Helllloooooooo guys……early today?? Hope so…uff guys can’t tell hw overwhelming yr cmnts were….each nd every word of each nd every cmnt touched my heart yaar…..accha now let’s cm to the main work….arre…..epiiiiiiiiiii!
Recap: Kunj’s possessive face …..nd twinkle fainting
Let’s start the epi…
Kunj’s POV
In was scolding her like anything….. I was just not in my senses……The only thing tht was roaming in my mind was…..twinkle is only mine…..but suddenly I saw her loosing her senses.
The guilt which I felt at tht moment was just unexplainable……. Unbearable…..’ How our lives changes in a few seconds’…. I understood the meaning of this phrase today……I quickly took her on my lap nd started patting her cheeks
“Twinkle….. Twinkle pls wake up….m sorry twinkle…look look I m holding my ears too….twinkle!” I cried but sooner I realised tht I didn’t had any tym to cry….I quickly took her in my embrace nd stood up….my heart still beating fast…….like a metro…….
I rushed outside the cabin….. As soon as I went outside the cabin….all stood up …there shocked faces can be detected very easily
“Twinkle mam… Oh my god….is she okay?” Purvi (sam’s pa) asked me “I should call sameer Sir frm the meeting” she continued
“No need!” I exclaimed….. Making every1 go in even more shock….. KUNJ SARNA….ATLEAST NOW KEEP YR POSSESSIVENESS IN YR POCKET! Mind mind scolded
“Let him finish the meeting nd then inform him” I said making her a bit satisfied …..I rushed out of the office
Thank god my driver was there …..I quickly sat on the back seat nd made her sleep on my lap with the help of the driver
Driver sat into the car “taneja mansion….fast!” I said
“Twinkle….. Doll….pls pls open yr eyes….look I m apologising na….apne kunj ko maaf karde” I said cupping her…..all in vain!
I quickly called the doctor to taneja mansion nd told him….actually warned him to come as fast as possible
The car stopped near the mansion…..in was feeling a bit awkward but tht was nothing in front of my life….my twinkle….I quickly steeped out of the car nd rushed towards the door.
…………….end of kunj’s POV……………….
Third person’s POV
“Mahi ……give me tht chocolate” exclaimed uv running aftr her.
“Uv….u already had two….now let me eat this one ” said mahi running
Both were running here nd there in the entire hall like small kids.
“Arre……Bas karo tum dono….wht is this!” Screamed leela on sseing the bad condition of the hall.
“Maa…dekho na….he is not letting me eat my chocolate” mahi said hiding behind her
“Leela maa….ye moti pehle se 3 chocolates kha chuki hai…aur khayegi Toh gubbare ki tarah moti ho jayegi” uv said
“How dare u call me fat…uv ur dead!” Said mahi
Now uv aage aage….nd mahi peeche peeche…nd leela couldn’t do anything but laugh.
Just then they heard the door bell
“I will open!” Said uv nd mahi together totally acting like kids …….next wht….the race!
Both started running towards the entrance….. Unfortunately for mahi…… Uv won
He quickly opened the door…..nd there he stood….completely in shock….he was perplexed by the fact tht whether to be happy to see his buddy back or whether to get sad on seeing the scenario….. Twinkle’s condition….. “K….kunj” he whispered not believing his eyes
“Uv how dare u open the door first” said mahi before crashing with uv’s back …….aftr the shock she received….. “K….kunj” she too whispered.
End of third person’s POV
Kunj’s POV
As soon as uv opened the door….I could see the shocked expressions…….with a lots of bogglness …….ignoring tht too…I rushed in the house
“K…kunj” I heard the whisper for the third tym
“Maa……I will tell u everything later….first twinkle get her treatment” I said walking towards the staircase ……ofcource I remembered her room. “I will call the doctor” said uv following me
“I already did tht” I said rushing up
I quickly went into the room nd made her lie on bed …..”where’s the doctor damn it” i said punching my hand on the wall. “Kunj!” Shouted uv on seeing my state
“Leela mam….doctor came” said on of the servants……thank god…I sighed….
