Hi This is VHM back with a new FF on IB couple SHIVIKA….A slow yet Subtle love story……..
This is completely off track FF on Shivika and a college life and post college life of Shivika based FF…nothing to do with the track of IB….May be few of you can relate to this….you all know the characters and few characters will behave the same way as in real IB…few will be different……The Beginning would be slow and may bore you, but as i always say these beginning episodes will be crucial to form the further story……..
Please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes…….Hope the readers would support me the same way as they have supported me till date……based upon the response on this Teaser/Prologue, i will be uploading the next episodes……
TAM : Thought At the Moment………
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Hospital ——-
Nurse helped Anika in getting freshened up…Anika took her breakfast and opened her books and was studying….
Slowly Om, Rudra and Prinku woke up and were surprised to see Anika studying being unwell…Anika didn’t recognise they were awake…
Om ”Anika….are you fine?”
Anika ”yeah …i am much better..i guess you all are tired …please go home …i can take care of myself…please don’t get troubled because of me…trust me i have faced much worst days than this in my life..this is nothing” with every word her tone got saddened
OmRu ”No way…we will be back in the evening to spend time with you…it’s so much fun to be with you”
Prinku ”Yeah Anika …even i will be back”
Anika ”You three are students…these days are very important…dont miss these days because of me…i am saying truth…i am fine and will get better in short time”
OmRu tried to say something but Anika insisted them to leave and so they left ….Anika continued with her studies….
————-University Campus
Shivaay entered the class as usual……Everyone looked as if he was a criminal…he didn’t care as he knew he didn’t do anything deliberately…soon the classes started ….Shivaay listened carefully and made notes too….
College hours ended and he went to Mamta, Madhuri and Rajni and gave them his books…
Mamta ”what is this?”
Shivaay ”i…i..”
Madhuri ”now what Shivaay?”
Shivaay ”i have prepared Notes for Anika too…i thought of helping her …if you can give her these Notes, it would be of great help to her for the upcoming internals as well as semester”
Rajni ”Suddenly why this change? till yesterday she was your competitor …now you are saying you want to help her?”
Shivaay ”She is still my competitor… i did a mistake yesterday and i want to rectify my mistake somehow..and what can be better than helping her in her studies…in this way our competition will also be as it was during the first internal”
Mamta ”Are you saying truth Shivaay…because if you any other game plan in this, before Anika , we will deal with you in our way…remember”
Shivaay ”you can trust me on this ”
Mamta ”fine…thank you….and onemore thing”
Shivaay looked on
MMR ”We are sorry…we were too rude with you yesterday ..actually we were much”
Shivaay ”that’s okay..i can understand…if someone did with my friends or family…i would have also reacted the same way…but please ensure you don’t say that i am helping her ”
MMR smiled and said ”Don’t worry”
Shivaay too smiled and forwarded his hand ”FRIENDS?”
All three joined hands and said ”FRIENDS”
Shivaay hugged all three of them and left from there smiling with a feeling of reduced guilt…..
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MMR entered hospital room and greeted Anika who was engrossed in her books
Anika ”hey..how are you three” she said smiling
Mamta ”we have to ask this…now tell me how are you?”
Anika ”what happened to me..i am super fine”
Mamta ”great…now we have a surprise for you…guess what?”
Anika ”i don’t know …but i think you might have got some books from library”
Madhuri ”part of it is right but not full”
Rajni ”uff you three…i can’t keep secrets …let me tell you…we have got notes of today’s lectures Anika…since we don’t want you to miss the class and neither loose challenge”
Anika ”Really…for the first time i have something very good in my life after Sahil…”
Mamta ”What?”
Anika ”Such good friends like you my besties…thank you so much for this help of yours”
Mamta handed over Shivaay’s notes to Anika…..Anika excitedly opened the notes and started to turn the pages giving a quick glance…after few minutes she closed the notes and looked angrily at all 3 of them….
Madhuri ”what happened Anika? why are looking at us like this?” she spoke fumbling
Anika ”i never expected you all would do this to me?”
Mamta ”what…i mean what are you trying to say?”
Anika ”This is Mr.Ritchie Rich notes…am i right ” she asked straight away
Rajni ”Woh…woh…Anika ”
Anika ”Why did you do this ? i would have been happy even if you have not got me anything and just visited me…but what was the need to bring his notes…don’t you have confidence that i can win the challenge without his help?”
