Hi This is VHM back with a new FF on IB couple SHIVIKA….A slow yet Subtle love story……..
This is completely off track FF on Shivika and a college life and post college life of Shivika based FF…nothing to do with the track of IB….May be few of you can relate to this….you all know the characters and few characters will behave the same way as in real IB…few will be different……The Beginning would be slow and may bore you, but as i always say these beginning episodes will be crucial to form the further story……..
Please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes…….Hope the readers would support me the same way as they have supported me till date……based upon the response on this episode, i will be uploading the next episodes……
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TMSD (Tia..Mallika..Sid…Daksh)
MMR (Mamta…Madhuri…Rajni)
TAM (Thought at that Moment )
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Anika came inside as soon as Shivaay left….
SUNDARI BUA (SB) was blabbering and trying to persuade Anika , as greed , fear raised in her because of Shivaay and his surname….Anika was searching for her clutch without listening to Bua…
Anika ”clutch..my clutch..ohh God, i forgot my clutch in the party…what will i do now?”
She went out to look for Shivaay…Shivaay was walking towards her to return her clutch….
They both met…it was dark as it was night…it was a lower middle class locality, more precisely a chawl..so usually people do stay back in home to watch TV…in short none was around…..
Anika looked at Shivaay coming and a smile adorned her lips….she just was looking at him….Shivaay came towards her…
Shivaay ”Ms.Surpanaka…your clutch…you forgot in the party in hurry…so i just came back to return..it was in my hand but i too forgot to return it then….”
Anika ”i was looking for this and …”
Shivaay ”and i came to give you…accept the fact that i am santa in your life”
Anika smiled taking the clutch from him
Shivaay ”Ms.Surpanaka are you fine? i mean…i am much worried for you with the way you behaved …look at you with all your bruises ”he spoke touching her forehead which still was with a bit of blood oozing….
Anika held his hand and said ”thank you Shivaay..thank you for everything” she spoke with choked voice
Shivaay ”i didn’t do anything…i was”
Anika hugged him tight and let her tears flow for a while…Shivaay reciprocated the hug and held her tight to let her relax for a while….he brushed her hair to console her…later
Shivaay ”what happened Ms.Surpanaka …i have never seen you such…so weak and pessimistic …if you want to say something just say it…i am here and i will wait too…but just don’t cry like this…you know i cannot see you crying”
Anika looked at him breaking the hug in surprise…Shivaay to looked at her….Anika moved away and said
Anika ”Mr.Ricthie Rich …we will not meet till the semester ends…and don’t think about me …studies are very important for both of us….so”
Shivaay ”But Ms.Surpanaka…i asked you to meet me tomorrow…and you agreed too…why have you changed the decision?”
Anika ”Mr.Ricthie Rich…listen..i know i have troubled you so much today..not only you but Tia, Mallika, Sid, Daksh, Mamta, Madhuri and Rajni…you guys had to leave the party because of me..you all were so excited for this party and now because of me you couldn’t enjoy …i am feeling so guilty …i am Sorr…..”
