Hiiiii guys…..
Seems like u all r hell excited for today’s epi then chalo let’s break to curiosity
Recap:kunj coming to Amritsar nd twinkle singing In bathroom
#Taneja mansion
Twinkle is making fuss out of all the things
Twinkle’s POV
Oh….oh where are my sandles…..damn “maa!! Where have u kept my phone….mom! Where are u?……arre ya ya rahul I will be there in a minute” I screamed for maa while talking to rahul “maa! My phone…..” I screamed just then maa came “mom I m not getting my phone yaar” I said being frustrated “u shut up rahul let me find my phone na” I again screamed on my pa who was in the concert…..wait wht…..if he was in the concert then how is he talking to me
Just then my gaze went towards maa….who was just standing idly….keeping her one hand on the other…. Looking at me furiously
I let out a faint fake laugh when I got to knw how much big fool I’d been “ra…rahul I will call u l..later” u said cutting the phone
Maa started laughing silently…”h..haan…haan hota hai na….abhi itna mat haso nd help me find my heels” i said nd started searching for them “twinkle puttar….wat nail polish hv u done at yr foot nails can u just tell me” she said leaning towards the wall……I looked down “its neon green….looking good na” I exclaimed shrugging my shoulder…..she just tapped her hands on her forehead “hey bhagwan ye ladki ka kuch nhi ho sakta” she said….making me more confused “maa! Directly point pe aao na yaha already phatti padi hai” I shouted “twinkle you r already wearing yr heels….just open yr owl wide eyes properly” maa said…..I looked down nervously
“I m getting late” saying this I ran towards the hall making sure tht my gaze doesn’t meet maa’s. “Arre wait twinkle” I heard a voice…”haan mahi tell….jaldi lekin” I said turning towards her nd she was standing there with dahi Shakkar.
“Mahi what….” Before I could say further she pushed the spoon full of it into my mouth
“Its for good will” she said (uv too was standing beside mahi) “mahi but….” I said stuffing it in my mouth “shh….now don’t speak further ….save yr voice for yr concert ” she said to which uv laughed….now it was a common thing tht even being a gr8 singer I get frequently humiliated…. Why do always young ones hv to suffer!
I forcefully gupled down dahi shakkar. Nd wiped my mouth. “Arre aren’t u guys ready….ur cmng ri8!” I exclaimed. “Ofcource we r ” said yuhi together to which I smiled “wht abt maa?” I asked “arre how can she miss her daughter’s concert” uv said
I smiled “so except Sam all r cmng” I said being frustrated
Nd as expected I didn’t got any positive reaction from yuhi….donno wht happens to them when it cmns to Sam
“Accha I will take a leave….bye” i said side hugging yuhi nd touching maa’s feet
I went outside nd the driver opened the door of my black Mercedes. I wore my shades nd the driver started driving.
End of twinkle’s POV
#concert
Kunj’s POV
There is a huge fuss outside the concert hall….every1 is waiting for the beat of their hearts. Media are competing for space. It a tough time for guards to stop the maniac public frm crossing the limits nd I m there smwhere in the corner waiting for my girl….I hv decided not to meet twinkle as The kunj sarna but as her boy…only kunj so I m here in my casuals without any security experiencing a life of an ordinary fan who is here to see his love
Ya I agree I m a bit possessive abt my girl tht I m not liking the boys calling her hot,s*xy nd all those creepy words ….I only knw how I m controlling my anger.
Just then a beep of a car is heard nd the screams grew more louder as they were pretty sure it was their female sensation. As the voice of the car increased…. My heart beat to increased….. A big smile has already captured my lips but still I m making frantic efforts to see her…..this maniacs are not letting me see my lady?
And I could only see sm1 getting off the car….now I was just dying to see her…..I couldn’t take it anymore nd just pushed the ones cmng in my way…..with a lot of struggle I could only hv a glance of her eyes….same eyes….with same ocean deepness……I after seeing her hv fallen in love with her again….
But without wasting my tym outside the hall I quickly ran inside the hall So tht atleast I can get
A perfect place to hv a complete glance of her.
Deep inside my heart I m cursing myself for denying the VIP tickets?
Just then the hall starts to fill up…but I too was stubborn I didn’t even moved an inch from my place.
The anchors cm nd do sm of their boring ….unwanted anchoring…..y is god testing me so much just to hv a glance of her….the journey is not gonna be easy kunj sarna.
