Hello all the sweet readers around , so welcome to “ FOUR HEARTS WITH ONE DESTINY…SWARAGINI ‘ OUR ENTANGLED LIVES…’- BY SHIYA” , giving a brief intro of the writers , SHIYA Literally means SHLOKA AND PIYALI , two old writers on the site , we both have written a lot many ffs on telly updates and have got immense love from many readers and a great friendship with each other as a result of it and so we are starting this new ff , a new venture of our life with the name “ FOUR HEARTS WITH ONE DESTINY…SWARAGINI ‘OUR ENTANGLED LIVES’ – BY SHIYA”
We really hope that you like this ff of ours , here’s a small sneak –peak in the ff …
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A roar in the till now empty house seemed to awake all the people in the house back from their sleep as they sat up bewildered by the noise.
“ Shekhar , there’s a limit , she’s crossing it , i think as parents we need to teach her something…” sharmishta who just got up complained to shekhar who too got up by the roar.
Shekhar ignoring her comment moved out of the room and stared at the scenario he was now witnessing.
A girl wearing a casual pink layered top and a pair of blue jeans seemed to be roaring on another girl clad in a beautiful yellow suit.
“ What is this…??? i asked for a coffee , not for a cold drink….” the first girl hollered on the second girl as she smashed the cup on the floor.
The suit clad girl closed her eyes and a tear escaped her eyes.
She didn’t reply as the first girl stared at her with her sharp eyes intently pointed on her.
“ No use talking to you , you have already sworn of making my life a hell , first you snatched….” the jeans clad girl was stopped in the middle by sharmishta who sternly ordered “ just leave and don’t talk to my daughter if you don’t know how to do it….”
The jeans clad girl stared at sharmishta and then left the scenario with an evil grin, “ you and your daughter Mom……IMPOSSIBLE.” she said as she left the scene. A drop of tear ecaped from her eye too…
A boy is seen staring at all this with a bouquet of roses in his hands.
“ i wasn’t snatched from you , you yourself separated me from you….” the boy said as a tear escaped his eyes.
Another boy who was standing behind him says, “ when life doesn’t want to give us something , we don’t get it however hard we try , this was our destiny , SWARAGINI AND SANSLAK’S destiny.. and destiny cant be changed…. .” they move inside as a few images flash on the now dark screen.
A girl’s SMILE WHILE PLAYING WITH WATER.
A girl WRITING SOMETHING ON PAPER WITH A HUGE SMILE.
A boy READING A PIECE OF PAPER WITH A SMILE.
A BOY SMILING LOOKING AT A BRACELET.
Zindagi ne jo inn sabko daga dii ….
Samajh na saka koi…
Har pal this khushi jahan chayi rehti….
Ansoon ne apni jagah banai…
Yeh waqt ka kheel tha ya inki Taqdeer…
Khatam kardi inke hathon se inki kismet ki laqeer…
Jude hein char dil yaahaan , ulghi si hui inke Zindagi……
Khwabo ka har sapna toota….
Dil bhi hai tukdo mai bikhra…..
Har pal chhaya gum ka saaya…
Khushi ne hum se mooh sa hai phera….
Yeh waqt ka kheel tha ya inki Taqdeer…
Khatam kardi inke hathon se inki kismet ki laqeer…
Jude hein char dil yaahaan , ulghi si hui inke Zindagi……
( LIFE BETRAYED THEM…
NOBODY COULD UNDERSTAND..
EVERY TIME WAS HAPPINESS HERE…
BUT NOW TEARS HAVE TAKEN ITS PLACE…
IS THIS THE PLAY OF TIME OR THEIR DESTINY…
FINISHED ARE THE LINES OF FORTUNE FROM THEIR HANDS…
CONNECTED ARE THE FOUR HEARTS HERE , ENTANGLED THEIR LIVES…
THEIR ALL DREAMS ARE SHATTERED
THEIR HEART HAS BROKEN INTO PIECES
ITS JUST SADNESS WHAT IS LEFT IN THEIR LIFE
IS THIS THE PLAY OF TIME OR THEIR DESTINY…
FINISHED ARE THE LINES OF FORTUNE FROM THEIR HANDS…
CONNECTED ARE THE FOUR HEARTS HERE , ENTANGLED THEIR LIVES…. )
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What happened with them????? Who r the girls??? And who has snatched everything from boy??? Who he is??? What have shekhars daughter done??? Whom is he talking about…??? How has all their lives got entangled????
All these questions will be very shortly answered.
Alright , so this was just a sneak peak , before completing would like to say that please don’t ask us about the pairs as we ourselves haven’t decided them yet , we are quite confused but for the time we can promise you that all the four pairs will be an integral part of this ff , namely SWASAN , RAGLAK , RAGSAN AND SWALAK… hope you enjoyed the promo….if yes don’t forget to go to the comment box below……
We will be waiting for ur response…….
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41 Comments
Prologue sounds so interesting
Thank u so much nitu…. keep reading…..
And commenting…
Be happy always
Interesting prologue
Thanks anshu…..
Keep reading dear……
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superb prologue……i loved it guys…..superb…amazing….fab…..interesting….lovely……super duper hit?
Hi dear…
Thank u very much… keep reading.
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cutie….HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY (NOT BELATED , FOR ME EVERY DAY IS FRIENDSHIP DAY)
hows you….???
HAPPY BELATED FRIENDSHIP DAY SWEETY……your are awesome and doing great job….best of luck for this ff to both of you. .. My sweety and Shloka…..lots of love guys…..and i liked the name Shloka Piyali combined Shiya….awesome….?
cutie , the credit for the name goes to my darling(Shloka) or else my choices were……..i won’t reveal or you’ll laugh …….thanks a lot for the wishes………..love you alot…….be happy……….
Wowwwww veryyy interestng yaaar…n loved dat poem 🙂 🙂 superb….eager to know dat whoz ragini btween dem…waitng for nxt part eagerly…n grls u bth r fantastic 😉
Thanks a lot sweetheart , well you question will be answered shortly……happy you liked the poem……..thanks alot for that compliment……keep reading and commenting….love you……be happy…
It was quite intresting. and was it own self composed poem? poem was too good. I have written poems too and I know how first to write one. Best of luck guys!
thanks a lot dear , well yes it was a combined poem by both of us and i am happy you liked it…yup , writing a poem is really hard , indeed thanks for the wishes , keep reading and commenting……love you….be happy……….
It’s just fab
Thanks alot dear , happy you liked it……….keep reading and commenting……….love you…..be happy……..
many gramitical mistakes;) It’s hard.
Oh is it…… we r really very sorry….
Pls forgive us this time… from next time we will surely take care..
nice
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Its interesting lukng forward fr 1st epi
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interesting………
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suprb
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Wow kiddo its nice looks interesting nice start..
Hi shloka i know u don’t know me but i read one ur ff strting i liked it due to studies i not commented . Ur too awesome..
Both of u rocked?
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Oh… thank u very much di…. so glad to know .
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thanks a lot for reading it dii……i am sooooo happy that you liked my new try…….thanks a lot……be happy dear………….
want ragini love her
Keep reading… characters will be soon revelaed…
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amezing…
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superb
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super. want ragsan
Thank u dear… pairs will be revealed when time comes…
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Awesome prolog
thanks alot dear , happy you liked it…………keep reading and commenting……….love you……….be happy………