Hi This is VHM back with a new FF on IB couple SHIVIKA….A slow yet Subtle love story……..
This is completely off track FF on Shivika and a college life and post college life of Shivika based FF…nothing to do with the track of IB….May be few of you can relate to this….you all know the characters and few characters will behave the same way as in real IB…few will be different……The Beginning would be slow and may bore you, but as i always say these beginning episodes will be crucial to form the further story……..
Please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes…….Hope the readers would support me the same way as they have supported me till date……based upon the response on this episode, i will be uploading the next episodes……
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TMSD (Tia..Mallika..Sid…Daksh)
MMR (Mamta…Madhuri…Rajni)
TAM (Thought at that Moment )
Author’s Note : MANY OF YOU ASKED ME TO REVEAL ANIKA’S PAST…YES I PROMISE I WILL DEFINITELY REVEAL VERY SOON…IT WILL BE IN 22 -23 EPISODE, BUT TRUST ME I WILL NOT DISAPPOINT YOU IN THIS AND COMING EPISODE BECAUSE TO REVEAL THE PAST I NEED A STRONG BASE….
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Mamta ”where is Anika? she is not to be seen anywhere”
Rajni ”I think we should call sid , daksh or Shivaay to search her…it’s good if we all go in every possible direction…”
Madhuri ”right ”
they turned to call when they saw Sid, Daksh and Mallika coming towards them
Daksh ”where is Anika?”
Madhuri ”donno…guys it is night and not safe for a agirl to go all alone…i think we should get in to groups of two and search her…i and sid, daksh and rajni, shivaay and mamta..”
Mallika ”wait a minute ..where is shivaay and where is Tia …they are no where to be seen”
Mamta ”do one thing you search them here while i search the surroundings and rest two groups as said will go and search outside…any information they bring Anika directly here”
Sid-Daksh-madhuri-Rajni ”Done”
Mallika ”ok i will search for Tia and Shivaay in the venue”
Mamta ”Meet you all at the gate of the venue”
Everyone left on their mission searching
———————IN SOME UNKNOWN PARK ,
On a bench…Anika sat and was struggling for breath…traces of the past were running in her mind…the party..the proposal…and the later outcomes….she felt the history repeated today…the reason why she avoided the party…the reason why she bears Sundari Bua’s tantrums…the reason why she hates rich brats…everything rewinded and she cried loudly…….
When she felt a hand on her shoulders……
Anika ”No…please leave me…please…don’t do anything…leave me..i will run away…please…please leave me” she cried hysterically, without looking at the person who held her……
”Relax…Relax” the voice came….
But Anika was in no mood to listen and register the voice…she didn’t turn to see who it was and left from there running , just pushing the hand of the person …
”Ms.Surpanaka…listen it’s me …your Mr.Ritchie Rich…listen …wait…don’t run” Shivaay while shouting ran behind her… but Anika’s fear made her run so fast that she disappeared once again……
Anika took an Auto and reached home , sweating, huffing and being scared…closed the door behind with a thud
——————PARTY VENUE
TMSD-MMR waited for Shivaay , Shivaay came back
Mallika ”Did you find her?”
Shivaay ”yes and No”
Sid ”what do you mean by Yes and NO”
Shivaay ”i found her in the park nearby ..when i went to her she was crying hysterically asking me to leave her …she was so scared that she didn’t recognise it was me…i ran behind her but she took an auto and left…i am sure she must be reaching her home”
Mamta ”I will not leave that Raghav now…how can he do all this infront of everyone…i know how difficult it was to convince her to bring her to this party …and now i am embarrassed to face her … I shouldn’t have insisted her”
Shivaay was in thoughts while rest others were speaking something
Shivaay TAM ”why did she behave like that…why was she so scared …it was just a proposal…what might be the reason…is she fine…i damn want to see her and make sure she is fine..but how…none of us knows her address…mamta is saying right , we shouldn’t have insisted her to come to the party…God…what should i do now”
Tia ”Shivaay” she called
Shivaay looked at her in rage coming out of thoughts….
Tia ”Shivaay ..you okay” she spoke stammering
Shivaay nodded and looked at others and said ”I am leaving now…may be after she gets fine , she might call to inform us..so i will better leave now…”
Mamta ”but Shivaay…isn’t it right to ensure she is safe and reached home…i mean we can’t just go home and wait for her call…what if something hap..”
