Hello lovely people! I am back with an OS!
So now i will start ⛧…
The scene starts on a girl who is checking some reports..
Girl-So Mrs Maya after checking ur reports it seems u r completely fine now..but remind u take care of urself..u r weak..u need extra care..u knw..in this stage of pregnancy it is very imp for a would be mother to be careful..u should carefully plan everything ur food..ur sleep and ur exercise shd also be on time..u r strictly prohibited frm doing any house work…and Mr Mehra ..u have to take extra care of ur wife now..its only one month left for her delivery date..
Maya-Thank u so much Dr..I will take care..
Mr Mehra -Yes Ms Sanchi..if u wouldn’t be here..we would have lost our kid…Thank u!…
(Yes the dr is none other than Sanchi..she is a gynaecologist)
Sanchi -Sir..its not only bcoz of me..its her..who did not lose her strength and her determination..she had to bear d pain…i jst consoled her..and helped her..after her accident it was difficult to save her child..but its jst bcoz of her and ur prayers which saved the child..And once again i m reminding u both..pls take care..u r weak maya..and u need to gain strength till d delivery date…for a safe delivery..
Maya-Yes we will make sure…amd Thank u once again..now we will take ur leave..bye..
Sanchi smiles…They go and Sanchi sees the watch…
Pov…
Ohk its 4pm…and i knw wat is gonna happen…5..4…3….2…1..she counts and her phone rings..and she picks it up with a smile…
Sanchi -Yes mom..Ya ya i have eaten my food…yes i shared it wid rohan..yes..mom. 1 min wait..how cn u decide this…ma pls…wat will i do their…and..hello hello..ma not not again and she cuts d phone…..
Oh god..one more trouble my mom..no no..shes not d trouble..infact she is d solution to all my problems..but today..she created a problem for me..what!I’ll tell u..she wants me to meet some guy..my sister’s husband bro and Di fell in love wen they were studying engineering..last year and i was in USA pursuing my Medical…I had no idea wen her engagement got final until..
Flashback⛧
Tring Tring Tring my phone rang..and to remind u i was sleeeping coz it was night there…
I picked up d phone..
Hello I said in a sleepy tone..
Di-Sanchi ..u r sleeping get up its afternoon…she sounded excited..and i think she forgot that i was USA..
Di its 3 am here…i again said in a sleeping tone..i asked di what happened why r u sounding so excited..
-Sanchi ..i m getting engaged in 3 months….i want u to come..and i knw u have ur Finals the nxt month so u can come..home..by the 2nd month..
Okay i said..and cut the phone..but then realised that my di..my nerdy is goona get engaged..i was happy 4 her..very..much..i love her..
Flashback over⛧…
But the problem was I missed their engagement…because..my finals were postponed..and i came home after 1 month of her engagement…imagine wat a volcano might have blasted on me..but it was calmed by my jiju..After that i decided to work here in mumbai itself…Luckily my bestie..Rohan who is also a doctor and owns a chain of hospitals..showed mercy on me and gave me a job..on d condition tat i will share my food wid him always..jst kidding he knew my talent so i was appointed….now its been 6 months i m in Mumbai.. nd my ma baba are running behind me 4 marriage wich i dont want…as..my di is gonna marry in two months..and i dont wnt myself to thnk abt marriage now…Returning 2 d current problem i have to meet “this guy”god knws who is he..the 2nd prob is..even if i want 2 meet him i cannot..coz i have a very imp meeting wid some Mr.kabir who is a renowned Cardiologist.
So now i have to take help of..
I heard..(pov ends)..
May I come in Madam!..said Rohan..
Rohan-U were cmg to me ri8..
-Yes actually ma wants me to meet some guy..my jiju’s bro..but i..
Rohan-u have a meeting..
-U knw me well..so now u gonna talk to my ma..
Rohan -Ufff ragu..u r too much..i will not talk to her..pls..she will ask abt my marriage..but u knw na Me and riya need some time..
-I knw..and u have to….
Rohan- Nautanki…okay i will call..saying this he calls nd Sanchi asks him to put d phone on speaker…
Jaya-arre Rohan beta..aaj mujhe tumne kaise yaad kiya(sorry if there is a mistake..i am not good on hindi) .Did sanchi do smthng..I will scold her give d phone to her..