Mamta ”Anika…relax…we meant nothing of that sort…actually Shivaay came to us after the class and …” Mamta explained the conversation that took place…
Anika ”please give this back to him and say him that i don’t need his help…i have guts to accept the defeat gracefully without his help…and if you all really want to help just get me books from library..i will prepare myself”
Mamta ”fine…we will do so…and sor…”
Anika ”please yaar…i know you haven’t done this deliberately…let’s forget it”
Shivaay who listened to all this stormed into the room …Anika saw him and turned angry
Anika ”Mr.Ritchie Rich …why are you here now? what do you want now? ”
Shivaay ”What’s your problem Ms.Surpanaka? ”
Anika ”my problem? what’s your problem? first you did my accident and then you sent me notes? why all this? why can’t you stay away from me?”
Shivaay ”look i have no interest to come near you…and accident i didn’t do it by planning…yes i agree it was me who was driving …but ”
Anika ”but what? today i am here in this hospital missing all the classes only because of you..you have troubled me enough Mr.Ritchie Rich…now please let me live my life peacefully”
Shivaay ”Ohh wowww…here i am trying to help you with your studies and you are taunting me over that too”
Anika ”did i ask you to help me? no…then why? listen if you want to really help me then leave me alone…don’t help me in anyway…remember i can still win the challenge and i will win depsite of how my health is”
Shivaay ”challenge…challenge…challenge…can’t you just put off that challenge for a while and look the reality”
Anika ”you can’t force me to read your notes and i don’t want your notes”
Shivaay ”fine…Ms.Surpanaka..i tried to be good with you despite of you being rude …but you don’t deserve any goodness …you are very much into challenge right ..then let’s see each other this time in second internals….all the best”
He left as a storm….Anika closed her fists in anger…all this was viewed by Dadi
MMR tried to cool Anika but she was way too hyper in mood…so they sat silently…after a while the visiting hours were about to end…so MMR left from there promising Anika to meet her next day…after they left Dadi entered and so did the nurse
Anika greeted Dadi and turned towards Nurse
Nurse ”madam…you have asked for the hospital expenses bill…here it is”
Anika snatched the bill and looked at it…her heart stopped for a while….
Anika TAM ”Rs.5000 for two days…that’s Rs.2500 per day…two weeks 14 x 2500 = Rs 35000…even if i work 24 hrs a day i can’t pay this amount…i just can’t afford…i need to get discharged as soon as possible…my savings will end if i stay for 4 days more….i need to talk to doctor”
Dadi saw her being in thoughts and held her by her shoulders…Anika came back out of thoughts and controlled her tears…
Dadi ”why are you tensed ?”
Anika ”Nothing Dadi…i am fine?”
Dadi ”i wanted to ask you something…shall i?”
Anika ”why are you asking permission Dadi? you can ask me anything?”
Dadi ”you have been here since yesterday …none from your family came to see you or meet you? why? where is your family? aren’t they in city? do they know all this happened with you?”
Anika became much sad and she looked at Sahil
Anika ”dadi..woh..woh”
Dadi ”yes puttar”
Anika ”they are busy and moreover not in town” she lied and was unable to look at Dadi…
Anika TAM ”sorry Dadi…i don’t want anyone to sympathise with me…so i lied …if possible forgive me”
Dadi understood she said lie but didn’t want to ask her the reason”ohh okay puttar”
Anika smiled still tensed about the hospital bill…meanwhile Another Nurse came to give Anika an injection…Dadi waited outside, while a curtain was drawn between Sahil and Anika’s bed……
Anika ”Nurse …how many more days should we stay back?”
Nurse ”mam…it might take a week more …after that the doctor will check and if he is satisfied he might discharge you”
Anika ”Nurse i want to get discharged tomorrow”
Nurse ”what? are you mad? did you see your condition? you are not in a position to sit stariaght …discharge is far away…”
Anika ”listen to me please…i can’t afford the hospital charges…so i would need to get discharged”
Nurse ”mam…i can’t help…”
Anika ”fine…please let me talk to doctor…i request you…for once i want to meet the doctor” she broke down
Nurse ”okk fine..i will inform the doctor…Please relax” saying this Nurse left from there murmuring something
Dadi stopped the nurse and asked about Anika…Nurse explained her everything…….
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Precap : second internals to get preponed…how will Anika deal now…what will Shivaay do?
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Author Note : Many of you might be thinking why is Anika so rude…let me tell you something today…everyone does have a past…some have good past, some have bad past…what sort of past did Anika have , when comes forth may be then you would agree that her behaviour was correct….till then let Anika be a bit rude, arrogant and for a change tadibaaz too…
This was the Seventh episode…..please do let me know , how you felt after reading this…any opinions good or bad is welcome…i would reply as soon as possible……….do press the like button and post your opinion without fail…..Thank you so much !!!!
