Hi This is VHM back with a new FF on IB couple SHIVIKA….A slow yet Subtle love story……..
This is completely off track FF on Shivika and a college life and post college life of Shivika based FF…nothing to do with the track of IB….May be few of you can relate to this….you all know the characters and few characters will behave the same way as in real IB…few will be different……The Beginning would be slow and may bore you, but as i always say these beginning episodes will be crucial to form the further story……..
Please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes…….Hope the readers would support me the same way as they have supported me till date……based upon the response on this Teaser/Prologue, i will be uploading the next episodes……
TAM : Thought At the Moment………
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Anika reached OM and with stumbling feet opened the mansion gate…soon a security guard came running to stop her……
Watchman ”Who are you? why did you come here? whom do you want to meet?”
Shivaay saw Anika coming and decided to play the much needed prank..he was waiting for the watchman to call….
Anika ”Bhayya…i have come to meet Dadi ji?”
Watchman ”Dadi ji…tell me the name of the person?” he tried to act smart even after understanding that she was referring to Mrs.Kalyani Oberoi
Anika TAM ”Ohh God …how stupid i am …till this day i didn’t ask Dadi her name”
Anika ”one..one minute…can i meet om, Rudra and Prinku?”
Watchman ”they are not in home Madam ji…they didn’t come from college yet”
Anika ”No one is there in the house then?”
Watchman ”Shivaay Sir is there”
Anika ”haan tell him Anika is here”
Anika TAM ”Thank God atleast he is there…i came to meet him only…but wait what will i say if he asks me why am i here? he would feel i am desperate to meet him…no no…i should leave”
Watchman called Shivaay and Shivaay who was waiting for this call picked up instantly….Watchman informed about the arrival of Anika
Shivaay ”Anika…who Anika? i don’t know anyone by name Anika”
Watchman held the reciever and said to Anika what Shivaay said…Anika bursted out in anger
Anika ”I knew he will not recognise me…i was mad to come here…look Watchman bhayya tell that Mr.Ritchie Rich that i too don’t know him….and ask him to stay back in home” she turned to leave…
Watchman tried to inform Shivaay but Shivaay already heard and was laughing …he asked the watchman to say what he is saying in the call…
Watchman ”Ms.Supranaka…” he shouted
Anika stopped and turned in anger
Anika ”how dare you call me like that…if i am Surpanaka ..then i have called you as watchman bhayya , so you are Raavan and this mansion is Lanka…got it” she huffed
Watchman was shocked ….
Watchman ”Mam…woh …Shivaay sir asked me to call you as Ms.Surpanaka…sorry mam….please go inside…”
Anika ”Mr.Ritchie Rich…you will pay for this…..” she screamed and stormed into Mansion
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Dadi was sitting in the sofa reading some book….Shivaay slipped into his room and was laughing mad ……Anika stepped in and greeted Dadi……
Dadi ”Anika puttar…come …come…how long it has been i met you? how are you now ?”
Anika answered all the questions Dadi posed and started looking around the house…Pinky and Jhanvi joined Dadi…..Dadi introduced Anika to them….Anika greeted them
Jhanvi ”Anika…are you searching for someone?”
Anika ”Aunty ji..where are Om, Rudra and Prinku/ did they not come from college yet?” She questioned knowing the truth as watchman already said her, unable to ask about Shivaay for whom she came
Jhanvi ”they didn’t come , but it’s time they reach home”
Pinky ”see…they are here” pointing her finger towards the door
Anika turned and stood up…Rudra ran to Anika and hugged her shocking her yet again
Rudra ”Anika dii…i missed you so much…actually sorry…we were not able to meet you after the press statement as we all had exams”
Anika breaking the hug smiled and said ”that’s okay Rudra..i too missed all of you so came here soon after the college, and guess what i gave up my library hour to meet you”
Rudra ”that’s awesome dii…give me a hi-fi…you know what i have many things to share with you…come let’s go inside”
Om ”Rudra …let her breathe a little..Hi Anika”
Anika ”Hi Om…how are you? ”
Om ”i must ask that how are you?”
