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CHAPTER 2:
IN THE LUTHRA MANSION.
(At breakfast table)
RASHI: RISHABH today I am going to meet ARORA’s for your wedding. So this time u will not to do any mistake.
RISHABH: Mom whoever u choose but she should be suitable for me. At least some buissness minded girl.
KARAN: Mom I think u should marry brother with some buissness center. Ha ha .
(Nobody else laughs)
SAMEER: Is this a joke!!!!
At least try be to some modest.
KARAN: okay be silent.
(All laughs)
RISHABH: mom going to office. Bye.
RASHI: RISHABH can I ask u a favour don’t repeat what u did earlier plzzz. The thing u did 3 days ago with SHERLIN.
RISHABH: okay mom!
He goes. Thinking about what he did 3 days ago.
3 DAYS AGO
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RISHABH was in his room . When a girl comes and knocks his door.
SHERLIN: May I come in.
RISHABH: yeah for sure.
SHERLIN: thanks.
RISHABH: who are u.
SHERLIN: (seriously she thinks) I am SHERLIN your mother chose me for u. U understand
What I means.
RISHABH: oh yeah! Can u tell me something . Some answers I am eager to know. If u…
SHERLIN: yeah for sure.
RISHABH: Well can u tell me one thing. What is more important to u in order FAMILY, LOVE, MONEY.
SHERLIN: well ! LOVE THEN MONEY THEN MAYBE FAMILY.
RISHABH: PLZZ go . U are not my type. I don’t see any life partner in u for me love is the last and money the first.
)
PRESENT:
DADI: RASHI what happened why are u in so tension?
RASHI: what to tell u know all thing. I think I will die without seeing my grand children. One has decided not to marry and the other I don’t know how many girlfriend he have.
DADI: Oh oh! Don’t take tension they are my grand children. They are cool like me.
RASHI: I pray to God that RISHABH says yes for marriage to that Arora girl. Ah what’s her name. Yeah PREETA.
RASHI THINKS ABOUT THE PHINE CALL WITH ABHI DADI 2 DAYS AGO.
(
DADI(ABHI): Are u coming here on janamasthmi.
RASHI: sorry DADI I am in big tension for RISHABH. He rejects all the girl.
DADI: Well I have a solution to it. My bahu ,she has a sister PREETA, and I think she will prefect for RISHABH. Atleast meet her. I will message u the address. Her family is so simple and good . I am sure u will like it.
RASHI: thanks DADI.
DADI(ABHI): and come for janmasthami we have lot of talking to do. Radhe Krishna.
)
AFTER SOMETIME RASHI GOES TO VISIT SARLA’S HOUSE.
MEANWHILE IN THE LUTHRA MANSION .
(KARAN’S ROOM)
KARAN: RISHABH BHAI! CAN I ASK U QUESTION?
RISHABH: YEAH FOR SURE . U ARE MY BROTHER.
KARAN: BHAI PLEASE DON’T BE ANGRY .WHAT TYPE OF GIRL U WANT TO MARRY?
RISHABH: WELL SHE SHOULD KNOW AND ACCEPT THAT BUSINESS IS MY FIRST PRIORITY. SHE SHOULD RESPECT OUR FAMILY. SIMPLE , CARING.
AND FOR HER LOVE IS NOT IMPORTANT AT ALL.
KARAN: WELL I WONDER ARE WE TRULY BROTHERS. BECAUSE I THINK OPPOSITE OF IT. THE GIRL I WILL MARRY SHOULD LOVE ME THE MOST THAN ANYBODY ELSE IN THE WORLD. SHE SHOULD WILD AND DARING LIKE ME AND CHUBBY DO. WELL BY THE WAY I AM NOT GOING TO MARRY AT ALL. GIRLS LOVE ME MORE AS I AM SINGLE.
THEY BOTH LAUGH AND HUGH EACH OTHER.
( GUYS I HAVE TRIED HARDER TO MAKE IT DIFFERENT FROM THE SHOW KUNDALI BHAGYA ON AIR. IF U THINK IT’S NOT RIGHT. DO TELL. WELL SORRY FOR NOT HAVING MUCH SCENE OF MAIN LEAD. I AM TRYING TI BUILD THE STORY AND CHARACTERS . THEN WE ARE GOING TO HAVE LOTS OF PREETAN AND RISHTA SCENE. HOPE U ALL LIKE IT. PLZZ DO COMMENT. I WANT TO KNOW HOW U FEEL ABOUT IT.)
PRECAP:
RISHABH: WHAT IS MOST IMPORTANT THING FOR U.
PREETA: FAMILY. AND THEN…….
15 Comments
Hey…very nice I loved it plz continue I’m counting on you post soon….
Superbbb
snehal thanks and i hope u are not angry because there very less main lead scene.
I m loving it.. Rishabh’s character is totally different from serial.. Waiting for next part.. Post next part soon and plz share the link..
thanks kashu i will share the link
thanks i will surely share the link.
It is so nice and interesting. It is getting a little tough to predict the male lead. However I liked it ?
amazing superŕr I like your Ff keep writing
thanks rehmat
thanks rehmat. i will never disappoint u.
Excited for karan preeta….I love them the most…liked the Brothers conversation
thanks will try to make it more awesome. And preetan coming soon.
It’s amazing hope pretta and rishabh make a pair in show as well as in ur ff. I know in show it’s Karan and pretty but I love rishabh more.
Well ur ff is amazing and very much different from original script so I’m loving it
Sorry for the late comment
Nice part ?????
It’s ok u are good. And keep reading lots of surprises to come soon.