I heard the anchors say “and now….theost awaited moment….the most awaited concert…..the most demanded singer…..let’s welcome the gorgeous…. The stunning twinkle taneja!” Nd aftr this my heart already popped out. But hey……don’t scream in my ears …..I must tell this boys r hell irritating
I again set my eyes on stage…..all became dark…wht ! Light chali gyi! Just then a blue light came …..oh silly me….nd I laughed on myself
“He said it in a simple way 4am the second day…how strange tht I don’t know u at all” we could hear the voice
But where is she…oh God y the hell is she making me more curious…..I m upto my saturation now….can’t hold anymore!
“I stumbled through the long gud bye
1 last kiss then catch yr flight” I could hear her singing..oh twinkle I hv already caught my flight for u….but this tym to make u mine… Forever mine
“I told my self dint get attach….but in my mind I played it back….spinning faster than the plane tht took u” why do I really feel tht her each lines r meant for me
“THIS IS WHEN THE FEELING SINKS IN….I DON’T WANNA MISS U LIKE THIS…COME BACK…BE BERE….CIME BACK….BE HERE” at her dis lines she ramped on the stage….just like a diva….my eyes got teary…..the tears contained diversity if feelings…..they were the tears of joy…happiness…. Proud….a some were if guilt too….more.than me….my eyes were happy as they could again start chit chatting with her deep eyes….its like they too again got.their companion.
She is all the same….the same personality…. The same attitude…. The same grace…the same expressions….but one thing which is latened for all….but only I could see was her charm….ya she has lost her charm….the one she is wearing is a fake 1 ….I m damn sure abt it as I hv seen her bubbly charm….I hv felt her breath into mine….nd thts the reason y I knw her better than anybody else present out here.
I just wanted to shout here….in the hall full of screams… I wanted to shout so loudly tht each nd every single person present here gets to knw tht she is mine….dare any1 even look at her
This was my posseive shade….the kunj sarna’s.shade…..but on the other hand the sadu sarna wali side was being hell happy…..mad…freaking crazy to see her again in front of my eyes….I was literally dancing but tht wasnt new here….evey1 was doing the same but they have different reason behind their dance
Nd I hv a different reason for my dance?
To be continued….
How was it….look its difficult for me to give pov’s of both …kunj nd twinkle on the same.day but I want to show both their pov’s during this moment….so tomorrow u will get twinkle’s POV of the same moment…hope u guys r understanding
How was today’s episode…. Did kunj’s feelings reached yr hearts?
GUYS AN IMPORTANT MSG FRM HAPPINESS
(The writer of poor or rich love knows nothing)
She will be continuing her ff aftr 23rd of October aftr her exams get over
Nd did u saw my dp…aww I m in love with tht pic….sm of u must hv already seen it on insta but I love it yaar
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Ritzi Loved the episode
The dialogues I mean The way Twinkle had everything she needed but still was finding them and Kunj is so sweet he Knows Twinkle the best he can see the pain in her even though she is faking to be happy Loved the episode and Kunj’s emotions reached my heart Loved it 🙂
Nice
U R AMAZING GIRL…I AM COMPLETELY HOOKED UP BY YOUR STORY ….THE WAY U DESCRIBED KUNJ’S FEELINGS U MADE ME SPEECHLESS…..THE WAY HE TOLD COZ HE HAS FELT HER BREATH INTO MINE AND SO HE KNOWS HER BETTER THAN ANY1 ELSE IS JUST DAMN SUPERB..(STANDING OVATION TO U) FOR HOW U DESCRIBED KUNJ’S FEELINGS I LOVED THOSE EACH AND EVERY WORD U USED …TODAY’S EPI WAS AWESOME …AND COZ U R POSTING SUCH AMAZING EPI IT OWES U THE NEXT EPI TO BE POSTED SOONER DEAR….
LOVE UR WRITING TO THE CORE..
#STAYHAPPY#KEEPWRITING#LOVEU??
Wow….superb episode…..very cute dp….
Omg!!!! This was awsm..finally the moment has arrived… Gosh it was magical ritzi…
The way u write POV is breathtaking yaar…
It was beyond lovely…..I luvd each word to the core❤❤❤❤❤
Fine efforts…..CNT soon….