Anika ”Look at me ? do i still show up sick?” she smiled
Pinky ”OMM…Anika sit sit…i musts says Thanks to you…you saids truths to media …we all’s were in tensions”
Anika smiled ”My pleasure aunty ji”
Prinku ”Anika come we will go near poolside and sit there”
Rudra ”one minute…i have some good news to share with all of you…where is Shivaay bhayya”
Anika smiled through her eyes…
Pinky ”He might be in his room…wait i will ask the staff to call him here”
Shivaay came there saying ”No need mom…i am here”
Anika saw Shivaay and Shivaay too gave a slight smile
Shivaay ”Ohh Ms.Surpanaka…you here…what a pleasant surprise? ”
Anik ”mr.Ritchie Rich…i am not gonna spare you…you made that Watchman bhayya call me as Ms.Surpanaka…i will see you in the college”
Jhanvi ”Wait a minute..how are you calling each other…surpanaka, Ritchie Rich…i mean what’s all this?”
Shivaay ”badi maa…that’s a long story…will tell you later”
Pinky ”Whatever but this girl is super awesomes…i liked her very much’s” she smiled
Rudra ”this is the problem no one listens to me”
Shivaay ”okk fine…tell me….we are all ears and also will keep quiet”
Rudra ”i passed all the exams ”
Everyone except Anika screamed ”Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaatttttttttttttt?”
Anika looked at everyone in shock…
Dadi ”Today it calls for celebrations…finally my youngest Pota made us proud”
Rudra ”Dadi…dadi….not only that i came third too…”
Again everyone screamed ”whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaatttt?”
Pinky ”OMM…..this calls for two celebrations”
Jhanvi ”pinky it’s not two celebrations …it is double celebration”
Rudra went near Anika and hugged her ”Thanks Anika dii…all this because of you and your accident”
Om ”rudra what are you saying?”
Rudra ”let me explain…Anika dii had accident..because of which we met her…then we became friends , stayed back in hospital…where she teached me and see the result…”
Om ”first time …Rudra..first time…you said soemthing sensible”
Dadi , Prinku, Jhanvi came near Anika and said ”Thank you from our side too”
Prinku ”you all go near pool side , while i will get some snacks”
Anika ”Prinku…it’s much time now…i need to pick up my Sahil…i will join you guys someother time” she turned towards Rudra ”Congratulations Rudra…i am so happy for you”
Then she took some notes from her bag and went near Shivaay
Anika ”Shivaay i don’t know why you were not coming to classes…so i brought the notes for you…it might help you cover the topics which you missed ”
Shivaay remembered how Anika discarded taking his help in hospital days…he returned the notes to Anika and Said
Shivaay ”did i ask you for notes…no na…then why have you brought…i don’t need your help…so please take it back…”
Anika was stunned so were others
Shivaay ”ms.Surpanaka, why are you shocked …i mean…this is how you reacted when i gave you the notes in hospital …so i am just repeating your words”
Anika ”ohh okay Mr.Ricthie Rich…then listen….i am not giving you an option …you are just taking this notes…and Anika dislikes to listen NO…remember i am Anika…just ANIKA”
Anika spoke remembering how he took her to college and write her internals….Shivaay too remembered the same incident….both laughed
Shivaay took the notes back from her and said ”THANKS Ms.Supranaka…will copy this and give it to you tomorrow”
Anika ”Sure…”
She left from there….
Dadi hugged Anika and said ”Anika…can you come to OM tomorrow….i have something very important to talk to you..”
Anika ”Sure Dadi…but i can come only after college hours like how i came today..”
Dadi ”what about your library schedule”
Anika ”No problem Dadi ji…i can give up my library hours one more day”
Dadi ”no don’t give up your library schedule…Billu will pick you up after your library hours and then you both go and bring Sahil here….i will talk after that”
Dadi turned towards Shivaay and said ”Billu…bring Anika and Sahil to our home tomorrow …wait till she completes her library schedule..”
