“A VERY HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY TO ALL OF U”.(FRIENDSHIP DAY SPECIAL OS)
HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY……
Hi i am Sakash.Love u all.This is the first
time i am writing OS.
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The story starts :
Saanchi : Pragya,Isha i want to say something to u 2?
Pragya,Isha : What u want to say my dear cutie?
Saanchi : I Love Dr.kabir.I am going to propose him today.
Pragya : Abhae…wo…Kabh?Kaise?Kaha?
Kaise hua yae sab?Yaar isha pinch me?I am not dreaming Know?
(Abhae…wo…When?How?Where?
How this all happen?Yaar isha pinch me? I am not dreaming know?)
Isha : Oh teri beti ki?(Oh my God?)Same with me yaar Pragya.I will pinch u.U too pinch me.
Veer pinches Isha,Pragya.And says it’s true.Now my Golgappa is no more mine.
Isha,Pragya shouts in pain.At the same time cup their mouths with shock! listening to veer words.
Saanchi : Why u 3 r shocking that much?
And veer what r u saying?What do u mean?
Veer : Un dono ki chodho Miss.Golgappa!
Tum tho meri sapno ki mahal tukda tukda kardiya?
(U leave these 2 Miss.Golgappa!U already collapsed my dream palace into pieces?)
Saanchi : What do u mean veer?
Veer : Mein tho rojh,raat aur din tumhari aur meri sapnae dekh raha hoon.Yaha tum “Ek hazaron mein meri behana hai” wali sapna deekha diya tum nae?Yae na insaafi hai?
(I am dreaming daily day and night about u and me.Here u show dream to me of “EK HAZARON MEIN MERI BEHANA HAI” that means “My sister is one in a thousand”It’s not fair.)
Saanchi,Pragya,Isha burst into laughter.
Veer : U expected this from me?It’s a prank Miss.Golgappa!Take light!One thing u keep in ur mind?U r not my sister!U r my best friend?
Saanchi : Who said i expected this from u
veer?Ur prank oh god!what i say?
Veer : Miss.Golgappa i am sorry.Please talk something i am dying to listen!
Saanchi laughs and says Good prank veer.Of course u r my best friend.
Veer : Really!
Saanchi,Pragya,Isha : Of course.
Saanchi hugs veer.Veer too reciprocates
the hug as a best friend.Isha and pragya
too joins.
Veer : “HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY SAANCHI,PRAGYA,ISHA”.
Saanchi,Pragya,Isha : Thank u same 2 u my dear sweet cute veer.
Veer : Ok…ok…i know i am sweet and cute.
Saanchi,Pragya,Isha laughs.
Veer : Salute to lady power.
Pragya : Abhae…wo…Whom u r saluting?
Veer : Saanchi.
Saanchi : To me!why veer?
Isha : Because u r going to propose Mr.Khadhoos kumar!Am i right beer.
Veer : Isha u killed me!calling beer dear.U
r right.But i am afraid of Mr.Tsunami.
Saanchi : Mr.Tsunami not fair veer?Don’t
call him like that?He had a nice name
KABIR…(OR)…KABEER…(OR)…DR.KABIR.
Veer,Pragya,Isha : Awww…So…Sweet… Before marriage only u r supporting him like that haha…!
Veer : If marriage happens means?She won’t let flie’s(Girl’s)falls on him ha.
Pragya,Isha : They laughs and says,Of course beer.
Saanchi blushes…
Veer : U killed me again girls(Prasha).
Pragya,Isha : We r happy with ur decision
Saanchi.Dr.kabir we too love him!Now as
our KABIR JIJU.
Saanchi : Stop it guys.Till now i didn’t propose him.U r calling him as JIJU.
I will propose him.If he says u r my student!And nothing more than that!
Then…
Veer : Stop thinking in negative mode.
Switch on to positive mode.
Saanchi : Veer i am not a phone to change modes.
Veer : Ok…ok…cool…relax…
Saanchi : Ok i am getting late.I must go to
Dr.Kabir’s cabin.
Veer,Pragya,Isha : ALL THE BEST SAANCHI.
Veer,Pragya,Isha hugs Saanchi and bid a
bye to her.
Dr.Kabir’s cabin :
Dr.kabir : Where is this Saanchi?Till now she didn’t come to my cabin?
Just then Saanchi knocks the door.
Dr.kabir : Come in Dr.Saanchi.
Saanchi stares at him lovingly.
Dr.Kabir too stares at her lovingly.
Saanchi : Dr.Kabir when u will be free?
Dr.Kabir : Why r u asking?I mean anything
Serious or important?
Saanchi : Yes it is serious and important too.
Dr.Kabir : Ok then.Now u can tell me?
Saanchi : No.I mean i can’t say here.It’s
little bit serious.
Dr.Kabir : Ok then.Tell me where i must
meet u?
Saanchi : I will message u.
Dr.Kabir : Ok.Be ready at Sharp 6.00P.M.
