Hellloo….Friends..Meethi is back..with d 6th shot…
I am overwhelmed by all of ur response❤..and yes i will shortly be replying to ur comments individually as well?..
So lets begin..?
Raj-Yaar!What the hell is happening..i mean Ragini and Laksh..they r behaving strange..quite strange!I knw Laksh..he has never given such a imp client's presentation..to any of his employees..except me…ya i knw Ragini is trust worthy..but..kuch toh hua hai..kuch ho gaya hai!..He smiles..Abh iss kahaani ko mein jaankar rahunga as well I will take this story forward..he smiles??..
@night (6pm)..
Ragini is shown waiting for the auto!..
Ragini-Auto!..Auto!..
When a car comes and stops..in front of her..
The window shield opens..
And its Laksh!..
Laksh-Ragu..sit..see no one is here..we can go to gether..
Jst wen Ragini was giving an answer..jst then Raj comes there on his BIKE??..
Raj-Arrey Ragini u here..and laksh u?..
Laksh-Ya..actually i saw Ragini calling for an auto i thought to giver her lift..
Ragini smiles in agreement..
Raj-Ragini u need a lift…come i ll drop u..vaise bhi ur house comes in my way..
Laksh (shocked)-Arrey Raj..i will drop na!..
Raj-Arrey bro..tum kyon stress leraha hai?..
Raj-Ragini u only tell!is there any prob if i drp u as laksh's and ur house have opp routes
Ragini (forcefully)-Ya i have no problem..sir u leave i will come..i mean go..
Laksh gives a are u serious wala look
Raj-See tats ny friend and he pulls ragini's cheeks (frndly manner only)..
Laksh sees this and i knw i knw..u all knw..he was feeling smthng was burning deep inside him??
Raj-Come Ragini sit!..
And ragini sits on d backseat!..
Raj-Ragini..i dont have itching powder drpped on my jacket u can hold me..otherwise..u will fall n get hurt..
Ragini faintly smiles!..and keeps her hand on his shoulders..and our laksh babu was burning in jealousy??..
Raj-Bye laksh!..
Ragini-Bye Sir..
Laksh-bye..
Raj and ragini leaves..
Laksh's POV
This Raj..mera bhai..why is he being a devil in my married life..i was giving her a lift na…lift i meant i was taking her to our house but this Raj..akal ka dushman…now Ragu wat will she do..but i will not forgive this raj..I was gping to get sme tym to spend with my wife but he!..
Wait…wait…did i jst sat..spend some tym with my WIFE..laksh dont let these dilly thoughts come on ur mind remember ur deal..u will always be her best frnd..he smiles and leaves..
On d other side..Raj and Ragini..
Raj-Ragini its seems u are quite familiar wid bike rides..coz normally ppl are scared wen they sit on d bike especially on the back seat..
Ragini-Yeah!Actually i love riding bikes ??..
Raj applies brakes..
Raj-U mean u r a biker..
Ragini-Yup..
He again starts d bike..
Suddenly she shouts!Sssssstttttoooopppp!
Raj-Abh kya hua..
Ragini-My house she points..came..?..
Raj -Oh i m sorry..
Ragini gets off d bike and says bye to him..
Raj-Bye take care and good night..
Raj leaves..while Ragini acts gng inn..
Ragini's pov..
Yaar Ragu wat will u do!..u dont have d keys..d keys are at my room (laksh ka room)..and its too late..auto bhi nhi milega..oh god..
Wen she hears a horn..
She turns and sees laksh's car!..
Ragini-Laksh..
Laksh-Do want to stand here all night come sit..
Ragini goes and sits in d car..
Ragini-Laksh u here..i thought..
Laksh-Tat i left..do u think i m gonna leave u alone that to at this hour!..
Ragini feels happy seeing his concern..
Laksh-Now wat r u staring!
Ragini-Nthng..
Laksh-By the wat..were u both talking..
Ragini-Nthng..i was jst telling him that i m a biker as well..
Laksh applies brakes suddenly..
Laksh-U r a biker as well!..i mean u have traits of Ussain bolt..Jackie chan and now also a biker..hey bhagwan wat all other traits u have?..
Ragini -Many many more mr maheshwari she winks at him..u ll have to wait and watch?
Laksh-Jhalli!..
They reach home..
Laksh goes to the washroom and wen he comes back he sees Ragini working on her laptop on d study table..
Laksh-Ragu,Wat r u dng…its quite late..so and sleep..
Ragini-Mr bhulakkad…u forgot i have to finish this presentation *sir*…
Laksh chuckles..-Ohkay shd i help u?..
Ragini-No laksh..i ll do it own my u sleep..u have to hold d meeting tomorrow morning..
Laksh-Are u sure?..
Ragini smiles..
And laksh goes and lies down on d couch..but he doesn't get sleep..but he closes his eyes..
Around 1 am..
Laksh wakes up to drink water..
And sees tat ragu..slept on d study table itself while doing work…He smiles seeing her..
And goes near her..and sees the strand of hair disturbing her..he tucks d strand behing her ear..
He smiles at her..and thinks how cute she looks while sleeping..no she looks evertime..she is so beautiful yaar..
He sees ragini struggling to sleep on d wodden table..he thinks something and picks ragini up..(in bridal style)..
And keeps her carefully on the bed..
And covers her with the comforter..amd kisses her on d forehead..before leaving to sleep on d couch..
So guys how was d shot?..
Hope u all liked it?
Do tell me abt ur views..
Loads of love
Meethi ❤❤
27 Comments
I read the parts in one go. It’s hilarious…
Superb….
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Awesome
continue ur writing
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Stupendous
nice I enjoying lakshya jeleousy please give it more nice amazing superb excellent mind brilliant speechless plzzzz be regular don’t be late bcoz now raglak ff are very less so for raglak fan missing raglak and ff are only for them and thanks raglak ff ts ss writer who gave there precious time and post regular or may be daily if u have time please
Awwwwwww..very sweeet update dear…….
awesome
awesome
Awesome . May both realize their love soon.
Awesome . May both realize their love soon in the flashback and may their romance begin .
awesome dear….poor laksh….u can’t spend time with ur wife…raj so sweet….raglak scenes r supper….waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear…
Awesome episode and loved Laksh’s jealousy
Amazing update
Totally loved it
Loved raglak conversation
Eagerly waiting to read more
Please do continue soon
the episode was so awesome
Loved it….
Awesome
Loved it Di
amazing but i m missing ur ff too
Hey Meeti….its really nice….I liked Raj’s prank on them….raglak’s moments were cute…..can u give more of raglak moments??? plzzzzzzz??????????
Superb
Loved jelousy laksh ?
Osm…..
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superb loved it so much
AWESOME