Rohan-Arre no no aunty actually d thng is Sanchi has a meeting ..tday and she will not be able to go to meet d person..pls Aunty..
Jaya-Koi nahi beta..i knw u will not lie..if ragu told me this i would have not agreed but u saying it is acceptable..okay..byee beta take care…
Rohan cuts d phone..and sees..sanchi standing..with her jaws dropped..
Sanchi-This is not fair..she always does this and she sits with cute puppy face..
Rohan-Arre..sanchi..its d truth accept it..she loves me more than u..after all i m her only son..and he winks..
Sanchi -Acha..i am her daughter she loves me more..and shows him tongue ..but i m happy to get such cute..caring brother like u saying this she pulls his cheeks..
Rohan-Thanks..wait did u jst call me cute..sanchi u knw na..i dont like u calling me cute..!..
Sanchi is gonna say something when rohan’s phone rings..
Rohan-Yes i m coming make him sit in my cabin..
Sanchi i m going i will call u inn..in 5 min..okay and BEHAVE..
HE leaves..
Sanchi imitates Behave..
Sanchi -..ok now Sanchi concentrate..u have to do this meeting nicely..
She is called and she goes..
She enters and sees a handsome and a dashing male sitting..wid rohan…
Her pov..
Ok ok..i was startled to see him..is he d experienced doctor abt whom rohan was talking..he is so damn handsome..his eyes..are deep and passionate..his stubble..makes me like him even more…wait wat did i think..like..Sanchi concentrate..he is ur new boss…but his eyes have a hypnotizing effect…sanchi controll..
My thoughts were broken by rohan..
Miss..introduce urself…rohan said..
He knows me very well…
Sanchi -Good evening sir..i m Sanchi ..Nice to meet u..and forwarded her hand..
Rohan smiled at her..
Kabir -Hello miss Sanchi i m Kabir ..nd shook hands with Sanchi.
Kabir Pov..
So it was quite strange..she was my junior..but she might be a year younger to me..she looks cute..no..beautiful..jst like a true..Princess charming…wait LUCKY..u jst chngd d name frm..prince to princess charming..strange…but her eyes…the most beautiful thng i have ever seen..her smile..be d cutest..wait hey concentrate..she’s ur junior..but i like her…calm down..its jst a mere attraction….now concentrate..
Pov ends..
Sanchi -So ro..rohan stares her..i means sir shall we start discussing d topic..
Rohan-Yes miss..Sanchi..
Sanchi and kabir sit..and they three start their meeting…
The meeting ends….
At night..
Sanchi ..oh godd..my scoooty..why do u trouble me by not getting start..chalo..now i will ask rohan for lift and she goes and stands near d gate..and is going to call rohan wen..she hears a horns and turns to find Kabir in d car..
Kabir -Miss Sanchi ..do u need a lift?..
Sanchi -No sir i will manage..rohan will drop me home..dnt stress urself..and she smiles..
Kabir -Vaise..rohan has already left..riya ka call aya tha..
Sanchi -Oh..this rohan..pyar mein andha..and sir..u dont worry i will take a taxi..
Kabir -I said na..i will drop come sit..
Sanchi agrees and sits..
Kabir-So where do u live..
Sanchi pov..
Oh god..this is wat i feared i cannot tell him that i m a Mishra ..its like i dnt like this publicity..my dad is renowned buisness man..and if someone comes to knw that i m his daughter they will ask that why did i not prefer working in my dad’s hospitals..or any other field..this is d reason why i dont disclose my real
Name..as i want 2 achieve everythng on my lyf by my talent onlyt..not jst bcoz i m a Mishra ..rohan knws this hence he always asks me 2 introduce myself..nd now if he comes 2 drop me..he will come to knw by the name plate…
Her thoughts r disturbed by Kabir ..
Kabir-Miss i asked for ur address to drop u not and that u r thinking so much..
Sanchi -Oh ya..sorry..take a right frm here..
Kabir-Thinks strange..okay he says..
There is a silence in d car when Sancbi shouts stop..and laksh applied brake..
Kabir-What happened..
Sanchi-We reached..she gets out of d car..
Kabir..opens d window..and says u live here..a bus stop and autostand is seen and no house or no buildings are around..
Kabir -Sanch u live here..there’s no building or a house here..
Sanchi -Actually..i live in Juhu ..and i heard Rohan saying that u live in bandra..so u would have to travel extra distance 2 drop me..nd its better i take an auto here..and pls dont say no..i took lift frm u na ..
