Heya!! How r u alllllllllllll…….
M baccckkkkkk accha so first of all let me share my feelings wid u….m really really feeling guilty….. Yup…u heard it ri8 bcus I m not able to reply back guys….m really sorry… I saw many silent readers opening up
Its my hearty welcome to all of them nd my old chums…..LOVE U YAAR
But u knw I follow a trend here thts “frndship mei no sorry no thank u” so don’t expect my thanks okay??
But I will surely try to reply back
Now shall we proceed …..
Recap: kunj ne aakhir kaar twinkle ke paas rehne ka jugad kar hi liya?
@Taneja mansion
#twinkle’s POV
BORING!!! Its truly really boring to lay here on bed nd be jealous as allll of them r downstairs spending a nice time….gosh! Y did I just fainted!
Now suffer…..no y should I….its not my fault …..
Let me go down…..wait….is tht kunj gone? Ya ofcource…. Maa must hv kicked him out aftr wht he did to me…I just hope he is not treated very badly……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….wait….. Wht did I just said? Come on twinkle…… Y m I so confusing…..
I just kept a full stop on my thoughts as I knw they will take me nowhere, I tried to stand …..its difficult… I m still feeling weak….but I m getting bore too?
I stood up nd went towards the hall….I was climbing downstairs… My focus completely on stairs….. Nd “aaaaaaah” I shouted when I slipped
I closed my eyes tightly… Everything got dark….wait…..I m not feeling anything…. I opened my eyes slowly “TUM!” I shouted wen I saw kunj holding me…..actually carrying me…
“Leave me” I said arrogantly… No reply! Huff! I took a looonnngggggg breath
“Kunj” I said being as polite as I can “hmm” he said….”put me down” I requested “no” he said instantly…. Here I m trying to be as much polite as I can nd there he goes….provoking me “so u will not put me down?” I asked “nah!” He replied “ohkay then” I said nd started moving my hands nd legs like a kid
#end of twinkle’s POV
#kunj’s POV
“Twink….twinkle…be..behave” I said trying to maintain my balance. I quickly carried her downstairs before we both fall down
Thank god there is no1 in the hall…actually it was our plan so tht I nd twinkle can spend sm tym together… Nd its our luck tht Sam is out for sm work right now. “Aaah…aau” I screamed when she bit my hand….. I saw her smirking….nd she doesn’t knw hw much cute she looks like this
I acted to be angry in front of her
“Wht the f*ck” she screamed when I threw her on sofa. “Ohooo my doll…foreign jaake bahut gaaliyan seekh li hai…..” I said sitting beside her on the sofa. I could see her going red. “Twinkle…. I really wanna talk to u” I said “where is every1?” She asked
“Firstly I m really sorry abt wht I did wid u in office” I started “where is Sam?” Twinkle asked “I srsly donno how to apologize abt tht incident” I said “is anyone there …ram! Shyam! I m hungry” twinkle shouted nd stood up….now thts it
“Twinkle!” I shouted nd pulled her ….due to the jerk she fell on my lap. “Kunj! Leave me ……….pls” she said with teary eyes…….”twinkle… Pls listen to me first….pls ….then I promise I will never ever cross yr paths widout yr permission ” I requested with lots of love in my voice. Her eyes told me she is melting
“Pls twinkle” I requested one more tym “hmm” she nodded her head in positive…. Here eyes were statued on mine….”thanks twinkle…thanks…it means a lot” I whispered in her ears still carrying her on my lap.
“So listen…..when I left u I had a very big reason behind it…it was yr da….” I said but was cut by a voice “twinkiiiiii…..where r u?”
#end of Kunj’s POV
#twinkle’s POV
I donno wht just happened to me….I again got carried away with his eyes…I just couldn’t resist him …
Suddenly I heard my name which brought me into my senses….I quickly stood up frm his lap “s…Sam” I said tucking my hair strands behind my ears. “When did u came?” I asked being scared….wishing continuously tht he didn’t saw anything “just now…y did I missed anything?” He asked coming towards me ….thank god!
Wait….no no…pls Sam…no…don’t hug me right now….I saw him coming towards me nd here….he lifted his hands to hug me…I just closed my eyes in fear…just a thought of Kunj’s reaction aftr his hug was bringing shivers down my spine ….I closed my eyes
“Oh hi Sam!” I heard, when I didn’t felt his touch I opened my eyes
Kunj can’t u just control yrself?
My mind complained when I saw him standing totally in between me nd sam ….preventing him to hug me (isse kehte hai saccha pyaar?)
Precap: want something romantic??
Really sorry for the short one yaar….m not getting tym at all. Just wait for a week then next week I m kind of free nd a story is revolving in my mind since a long tym …..want me to write it? If yes then I will make it a fs (few slots) nd will also try to give u longer epi frm next week.
PROVIDED U GUYS COMMENT… IF I WILL NOT GET SUFFICIENT COMMENTS THEN I MAY CANCEL THE FS
21 Comments
Omgggg….. ritzi finally tune epi post karhi diya..soch rahi thi kab post karega yeh ritzi uska ff….m waiting 4 it desperately…… thanks 4 posting it..but its short…I want a long epi if its possible OK…….