Shivaay placed his finger on her lips and didn’t allow her to say sorry, he looked at her holding her both shoulders spoke
Shivaay ”Ms.Surpanaka…none of were interested in the party after what had happened…we all were searching for you in and around this locality..i am sure even now they are searching for you and waiting for me….so no need to feel guilty…and by the way this is not the answer to my question”
Anika ”Mr.Ricthie Rich…i have a terrible past…may be after listening to it , it might seem nothing to you and you may feel …but the fact is my past pushed me into depression…with much difficulty i came out of it..i don’t want to remember it once again…but i promise , i will tell you everything in detail after the exams or at right time…right now if i say , you and I , both will be disturbed…and this may affect our exams too..so it’s better we do not discuss it now…and if i come to meet you everyday in OM , whenever you see me the questions you have will pester you… there by disturbing both of us…so ”
Shivaay ”ohh so you will take the decisions every time, as if i have no value…listen i am your friend, no… best friend and i have every right to ask you and you have a duty to answer me…and ….i don’t care about anything else right now other than you…regarding exams…you and i both know , we have prepared good enough…so how can you think like this”
Anika ”please listen and understand…i agree your concern is right …but understand my situation too…”
Shivaay turned back leaving her shoulders…..Anika held both his hands from behind and said
Anika ”look at me”
Shivaay didn’t move
Anika ”look at me …please”
Shivaay turned towards her…
Anika ”please for a last time ..agree …we are best friends na..can you not do this for me…just a little more wait till exams and then i will tell you everything”
Shivaay ”i donno…i just …forget it..okay fine ..as you say..but then you need to agree and say everything”
Anika ”Pinky Promise” she extended her little finger smiling , Shivaay entwined his little finger, smiling back…
Anika ”Mr.Ritchie Rich…please don’t let any of our friends know what happened and where i live…just tell them we met near the phone booth..you found me here and i am safe…i know you will have few more questions added to your list…keep them adding ..but i will give answer to your every question very soon ”
Shivaay ”fine…i agreed to agree with you today …so i will do as you say…but remember your promise…you have to tell me everything after exams…”
Anika nodded ”Pakka”
Shivaay hugged her again and said ”please take care…have you any problem call me anytime”
Anika ”now go…every one will be tensed” she said and pushed him slightly smiling…
Shivaay ”bye”
Anika ”bye”
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Shivaay reached his car where all others were waiting…seeing the calm face of Shivaay everyone understood he met Anika….Shivaay looked at tensed faces and without wasting a minute told that he met Ms.Surpanaka at phone booth, when she was coming to call either of them…and explained them that she was fine…everyone took a deep breath and bid bye to go back to their respective homes…….
————THE WEEK PASSED BY
The semester started and everyone met at the centre where exams were to be held……Anika arrived and greeted MMR , TSMD…they all asked her how she was…she searched for Shivaay…
Shivaay ”don’t search..i am here Ms.Surpanaka”
Anika ”ohh Please…i am not searching for you…so don’t be under such wrong impression”
Shivaay ”sure?”
Anika ”pretty much”
Shivaay ”by the way don’t forget our challenge….i am gonna defeat you this time in semester”
Anika ”let’s see…who wins”
Mamta ”you both started again? come on guys it’s exam today…and instead of getting tensed…you are fighting”
Anika ”who started all this?”
Raghav came just then and everyone looked at him in anger….Shivaay , sid and Daksh stepped forward making girls stand behind them….
Shivaay ”What do you want Raghav?”
Raghav ”i just wanted to talk to Anika”
Sid ”i am sorry…but you can’t”
Raghav ”guys just listen i just want to say….”
Daksh ”look Raghav …we are saying it in a nice way to stay away from our friends…so understand …otherwise we know other ways too”
Raghav ”just let me talk to her once”
Shivaay ”Even if she agrees to talk ..i wouldn’t allow her to talk…now i guess it’s time to write the exam…so ALL THE BEST for your exams” he spoke and asked everyone to go to their respective rooms ……
Anika too left getting disturbed…Shivaay came to her and said ”Look Ms.Surpanaka…don’t think of him…just give your best…we will handle him …okay”
Anika ”all the best to you too…”
Shivaay ”thanks…meet you after exam”
they both finally left to their respective examination halls …
———–DAY OF LAST EXAM OF SEMESTER
Anika came out of the examination hall after completing the exam…Shivaay, TSMD, MMR were waiting for her
Shivaay ”Chalo…we are going to cafe…we are done with exams …so time to celebrate”
TMSD-MMR ”yes ..party tho banti hain”
Everyone looked at Anika…
Anika ”When did i deny…off course i will come…i am hungry too…waise i asked Rudra’s permission to have a cold coffee …he agreed to cheat for today” she spoke smiling
Raghav came from behind and held Anika’s hand….Anika felt a sort of uncomfortable feeling …she turned to see who held her hand and found it to be Raghav..her face became red in anger…
Anika ”how dare you? ” she shouted
Everyone turned towards Anika, and saw Raghav holding her hand
Mamta came and slapped Raghav hard, which stunned everyone…Raghav face became red in anger…he tried to slap her back but was held by Sid and Daksh
Shivaay ”don’t you even dare to think about it” he screamed
Raghav ”Look i wanted to talk to Ms.Surpanaka ..that’s it”
Shivaay ”first thing.. she is Ms.Surpanaka only for our group, not for anyone else, including you…so call her by her name….second thing…i already said that even if she agrees to speak, i will not allow her…i thought you are intelligent enough to remember…now why did you come”
Raghav ”who the hell are you for her? her boy friend or her husband”
Shivaay raised his hand to hit him when Anika came forward and stopped him
Anika ”what do you want to say? speak out…i am listening” she spoke folding her hands placing them at her bust
Raghav ”Anika…i am sorry…i just expressed my feelings…i did not intend to hurt you…but the after circumstances made me go dumb….i didn’t understand why you ran away…but the fact is that, i am still waiting for your response ”
Everyone were dumbstruck to listen to his statement……..