Actually ritzI!! I’m sorry yaar for not commenting on ur ff though I’m a reader of it but I really forgot….. not forgot but missed it ….. actually my exams were going on so that’s why ….. I will be happy if u provide my ur past two parts links otherwise I will try to find them ……but the epi was superb …… just eagerly waiting for that time when twinkle n kunj will face eo …. it was great…
Loads of love ????❤
Amazing epi.. really loved it.. twinkle in the starting was too funny??.. and kunj’s pov was damn awesome.. finally he got to see his love after 5 years.. don’t know what will happen when he will come to know that she is engaged??.. bdw I love ur ff dp??? perfect caption?? .. do cont soon ?
Of course kunjs feeling reached to our hearts uh describe it so nicely❤❤❤❤ loved the episode to the core?
Awesome epi dear!!..i am eagerly waiting for the next episode….btw i loved the dp
Ritzi! !!!!
The episode was sooooooo gooooood
I am so sorry I can’t comment regularly as no one knows of me writing ffs n if they get to know then I am gone
So sorry again . But anyways I loved the episode to the core n also ur dp! !! Sid=hot . Luv u loads dear ♥♥♥
This is when the feeling sinks in…..
I am listening and reading ur ff and listening the song girl its freaking awesome man….
I just wanna say that ur pic just stole my heart oh god mera bunny itna cute lag RHA hai uff…
And post soon
Hey ritzi
Wt a episode
Just heart touching
Eager fr next one
Loved it sweetheart
Very…….nice ritzi
I don’t understand why you guys don’t go for writing movie…..
I mean u guys write so well
So ……from my side a very lovely episode
Hey ritzi firstly your dp is freaking superb I loved it ???Sid????I’m was the silent reader of your ff but after reading today’s episode I couldn’t resist myself from commenting…this episode is one of the best episodes of this ff…u depicted kunj’s feeling so well…hats off to you for that…loved kunj’s dialogues to the core…his dialogues were so heart touching…ritzi please jaldi se twinj ka aamna samna kara do…I’m longing for twinj scenes…I loved your first ff It Was Love That Brought Them Together to square infinity…it was one of my favorite ffs…that ff had so many twinj scenes but in this ff it’s lacking as per the story it’s going well but now I demand for twinj scenes their romance…try to post next soon…can’t wait more…
ritzi… ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
this is what i felt…
i love u muahhhh
Happy to know that happiness will be posting her ff after Oct 23rd ritzi r u in contact with pali just the beginning of new love twinj ff writer…if ur in touch with her please tell her to post her ff…I’m missing her ff like hell…
Ritzi first of all ur dp …??
I saw it here for the first time… And I am in love with it…
Now coming to the epi….
Girl u described his feelings perfectly..kunj sarna the possessive one and sadu sarna the mad one..
Loved it❤❤❤..
Now I am eagerly waiting for the day when they’ll face each other…
And I am happy that happiness is continuing her ff…
Thank u so so sooo much yaar shreya….it really really means a lot to me….love u
❤️❤️????❤️❤️❤️???❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️?
Loved it
Ritzi dear awesome episode loved kunjs point of view love you dear ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Diiiiiii what an episode it was epic I mean the words u used and the pov’s were like awesome Yessss diiiii kunj emotions really touched my heart I really wish hr could meet his lady love soon sorry couldn’t comment on the last part both of them were like I don’t have words to describe it dii bass amazing ??
Toooooo good diii I loved it to the corest of the corest part I don’t know if these words r there r not but seriously diiii tooooo gud next one I can’t contain my excitement diii
Love u ????
?????????What an epi it was……truely phenomenal
The jhalli Twinkle nd Kunj ke feelings litrelly threw me on cloud infinity…….An Amazing piece of writing
Loved it
Post d nxt one asap….wait nahi ho raha hai
Awesome amazing fantastic…. Post soon …..
Omg it was really amazing Kunj’s happiness and possessiveness was explained really well hatts off ritzy for writing such an amazing FF
Your cover pic ????
Sorry for not commenting on previous ones I’m really busy
Love you
Haa yaar! I loved the episode!!! And Also the cover pic???
Like the episode was damn awesome!, and a bit emotional..
And i saw ur comment on my ff.. Im flattered yaar! Thanks alot!
Sorry i couldn’t reply and sorry for late comment 🙂 ?
Loads of love yaar ?
Ritzi yaar I seriously loved this
Btw insta pai whats ur namr
Pls give it in next epi
And happiness sll the best
Miss u
Ctd soon
Emotional n beautiful episode ritzi
Luvd it 2 eternity cute n possessive kunj sarna I luvd it wowowwowowow
U nailed it…..