Shivaay ” Daadi…please…don’t call me Billu before her….”
Anika ”Mr.Ricthie Rich…i am going to call you only Mr.Ricthie Rich not Billu” she laughed again
Shivaay gave a death glare…
Dadi ”billu..are you agreeing to what i said or not”
Shivaay ”dadi…did i ever deny your wish…i will bring this Ms.Surpanaka after she completes her library schedule..” he said sarcastic showing his tongue
Anika too reciprocated showing her tongue……and left from there to pick up Sahil……
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Precap: Shivaay to tell the truth about the accident to Anika…how would Anika react ????
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This was the Eleventh episode…..please do let me know , how you felt after reading this…any opinions good or bad is welcome…i would reply as soon as possible……….do press the like button and post your opinion without fail…..Thank you so much !!!!
46 Comments
omm rudy passed all the exams that too by coming third and the reaction of the oberoi clan lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!! awesome update di….loved it…
Thank you so much Ashwinee …thanks a lot…love you loads …keep smiling and take care…next episode up in the portal
Awesome di…. Lovely part… So excited to see how will Anika react after knowing the truth… Excited for the next part… Post it soon… Take care… Love you lot di…
Hey Sissy…thank you so much …thanks a lot my support system…ove you loads …keep smiling and take care…next episode up in the portal
Akka…!!! Watchman scene masth undi….telsa..!! Chala navvukunna…!!
Hey Nithu…thank you so much …thanks a lot …love you loads …keep smiling and take care…next episode up in the portal
Dii…..super awesome episode…..I’m in love wid d epi.
I wish to see this epi onscreen.
Waiting for next one eagerly dii.
Bye.
Hey Chotii…thank you so much …thanks a lot my support system…love you loads …keep smiling and take care…next episode up in the portal
Aflatoon chappy tha yeh pata hain aapko….kaise pata hoga pagal jo ho (showing you tongue). Awwww Rudy Tops in exams both brothers on 3rd position .Pinky ko negative kiya na aapne toh i swear….i will…
Hey bro…thank you so much …thanks a lot my support system…love you loads …keep smiling and take care…next episode up in the portal…waise Pinky ka kuch socha nahi agar negative bana diya tho kya karoge bolo bolo
Mind blowing. Rudy passed the exam, earning the third position OMG?!!! Watchman calls Anika surpanakha and her reaction was hilarious.
Excited????for the next. Post soon!!
Hey Pakhi…thank you so much …thanks a lot my support system…love you loads …keep smiling and take care…next episode up in the portal
Awesome di..fabulous??update…loved it OMG rudy passed all exams???superb ?eagerly waiting for next part update soon di
Love you ?? Take care and stay safe
Hey Harini…thank you so much …thanks a lot …love you loads …keep smiling and take care…next episode up in the portal
hello akka.. everything is just terrific..specialga tadibaaz annika di’s dialogue of she dislikes to listen a no is just awesome????..watchman scene gurinchi aithe cheppanakarle adhiripoindhi????…precap eppatilagane super interesting ga vundhi..so thwara thwaraga post chesayi..take care and bye for now..?????and haa keep smiling…????..love you loads????…
Hey Chelli..thank you so much …thanks a lot …love you loads …keep smiling and take care…next episode up in the portal
Wow finally I got my drugs for today it’s awesome love to the core ?? waiting for the next update eagerly as usual
Hey Nisha…thank you so much …thanks a lot …love you loads …keep smiling and take care…next episode up in the portal
Awsmmmmmmmmmm….
Waiting eagerly for d next one.
Loads of luv Di !
Hey Baby doll sissy…thank you so much …thanks a lot …love you loads …keep smiling and take care…next episode up in the portal
Yet again nice update dear. Waiting for the next one. Bye. (I m in a hurry now, will meet you in next episode )
Hey Katz…thank you so much …thanks a lot …love you loads …keep smiling and take care…next episode up in the portal
OMG dii… M in love with it n I mean it dii…. It was fab.. m not gonna try to be formal so here goes d perfect comment which suits dis chapter: faad diya I mean uhh juzz rocked it… In Gujarati we say it “todi fodi bhuko Kari nakhyo”… Waiting for d nxt one.. do post next asap..
