [email protected] or [email protected]!!! Plsssssss do send I will be waiting for ur replies!!!????
yeah rakshita..nwadays so many ffs are coming up that comments are going low…bt at least tei is gaining popularity….anyways thank u so much..m happy that u commented..I will reply to u in hangouts as well.
ya rakshitha i will send it by evening
Superb Tara, u ar an excellent writter. Luv it!
thanks meenat….nd thanks for not calling me aunt…lol
Nice yaar Tara can’t wait for next episode
thank joyee
Finally u posted after sooooooo long..very nice
yeah I was a bit busy….btw thanks
Tara just loved it
Ur ffs are just awesome.
I am as waiting
.i hv an exam tomorrow so need to study but still m on tu page for just my fav twinj
All tge best for ur xams tara .luv u
Wanna ask 1 thing y r they living separate and y does twinkle dont remember kunj when he loves her so much
thanks yashika…..I think u commented for the first time….so thanks once again..nd all the best to u too….
Was waiting
aww…I cd imagine all these happening…but can’t wait to know d suspense…luv it
haha…well thats the grtst thing..coz when u imagine things to happen in real that means the story is a success…bt sorry u have to wait a lil more…
grt work tara……seems u did a lot of research on kashmir……waiting fr nxt episode..
haha lol….no dear its from my personal experience….i.e., I have visited kashmir including pahelgaon…nyways thanks…
Hey Tara how r u n how r exams going on . I m jus jus waiting to know d mystery of twinj separation. N dis episode was truly cute . love it n m toooo busy in exams . lastly I would only say DAT m waiting for d mystery to be revealed. Love ya .muah ?????
yeah simi,,m also quite busy….the mystery will be revealed soon..so stay tuned…love u toooooooooooooooooooo muahhhhhh
Wowww Tara u r fab !!! Wht an epi yr really luvd it!!! I m in luv wid ur ff
thanks suu,,,bt hey..where are the emojis?? 🙂 😉
Nxt tim will remember!! ?????
Wooowwww…Tara it’s amazing….keep it up…..can’t wait for the day when you will clear the suspense
thanks dear…dont worry the day will come soon..for nw just enjy twinj romance..
woooooooooooow tara
soooooooooo good it was
thanks sanam…
Superrrrr
thanks ff reader…
superrrrr duper tara……
thanks snehal..
wooooooow tara… the episode was ossum…. wtng fr d nxt one ….
thanks panchi…
Sorry fr not commenting.. busy wid papers.. loved it eagerly waiting
papers?? nyways thanks…
Awsum epi Tara… 🙂
Eagerly waiting for next epi…
thanks ruchi…love u..
nice tara . but it was a bit late . so i am unable to remember the whole story . and go on with the whats up group .
sorry chandra..bt for few days it will be updated late…umm okay i shall post the previous links 4 u….thanks for commenting..
woowwwww…tara it was stunning, excellent , mindblowing,,,….etc……love u loads….waiting for next episode…
thanks gopika…love u too dear..
Awesome tara twinj fan