Message me at Sharp 5.00P.M. Is it clear.
If it’s urgent means,now we will go!
Saanchi : No sir.First u complete ur work.
I will see u at 6.00P.M.
Thank you so much for coming.It means a lot to me.Sorry for giving trouble to u sir.
Dr.Kabir : U r not giving me any trouble.I am free at that time.So u no need to worry!
Saanchi : Ok…
Dr.Kabir : U may leave now.
Saanchi : Ok sir.
Saanchi left from Dr.Kabir’s cabin.
Veer,Pragya,Isha : U said him?
Saanchi : No!
Saanchi says i will tell him at 6.00P.M.
Veer : This is love Saanchi.Please don’t do late.If u lost once!U won’t get that again!
Pragya,Isha : Veer is right Saanchi.Do as
fast as u can?
Saanchi : I know guys.Thanks for ur support and love.
Pragya : Abhae…wo…chup ek dum chup…
(Abhae…wo…Just…Shup…up…)
We r ur friends.U break our rule!What we
promise to each other?
Saanchi : No sorry No thanks between us.
All for one.
Pragya,Isha : One for all.
Saanchi’s eyes become wet.Seeing their
friendship and love for her.
Pragya : Now don’t repeat this again!
Saanchi : Ok boss.
All laughs.
Slowly time slips and now it’s 5.00P.M.
Saanchi saw the time and messaged the
address to Dr.Kabir.
Dr.Kabir smiles seeing her message.
Dr.Kabir messages her that he received her message.Saanchi u stay at ur hostel.
I will pick up u.That’s it.No more arguments.
Saanchi : Yes sir.Thanks for giving reply sir.
(Dr.Kabir in mind : Why u want to meet me? What that much serious or important matter might be?What troubling u?I must find out?)
Slowly time slips to 5.30P.M.
Pragya,Isha,Veer select many dresses.
But she wore a simple dress with heavy ear rings.She is looking more pretty not less than Angel from heaven.
Veer praised her simplicity.
Slowly time slips to 6.00P.M.
Saanchi : Finally the clock indicates 6.00.
The time for which i am awaiting from
morning it arrives…Now i must leave…
VPI : GOOD LUCK SAANCHI.
Saanchi : Thank u guys.
Saanchi left the hostel.
Dr.kabir mesmerized by her beauty and
Simplicity.
Saanchi saw Dr.Kabir.Both lost in each other eyes.
After some time they reached the place.
The place is at the top of hills.The city looking small from there at the same time beautiful.
Some part is decorated with beautiful red tulips flowers and other with white tulips.
(Because i love tulips.So i mention tulips
here.)
Two chairs r arranged attached to the table.Candles r placed on the table.
Two glasses of soft drinks r placed.
To make feel special some one.It’s the best place.
Dr.kabir : Saanchi u did this?
Saanchi : Yes Dr.kabir.
Just then power cuts and whole city light
Vanished.Only candle light visible to us .
Suddenly light appears,First with words
HAPPY BIRTHDAY DR.KABIR…
Just then a call flashes on my phone with name MAA.I pick up the call.
Kusum : Hello Gollu.
Kabir : Hello maa.
Kusum : 1 week before i asked u to marry
one girl.Ur father gave promise to Sunil bhai saabh and Jaya bhabi(Saanchi’s father)that u will marry Saanchi.That Saanchi is none other than ur student
Saanchi Mishra.U like her.
(Saanchi too doesn’t know about this
Proposal)
Kabir : No maa.I don’t like her.I love her.
If possible do our engagement tommorrow and day after tommorrow do our marriage maa.
Kusum : I am happy beta.Finally i listened a word for which my ears r waiting. Thanks for giving my bahu finally.
Kusum cuts the call.
Just then 3 lines came :
1)DR.KABIR I LOVE U.
2)WILL U MARRY ME?
3)I WILL WAIT FOR U…TILL MY LAST BREATH…
Dr.Kabir : I am in trans… for some time.I just didn’t expect this from her?Never or
ever in my life.Really she makes me feel
very special.After my mom,she is the 2nd
one who makes me feel more special.
Actually i am not much expressive.I must
do this all?Instead she did this all for me.
A soft voice came from behind none other than Saanchi……So sorry Dr.kabir she said?
Dr.kabir : What happened Saanchi?Why r u saying sorry to me?
Saanchi : I don’t know u love some other
girl?U want to engaged with her and wanted to do marriage as soon as possible.So why i am here?
Saanchi is going to run away from that place,Dr.Kabir holds her hand and says,
Dr.Kabir : Saanchi u know Saanchi Mishra?I am going to engaged her and want to marry her
Saanchi turns back.She jumped and hugs
Dr.Kabir.Her happiness has no limits.It’s
limitless.He reciprocates the hug.
Saanchi says,I LOVE U DR.KABIR.
I LOVE U KABIR.
I LOVE U MR.KHADHOOS KUMAR.