Today’s epi was just out standing and fabulous….love it very much……twinj r very swttttt and cuteiiii yaar….l love their POV very much…..
And….yesssssss….I want romance …. plzzzzz… Iske liye na nahi hay…….
Plzzzzzzz post next epi soon….will be waiting 4 till 1 week….iske baad or koi wait nahi karsakti samjhi….and wait plzzz cnt ur fs plzzzzzzz and post it soon….
Love u and keep smiling…….
Hehe….ur too shweet yaar Priya…ya surely I will try to give u long epis next week nd sorry for this short one….but thanks for commenting dear…its really means a lot…love u
Hey ritzi
He r u
He was ur trip
And abt d epi is was awesome fabulous do write d fs
Bye
Lots of love
Hi presha…my trip? Oh god….it was a blaasssssttttt! Srsly we enjoyed a lot…anyways…thanks for commenting princess….love u nd ya thanks for motivating me for the fs too
Awesome girl!…
Yup I do want yaar..missing it special romantic touches.. Meri romance queen!..of course yaar start another fs too..if u get sufficient time..?
Hey ritzi
Finally u r back???woaaah. I was jumping after seeing ur ff. lovely. Sooo cute???????i wish twinkle just listtens to kunj atleast once. Nd yeah we do want romance ??????
Post ur shots the collab one with krystal
Nd yeah do come up with few shots
Post soon
Love u?
Hey ritzi!!
Let me introduce myself….
I am aamna…. new author on telly updates but a silent reader of all ff writers of twinj since long time n now myself had became a writer….
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N about ur ff it’s one of my favourites… it’s awsum, GOOD and what not didn’t had words to explain…. but just simply I luved it….. n…….. about today’s episode wasn’t it toooo short but it’s okay it was funny, emotional n what not…..
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N about precap surely wanna see some romance
(U must be thinking what kind of girl i am continously talking… well i am achatter box)
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Now plz post the next episode soon n also do read my ff LOVE CAN OVERCOME ANY OBSTACLE n once again plz post earlier…..
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With;
Loads of love??
Aamna
Yaar aana….sorrrrryyyy for the so late reply but wen i read yr comment… I was forced to.reply…….thanx fir opening up nd commenting….nd ya I will surely.take.out tym.to read yr ff
Finallyyyyyyyyyy???
I dont know why but i just end up falling in love with each and every epi of yours!!!
This one was damn sweet n hilarious?
Bechara Kunj! He has to come in between everytime! Bechara jal gya…n Twinkle…how can she not melt? I just want their misunderstandings to be cleared as soon as possible…n i want something romantic!!!! Pleashhhh *pout*
Cont soon sweetheart!
Love ya?
Hey ritzi
I was missing ur ff like hell… When I saw ur ff I jumped out of happiness… As usual the is so amazing… Loved it to the core… About the precap I would never say no for romance… Hehe dirty mind???? try posting long epis… Desperate for next epi…
Ritzi ur readers wouldn’t mind if u don’t reply back to our comments coz we know how busy u r… So don’t ask sorry… We should be thankful to u for taking time and posting ur ff…
Dear what about ur n Krystal colab ff? R u continuing it or not? N about ur FS do write it…
Love you
Hey the episode was fab yaar their both pov were awesome. Plz post your ss soon that evil, hate, love and revenge I want to read it as it is left in great suspense plz after completing that you write your another ss ok plz accept my request ?and waiting for the next update do continue
Oh god finally you are back
I was waiting for your trip to end so that you can post 🙂
I just loved the way Twinkle for sometime was still lost in Kunj’s touch Hope the misunderstandings end soon 🙂
I loved the possessive Kunj 🙂
Love you 🙂
Post soon 🙂
Ritzi I was waiting fr u a lot n I really missed u N ur ff
N today wt to say it’s just amazing Superb lovely fabulous deaar
Waiting fr post soon
Love u keep smiling
Ritzi di !!!!
Awwww that was lovely and the last part…. Sachi ? In between… Possessive kunj !!!
I love it … I just love it… So when is the next episode coming up ??? I’ll be waiting patiently…. I just wanna hug u ri8
There… I just love you nd you know what … You are sooo cute….
Plsss post soon…
Love you …
wooh…jab maine tera ff post hua deka I had a big smile my face… this epi was too good yaar but short one… next time I want the long one okay?? mujhe romantic chahiye… gutter minded hun… haan plz start new ff too… aur umm.. kya… nothing… post soon
love,
Tamanna
Hey Ritzi,
Thanks for posting the FF as I was waiting for it like hell! And I must say you are amazing when it comes at writing 🙂 The way Kunj stopped Sam from hugging Twinkle was so adorable 😉 Just loved it! Will be waiting for your next episode (please try to be a bit early!) And also your FS 🙂
Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
Waiting for this ff n finally u post them it as awsome
awesome amazing fabulous epi
Hi !!!
Nice episode
Nd abut precap who doesnt want twinjs romance …
plz update soon
Want something romamtic…!!! Yeah yeah yeah;;;;
Btw this update ws superbo