Shivaay ”sshhhhh…nothing will happen to her…nothing ”he spoke
Sid ”i agree with Mamta…our trust or belief is at one side…but we need to search her and this is most important now”
Shivaay ”do you all think ..i didn’t get this idea…how will we search her…does anyone of us know where she resides…if yes tell me…i will go right away to ensure she is safe or not..” he spoke in anger
Everyone looked at Shivaay in surprise …Shivaay composed and spoke
Shivaay ”i mean we all will go right away…” he corrected his statement
Madhuri ”relax Shivaay…it’s not time for anger or argument …we need to find out a solution”
Mallika ”sensible words at right time Madhuri”
Daksh ”let’s do onething..Mamta you have picked her up near some busstop right …we will just go and search in the locality in and around the busstop…who knows we might find her”
Shivaay ”let’s go”
Everyone drove their car while Mamta was the pioneer to show the bus stop…they all went in different directions and started searching for Anika
—————-Sahil’s House
Sundari Bua came out and saw the state of Anika…she was raged to see her scared
SB (Sundari Bua) ” i knew something will happen…that’s why i said not to go…but you are so adamant to go…and see your state…now what did you do…remember i said i will make you out of this house…”
Anika ”noth..noth..nothing ..happ..happ..happened” she was stammering
SB ”I don’t believe you…something definitely happened…now which rich brat have you trapped..you are shameless i knew…but you are characterless i didn’t knew”
Anika was crying…”I am saying truth Buaji…nothing happened…nothing happened…this time nothing happened”
SB ”I said I don’t believe you…seeing your state i am sure something has happened”
SB dragged Anika’s hand and started taking her out of the house……
At the same time Shivaay was coming towards Anika’s house …SB opened the door..Anika was crying and her sight fell on Shivaay….she was struck with realisation then…
Anika dragged SB ‘s hand in a huff and closed the door…..
Anika ”Bua ji…you can make me stay out ..i will stay outside but please wait for 10 minutes …give me just 10 minutes…i will go out…i beg you please” she fell down and was crying
SB ”Why…who is outside …let me see..who it is …”
Anika ”bua ji..no…no…please…i beg you no”
SB tried to walk but Anika held her legs stopping her
Anika TAM ”Mr.Ritchie Rich …please go ..i don’t want you to know anything about me…i know you all might be worried about me , but please go fast from here…”
Shivaay tried to ask few people about Anika…he was shown Sahil’s house……he came and knocked the door
Anika looked at SB and said ”Bua ji…if someone asks about me please say that you don’t know me”
SB ”why would i?”
Anika ”because i don’t want anyone to know about me”
SB ”so you did wrong …and now you are trying to hide your face from everyone else…i will never lie for you…”
That was the limit to Anika’s patience….She tried to drag SB to take her into the room….but Sundari Bua pushed her, because of which she hit her head on the main door ..in this process her hand forcibly touched the horizontal bolt on the door to slide away opening the door, making her fumble down the steps and falling down……
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Shivaay who was knocking the door left from there seeing none opening it….as soon as he walked few steps away from the house, Anika fell out of the main door……Shivaay who heard the sound turned back, but Anika hid herself…
Shivaay came to Sahil’s house and saw SB …Anika’s heart raced fast ……
Shivaay ”Hello…Does anyone by name Anika stay here”
SB ”She used to stay, but just now i kicked her out of my house…now she doesn’t stay here anymore” she answered rudely
Shivaay ”what?” he spoke being aghast
SB ”I said , I kicked her out of this house just now…can’t you understand”
Shivaay was raged listening to her answer and , ”how dare you do that?” he screamed
Aniak understood this will get worst, so she came from behind towards him and said ”Mr.Ritchie Rich …you here ”
Shivaay turned towards her and saw her head bleeding and hands bruised…..he didn’t understand anything for a moment
Shivaay ”Ms.Surpanaka…are you fine? what happened ? why are you bleeding?” he spoke with concern…
Anika looked at him with a layer of tears, as for the first after Sahil someone showed her concern…she quickly composed herself and said
Anika ”Mr.Ritchie Rich..i am fine…i..i…ran so fast ..so i fell and got hurt…” she said everything stammering
Shivaay ”you are hiding something from me…say the truth now and why is this lady saying she kicked you out of this house..who is she…”
Anika ”please relax…she is our Bua ji…she was angry because …because…leave it na….”