39 Comments
Heyyy beautiful…
Love u loads beautiful ,bt not more then Akki ( Tumhe last line nahi padhna hain na isliye 1st line main likh lia)
Chappy was Awesome …. So now Shivaay nd MMR r frnds… Feel bad for Anika….
Waiting 4 nxt..
Hey Gorgeous…..didn’t read the first line either as you started with saying Love you loads and then i knew what you are gonna write…thank you so much gorgeous for everything…you know what i mean ….love you too loads…keep smiling and take care…..
This one is a blockbuster. Loved it. Anika has her own reasons which she doesn’t want to explain and Shivaay is unknowingly attracted to her. Dadi-the Cupid, again. Update soon ??
Hey Aashi…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode soon in the portal…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
It was fab dii… Juzz loved it… N I loved Anika’s arrogance..It suits her… shivaay’s to help Anika was something that never be expected from him…. Uhh juzz nailed it dii.. it was super duper awesome…. I can’t stop mahself.from reading ur updates.. n day by day it is getting more n more interesting… So eagerly waiting for next one… Do post next soon….
Luv uhh dii…
There’s still some problem in commenting being registered so commenting casually..
Luv uhh akki….
Hey Shreya…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee how sweet of you to write those amazing lines ….thanks a lot dear…..next episode soon in the portal…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Shivay is behaving good wid anika and she is very much determined to not take his help…..and this becoming much serious than tom and jerry fights.
Ur story telling is what I love d most.
Waiting for next part dii.
Hey Chotii…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…he he he he..tom and jerry war ki ye time aina don’t care….song gurthocchindi naaku…tnext episode soon in the portal…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Superb !!
Hey Bro…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
We dont mind anika being rude fr some time di…we’ve alwaz seen shivaay a tadibaaz…for a change m loving this anika too??….as usual amazing epi…loads of luv…take care
Hey Aayushi…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee how nice of you to understand my perspective….next episode soon in the portal…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Amazing like Tom and Jerry fight
Hey Chaithu….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode soon in the portal…keep smiling and take care
Hello akka…super undhi….Awww.. My billu is soo sweet??.. But loving this tadibaaz annika di tooo ???..precap chala interesting ga undhi.. Kabatti wait cheyalenu thwaraga thwaraga post chesayi.. Akka your writing skills are marvelous.. And idhi ordinary story em kadhu extraordinary story..take care and bye for now..?????and haa keep smiling…????..love you loads????…
Hey Chelli…awee that was so nice of you to write such amazing lines and do perfect analysis…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode soon in the portal…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Amazing nd awesome…
Just accept my short comment…
Hey Tanz…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode soon in the portal…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
It is nice… What is going to do anika for the internals…??? Curious to know about it… Update soon dii.. Love u
Hey Nikki…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode soon in the portal…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Awesome di…shivay and MMR are friends now?amazing update next part soon
Love you ??Take care and stay safe??di
Hey Harini…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode soon in the portal…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Mind blowin chp di !! Hope u didn’t forget me ?…. i had my mid semester exams so didn’t come on tu much. I missed u so much di and of course ur writings…. wht a comeback di. I so wanted to comment when i read ur chps but somehow stopped myself. I really like how u have chosen a totally different concept this time…. something different frm all ur works…. and it’s really amazing.
Anika’s daily schedule is soo packed and tight… i wonder how she manages everything…. imaginin oneself in her position is so hard…. no time for fun as she needs to look aftr her brother as well as her studies so tht sahil doesn’t face the troubles tht she has faced. Wht seems like a prank for us may cost the world to someone else… though shivay punctured her scooty for fun but her whole world almost turned upside down tht day… she could have even lost her brother if she was a bit late. Whenever we make fun of others we don’t think how the other feels unless u see their tears or u r in their position.
Shivay’s gettin attracted to her slowly… he felt bad when she was mocked by raghav infrnt of the whole school… he was feelin hurt to see her crying. He was guilty tht due to him… she’s lyin on the hospital bed injured.
He wanted to meet anika and apologise but didn’t have the guts to face her and moreover anika would create a drama there and wouldn’t listen to his words prprly. He just looked at her through the window. For the first time he saw her laughin openly with his siblings… he saw this side of hers for the first time.
