Hey guys ..its dolly back with the ff …thanks for the comments and hope u all didn’t find it boring and didn’t forget this ff
Here is the link for last episode ,
Episode 3
So here is the story guys ,
*******************PAST STARTS******************
St.Teresa collage
A boy is shown standing in the spotlight with a guitar in his hand and everyone shouting and cheering
lucky ! Lucky ! Lucky !
Yes it Laksh , Laksh kapoor !
Laksh start his guitar , twirling his fingers in it and starts to sing
Going around the stage
Goriya re choriya re
Goriya re choriya re
Tera jalwa dekha toh dil huaa Milkha
Badi tez bhaage re..
Manma emotion jaage re
Manma emotion jaage
Manma emotion jaage re
Manma emotion jaage
He was rocking with his finger performance and his hand on the hair .
Dil jagah se hil gaya re
Dil jagah se hil gaya re
Tukdo mein nikla re dil ka chilka
Tune phenka khaa ke re
Manma emotion jaage re
Manma emotion jaage
Manma emotion jaage re
Manma emotion jaage
A girl comes and everyone starts to shout rags …..rags ……rags !
Yes it ragini , Laksh cousin but no officially
Saiyaan.. mera desi typical saiyan
Peepal ki thandi chhaiya
mein naache ta ta thaiya
thaiya daiya daiya
Mera desi typical saiyan
Peepal ki thandi chhaiya
mein naache ta ta thaiya
thaiya saiyan saiya
Kavya and ragini starts to hip movements and sings parting different ways and standing on either side of Laksh ,
Kavya Gupta sister of sahil Gupta.
Dil ki phansi hai naiyaa majdhaar mein
Sun le vistaar mein
Ho lut gaya pyaar mein
Ye toh bata de mere jazbaat ka
Itna kam rate kyun hai tere bazaar maan
Now the above lines were sung by rajat …while playing with he drums …..
Rajat mehta brother of kavitha mehta …..
Karke waada, kyun na aayi
Karke waada, kyun na aayi
Huaa dil ka jagrata
Halka-phulka sa dhokha kha ke
Manma emotion jaage re
Manma emotion jaage
Manma emotion jaage re
Manma emotion jaage
This above lines were sung by our karthik
Manik malhotra , the best male singer in their gang ……brother of Swara malhotra
Rap)
Tu jo mila mujhe mohalle ke mod pe
Express highway ke baaju wali road pe
Badtameez gaadi roki seeti maari
Mujhe chheda kiya mujhko ishara
Ashleel aada tedha
Dekha muda badha bola
Lakht-e-jigar mast figure
Aake idhar beth jaa
Baaju waali seat khaali, aaja beth!
Our rock star again comes to spotlight with his guitar and starts to sing in a high speed rap
Making the girls flat and more cheering for him
Saiyaan.. mera desi typical saiyan
Peepal ki thandi chhaiya
mein naache ta ta thaiya thaiya daiya daiya
Mera desi typical saiyan
Peepal ki thandi chhaiya
mein naache ta ta thaiya
thaiya saiyan saiyan thaiya
This lines were again sung our cutie pies ragini and kavya …..
They finish the song by Laksh making a rockstsr poster , kavya and ragini on either side of Laksh …..rajat showing his drum sticks ….and manik with mic position …
Everyone gave a big applause and the judges were gone crazy ……
All gave an standing ovation ……
Anchor comes .
Anchor : wow wow ! That was an marvelous performance for all rock stars …a big round of applause to FAB 5 .
Everyone shouts ……..
Anchor : before we go for results ..we have one more performance from same collage ….guess who
Everyone shouts : CHARMERS !
anchor : correct ..let’s give a big round of applause to charmers
The lights goes off .
A boy comes with a guitar in his wearing black blazer with brown shirt ……
Smiling with his killing devilish smile .
All goes crazy and shouts : sanky ! Sanky !
Yes its our most handsome hunk of sanskar maheshwari cousin of Laksh and brother of ragini ..
Imaandari ki bimari
Chhod de aaja, daud ke aaja
O kare dil tujhko invite
Ho saari night besharmi ki height
Ho saari night besharmi ki height
Ik tu.. ik main..
Aur ho dim dim ye light
Sanskar starts to sing the above line with a hectic rock star plastered on his face ….
Another spoilight falls on a girl who was wearing red crop stop and white skirt , her belly is clearly shown ….
She starts to sing …
Both sanskar and The girls sing together
Ho saari night besharmi ki height..
Ho saari night besharmi ki height..
Ik tu.. ik main..
Aur ho dim dim ye light
Now the girl shows her face …yes its Swara , Swara malhotra …..
Younger sister of manik malhotra ……
All shout : Shona ! Shona !
Aye bigda hoon main yun
thoda tu bhi bigad jaa
Arey aage badhun main
thoda tu bhi aage badh jaa
Sanskar and Swara does some close steps together …making all the girls and boys jealous ….
Both sings and dance ……
Making stunts …….
Aaj neeyat thodi hone de kharaab si
Dikhne lagi hai inn hawaaon me sharaab si
Sharaab si sharab si, sharab si sharab si
Sharaab si sharab si, sharab si sharab si
A girl comes and joins Swara in her song ….
Yes its Kavitha mehta sister of rajat mehta .
Both Swara and Kavitha starts to sing on the beats …
Saari ki saari, hai jo khumaari
Aa dono peele lamhe nasheele
Karein humko ye bada excite
Ho saari night besharmi ki height
Ho saari night besharmi ki height
Ik tu.. ik main..
Aur ho dim dim ye light
Again a boy comes and joins the spotlight girls ……
He keeps both hands on the shoulder of Swara and start to a twirl while singing
He is sahil Gupta , the male singer in collage
Sahil Gupta is brother of kavya Gupta .