Shivaay ”no tell me the truth first…i am sensing something very wrong and i don’t want to take any chance…”
Anika ”Mr.Ricthie Rich…sorry to say this..but the locality here is not open minded…so please leave from here…i will call you tomorrow…and please one more thing inform all our friends that i am home…i thought to inform you after sometime thinking it will take time for you all to reach home”
Shivaay ”but why were you scared and why did you run”
Anika ”we will talk about this later…now please leave, before anyone makes any sort of wrong opinions and impressions..i am really sorry to say like this…i hope you understand”
Shivaay ”okk fine…but you will be coming to my house tomorrow…understand”
SB tried to say something when Shivaay turned towards her in anger
Shivaay ”look..she is my BEST FRIEND…Shivaay Singh Oberoi’s best friend…i know Ms.Surpanaka is not saying truth….also , i donno you did really mean whatever you said earlier ..but if you have really kicked her out of her home and i get to know it…then remember i will not take a minute to destroy you completely…and this is my promise to you…if you don’t want anything bad to happen to you, then take care of her”
SB realised then that he was Shivaay Singh Oberoi…she was mincing words and fake smiled
SB ”No..no…i will take care of her…i was joking then…that’s it…you don’t worry…i will take special care of her…please come in”
Shivaay ”it’s okay…i will leave now…but don’t forget what i said” he turned towards Anika and said ”I will leave, but i want to meet you tomorrow…i have many questions for which i need answers”
Anika just nodded , Shivaay left from there
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Precap : Will Anika meet Shivaay and answer his questions?
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This was the Twentieth episode…..please do let me know , how you felt after reading this…any opinions good or bad is welcome…i would reply as soon as possible……….do press the like button and post your opinion without fail…..Thank you so much !!!!
37 Comments
It’s amazing! A lil Longer pls?? pls post soon. Love it. Bestestestest wishes. Love ✌?❤ so hurt to see ani crying like that and be completely broken and afraid. Waiting for you 22/23 eagerly. Post soon. Vhm-?Is that ur real name?
Hey Nandini…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…22 and 23 are ready but i just uploaded 21…hope it appears soon in the portal…VHM is my pen name..my actual name is HARIKA….keep smiling and take care
Diiiiiiiiiiii…..u again hurts Anika.
U have no H …don’t say H-Harika….crying i m so bad u r Dii…Pagal Dust Raksashi Vamp Devil Ahhhhh.
Hey Bro..anth bhala tho sab bhala…Anika chahe ab roo lee….aagey sirf hasegi…koshish yehi hain meri…tab tak tum mujhe kos loo ..bura nahi maanoongi…love you bro…keep smiling and take care
Hi Di ! Bahut super awsm epi hai !
Just loved everything from first word to last…
Perfect keh sakte hai isse…
Its getting very gripping.
Loads of luv ??
Hey Baby Doll sissy…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee how sweet of you dear…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
FABULOUSLY written episode? trully you’re a great writer VHM and I’m shocked to see you posting this regularly? I mean, you just rock this ff❤ please post next soon ( i know you’ll surely do?) I’ve become a die hard fan of your’s and also of this FLASHBACK STORY???
Hey Dear…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i need to post regularly in order to keep my readers intact …when i read i expect the authors t post regularly, so this applies to me too…so i do this…i donno about how good writer i am but i love writing is what i can say…thank you so much for those amazing lines …ayyo don’t say fan of me and all…i am not a celebrity for you to be a fan…let’s keep this to friendship…..keep smiling and take care…next episode i uploaded long time back…waiting for it to get published
Hiiii didi… Amazing… You are just amazing… I was literally got tears in my eyes while reading Anika’s condition ??… Woh moti bandari bua aesa kese kar Sakti hai Anika k Sath???… Abhi Shivay hi usko sidha karega… U are just superb di… Ekdum KHIDKITOD… Waiting for revealation… Aesa to kya hua hai anika k sath????… M very much excited… Plzz jaldi jaldi batana haan plzz… Nd Mai Wahi hoon… Pehchan kaun…
Hey Sweety…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…pehchaan kaun pehchaan kaun bolne ki jaroorat nahi….mein pehchan gayi hoon…revelation 22 episode mein…next episode upload kar diya hain bas publish hone ki wait kar rahi hoon…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
It was fantabulous. Awesome. You are a marvellous writer… All the best… Take care.. Post as soon as possible.
Hey Aafiya…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode i uploaded…waiting for it to get published…keep smiling and take care
It’s awesome and a little bit emotional too.. waiting for the next
Hey Nisha…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…wait for a extremely exhausting emotionally tired episode coming up….next episode i uploaded long back …waiting for it to get published….keep smiling and take care
What is going happen next… Omg what is the past of anika… Can’t guess… Update soon
Hey Nikki…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…will reveal it in episode 22…till then enjoy episode 21 which i uploaded long back and waiting for it to get published…love you loads Nikki…keep smiling and take care
Awesome di…I’m feeling very bad for anika’s condition??eagerly waiting di update next part soon
Love you ?? Take care and stay safe
Hey Harini…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…after few episodes everything will get normal….next episode i have uploaded it long back …waiting for it to get published…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Awesome di… Feeling sad for Anika…. So curious to now about anika’s flashbacks… Post it soon di… Luv u lot… Take care di
Hey Sissy…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot my support system…next episode i have uploaded it long back …waiting for it to get published…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Really felt bad for Anika but she is lucky to have a great friend like shivaay. SB was just a bit away from the wrath of SSO. Amazingly described scenes as usual. I guess the past of Anika is soon to be revealed.