Omru and prinku were shocked to see anika studyin in this state as well… they wanted to stay back with her but she insisted tht they go back to their daily routine as she doesn’t wanna be a hurdle in their path. Dadi could sense tht anika lied when she asked abt her family… i wonder how anika controlled her tears.
Shivay listened to the lecture attentively and made notes…. he gave them to MMR for anika as she’s in the hosp due to him… and he knws tht she loves her studies a lot and wouldn’t wanna miss a lecture. MMR became friends with shivay seeing his helpful side… and they gave the notes to anika. Anika was happy thinkin she got such nice friends who made notes for her as she couldnt attend the lecture…. but her happiness changed into anger the next moment knwin it was shivay’s notes. Shivay got fed up with her behaviour… even when he’s helpin her she’s fighting with him unnecessarily… he wanted to rectify his mistake by givin her notes but no she was just sayin abt the damn challenge…. he got angry with her attitude and left frm there.
Am pretty sure bua is the reason behind this behaviour of anika’s… she’s always angry at boys and doesn’t talk to them prprly. She’s justified at her place caz if tht bua comes to knw abt it… she would not give food to anika or something like tht. Either bua or somethin happened in the past due to boys… which is why she’s always ready to fight with them.
Anika shocked seein the hospital expenses… as it costs a lot and she can never afford it… she pleaded the nurse to talk to the doc regarding this issue. The nurse informed dadi abt it instead.
I really like characters in this ff… both good and bad. Shivay is not a rich spoilt brat but he has some traits of it. Bua is like a chugalkhor aunty but more wicked thn tht. Anika’s nicknames for siddharth and daksh ??. I am lovin this concept a lot… the best part is u can see most of these stuff happenin in reality.
How’s ur book comin along di ? Anyways, take care di and love u loads ❤❤❤❤❤❤.
Hey Maryam…i am so happy to see you back…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…that opinion of yours made me go through the entire episode in one glance,..i am so happy that you are liking this concept…yeah i am trying to maintain this to reality……next episode soon in the portal…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Hey akka awesome update…I wish these things were there in the serial also!!! Loved and lived in the update
Hey Ashwinee …thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode soon in the portal…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Amazing di … Loved it .
Thank you so much dear…thanks a lot
Amazing di….. Loved it.
Thanks a lot once again Zaya…
Awesome di… Lovely part… Loved it to the core…. Excited for the next part… Post it soon…. Take care… Luv u di
Hey Sissy…..Thank you so much my support system…thanks a lot…….next episode soon in the portal…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Superb update
Thank you so much Alekhika…thanks a lot…
Hiiii Akka,
Superb episode??
Loved it???
waiting for the next update…..
Hi Nila…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode soon in the portal…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Hi Harika di!
I just came around your FF. Can you please give a short summary about what is you story about or all over 6 episode summary. The story is really very interesting.
Hey …thanks for showing interest in reading my Ff…here you go with synopsis
Anika and Shivaay join the same reputed college , with Anika being topper in the entrance exam…Anika hates rich brats and from day 1 she and shivaay are at loggerheads….the fight reaches peak when Shivaay punctures Anika’s scooty tyres, which makes Anika suffer a lot….Anika gets to know Shivaay’s deeds from her classmate Raghav…she goes to Shovaay and challenges him that she will top all the exams…Shivaay accepts the challenge…the college management inform students about prizes for every exam conducted…the first internals arrive and Anika tops it, leaving Shivaay disheartened….Anika has three best friends Mamta, Madhuri, Rajni (MMR) …while Shivaay has Tia, Mallika, Daksh, Siddharth Rana as his best friends….there comes a freshers party notification and Anika and Shivaay opts to not attend it…Shivaays friends convinces them…MMR follows Anika to convince but unfortunately Anika along with Sahil meets with an accident , which was done by Shivaay…Anika , sahil are admittedin hospital and media gets to know about same…Tej tries to manage situation…dadi, Prinku, om , rudra come to help Anika and Anika bonds well with all of them….shivaay offers help to Anika by oreparing notes but Anika denies to take help from him….seeing Shivaay’s efforts MMR extends hand of friendship with Shivaay….suddenly college management prepones the second internal…..what will happen next …you can read in next episodes
Hope you have a brief idea now
Hi Di !
Firstly, I m so so sorry I didnt read any of the epis and I didnt reply to ur mssgs also.
I was busy and got some time today.
What to say Di ! Whenever I think that,
‘Now this and then this….’
But always something else happens in the story. U never fail to surprise me.
Loads of luv Di ??