Kabir-Okay but on 1 condition stp calling me sir..u can call my Kabir..and give me a call wen u reach..
Sanchi-Okay..Kabir …but how will i call u…
Kabir-Simple..by mobile..u give me ur no..and then realises..ohk..sorry if u dont want to give then its okay..he says..
Sanchi raises her 1 eyebrow..at his statement and smiles saying..Kabir i was joking..wait give me ur no..
Kabir -Smiles at her antics..and gives her his no..and bids a good bye 2 her..
Sanchi took an auto and reached home..she messaged Kabir ..she reached..and slept after having dinner..
Next Day…
Kabir entered Sanchi’s cabin to take sme files frm her..but also asked..
Kabir -Sanchi why did u mssg me..?.i mean i told u to call..
Sanchi -She chuckles but hides it before Kabir sees and says..voh its that I don’t call strangers u knw..
Kabir is shocked..and says..we are frnds na!..
Sanchi -Frnds..but frm wen..and raises her eyebrow..
Kabir -frm wen i allowed u to call me..and i also drpped u na..
Sanchi -Acha..but i toh dont regard u as a frnd na..!
Kabir -Acha!..he gets sad..wen..
Sanchi starts laughng..arre buddhu i was joking..we r frnds…and forwards her hand for frndship….
Days pass and their bond changes frm frnd to best frnd and then they grew close 2 eachother..they both started loving eachother but d problem..was as usual..they were not sure of their partners so kept quiet!
But one day..
In Sanchi’s house..
Jaya – Sanchi ..and Pragya come down jaldi..
They both came down..wat happened they say..curiously..
Sunil-I nd ur mum have taken a decision..that along wid Pragya .Sanchi ..ur marriage will also take place..and we have already found a groom….Veer’s brother..and pls dont say no..we knw its hard foru to accept..but we want both of u to get a very well settled family..and it would have be better that u both get married in d same household..
Sanchi-But baba..i ..
Jaya- Pls Sanchi..
Sanchi -Sadly ok..amd runs 2 her room..
Pragya goes behind her..
Pragya -Wat happened Sanchi..she sees Sanchi crying on d bed..
Sanchi -Di i love someone else..
Pragya is shocked but happy..who is d lucky 1..
Sanchi – Kabir..she shows her his photo in her mobile..di i love him very much..
Pragya Is shocked to see d pic..and thinks..so my Sanchi loves..my dewarji..i mean her 2 be husband and she doesnot knw that he is none other than Kabir ..interesting..abh maza aayega..to tease her..
Prahya – Sanchi ..i understand ur love..but pls for me once meet golu..he is a very nice guy nd if u dnt like him..we will refuse for marriage..
Sanchi -Ok..saying this pragya leaves d room and informs Jaya and sunil her yes 4 d marriage..while Sanchi thinks..he only will reject me …
The scene shifts to kabir’s house..
Anand-kabir its our final decision u r going to marry Sanju….swara’s sister..
Gayatri -Yes beta..we have met her..she is jst lyk d girl u desire for..all good qualities she has in her..pls for us..
Kabir-But..
Anand-See Kabir ..Sunil is my best and old frnd..i cannot refuse him..now..wen his daughter has agreed 2 marry u..tom..ur going to meet her along with Veer..and thats final..
Kabir angrily goes to his room..
Veer also goes behind him. Kabir….listen y dont u jst meet her..i bet u Will fall in luv with her..
Kabir -But bhai i love someone else..Veer is shocked..kabir Malhotra has fallen for someone who is that lucky girl..kabir shows him her pic..veer thinks..so he loves my saaali saheba..amd he himself does not knw that she is pragya’s sis and his to be wife..mazaa toh lena padega is situation ka ..kabir atleast meet her and then give ur ans..kabir agrees…Veer leaves..
At night..
Tring tring..
Veer -Picks d call..
Pragya -Hello mr sleepy head get up..i want to tell smthng..
Veer -Ha tell tell..the 3 magical words..i m dieing to hear..
Pragya -abe o Veer raat ko bhi yahi baat..
Veer -These type of thngs are talked in night only..
Pragya -Huff..leave it..now listen do u knw that kabir and sanchi luv eachother but they themselves r not aware that they r gng to marry each other only..
