Hey guys …its dolly here …..I know u all r shocked seeing many ff’s from me ….but I can’t fold my hands and sit …..that’s it ….
Sorry if I am troubling u all with my ff …..
As lately I have been writing on swasan ……so I thought to write on our evergreen lovers SWALAK
FIRST LOVE IS ALWAYS FIRST
So here is the story,
A man in formal black and white suit …..is sitting on a chair ….(company)
He is just staring a photo of a girl …….tears start to come from his eyes ……but hides the fact …
P.A. : sir …
Man : yes
P.A. : Sir ragini maam is here .
Man (rude) : what the hell …….
P.A was confused ..
The man composes …
Man : send her in .
P.A nods and leaves ……
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A girl enters wearing baby pink colour Saree with a handbag ..
Man : what r u doing here ? (Firm tone)
Girl : u forgot to bring ur file ….so ma said me to give it to u (innocently)
Man (rude) : so u gave ….now u may leave …
Girl : at least one day …u can’t be happy with me ! (With tears)
Man (rude) : no way . If u have that thought erase it .what ur brother did to me ….is unforgettable .
Girl wipes her tears
Girl (bit loud) : but u took revenge right ….by spoiling everything ! Y can’t u just forget everything …..forget her and move on .
Man (harsh) : u don’t have rights to speak loud ……whatever u and ur brother did …..is a sin and u will repay me ….
Girl (with tears) : then y the hell ….u married …
Man (rude) : I think …u already got ur answer …..now get out of my sight !
Girl (bit harsh) : I don’t what u saw …in that bl**dy bit*h …….that is not in me …
Now the man lost all his sense …
He gets up and gave a tight slap to her …..that his full palm was clearly seen in the girl’s face.
Man (rude) : better stay away …….or else ……..I won’t see u r a girl …..do u get it ……!….and for ur kind info ….u can never fill her place .
Saying the man goes out ….
The girl sits down and cries ……
Precap : not decided .
Hope u all like this ….and plz comment ……
This is an swalak , swasan and raglak ff …sorry for ragsan fans ……..
Sanskar and ragini will be villain …………..
Sanskar is the main villain ………
With love ,
Dolly
14 Comments
Aisa mat karo
Plz make swasan dolly di plz
Ragsan villain??u can chng them afterwards
I thnk ragsan r siblings ( l cnot imagine that seriously )
awesome happy its swalak live swalak and swasan also
Oh no don’t make Ragini villain :'( I hate to see tears in her eyes 🙁
Please it’s my request don’t make Ragini as a villain, please please please
nice intro
Plzz make it Swasan only
do what ever u want but at last keep it swalak.because many of people will tell to make swasan but please don’t do that
Agree. I requested in every ff even when I dnt like swaragini after swasan… But they all ende dup with swasan only. My request got vain
I agree with khusbu……dont make ragsan villain plzzz…..
Please make it Swalak and please don’t make Ragsan as villains
Thank god snskar is villain lol. Somewhere I hate him because he snatched swara from laksh… Not hate but dislike…
Do wahtever you want dear.. Ragini sanskar ko bhai behen, papa beti whatever… Bas ff ko swalak banana.. I AM tired of begging to all the ff writers.. Theyall emde dup with swasan only… :/ :/ :v ..
You have no idea how delighted, excited and superbly happy I was, when you mentiomed in the beginning… Evergreen jodi and first love is always first.. So true.. Love you for that!! :* :* please give a longer update
Awsm part.I am big fan of swalak . Plz continue.