Luv uhh dii..
Hey Shreya…thank you so much …thanks a lot …love you loads …keep smiling and take care…next episode up in the portal..and how can i not say how happy and elated i am to read those khidkitodh words in Gujrati…extra special thanks for those
Amazing di as always…
Hey Tanz..thank you so much …thanks a lot …love you loads …keep smiling and take care…next episode up in the portal
It is nice and lovely dii…
Hey Nikki..thank you so much …thanks a lot …love you loads …keep smiling and take care…next episode up in the portal
This was amazing. Such a light-hearted update it was!
AniRu are the best & the Oberois’ reaction to Rudra coming 3rd was hilarious ?
I totally adore this naught & cute Billu. He just can’t stop teasing Anika ?
Shivaay is gonna pick Anika up & tell her the truth even, this seems interesting!
Waiting for the nxt 🙂
Lots of love ❤
-Rhea
Hey Rhea…thank you so much …thanks a lot …love you loads …keep smiling and take care…next episode up in the portal…i am so happy to know you liked this episode…how sweet of you to say those words
Wow!!!! Beautiful….
Shivika’s lovly bond… Just love it…
Rudy in 3rd rank….!!!!!! OMM!!!!
Nd most shocking , Pinky like Anika….
As always Amazing update… Superbbb…
Love u Beautiful…
Bt not moree then Akki…
Hey Grogeous…thank you so much …thanks a lot …love you loads …keep smiling and take care…next episode up in the portal
Finally annika in OM loved it shivika takkar ki moments wow waiting for their pure friendship
Hey Chaithu…thank you so much …thanks a lot … …keep smiling and take care…next episode up in the portal
The chapter was beautiful. A light easy-going chapter much needed. The episode with the gaurd was certainly the best other than OmRu scene. Tadiibaazi was awesome. The next day brings expectations. Do update soon and take care ?
Hey Aashi..thank you so much …thanks a lot …love you loads …keep smiling and take care…next episode up in the portal
Rudy came 3rd????? this was unexpected???? thanx to anika…the watchman part was hilarious…nd the notes part ‘ anika dislikes no’?? haha…everythng was awsum??….eagrly waitig fe the nxt part when shivay will tell d truth to anika
Hey Aayushi..thank you so much …thanks a lot …love you loads …keep smiling and take care…next episode up in the portal
Awesome update
Hey Alekhika…thank you so much …thanks a lot …
Hiii Akka,
Awesome update?
Rudra passed and came third ???
Others reaction ??
waiting for nxt update…
Luv u….
Hey Nila…thank you so much …thanks a lot …love you loads …keep smiling and take care…next episode up in the portal
Nice episode
Hey Pritika…thank you so much …thanks a lot …love you loads …keep smiling and take care…next episode up in the portal
My third assignment in this morning mumma……….Its sooooooooooooo good to read your ffs………….I mean good n hossom toh hai hi………..But voh subah subah….net on karke…..apni padai chodke………Eagerly going to MY PM N Searching VHM n then start reading her ff………….n after that commenting like this…………wah kuch alag hi baat hai mumma!
So coming to chappy…….This was the best one…….As full family was involved here..Anika n Shivaay’s nautanki……N watchman bichara beech ka bandar….hahaha…that part was really funny!Then O,Rudra,Prinku,Dadi,Pinky n Jhanvi………..all gathered n their dialogues were well-written mumma…….I think Even Rudra should get GOLDEN EGG na……Bichare ne pehli baar pass ki(3rd postion)+sensible baatein!!Golden egg toh bantha hai………..Again shivika’s sweet nokjhok turning to friendly help was amazing………..U had again showed what had happened in the few chappies……..Loved this more….But not more than u mumma……..Excited to read the next one!
Oh wow this was such a fun episode…..loved it…specially the watchman seen……ravan and lanka…..I laughed so hard on that…..