Episode – 14
Hey guys ..it’s dolly here …waiting with rotten tomatoes and chappals right ..sorry couldn’t concentrate in this
Pl support me now …
As today is my birthday I wanted to post these ff ..
And one more thing because of dipit my supporter ..she wanted this ff ..and was continuously asking Me
So dipit this episode is dedicated to u dear enjoy ,
Swara goes from there crying ..
Laksh gives a death glare to sanky and leaves following Swara
Swara goes and sits in her classroom bench ….she didn’t cry but just looks blank
Laksh comes and sits beside her ,
Laksh ; Swara he didn’t deserve
Swara who looks at him ..instantly hugs him shocking him
Laksh slowly slowly hugs her back
Swara : thanks for saving me from that devil Laksh
Laksh (laughs) : devil ???
Swara : ya he is ….the monster …the devil ..the blo*dy cheapo..
Laksh breaks the hug and looks at her ..
Swara : ufff….what does he think huh I am a fool and he is playing with Me …let me show who swara (attitude)
Laksh looks at her and smiles
Swara : but I need your help
Laksh : oh sure
Swara : just act as if you are in love with me and propose in front of the collage ….let him get jealous and come to me ….by himself …
Laksh in mind : why should I act …when I am already in love ..with u shona
Swara ; OK …romance with me sometime
Laksh in mind : god thanks a lot for this opportunity….
Swara : OK na
Laksh : of course ..OK OK …
Swalak shakes hands ….manik was listening their conversation and smiling
Manik ; now no one can catch laksh in hands .. (smiling)
The next day ,
Sanskar , kavitha and karthik were sitting near the gate and ragging juniors …
While opposite side laksh and manik were discussing about something …
Swara makes an entry , she was wearing pink crop top and sky blue skirt up of knee ….her belly was clearly shown ….
She walks in and all the boys were gone woo …
Sanskar and laksh jaws dropped ..Swara had a million dollar smile …
Sanskar comes to swara
Sanskar : I am sorry swara
Swara (smiling) : but I don’t need your sorry
Saying this she goes towards her classroom
Manik ; array idiot ….don’t waste time …you plan na
Laksh : oh ya …
He signals some person …he goes and hits swara shoulder intentionally and makes her fall ..
Laksh rushes there and catches her holding her waist …
Everyone there looked on shocked …especially sanskar burning in jealous …
But thank god ragini was absent .
Manik smiles seeing them ….
Swara (low tone) : laksh enough of staring …now propose me
Laksh comes to senses …
Laksh : oh ya …
He makes her stand and bends in front of her ….
Swara was looking at him ….Laksh takes a red rose ..
Laksh ; swara from the day I saw u …I forgot to breathe , from the day I saw u …I started to feel flowers weren’t beautiful ….from the day I saw u moon wasn’t shining anymore , from the day I saw …the only thing I wanted to say was
I LOVE YOU !!!!!!!!!
Swara was shocked (acts) but actually she felt someone really proposed her ….
Laksh (funny) : swara if u take this flower fast ….I can get up ..my knee is paining
Swara laughs and takes his flower and hugs him
Swara : yes I love u laksh
Laksh felt very happy …he felt she said by heart …
Manik was so happy ….he claps and the whole collage starts to clap
But sanskar wasn’t knowing what’s happening there …
Sanskar goes to swara and pulls her
Sanskar : swara u love me na (angry)
Swara smirks ….laksh comes in between and frees her hand
Laksh : excuse me she is my gf …
Sanskar gets angry and holds his collar …
Sanskar : I know this is all fake ..she is mine and don’t u dare (angry)
Laksh (smirks) : oh is she yours
Saying this he pulls swara with one hand and pecks her lips …shocking swara …
Sanskar was too shocked …he leaves laksh …
Manik : if sanskar talks another word …na I am sure laksh will show first night scene here itself (giggles)
Sanskar : I know you are acting I will find very soon (blank)
Saying this he leaves …everyone gets busy in their works
swara (shocked) : what u did huh
Laksh (innocently) : we should make him believe na …
Swara (still shocked) ; oh ya …bye class is there ..
Laksh waves bye ..swara leaves in shocked manner
Manik comes and keeps his hand on laksh shoulder
Manik ; seriously dude ….
Laksh ; swara is mine and I deserve her more …
Manik smiles and both leaves to classroom ….
