Hey guys Trisha here hope you guys remember me . So finally I am done wd my exams but result is still to come so till than I had written an os . Hope u guys like this!
******”YOURS FOREVER”******
” Mam pls tell me will my husband be fine right ? ” wife of a random patient questioned her.
“Ofcourse ; there’s nothing to be worry about just a little wound” she replied in a calming tone.
The women took a sigh of relief nd started taking care of her husband !
“Mam dr Kabeer is calling you ” miss Fernandes informed her while she hurriedly replied “ok thanku Mam”
Never knew when her walking speed triplet listening his name ; never knew when she started to blush when someone talked abt him in front of her !
She stepped towards his cabin hurriedly… step one …. step two…. wait she is seeing old people ward in the way….. you wanna know why ? Because that was the places of one of those events which made her blush even more ; and you know the best thing He too noticed that but never let her know …. she stood there for few seconds nd continued few flashbacks kept her mind ;
Dr Kabeer and dr Saachi were examining an old women while Saachi was his assistant at that time ; when the injury had almost finished ;
Women- god bless both of your pair !
Both of them just looked at each other in shock…. he cleared the doubt and the little Happy incident ended but somewhere she started to fight with god while moving back to her work …. ” can’t they trust that ladies words ? ” but don’t u dare think abt this much ! Because ….. this was a little piece of her unusual and weird mind !
Thinking …. remembering….
Smiling …… she reached his cabin… whose door was a bit open ….
She was abt to knock the door when heard him talking on phone !
Kabeer- yes maa …. fine …. you do whatever you find right !
But these marriage proposals shouldn’t affect my work !…… Hm thanku mom….. kk bye I will ttyl ….. love u maa !
Her smile just disappeared in micro seconds when she starts a “yes / no” game in her mind ! “Will dr kabeer really marry ? ”
But at that time listening to him was more important after all it was their final month of internship !
“Knock knock”
“Come in dr”
” sir you called me ?”
“Yeah ; actually we have an important conference with foreign clients at abc hotel and you will accompany me as my assistant” he said.
“Sure sir” she replied with a dull face.
“And …. wear something nice nd be ready tomorrow morning 10 am ” he added while she nodded nd left for her work !
Wherever she went many questions crept his mind “will he really marry ? But what if he will ! Why should I care ! Why all this is affecting me so much nd I know what next he too wants me to join him there too ”
When someone waves her hands against her face ;
Pragya- where r u lost ?
*all were in canteen”
Saachi- nowhere yr !
Veer- really miss gongappa atleast give us a little smile !
While she acted or mimicked a big sarcastic smile “thts ok?” She remarked .
Isha- listen listen did u guys listened some girl is coming to meet my hottie ! (Acted like crying)
Saachi- hottie ? Call him hitler !
Veer- nice name !
Pragya- then what we will handle her !
A known voice remarked from a little distance ” handle whom?”
All of them turned to find dr kabeer there …! And a way dumbstruck!
Veer- n…. nothing sir !
Kabeer- better ! Leave for ur work !
All left !
Few hours passed like this and it was evening when Saachi received a message from dr Kabeer-“be ready sharp at 6 pm ; we have to go somewhere ”
She replied in agreement nd it was evening ! She got ready in an elegant long too on fitted jeans … micro sized long earnings and light makeup.
At first he was shocked for few seconds but then continued …!
He picked her ; the drive continued !
Kabeer- we are going to a mall as my mom wants me to meet some senior doctors daughter nd a gift for her too nd for that she preferred you to select that; hope u don’t mind !
Saachi- yes never mine sir !
(In mind- wow we had already left nd now he’s asking if I am ready for shopping or not )
They reached the mall;
Kabeer- so what do you think should I gift her.
Saachi- two years old sleepers and shoes polisher ! (She murmured)
Kabeer- what ?
(He listened what she said)
Saachi- ahm if she’s western then some modern jewellery will work else a big bouquet of flowers or may be a watch !
Kabeer- no she’s purely Indian !