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Precap : How will Anika answer Raghav….Shivaay to question Anika about her past ….Anika’s past revelation to unfold
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This was the Twenty first episode…..please do let me know , how you felt after reading this…any opinions good or bad is welcome…i would reply as soon as possible……….do press the like button and post your opinion without fail…..Thank you so much !!!!
42 Comments
Superb ??i read all the parts oc this ff♥️
Its super awesome story line
Finaly anikas past revelation eager to know about it.
How will i wait for tomorrow????
Plz upload next fast.
Ty for all the updates?????♥️♥️♥️
Hey Swetha…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…tomorrow has already arrived …i will post the episode as soon as possible…but the next episode will be emotionally tiring one…can’t guarantee your reactions then…keep smiling and take care
it was fabulous??
Thank you so much Nishi…thanks a lot
Beat the stupid raghav… Anika… Update is nice one dii… Like the way shivaay care for anika
Thank you so much Nikki…thanks a lot…am glad you liked the episode overall…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Awsm epi di !
Loved Shivika meeting at night
Loved Shivaay’s possiveness towards Anika already…
Loved the way the guys fought for her.
Loved how Shivaay had patience to agree to Anika
Loved….
*a never ending list *
Waiting eagerly for Anika’s past….
Way to go Di !
Loads of luv ???
Hey Baby Doll sissy…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…never ending times thank you for such awesome words….love you loads sissy…keep smiling and take care
Oh god! Pls post soon. Eagerly waiting and a lil longer pls. Am lil greedy u see. Bestestestest wishes
Hey Nandini…thank you so much dear..thanks a lot…next episode will be longer one and emotionally triring one too…loads of best wishes to you too…keep smiling and take care
Waiting 4 nxt chappy from 1st epi…
Love this Careing nature of frnd group… Shivika as always Amazinggg nd my fav… Eagerly waiting 4 nxt chappy…
Love U Beautiful , bt not more then Akki… I know now U will say i didnt read last line , bt who care U understand it nd it’s enough to make U jealous nd U know na how much i love to see Jealous Beautiful…
Hey Gorgeous….next episode i think is the most tiring one , the darkest plot i have ever written till date….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…jyada mat jalaoo…volcano of jealousy phoot jayega…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
An awesome epi ????????
Thank you so much Nishi…thanks a lot
Awesome fabulous di…shivika conversation was?..can’t wait for next part update soon di
Love you ?? Take care and stay safe
Hey Harini…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode i will post as soon as possible but can’t guarantee the emotional outburst…the darkest past plot i have ever written till date , you will be reading…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Akka masth undi nenu xam velle mundu chadiva ne ff….!! Tension malli poyindi…ur ff has some magic akka…!! Lysm…nka me ff kuda!! Waiting for nxt epi
Hey Mohitha…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode exam mundu chadavaku…emotional one…so read whenever you are free…love you loads,,,keep smiling and take care
Amazing as always??✌??
.. Loved it to the core ?????
Shiv-sid-daksh are real gentlemen as they came forward to face raghav, pushing the girls back. These guys really care for their friends???
I must say, raghav is crazy!!??? Itna kuch hone ke baad bhi,this dude didn’t get that the girl is not interested in seeing him?? ??