Dil ye gaayab ho gaya hai apni jagah se
Jo bhi hua hai wo hua hai teri wajah se
The above were sung by sanskar , he came towards sahila and took Swara towards him….
And started to do close steps towards her …..
Both spins and lands perfectly on each other embrace ….
Leni hai saanse mujhe ab tere sath mein
Kahin bhi leja haath leke tere haath me
Haath mein, haath mein, haath mein
Saath mein, saath mein, saath mein
Those above lines were sung by swasan ….both standing together and holding each other hands ….
Hai jawaani, kare shaitani
Iss umar mein, dil ke safar mein
Kya wrong hai, kya right..
Sanskar leaves Swara hands and goes towards the center stage with he guitar and dances along with sahil ..
After sometime karthik comes from back
And dances along the beat ……
Yes its karthik khanna , the drums player of the gang
Ho saari night besharmi ki height
Ho saari night besharmi ki height
Ik tu.. ik main..
Aur ho dim dim ye light
Swasan both sings …while sahil and kavitha foes background song
Ho saari night besharmi ki height
Ho saari night besharmi ki height
Ik tu.. ik main..
Aur ho dim-dim ye light
All comes together to the stage and starts to sing together making a rainbow shaped close hand type
Wo oo
They finish the song by sanskar carrying Swara in his arms , Swara making a mic position , Kavitha sitting position mid style , while sahil on the other side sitting style mic position and karthink lying the middle of swasan with drums sticks on either hand ..
All gives crazy ….all stands up and were shouting chamers ! Chamers !
The judges gave a standing ovation …and the charmers goes back stage .
Anchor : that was an marvelous performance …a big round of applause to chamers !
Evryoen shouts ….
Anchor : now its result time ….judges plz come tot he stage
Judge 1 : we don’t know …what to say ..all have showed their best skills and moreover we enjoyed watching it ….
Judge 2 : loyala collage thrird price ..
Everyone claps ..
Judge 3 : IEC collage runner up
Everyone claps …
Judge : now for the position goes to …
Everyone were curious
All judges together : its an tie !
Everyone bursts out crazily , clapping and shouting ***chamers ! Fab 5 !
Both the teams were happy
They went to the stage ……
Anchor : fab 5 can u plz say how r u feeling !
Laksh : its a great pleasure ……its a dram come true ……fab 5 rocks ….
Everyone claps and shouts ; love u lucky !
Laksh : love u too guys ….(he gives flying kiss and all girls falls down )
Anchor : that was marvelous let’s ask about charmers
Sanskar : yup we r double happy and this all because of my lovely game g and my friend out their …..isn’t it guys
Everyone shouts and cheers ….
Sanskar : charmers rocks ..!
Everyone shouts : love u sanky
Sanskar gives a devilish smile and all girls passes out !
Anchor : that was great ….but I must say ur chemistry with miss Swara malhotra was marvelous …
Sanskar smiles at Swara ….
Swara : its not chemistry but friendship …our passion to win …….r u guys hearing
Everyone shouts : shonaaaaaa !
Swara gives a flying kiss and all boys passes out …..
They all get their prices and heads out …
@collage corridor …
Swara : we won …we won ….
Swara starts to jump like a kid …..
Sanskar comes out ….Swara hugs him tightly …..
Swara : we won ….
Sanskar smiles ….
Sanskar : hmm ya …..we again won …
Sahil : yaar ….this month was tried so today night at Swara place ….
Swara : done !
Kavitha : finally ….but that idiot shouldn’t have won yaar anyways …
Swara : u r correct ….see sanskar that stupid Laksh also won .
Sanskar : its OK there are many shows ahead ..now forget all and get ready for
Karthik : party time ……
All shouts and shares a group hug !
@Laksh gang .
Kavya : we won ….who can beat us …
Ragini : correct ..
Laksh comes ragini and kavya hugs him tightly ….
Laksh : gid ..I can’t breathe now
Ragini : stupid !
Laksh smiles and hugs her back ……
Rajat : but when that’s sanskar won …how could it be tie
Manik : but must say ..they did good only ….
Laksh : hmm ya …those idiots are our tough competition ….no matter what !
Manik : OK leave all that ..today at my place OK …
Ragini : oh sure ….yayyy
Kavya : party time ….
They all shout and share a group hug !
To be continued
I know this was boring cause ….this is the intro of the characters ….sorry for wasting ur time once again ….hope u like the concept .
With love ,
Dolly
25 Comments
Dolly its really nice and eagerly waiting for swalak love..
so nice. really interesting. pls make somthing new. always same pairs.
Awesome start…Update soon dolly
its nic yaar
Superb yr plz continue
Awsm.Ek baat, hum swalak fan kam he yaha tu me.So, tumme kitni comments milengi pata nehi.Toh jitna bhi mile usse kam chala lena.So don’t feel bad, ok.Love you.
nice episode. update soon next part
oh god.. it is superb… please write this regularly please.. i loved it so much.. please upload next part soon
superb.. do continue dear
awesome.. waiting for next part.. intro was rocking
Loved it dolly di….just truely awesome…..amazing and just want to say di u r a fabulous writer…
nice one
awesome
superb yaar
Awesome yrrrrrr
awsm dear
lovely
Swalak….swalak
awesome work dolly
interesting
want to see negative sanskar
Awesome
Awesome dear…. First time want to see sanskar villian bt I’m also a big fan of swasan .. Most ffs based on swasan and ragsan…. All r giving less importance to Laksh… So it is awesome
Amazing episode. & I think both group come at one place right. Swara & manik’s place.