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Part 13
friends, thank you for all the previous comments. I’m so glad for each and every comment.
And firstly, a big wala happy birthday to our dearest and dear ‘TEJU’ darling. She is our daring Rashmi, cute Dhara, beautiful Ragini and princess Diya..
Epi 14
Next morning,
The warm rays of early sun embraces the cute couple who are sleeping in each other embrace. The aroma of love was spread around them, they both are locked in passionate bond.
Ragini was laying her head on Laksh’s bare chest. And her bare back is surrounded by his hands. they both are covered in bed sheet up to their waist.
Ragini opens her eyes first in a great smile as she feels protected and loved in the embrace of her love. She looks at Laksh and he was sleeping peacefully and his smile is very magnificent as ever. Ragini too smiles and places her head again on his chest and makes circles on his heart with her finger.
Laksh wakes with her action and he moves his fingers on her waist creating tingling sensation for her. ‘Laksh’ Ragini looks at him suddenly. Laksh smirks and he places her down and he comes over her.
Ragini places her hand on his cheek..
“did you come from that far just for me..?”
Laksh nods his head. Ragini raises her head and kisses his forehead. She falls back again.
Laksh places his head in her neck. Ragini closes her eyes and rubs his head.
“I love you Ragini.” He whispers in her ears and later chews her ears. Ragini smiles and hugs him tight.
After a while…
Ragini is wearing a purple saree. Laksh who just got ready in his jeans looks at her through mirror. He looks lovingly at her tiny stomach.
Ragini was trying to wear a braid with her hair. Laksh comes her and makes her hair free.
“Let them be free” he says playing with her hair.
“Par…” she is about to say.. he places his finger on her lips. “You look gorgeous” he says and keeps his hands around her waist.
Ragini gasps suddenly, “Laksh..”
“I know, you can’t bear me that easily my wife..” he says and rubs his long nose on her neck. Ragini closes her eyes receiving his charm.
“Laksh, what did you say just now..?” she asks innocently.
“I know you understood..!” he says and Ragini smiles.
Then Laksh keeps sindoor on her forehead. Ragini smiles as he is done this even she said before.
Later, both comes out holding hand in hand. Swara who was roaming in hall looks at them. Ragini tries to free her hand from him as she is seeing, but Laksh pulls Ragini even more closer holding her waist looking at Swara. Swara turns away her eyes.
Ragini takes Laksh into pooja mandir. They both worships. Just then Sujatha comes.
“chachi.. muje ashirwaad dejiye”
(chachi, give me blessings)
Ragini bends to her feet, but Sujatha goes away. Ragini stands with teary eyes, then Laksh caresses Ragini’s cheek.
“Vaise Ragu darling, kyun thum bleesing lethi ho..?”
(btw why do u take bleesings)
“bcz, for the good future” Ragini speaks in English.
“You need not take her blessings from her as she ignored you. However, I’m here naa to bless you with great romantic future..” Laksh says moving her closer to him. Ragini beats on his chest to make him far as Rp just came there. Laksh turns to him looking at him. Ragini takes his bleesings.
“kush raho beta..” RP blesses.
Rp: well Laksh, when are you going to leave to US..?
Laksh points his eyes towards Ragini.. “her wish uncle”
Rp: Ragu beta, kab jaana chahti ho America?
(when do you want to go to America?”)
Ragini: unki marzi hei chote papa..
(his wish)
Rp laughs: very well. Then you both discuss and decide.
Rp goes away.
Ragini excitedly holds Laksh’s hand.
“chalo Laksh, mein aap ko puri gaav dikaadungi”
(I will show you all village)
Laksh nods his head.
Ragini and Laksh are walking hand in hand. All villagers smile looking at them. Ragini is making Laksh to talk to all.. Laksh feels each and every moment in village strange. He keeps taking photographs in his camera.
Then, a old man comes near them, Laksh looks at him and scratches his head, that old man laughs.
Rag: (why are you laughing dada..?)
Old: (Yesterday great fun happened with him..)
Laksh sits on a rock,
“yeah, really great fun. I managed to come to this village in a taxi. Thank god, that driver knew English. And, my problem started after entering in village..)
Old man: (I don’t understand what he say.. and he didn’t understand what I said..)
Laksh: (I didn’t understand what to ask, I showed your picture in the phone.. then he took me to your house.)
Rag: (hmm, then you called me, ‘Ragini..!!’)
Lak: (a lot has happened before it..!!)
Then Laksh explains,
“That old man says that this is Ragini’s house. But, Laksh can’t understand and he says, ‘I don’t want any house to stay.. I want to meet this girl..!’
Then that old man says, “ohh.. you want to go to temple first..? ok, it’s there…..”
The old man shows him a way, and Laksh runs there without thinking.”
Lak: like that I walked whole village asking them and all… finally..!!
Rag: finally..?
Lak: I found a 15 years girl who is a student in school… she spoke in English with me. She brought me here again..
Ragini and old man laughs.
Lak: hmm, I came to Ragini’s house already and I searched for her whole village.
Ragini sits beside Laksh and she places her hand on his cheek,
“you came for me that long… struggled this much.. why..?”
Laksh looks at her holding her hand
“Don’t know why..?”