I LOVE U…I LOVE U…I LOVE U…SO MUCH.
Kabir replies,
I LOVE U TOO DR.SAANCHI KABIR.
I LOVE U TOO MRS.KABIR.
I LOVE U TOO MRS.KHADHOOS.
I LOVE U…I LOVE U…I LOVE U…SO MUCH.
And she starts crying.
Dr.kabir holds her by shoulders and says
This much love u hide from me.He swipe
Off her tears with tissue.
Saanchi bends her head in shy.
Both eyes become wet.
Dr.kabir kissed her on her lips.Saanchi too
kissed him on his lips.They both share a
Passionate first liplock.
After sometime they parted away for some oxygen.
Dr.kabir praises Saanchi for making such a beautiful arrangements and sweet memories.
Dr.Kabir : Thank u so much for making me feel so special.
Saanchi : U r mine.Anything for u.
Dr.Kabir hugs her.Saanchi too reciprocates the hug.
Dr.Kabir : U r mine.Anything for u.
Saanchi : U copied my line.It’s bad kabir.
Dr.Kabir : No darling.I too feel same.Close
ur eyes first.
Saanchi : Why?
Dr.Kabir : Keep some patience.
Saanchi : Ok.
Dr.kabir slowly removes her ear rings and
he wear her beautiful ear rings.
(Ear rings picture i posted on page.Did u all like it.)
Saanchi : What r u doing kabir?
Dr.Kabir : A small gift from ur husband.
He showed ear rings on a mirror.Did u
like it?
Saanchi : Oh my god!I loved it.These r my
favorite ear rings.Thank you so much.
Dr.kabir : I don’t want ur thanks.Keep it with u.He showed his cheek.
Saanchi kissed him on his cheek.
Finally he sit on his kneels and proposed her.
Dr.kabir forward his hand and ask,
Dr.Kabir : I am kabir Rajput.I love u and wanted to marry u Saanchi Mishra.I will
Keep u happy life long.Will u marry me and makes ur’s and will u become mine
forever?
Saanchi forward her hand and keep in kabir hands and says YES.
Precap : “ENGAGEMENT ?
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I hope u all like it and enjoy today’s OS.
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I am trying my level best to give u a happy smile on ur face.I just want all ur support that’s it.Without u all i am incomplete.
Keep smiling have a good day.
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24 Comments
Just awesome mmmmm..
Pls update next… Soon
Supeeeeeeeerb
Oh god u killed me it was amazing superb
And HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY
Nice eating and story is also sweet
Its osmmmm….. And sanchi’s proposal was so good….. And Mr tsunami…. What a coincidence in my fs kabir calls sanchi ms tsunami… Our thoughts get matched… Hehe…. But its so gud
Its amazing yaar.. And the way u described the proposal scene was damn cute.. Loved it. Post next part soon!!
And Happy friendship day….
It amazing bhaiyya and HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY. And HAPPY RAKSHA BHANDAN
Bhai that OS was just fantabulous.. U totally brought a smile on my face.. Their cute date, confession was so magical.. That’s like the best gift we can have on friendship day!!! And the earrings at the pictures are great too. I can imagine kabir giving them.. When I read ur writing it looks like i am there watching them… Its really realistic.. Totally loved it bhai… And Happy Raksha bandhan bhai.. I couldn’t tie a rakhi but u already gave me the best gift… Loved all the scenes too much.. So its settled.. Along with an excellent ff writer u are also a stupendous OS author.. Loved it.. And precap.. Yayy!! So it has a second shot.. Double treat!!!?
Awesome ur are amazing writer.
Waiting for another chapter
Truely awesome episode yaar. Can’t wait for the next one.post it soon???
Sakash I just loved it.
It’s so cute nd lovely, amazing no words.
Only for u ??????????????
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee fantastic update asap
Awesome os and a girl proposed a. boy something unique and ur a fabulous writer do write soon
Amazing….plz post ur ff asap….. Happy friendship day
Awesome os… Confession paert was superb ?
Part* and BTW happy friendship day??
Its very amazing plzzz update the next part soon
Hey sakash this is just awesome too good yaar u r an amazing writer I loved kaanchi’s love confession and proposal and date scene too good can’t wait for the next part yaar
Awesome…please post next chapter fast..??
It was a superrrrrrrr se uparrrrrrr waala episode ?it brought a broad smile on my face ???ur ff & os both r osm?simply osm… a very happy friendship day & a happy raksha bandhan to u….eagerly waiting for ur next update asap ☺☺☺
This was tooo good sakash…..please post next part soon ….the proposal that little gift their date everything was so perfectly described ….just loved it to the core
it was so good and awesome one.you did very great
no word to say.when kabir proposed to sanchi was awesome and nice
waiting for next one
Hey Sakash….U nailed it.
Fabulous OS.
Love the friendship moments of Pragya Isha Sanchi and Veer. ❤❤❤❤
Lovely confession of Sanchi to Kabir.?
Totally loved it.❤