Sanskar sits with kavitha
Sanskar ; I know she is acting …she can’t ..how can she
Kavitha (seduce) : sanskar leave that all …why don’t u give me a chance
Sanskar (smirks) : sanskar always chooses the best kavitha
Kavitha (angry) : is swara best than me
Sanskar (smirks) : of course ..she has the beauty ….she has the figure …she is rich and mostly she is Virgin …
And I am sure u are not a Virgin
Kavitha rolls her eyes
Sanskar (smirks) : now only one thing I have …that’s to prove these two are acting …mission swalak .
Kavitha (winks) : I am with u ….
Sanskar smiles .
At corridor
Laksh was standing surfing his mobile while taking the support of wall …
All the girls were giving him seduce smile …while laksh didn’t care …
Swara sees sanskar coming in opposite side …
She immediately goes and pulls laksh with her …
Laksh ; what the …
Before he could say ….swara keeps her lips on his ….laksh widened his eyes ….
Sanskar who passes by sees this and gets angry …
Swara looks at sanskar through side corner eye …and smiles …
Sanskar stamp his foot and goes
Swara breaks the kiss and looks at him going ..
Swara : uff thank god !
Laksh was still in shock ..
Swara : sorry huh …but to make sanskar trust…
Laksh : it’s OK …
Swara smiles
Precap : more romance …more fun …more the mission swalak
Hope u all like it ..plz comment …
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21 Comments
thankuuuuuuyuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu sooooioooooooooooooo much dolly…i am waiting for this long time….once again thank u
Welcome dear…it’s my pleasure
now i read coz i firectly came to comment before reading….and i am confused ..dipit its me ot any other person..coz my name is dipti..if u dedicated this epi for me i am so happy …for this ff i will give 10/10 coz there is reason..first i love ur story name …and in this ff shona and lucky love towards both is first love..becoz i think ur first ff is swalak right..and ur wonderful writer ,all of thisis a swalak ff…in real show they didnt show their first love well…thank u to u and aliya for first love is always first and my obsessive love..i stop my blahh ..but u dont stop this ff for less comments and i am there always to comment in ur ff…bye take care
Of course dear …this episode is only dedicated for u my dear sissy …
This much big comment ….ahhh ….but I am so happy to see the love and care
I have made myself ready that I will write this ff for u ….comments come and go but readers and supporters like u are few dipti dear …
I have started writing the next part asap for u dear !
Me and alia are blessed with u dear such a cute sis ….
I am happy …very happy reading your comment
Take care and keep smiling
ohhh sry dear ….wish you a verryyyyyy happy birthday dear in ur birthday u gave me a wonderful
oh sry wish u a very very happy birthday may god give u all the happiness in the world…happy birthday to this wonderful writer,beautiful girl dolly
Oh thank you dipti dear ….you wish made my day beautiful girl (dipti)
Hoo thank u dears I have two sisters now…
We also got another member in our family
Dipti dear u register soon in TU we can chat easily in it ….and u can write your own ff too ….
Awesome…?
Superb
Hey hi dear I’m pari. Today only i read this part. Is it a swalak ff right. I tried but didn’t get its previous parts. Can you please give me the links i really want to read it plz. And happy birthday dear i wish you will get all the happiness of your life . Have a wonderful life ahead
Oh god pari di…..I am a very big fan of di
I am a regular reader of love blossoms and your previous swalak ff also ..
How jiju and how is your health ….why aren’t u updating your ff ….di
Thanks for the wishes di …..and blessings di
Thanks so much dear for this wonderful reply. I’m very much happy that you are reading my ff. I’m very much happy dear and ill post soon. But really you are writing very good
Oh di come on …yaar I am nothing infront of u …but thanks for the energy booster comment …
Seriously I am badly waiting for your ff
happy b’day dear!!!
loved it dear .
Omg u came back . I miss ur this ff & other also like yellow rose & meri aashiqui & also miss u dear. & Happy birthday to u ?????????????? may god bless u with all happiness & joy & have bright future. Awesome episode. Plzz don’t stop this ff & post it asap. & how r u dear , now ur leg is fine na. Thank god u update it for all ur wellwisher including me. …..bye…..take care dear …….keep smiling always.
Finaly u posted…part was jus Wow awesome…bt too late missing ur ff badly…eagrly waiting fr nxt
Finaly u posted…part was jus Wow awesome…bt too late missing ur ff badly…eagrly waiting fr nxt…love swalak pls update continue nd happy bday dear…
Finally u updated…. n I will kill u if u stop writing dis ff….
just kiddig,but on serious note I really love ur ff…its marvelous….