Veer -I knw..i knw..
Pragya -I have a plan..and tells him d plan which is muted…
The next day in d evening…
Veer and Kabir are waiting..for Sanchi ..actually Pragya couldn’t accompany bcoz Gayatri had sme work wid her..
Kabir -wen is she gonna come..i need to refuse n leave..
Veer -Wait have patience bro..
Kabir -Bhai..i ll jst come frm washroom..
Veer -ok..
At that time only.
Sanchi comes along wid a boy..
Veer -Sanju who is he..
Sanchi -Actually jiju he is raj..my bf..n i love him very much..and i cannot marry ur bro..
Kabir who saw Sanchi and heard her confession and is shocked..
So he is ur bf..right miss Sanchi ..or i shd say sanju ..
Sanchi is shocked and turns to see..her love..full of rage..
Sanchi -kabir tum yaha..
Kabir -Yes nd i m d same guy whom u jst rejected now..amd he storms..out..
Sanchi understands d situation and leaves behind him..
She is walking on d road..in search of Kabir ..wen two three teasers come and start teasing her..one goon starts comng close to her wen dhooom..
A person punches d goon and yes that is none other than our hero laksh..
Kabir one by one hits evry goon..wen 1 goon asks..why r u protecting her..kya tumhare saggi lagti hai..
Kabir -yes..i love her in full rage and anger and continue hitting them..wen every goon is injured he demands Sanchi to sit in d car..
Sanchi does not respond..anything..Kabir angrily holds her hand and makes her sit in d car..
Kabir drivers very angrily..sanchi tries speaking but he stops her by saying i m not interested in listening to u..
Suddenly…kabir applies breaks..
Kabir -Get out of d a car…we have reached d restaurant..go..to ur raj..he might be waiting 4 u..he says angrily..
Sanchi senses that he is jealous..she doesn’t answer ..and sits there only..
Kabir -I said get out..but Sanchi reluctantly sits there only..
Kabir gets angry and he himself goes out of d car..
She feels bad seeing him angry and gets out of d car and back hugs Kabir ..though he feels good and happy but..d thought..of her bf..brings him to d reality..and he removes her hands..and says.. u better go..i m not interested in any of ur..talks..
-But u have listen..she screams..
He also screams-Wat shd i listen..u love that raj..shd i listen this..or shd i listen..that u dnt want 2 marry me..tell!..
-I want u 2 listen..that i love u..i have always loved u..tum ho mera PAHELA PYAAR..i love u stupid..not raj..
Kabir -Acha..so wat happened upstairs..u presented raj as ur bf in frnt of my bhai..y!”..he demands
-Because i loved u..and did not want to marry..someone else..i did not knw that u r golu ..
Saying this she hugs him..he also hugs her back..and says..sorry Sanchi ..i mean sanju ..i love u..i m sorry i misunderstood u..before understanding ur point i poured all my anger on u..
Sanchi -Actually fault was not urs..it was mine..i shd have met Golu ..who now i knw is u..
They break d hug..
Kabir -So u agree that its ur fault..
She nods her head..
-So b ready 4 ur punishment..
-Wat punishment.
He moves closes to her and sees her lips..she understands and smiles..she closes her Eyes in approval and they kiss..
It was a deep…passionate…full of love and care…kiss..
They break d kiss and go up..and see Veer and Pragya..
-Di u here..
-Aur nahi toh kya..u knw how scared i got wen veer called me and told me that u brought ur bf…wen we knew that u both love eachother…
-So romeo and juliet..have reconciled..right.
Kabir smiles..and sees Sanchi …
-But it is cheating..u both knew then also..u both did this…i would have gotten a heart attack…agar mujhe sach pata nhi chalta…
-It was all Pragya’s plan..
Sanchi-Di..
Pragya-Alls well that ends welll!…she n veer laughs..while Sanchi and Kabir smile seeing eachother…
2 years later…
A lady is shown..screaming on d stretcher…
Lady-Kabir ..its paining..
-sanchi relax its gonna be a very easy method nthng will happen he assured…
-Angrily mr Malhotra …for ur reminder i myself is a gynaecologist..i knw..wats d procedure as i myself have performed it many times on others..but..never thought how much paining this procedure it is…ooouch she shouts..
-chillax..and she is taken in d ot..
All famuly member laugh seeing there nok jok..