“Doc….doctor pls check her…y ain’t she opening her eyes….” I said but was cut by mahi “kunj…let him speak” she said “pls can u all go out…I want to check her” said doctor
” no…..I will not leave her again” I said …..doctor looked helplessly towards uv
“Kunj….kunj…..chal let’s go out….let him do his work” he said dragging me out.
I unwillingly went out with others.
To be continued..
I m really sorry for the boring one….but will cm back soon
18 Comments
Aagayi miss dhamaka Queen I was waiting for your post it was too good i liked yuhi scenes do continue and post soon
Awesome yaar aur is baar zyada wait karvayi tqqq bt it doesn’t means u will make me wait fr next part plsss post next one also n u know what u r a suspense queen srsly itna zyada suspense mai koi nhi rakte I can’t wait n episode was awesome n loved it
Loved it too good I mean Kunk’s emotions and the way he tried acting cool infront of the office staff and the way he remebered Twinkle’s room he had already called the doctor and on top of that he wasnt ready to leave the room …. so sweet Loved it all Hope Twinkle is fine pls post soon cant wait ?
Love you ?❤
Awesome episode loved it..loved yuhi scenes
eagerly waiting for next episode..pls post it soon..
Amazing episode ritzi loved it
woaaahhhh I got my favorite story back but sadly I didn’t know about it
it’s really a amazing
just loved this a lot
ohhh kunj’s possessiveness oooooppppssss over possessiveness is really so hard to digest but this is justified becoz of his sacrifice he don’t know what manohar told twinkle and this is how it came
now plzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzz update regularly plzzzzzzzz
otherwise I’ll again miss to read it :-(:-(
Superb 1 ritz
Waaaooh????loved it. Very emotional episode. Abnext kuch happy happy wala dena
Loved it
Post soon
Love u?
Yrr its nice i think she is pregnent
Ritzi awesome episode…. Loved it to the core….
Hey ritiz,
It was not boring at all.I enjoyed it a lot.Luved the yuhi’s childish behaviour.
Thanks for not making us wait.Post soon.
Lots of luv,
twinj
Awesome.. loved it.. Kunj’s emotions were ????.. n Yuhi scene was so cute.. wasn’t boring at all.. eagerly waiting for the next ❤❤
awesome amazing fabulous emotional epi..
Pahle to ears pakad ke soooooo sry…are for not commenting on the previous episode…..
Achha firstly welcome back to TU ……missed u…Nd soo hpy that u continued ur ff…..
Now the previous episode was dimag blowing…..I mean it was sooo gud…Nd vulgar!!!!!! It was not at all vulgar…
Nd today’s episode was even awesome… The Pain in kunj’s heart was described soo gud….loved it
Post soon
Love u
Omg!!!! Wat happened to twinkle.. n kunj’s emotion overflowing.. my God epi ws jst too good yrr.. hope u get time to update next part soon.. will b waiting.. n hope will b waiting patiently fr next upate?
Loads of love dear!!!
Omg miss mixed queen,,,,,,,u posted ur ff….missed u soo much….I m waiting 4 it desperately…. U don’t no how much i love ur ff…..this is not boring it is damn good….. And the episode is very emotional,,,awesome,,, emotional kunj and his pain r described beautifully loved this…….and yuhi scene was soo much funny…… And the most important I love very much twinj romance in ur ff its making me gushbamps in my stomach…..plssss post soon ur next epi bcoz i m waiting 4 it impatiently…….. Ohh wait u didn’t ans my qstn that will plss make ur sis if u don’t then friend as ur wish and its my command…..my multicolor Queen….. Love u a lotsssss…….tc….by……
Heya ritzi
Episode is amazingly amazing…
Loved it to the core…
U depicted Kunj’s emotions so well…
Desperately waiting for next episode…
Hope you post next as soon as possible…
#Love
awesome epi ritzi