Excited for the next
Hey Pakhi..thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…Next to next episode is Anika’s past revelation…next episode i have uploaded it long back …waiting for it to get published……keep smiling and take care
Awesome. SB scene and Shiv-Ika scene was beautiful. SB was scary,then scared ????? waiting for next chapter. Update soon ?
Hey Aashi…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode i have uploaded it long back …waiting for it to get published…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
hari…wow this is so luvly
when shivaye spoke to SB…i can her his stern voice..
beautiful hari..
Hey Pushpa…thank you so much dear…your opinion whenever posted makes me feel so very special…thanks a lot darling…next episode i have uploaded it long back …waiting for it to get published…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
wow diii, now here strts the unfolding of past .Let the past unfold in its own pace.No hurry. I know that u will present it in the most beautiful & correct way.
One morething diii I just wanted to ask that can u please write something on the current vanvaas track? U have wrote on all major tracks of IB and all of them r my favourites.So just wanted 2 read ur version of vanvaas. pls write IF POSSIBLE .I know that u write all ur stories with proper planning and care and it wii take time.I just want u 2 keep this chotusa request of mine in ur mind and write when u get time, a proper storyline and most important, when u feel like writing….
Even if u don’t consider my request I will disturb u with my comments on all ur upcoming ffs ( not regularly though… : ) bye 4 now, see u soon diiii
Hi Ammu…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot….i am glad to know you believe my way of writing….
well coming to your wish…Ammu i have already written a different vanvas track ”the past and Present long ago, may be in april may …and now Amayaa is writing the vanvas track with current scenariosof vanvas track….i am sure you would like it ”3 axis -separated by body connected through soul” is the ff name….because for me to write it will take lot of time and if this vanvas track gets over in real IB then the zeal will vanish to read it….
But have you any other wish for me to write i will definitely try to fulfill it….
Your opinions never disturb me Ammu but brings smile so do post your opinions as per your availability…loads of best wishes …keep smiling and take care
Can’t wait to read next chapter
Plz post soon
Hey Veda …thank you so much dear..thanks a lot…next episode i have uploaded it long back …waiting for it to get published…keep smiling and take care
hello akka..ohho em epi….adharagottesav???…just loved the concern MMR and TMSD had for anudi ????..billu eppudu anudi vishayamlo concernedgane vuntadu..ee bandari bua yeppatiki maradhu??…but loved to see the tadibaaz SSO there ???? ..precap super interesting..super excited ayyanu when you said inko 2 or 3 epis lo u will reveal anudi’s past ani cheppinappudu…soo can’t wait thwaraga post chesayi..take care and bye for now???..and haa keep smiling????…..love you loads❤️❤️❤️…
Hey Prabha…thank you so much chelli…thanks a lot…he he he he..super analaysis talli…anni sardukuntayi ledante ela cheppu…yep next to next episode lo Anika past revelation chesthanu…next episode i have uploaded it long back …waiting for it to get published…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Nice one finally shivay found out about annika status and house so concern about annika
Loved it totally…
Hey Chaithu…thank you so much dear..thanks a lot…yeah finally Shivaay came to know about Anika’s status and where she lives…glad to know you liked the episode….next episode i have uploaded it long back …waiting for it to get published…keep smiling and take care
Amazing update
Hi VHM…This was such a powerful episode. I was so teary-eyed while reading about SB’s treatment of Anika and the tribulations of her earlier life… Please, please, VHM, take her out of that home, she needs some kind of happiness, we know that she is not leaving Sahil, but she still needs to leave. Thanks, VHM, always stay blessed.
Splendid update mumma…………The park scene was emotional as well as wonderfully depicted…..A girl having such a haunting past…..would exactly react like this…..Remembering chandini……….from ur ff!
Anika is really very fortunate to have such friends….who are so concerned about her…….Their plan of finding her……SHIVAAY’S ANGER……Everything was good mumma..!
Bua ji….is reacting too much…Uske tote tote karne padenge……U had thought really deep abt that scene….Thank God Shivaay got to see her home………N the SHIVIKA’S CONVO was best……..so caring…..Shivaay gave an bashing reply right on that SB………Loved his dialogue……..well done mumma!!