When I First Met You – Avneil Os
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The scene starts with a girl walking down the stairs. She is lifting her gown, so that she won’t trip down the stairs. She is looking very beautiful. She is wearing a white gown, with her hair straightened and open, with red lipstick and pink blush.
“She looks like a princess” a boy whispered, as he looked at her.
“Aye bro, I hope you’re not in love now” his brother said, whispering to his ear.
“Ssh” he said, admiring her.
He took his phone out and secretly took a picture of her.
“Hello I’m Neela and I will be the host for today’s marriage reception” said Neela, as she stood there in the centre of the house, with a microphone.
“Today is my son’s marriage with Rambha” she said. Everyone started to clap
He kept looking at her. A few moments later, he saw the girl going in the garden, so he decided to go there and try to talk to her.
He went into the garden but she wasn’t there. He imagined her lying on the swing with her head on his lap, while he held her hand.
He started to walk up to the swing, but suddenly he bumped into someone. Without knowing a girl fell on his arms. He looked who it was and got surprised that it was her.
They both first stared into each others eyes and then the girl pushed him away.
“Aye, who do you think you are Mr?” She asked him.
“Wow” he said, looking at her.
“What did you just say?” She asked.
“Be careful next time you walk, if bump into me again, I will call the police” she said.
“Police, for your kind information, I am police too” he said, raising his eyebrows.
“Oh” she said pouting.
“Can I say something” he said kneeling down on his knees.
“What are you doing?” She asked him.
“Please” he said.
“Fine, hurry up” she said.
He held her hands.
“First I want to tell you that my name is Neil” he said.
“What’s your name?” He asked her.
“Avni” she said.
Neil: Avni, I…. love you! I love you!
Avni: What? Kya Bakwas Hai Yeh?
Neil: You are so beautiful, that I have fallen in love with you, please. I will always keep you happy.
Avni: The last boy I was with, said that to me, that he will always keep me happy. But he raped me instead. How can I trust someone else then?
Neil stood up and put his hands on her shoulder.
Neil: Does you mother know?
Avni: She will kill me, knowing that I dated him.
Neil: Is he in Jail?
Avni: No and please stay away from me! I said that I can’t love you because I can’t trust anyone.
Neil: What can I do for you, so you can trust me?
Avni: Please leave me.
Neil: I will earn your trust and your heart will also start beating for me. What’s his name? What college does he go too?
Avni: He goes to the same college as me. Agnes College and his name is Vikash.
Neil: When and where did you get raped by him?
Avni: In city hospital, room number 57. At 5pm. That time my mother wasn’t feeling well.
Neil: Leave it up to me. I will punish him.
He said leaving
She looked at him leave, as she got worried.
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He went to the city hospital and secretly went in security room. He found the footage of Vikash raping Avni.
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2 weeks later..
Neil arrests Vikash.
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3 years later..
Neil: I still can’t believe that you are mine now.
Avni: I really worried you, WHEN IFIRST MET YOU.
Neil crashed his lips on Avni’s lips.
Avni and Neil broke the kiss, because they needed to breath.
Neil: I love you
Avni: I love you too
Neil: Let’s do it today, I want us to become one soul, let’s become one. I want to make you a mother.
Avni: Yes, let’s become Avneil today.
He removed her clothes and started to kiss her everywhere. They were now lost into each other.
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– Nikita
17 Comments
1st meeting with a proposal that you can show in your storyline such a beautiful manner. the way Neil wanna express to avni this confession line ‘I can do you for everything’ that’s really mind blowing. Your proper description about your storyline gives me interest to read your episode. At last you show in your episode that Avneil is made for each other. That’s why I can’t help but appreciating about your beautiful concept.
OMG Thanks so much dear, I can’t believe that you really love my work. Thanks a lot!
hey it was sweet.loved it
Thanks
mybirthday is 10th november…yay…we are scorpions #scorpions
Superb and first meeting with Proposal thats really amazing.Loved it simple way you nailed it.
Thanks Fenil Bhai, you have been supporting my writings since I was a beginner, thanks for the support
Hello nikitanx.. We are in the same age!! So ltes be besties!!!
By the way, super story.. Write more…
You can just call me Niki. Thanks for the kind words, more stories are coming up. I have written more stories, you can click on my profile and read some Avneil Os. Yass we can be besties, same age twinning! When’s your birthday? Mine is 5November 2004
arre ,just 5 days before my birthdayyy..yayayy..but i suppose u are in 7t.or 8th
I loved you other ff
This is not fair too short plz make longer next time update soon
Which FF? I haven’t posted any on wattpad or on this acc
Superbbbbb a mazing mind blowing
Thanks
what is this??????? kya hai ye???? i can’t understand ye namkaran ki hi story hai na?????
Yeah why?
hello nikitansx nice story namkarann