Hlo guysss.how r u.I appreciate ur luv on my back 2 back os.thnks a lot.Now its again mine turn to eat ur heads.
So let’s begin…..
A small girl is shown.
Small girl:bachao .
(She was running and behind her a dog)
Small girl saw someone.
Girl:shravan!!!!save me..
Shravan(small one):sumooo yeh kis bala ko piche padva layi.
(That naughty girl is sumo)
Sumo:yaar I will tell u later but first pls save me from me.
Shravan:maiii???Lekin how??
The dog came near to both of them.
Shravo:sumoooo bhagggg.run sumo run
Sumo:shravo kuch kr nhi toh aaj yeh hm dono ko kaat lega
Shravo:mai kaha aaram se icecream khane chla tha kaha teri jaisi jhali se phala padh gya.
Sumo:ice cream that too alone lambho kahi ka.
Shravo:kash yeh tujhe kaat le.(hope it bites u)
Shraman got aside and both hide somewhere.
Sumo:uff what a dog fight????
Shravo:sab teri wajah se shararatein kyun krti hai….aaj tune uniform bhi change nhi ki dekh kitni ghandi ho gyi.(just coz of u. U haven’t change ur uniform see it is dirty now)
Sumo:u Want to eat ice cream alone sooo bad kaha gye teri friendship ke vade kasme.hr cheej sath kayenge aur ek doosre ka hmeaha sath denge.(where r u oaths which u took regarding her friendship)
shravo:oyee senti kyun ho rhi hai tujhe bhi de doonga ice cream bukhad sharmati bhi nhi.(why r u getting emotional I will give u too ice cream.soo bad don’t even shy)
Sumo:friendship mei kaisi sharam.(in friendship there is no shyness)
Shravo:first tell why that dog was behind u.
Sumo: iske undar meri koi glti nhi usne mere per ke neeche apni pooch rak di(there is no my mistake he placed his tail back of my leg)
Shravo:ohhh wah now let’s eat icecream.
They both go and eat some icecream.
Sumo:tune aaj mujhe ice cream party di my friend teri yeh party mai hmesha jaad rakongi.
Shravo:ohh phirse emotional ho gyi suman tiwari kya hoga iss ladki ka (again got emotional what will happen of this girl)_
Sumo:chl bs kr .(ok now stop this)
They both were busy in talking .A bike comes and was about to hit shravo.sumo pull him.sumo in this case get hurt and from her arm blood come.
Shravo:sumo tu pagal hai..(sumo r u mad)
Sumo:woh tujhe takhar mar jata phir.(if he hit u than
Shravo:iska mtlb khud ko chot lgva lo.(but it doesn’t mean that u will let hurt urself)
Sumo:are itna emotional kyun ho RHA hai mom ko kahongi woh bandage laga Degi(don’t get much emotional I will tell mom. She will tie bandage)
Shravo:nooo mai abhi laga deta hoon.(no I will)
Shravo ties his handkerchief .
Sumo:okk welcome for my help.
Shravo:ohh thanku for ur help.
Both leave for their homes biding bye 2 each other.
A girl gets a jerk a is awaken by her thoughts.
(So the above incident was been thought by girl)
Announcement:fight to London is about to land plese tie ur seatbelts.
Girl:aakir aaj mai uske seher aa hi Gai.kaha ho ga mera lambho.(where will be my lambho)
(So guys I hope u got to know that girl is her sumo)
Plain lands and sumo comes out..
A boy was sitting.He was starting having some different feeling.
Boy:aaj kyun jhali ki itni jaad aa rhi hai.ajeeb sa kuch ho RHA hai.(why today I m feeling different)
Abhi:shravann shravann.
(So that boy was shravo)
Shravo:haan bhol.
Abhi:shravo manager aaya hai.
Shravo:mood nhi.
Abhi:what happened .
Shravo:pta nhi kuch ajeeb sa mehsoos ho RHA hai.(I m feeling different)
Abhi:ja bahar ja kr round mar aa(go get some fresh air)
Shravo:haan.
Abhi:but be careful bhut raat ho gyi hai.
Shravo:don’t worry.
He was driving.he was feeling some sense that sumo is close to her.
It was night.
No one was on road.shravo was driving his car that someone comes and get hitted by his car.
Shravo come out from his car.the person who was hitted was a girl.her hairs had covered her face.
Shravo without seeing her face take her to hospital.
She was in operation theater
Shravan was out.His secretary comes.
Jia(secretary): Sir ladhki ki halat kaisi hai.(sir how’s the girl )
Shravo:pta nhi mai hi aapne khaboh mei tha.(don’t know it was my mistake
Jia:don’t worry.
Doctor comes from operation centre.
Doctor:ok she is out of danger.
Shravan:doctor what’s her name.
Doc:oh ya she is an Indian just came I got to know from passport her name is suman tiwari.
Shravo was shocked listening sumo name.
He went inside.he sees sumo lieing there.he was not able to believe.he went close to her.
Shravo:yeh tune kya kiya shravo jisne tujhe bachpan mei bachaya aaj tune usko hi.mai sumo se milna chahta tha lekin aise nhi.(what u did shravo the girl who saved u in childhood today u hit that gir)
Tears fall from his eyes.
He holds sumo hands.
Sumo was feeling something.