Both continues to jewellery section! Where they started looking earring … finally they found a pair of gold stoned earrings…. which he asked Saachi to put on her . Finally the gift was selected but somewhere he didn’t wanted to give them to that girl when he himself knew they looked damn good on Saachi!
Secondly nd lastly they say for some snacks and drinks before leaving .
Waiter- what would you prefer Mam sir ?
Kanchi – a strawberry shake!
Both replied together while looked at each other’s face in little shock.
The shopping ended he was dropping her at her place she got out from the car while he said from the window …when she was abt to just turn to go…”take care” and as a reply she just smiled nd nodded her head .
It was the next day she woke up nd saw a message on her phone by Kabeer -“the meeting has postponed for one weekend at the same day I will be meeting that girl whom I going to marry hope u don’t mind accompanying me there as well”
Saachi (murmuring)- mind my foot …. I am going to kill her …. !
The seven days passed with Saachi constantly trying to spy on him whenever she got chance to find out any latest news abt the girl ! Or she might not meet him early !
Finally the day arrived kanchi left for the meeting… she was wearing a dark blue saree with light makeup nd loose hairs! He was just mesimerised to see her.
Few hours passed by and the meeting ended successfully ; they all left towards cafeteria of the hotel ! That girl hadn’t arrived yet… half an hr passed like this…
Saachi- sir when is she going to come ?
She was slung him constantly when he was trying a lot to calm him nd repeating “just do that Kabeer” in his mind. Finally after one and a half hour he got up from his seat…where they were constantly drinking coffee while waiting.
Saachi too stood up.
Kabeer- ahm ….that….!
Lack of courage he sat down again!
He did the same for five times in next half an hr and ofcourse waiter was tired giving them coffee one after other.
Saachi- sir should I leave !
Kabeer- no no wait…(he stood
Up nd took her to a nearby area which was decorated beautifully)… sat down on his knees and said….”u wanted to meet that girl right…!”
Saachi-yeah. ! (She smiled )
Kabeer- I …. I wanted to say…..(he said this in one breath) I don’t know anything you are just going to marry me ok!
Saachi-(making weird faces)- was this a proposal of an order ! Noways try again I can wait some more hours !
He gave her a wink nd tried again but ended up failing badly!
Saachi – how could I forget a typical khduus doctor is going to propose someone… actually u know what I should talk to kusum aunty abt that…may be she can teach u how to propose
(She smirks)
While he stood up holds her from shoulders; pulled towards her..when she could feel his breath… there was no space for air to pass between them… lights took a leave…love turned upon…cheeks had got red colour ….when he placed his lips gently upon hers …. at first giving a peck but then a passionate kiss…!
Both didn’t uttered a word on way back home !
She entered her apartment nd her buddies found a ring in her finger…!
A month later… they got married.
A dark room is shown with full lightning…. and an old man…. 70 years old putting down the pen on his diary when a tear escapes from his eye…!
He stepped outside nd made his way to the grave nearby …sat near a grave named “mrs Saachi kapoor” . He gave a forceful smile in the presence of tears…!
Man-“how could have I let our love die ! ”
He remembered a flashback…where an eight month old pregnant Sachi sitting In a Car got hit by a big truck while kabeer running towards her.
The end
This was it guys sorry for sad ending but this was only how it was planned earlier . Pls pls drop ur comments if u like this.
Regards
Trisha
38 Comments
Happiness & Sorow r 2 sides of the same coin……..similarly when life gives happiness, sorrow follows the next, but we can’t give up coz again after sorrow, happiness will come……….this is life yaar……… & dear……hamesha happy endings dena zaroori nahi, someone has to go first & the other partner just can’t stop living………..he/she should live with the happy moments………& thats what u gave in this plot……….I don’t know what I’m saying but I just can say one thing luv u a lot dear…….