Even more excited ????for the next. Post ASAP
Hey Pakhi…thank you so much…thanks a lot…am glad to know you liked the characterization of each characters…and overwhelmed to know that you liked the episode…next episode i will publish as soon as possible….keep smiling and take care
It’s so amazing dear
Shivika meeting discussion in night so beautiful
Waiting for annika answer to raghav
Hey Chaithu…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode i will post it as soon as possible…keep smiling and take care
Superb update
Thank you so much Alekhika…thanks a lot…
This episode was a little sad but ended well. Next episode will be explosive with Anika’s revelation, I am burning with curiosity. So looking forward to it…Thanks for entertaining us VHM…Please continue to stay blessed…Oh, by the way, many thanks for all the lovely things that you say to me in your replies. I really admire you for taking the time to reply to each of us and saying such lovely things and words of encouragement to us. You are really a lovely person.
Thanks also for giving me hope for Ashlyn…LoooL
Hey Yvonne…thank you so much …thanks a lot..the next episode will be the outburst of Anika’s past…emotionally tiring and one of the dark past i have written ever…hop you all will like it and support me as usual…..loads of best wishes to you…keep smiling and take care
Good going di waiting for Anika s past ?
Thank you so much Megha….thanks a lot…i will post next episode as soon as possible….keep smiling and take care
Amazing Updates. Read the last two chappies just now!
Loved Shivika’s meet at night and their convo. The trust and understanding these two share is amazing ?
Sid & Daksh too are just so good even they’re protecting Anika. I love Shivaay’s possessiveness for Anika ?
This Raghav toh ?
Loved reading the updates ?
Waiting for the nxt!
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-Rhea
Hey Rhea…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot….i am glad you liked the episode and the characterizations…next episode i will post as soon as possible….love you loads…keep smiling and take care
That meeting in night… I jst loved it????????????….that hug nd everythng was beautiful….nd this raghav stupid idiot guy???
Waiting fr anika’s past revelation
Bye loads of luv??take care
Hey Ayu…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you to let me know you liked the episode and the instances….next episode will be an emotional outburst, so my fingers crossed….i will upload as soon as possible…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
hello akka…amazing epi???…billu is super concerned about anudi??..their hug and the pinky promise is just ?????…kaani ninnati varaku i’m excited for anudi’s past but today when i read that anudi went into depression i’m little scared now? what if something big happened with anudi…but i know whatever it is, u will give ur best to entertain us☺️?..shivika and their nok-jhok?????? …kaani ee stupid raghav??.. vadiki naa punches saripoledhu okkasari billu punch?? padithe gani budhiradhu..as usual precap is interesting..soo can’t wait thwaraga post chesayi..take care and bye for now???..and haa keep smiling????…..love you loads❤️❤️❤️…
Hey Prabha…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot chelli…yeah Anika’s past is terrible, while writing i had to take too much of care so that, i present it as neatly as possible….the episode is already published and available in portal..take your time to read and post your opinion…my fingers crossed …As of now Raghav will take a back seat…let’s see how things proceed…..love you loads chelli…keep smiling and take care…
link to next episode:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/flashback-story-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-22/
Progression in the story between Anika and Shivaay has been written very well. They now understand each other very well. great going.
Thank you so much dear..thanks a lot….i am glad you liked the bonding between Shivaay and Anika…loads of best wishes…keep smiling and take care
Diiii, u replied 4 each and every line written by me that’s soo sweet of u. And u r right.If this track gets over that feel will be lost.I didn’t think that way.But no worries. Read the ff u suggested & I loved the prologue.
Coming 2 this epi, more than shivika I loved the bond of their frnds with them.The way they stood 4 Anika ,it really feels gud 2 see them like this.Waiting 2 see shivay’s reaction after knowing anika’s past….
Take care… bye…
Hey Ammu…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i do read all the opinions carefully and respond them, otherwise their is no point in asking me you all to post your opinions…that’s so nice to hear from you that you read my suggested FF…thank you for this gesture of yours…..i am glad to know that you are liking this ff and liked this episode…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…loads of best wishes…keep smiling and take care
Loved it a lot
I am new to this FF and read all episodes
I am longing for the present and their meet
Loved it ?
Awesome di…. Lovely part… Excited for the next part .. post it soon… take care… Luv u lot di
Fabulous.. Sorry for commenting late.. I had exams so I did not have time to read your ff.. Superb one….