He asks.
Ragini feels shy and stands, and she about to go… Laksh holds her hand. Ragini smiles. He moves her hand and sounds of bangles echo’s in that mountain area..
‘Because I’m the music in your bangles..’
He sings…
Ragini looks at Laksh amazingly,
Laksh moves close to her,
“Because, I’m the pearl in your ear rings..”
He touches her ear rings, Ragini blushes…
“because I’m the fragrance in your sindhoor..”
He says and kisses her forehead.
“because, I’m the beat of your heart…”
Laksh sings the four lines and Ragini smiles and runs, then she swings to a tree and she sings,
“my bangles music is your name,
My ear rings say your name..”
She then runs to Laksh and hangs to his neck,
“My sindhoor reflects your image..
Oh my dear,
You are the air I inhale…
You are the sound of my heart beat..”
Later, both are going in a boat on a lake… laksh was sitting opposite to Ragini, her leg is in his lap. He was playing with her anklets.
“I’m the rhythm in your anklets…..
The color in your shy cheeks..”
He sings, Ragini removes her legs from his lap and she turns otherside, Laksh hugs her from back..
“I’m the shine in your necklace,
The one who is on your heart..
As sacred mangal sutr..”
He sings holding it.. a tear falls from the eye of Ragini on his hand.
Laksh wipes her tears on cheeks.
Ragini:
“You are the silent feelings..
The calm tears..
Which know only to love..”
She sings and turns back and cups his face.
“You are the beat of my heart.. my dear..!!” she sings.
Laksh hugs her to heart,
“You are my only soul mate..” he completes singing.
They keep hugging, burying each other’s heart into each other. Their hands are locking Eo. Their breaths are locked in lovely atmosphere. They both are inseparable. Because, they both are born to make this bond. Who’s pair is seen and cherished by the heaven.
Laksh and Ragini.. the cop and village girl’s love story has started. They are now wife and husband.
Now, how their life runs..?
They have overcome their language problem with their feelings.
They both fell in love even though, their life styles are different.
All say ‘poles apart’
But, they can be together because, everyone has ‘one heart’ and it has ‘same feelings’
Their love is a success… and what about their married life..??
Precap: RagLak back to US. Their happy married life.
From Astra’s creation box.
By Astra.
Wait.. wait..!! How’s my song..??
45 Comments
oh my god that was simply fab episode asthu di
loved it soo much
and yes happy happy birthday to our princess teju di
anyways waiting for the next part
take care
keep smiling and keep writing
lots of love
bye bye
Awesome episode
Amazing
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Awesome update my dr…
Awesome episode
SUPER DR .ITS GREAT TREAT FOR TEJA FAN
thanks harita..
Such an amazing chappy asthu..!!
I loved it a lot..and I can’t wait to know more..,please update soon dear..!!
That song was super duper and the lines were aww…
Totally awesome and tc dear..!!
awesome update sweetheart…. was egarly waiwaiting for this to…. n song was just superb with such a cute romance of raglak…..
thank you so much dear..
Superbbbb astraa???
thanks dear..
Awesome
it’s fantablous update astu dear…..loved loved it alot….raglak scenes r amazing dear….loved it…song superbbb dear….all scenes r supper….eagerly waiting for nxt one….tkcr dear
superrrr
Totally superb part and song
Only one word AWESOME
Wow it’s wonderful. Nice update.
awesome, love raglak part so much, update soon
i’m glad to hear this… i won’t say you thanks.. don’t kill me. haha..
Fabulous
WOW!! RAGLAK scenes were choo cuteeee, adorable, lovely, superb, amazing, fantastic!!! Ohhh romantic Laksh and shy Ragu!!! I am choooooooooooooo happpppyyyyyy and enjoying their story!!! Laksh’s struggle OMG!!!! bechare Laksh how much he had done to get his love!!!!! Lovely!!!! Really both r lucky to have each other!!!!!!!
Also akka, I think u should be a lyricist!! WOWWWW!!! UR SONG IS REALLY SUPER DUPER HIT AKKA!!! I loved it!!! So I think u can write poems!! Just a guess akka!!
Anyways awesome episode akka!!!
Akka wait!! Wait a second!! What is that in ur status box??? Dear to nobody?? If u dare to say that again then u have to face sever consequences akka!! Its just a warning!! I am there naa, ur little sister!! What happened to u?? I always want my akkas and cuties to be smiling and happy!! So akka at least for me u should smile!! I hope u will smile!!! Am I right??
Superb…
Song is Awesome…
Laksh journey to Ragini’s house is Hilarious…
Outstanding episode dear ??? Raglak scenes are really beautiful ??? Loved their cute romance ???? your song is fantastic dear. I really loved it. Eagerly waiting for next episode and please post next part ASAP ???????????????
Amazing part nd can’t wait for next
Awesome
Amazing song is good keep going
Awesome update
Awesome part dear
Superb astra
It’s awesome
thanks a lot abi..
Awesome akka. The song was superb. Poor Laksh, he searched her throughout the village but it’s okay because finally he married Ragini na. Update next part soon akka.
Bye akka. Take care.
Amazing episode
thanks jiyani..
Awesome superb amazing