She slowly open her eyes.
He sees shravoo.
Sumo:shravvvaaann.
Shravo was happy listening her voice.
Sumo slowly wake from bed.
Sumo hugs shravoo.
Sumo:shravoo itne salon mei aur bhi lambha ho gya.
Shravo(emotional): aur tu jhali.
Sumo:shravoo lekin tu jaha.(u here)
Shravo tell her whole story…..
Sumo:how bad mujhko tu maar hi deta.
Shravo put his hand on sumo face.
Shravo:wht r u saying agar tu chle gyi tu mera kya hoga.I was waiting for u for such long years and ab jab tu itne salon baad mili toh tujhe jaane do.(if u gone wht would happen to me .I want 2 say something)
Sumo:Abe itna senti kyun ho rha hai.
Shravo:coz u r my life.
Sumo hugs him.
Shravo:sumo when I was going us samey nhi keh paya .aaj bhi yeh ho gya .
Sumo:kya kaho na(sweetly)
Shravo:I love uu.
Sumo:really chl jhoota.
Shravo:mai apne dil ki baat kr RHA hoon aur tujhe yeh jhoot lag RHA hai.
Sumo:aacha gussa na ho me too.
Shravo:aachi tarah keh.
Sumo:I love myself.
Shravo:sumooo.
Sumo:ok sorry I love u shravo.
They both hug each other sweetly.
The end.
How was dis one…?.?hope tu will not reject dis pls I wrote it in English too
28 Comments
pretty mjhe naw tu bta dde tu kha kia rae h???
apni biji da sir te newe khunde paen????
yar it was ammmmmaaaaazzzziiiiiinnnnggggggggg kiske tarrahan????
puni r ufi ki tarahan
it was awesome yar bht axha tha
tere ddimagh ke ghore fast chalne lage hain yarrrrr mjhe b bta naww kia kha rae h
acha khiyal rakhen
r bhangra mt bholen
tc
love u
Uffu tera dimaag kha rhi hoon.very tasty yummyyyyy.itna intelligent wow.
Yes awesome like both of us.
Haan ik cheej bhool gyi thnkoo.
Just formality.
Coz in friendship no thanks no sorry.
Thnkuuuuuuujuu.
Bs
Lots of luv
Fantastic os Preeti . Plz keep on posting mind blowing one shots like this . Just love them
Thnku vedika .
I will surely post more.
Glad u liked.
Lots of luv
This was so cute. I loved it. ??
Gotta sleep now so can’t do a longer comment. Sorry for that but it’s 3am already.
Love you. Take care ?
Aaye api itni raat ko koyi baat nhi.
Thanks for commenting.
Sleep well.
Love u
It was amazingggggg
Sanjyoti thanks.
Lots of luv
I know..it was you..who wrote OS ..when I started reading it..
It was so sweet…??????
Di oh wow u know already.
Great.
Thnkooo
How sweet it was too good yaar. best story ever loved it keep writing.
Hey reema oh thnko yaar.
Big compliment.
Lots of luv
How sweet love ❤ story!!! Keep writing like this my prettypreeti di.?
Oh beas tbnks yaar.
Lots of luv
Hii preeti…amazing os yaar!! How do u get wonderful os daily..good,i guess this is bcz we always say gud ni8,SHRAMAN’s dream hai na??
keep posting lyk this dear
love u loads..
Hey ALU yes u r totally right.
Thanks dear.
Glad u liked.
Lots of luv
Amazing os. Loved it!!!!!!
Thanks Cristie.
Lots of luv
it was cute
Thanks safaq.
Lots of luv
Awwwww….this one was soooo damn cute!!!
Trust me di, you are making me die for your stuff with these continous writings of yours!
And the moment I started reading this OS, I immediately recognised it to beone of your fanatastic works! After all, you have a cute yet unique way of writing!
Do come of with more of these lovely works from your side!
Loads of love to you!<3
Ansh baby itni tareef mt kr.
Mai mar jaongi.
Thnkd yaar.
I m glad u r loving my work.
Happy u r happy.
Love u
Ignoring all those SHraMan ‘love u’ moments, I would say tht GIRL I REALLY LOVE U. Sooooooooooooooooo many adorable os(s) now a days!!!! Literally wanna make me hug u tight or give u a 1000 cupcake set this diwali. U rock. I loved how jolly Suman is. Happy ever after!! U r making me addicted to ur sweetness. Though I always loved sugary items but u r special. Make mooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeee\
love u
Ohh aru cuppy itne cupcakes.
Niioooooooooooo.
Mai moti ho jaongi.
Ur luv is enough.
Thanks jaan.ur comment rock.
Love u
it was too good, love ya
ur an amazing writer
love you , shraman and the os
YB
Mirra itna meetha comment.
I also love shraman and myself.
Joking love u more than me.
Thnksssss.
Lots of luv
Oyyyyy Preeti yar !!!!
Hats off to u yar .. u wrote such Awwwwww some waly OS … ammmmmmmmmmmaaaaazzzzzziiiiinnnnnggggggggg ????????
Nd this one was SHWEEEEET ?????
Fati bs aur tareef nhi.
Thnkzsss I m fill now with ur luv.
Love uuuuuu.
Awesome girl.
Thnksssssss.
Take care