After sme time..
They hear..a baby’s cry..
The nurse comes out and says..its a girl..now one person can go n meet her..kabir runs inside..and sees Sanchi sitting on d bed..with his daughter on her lap..
He comes inside…and sits beside d bed..
He takes his daughter on his lap..amd says..
Sanchi u have given me d worlds best gift..my Trisha …i love u…thanks for being my pahela pyaar…..
Sanchi – I love u too mera pahela pyaar..
He kisses Sanchi on her cheeks..and Trisha on her forehead…
The scene ends on their happy faces..
So people …. How was it…i know it was not good..but do tell me about ur views..ur comments matters a lot to me…⛧..
Thank u ….
Take Care….
Byeeee…..
Load of love
Moonlight Tania ⛧
34 Comments
Wwooww thats so lovely Moon ??? but a little confused with sanju, ragu, laksh, swara but got through at the end ?
Thanks a lot…glad that you got in the end….actually I was writing the ff very fast and was writing an OS on Swaragini that s why…i am glad you you liked it ??
its amazing
y u said not so gud
it simply amazing
Thanks a lot Hema
Fantastic mindblowing and superb
Thanks a lot dear
So sweet as u n tania when u write ur ff hatred to love nxt part i forget that u end it or not sorry but i m like a bhullakkad(short memory) joking sorry if it hurt u
Ohh ok never mind…thanks a lot…Niyaaa.. ??
Amazing…I loved it
Thanks
It was totally adorable tania ????
hope you write more os qnd ff on kanchi plz plz
Thank you and sure
It is so amazing moon I really loved it lot.
Thanks dear
Ohh ok never mind..thanks a lot Niyaaa ??
Nice story yaar.this os is outstanding,awesome
Thank you…glad you liked it
Awww that was so so sweet awesome as always just loved it
This was so adorable simply mind blowing !
U r really a great writer tania!
Love u loads ?
Awwww I just saw u named names their daughter after my name so thanku for that I just saw that !
Thank a lot Sweetie…yes I did change the name into Trisha..because you are one of my favorite writer..love you too?
Awesome….. Sooo muchhh good.. Love it… And I think u r great fan of raglan and swasan too like me…… Anyways love this from core of my heart!!
Thanks yes I am actually I was going to post this in Swaragini after I changed my mind and changed all the names that s why it’s is written their names in some of the parts.anyway thanks
wow…….it was just amazing tania dear, or rather I must say… a khidkitod episode…….haha….such a lovely os……..omg, this os has got every flavor in it, I mean like comedy,romance, & a short action scene as well…. just loved it to the core of my heart………. kanchi as usual were splendid in their roles…. praveer, rohan were also too good……..
when sanchi was being taken to the ot & kabir saying don’t worry sanchi its an easy method, nothing will happen to u, i was like awwww…so cute, but i couldn’t stop my laugh when sanchi reminded him that she was indeed a gynac herself……..haha…….& last but not the least, u named the baby as trisha, wow……..
eagerly waiting for another amazing story from u moon……..sorry yaar for such a long comment…………..
Thanks a lot Riya..Your comment made my day and I had a wide smile on my face..you don’t have to be sorry…in fact I get happy that you wrote such a long comment.??
Tooooooool good amazing maza aagya moonlight. Thanku so much for shared with us dear.
Thank you Anee.i am glad you liked it
Awesome.I just loved it to the core.???
I think u r a huge fan of Swaragini bcoz in this Kaanchi os u used Swara’s S Laksh’s name.???
And Praveer this is not fair,u were playing with my Bhaiya’s emotions.
And ya,ur name is nice.Can i call u”Aysel”bcoz in Turkish language its meaning is same as Moonlight.It’s my hobby to call my friends by their nickname.
Keep writing dear.???
Thank you so much dear…you can call me whatever you like…actually I was going to post this in Swaragini page but afterwards I changed my mind and posted it in SDCH and for that I had change all the names but some names I forgot to.
It was amzing awesome and a cute os everything was perfect misunderstanding s and jealousy and loved the last part
Thank You! Glad you liked it
It’s amazing Moon ur awesome writer not a word and their meeting was nice and 2 yrs their nok joke was door cute moon
Thanks a lot Divya
Its really an awesome os i just loved it….. please go on with your writings…… my support will always be there for your writings….
Aww thank you so much Sana