Omg exactly riya I totally agree wd u nd lv uh too dear
Aww it was so sad but still the concept was truly amazing… Superb… Great job… Loved it
Thanku so much jessica! Glad u liked it
Trisha its always a treat to read ur os loved it but my heart skipped a bit in the last line.. jst loved dr kabir’s character more and more… i wished dis spark had come in the serial too… i wish u had written the story in sdch… i dont know wat crap dey r showing now
Thankyou so much nkh after so long ur comment made my day !
Mind-blowing Trisha…we missed u…. n your OS…. Awesome n jhakkas… Roz ek hi word dohra rahi hu bcoz no words r there to describe your talent
Thankyou so much abhilasha ! I am so happy to see ur cmmnt
Yaar I loved this one shot n the ending is so sad ????
Glad u like it dear ?
Hey trisha … Maine tumhe yaad nahi kiya sachchi..
Or kyun karu…..
Bolo….
H koi reason jisse tumhe yaad karun….
Bcoz dear yaad usse kiya jata h jisse bhul gaye ho or tum to itni special member ho hmari kanchi family ki tumhe kaise bhuk sakte h…..just kidding
btw os r outstanding haan ending bhale hi sad ho per kabhi kabhi aisa bhi hota h life hamesha perfect nahi rehti…..
And best part is confession no noooo ordered part hahaha aisa karoge to sach me agli baar ladki bhaag jayegi….lovvv u dear come bck with ur ff … Post asap
Hehe ? omg omg omg thanku so much for all this love
Hehe ? yeah yeah
Luv uh too
? ? why did Sanchi have to die?? But it was an amazing chapter cant wait to read more from you
Thanku palak
Oh no what was that Trish?You gave me 440 volt shock yaar.Why did you kill her?I can understand perhaps that was the script demand but seriously yeah I am not being able to bear it.Boo hoo hoo !!!!!!
It touched my heart. Tragic yet awesome os.
So 91 posts.9 more to fly this time no????
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Yeh just 9 more ! I am so excited nd so sorry for making u feel bad
Yr this was really heart touching and last part was so emotional that I began to cry but ya trishu dear u should really write a book trishu’s collection!!
Awwwww that’s so so sweet of you abhilasha ! It’s really a great thing to get appreciation from such an awesome writer like u
Nice story……but bhot sad hae
Thanku
superb trishu………i missed u a lot………fantastic but sad ending……………nice concept…..come back soon
Thanku dhruti I am glad u liked it
Oh trishu sad ending but m happy you are back dear…miss you a lot….luv you dear……post your gf soon.
Thanku anee luv uh too sweetie Nd ? ofcourse I will post gf soon (just kidding) don’t mind
Oops sorry fs
Thanku anee
thank God u r back sweetie warna me to pagal ho jata. I missed you so much. anyway it was really heart touching. wat to say dnt know eveytime as always u nailed it killed it again iam speechless want to say more but it will short because u deserve everything beyond it. a great great great grand salute to u . sorry for late comment sweetie lots of huggs and kisses to u and luv u loads
Awwww thanku so much ashnita I was eagerly waiting for ur comment sweetie ! A big teddy hug to you
Luv uh too loads ?
It’s was soo sad dear but it’s amazing awesome fabulous mind blowing dear
Thanku so much divya
Amazing dear.
Thanku alia
Di , it was sad ending but true love never dies . You write it beautifully . Can’t have words to describe this. Loved it completely.
Thanku so much niyu I am so glad you liked it dear
Hey Trisha ??? missed you so much dear!!! You know you made us sad today ??? but even if the ending is sad, the epi was mind blowing!!!
Awww thankyou so much ruwani
Ooh nooooo trishu this is not fair….I really didn’t expected that it would be sad ending u really shocked me dear but the episode was full of emotions dear and the person who can make someone cry with her writing is u dear u r writing is really speechless dear…hats off to u…and dear sorry to inform u that I have set my fb account for deletion as I have some problem with it soon really sorry dear…love u…
Awwwww thanku so much vrushti nd really sorry for disappointing you ! I am so happy that u liked it nd that’s ok
Luv uh loads ??