Hi guys…How r u all?? I am very happy that I got 8 out of 10 in the review done by Hania and Neha…I thank both of them…And I m very happy to share it with all of u…I thank all the silent readers and the others who commented…I thank Aryan,Sufi,Santhiya and Niyati and all others who have commented…Keep on supporting guys!!
Here is the link of the review done by Hania and Neha…
http://www.tellyupdates.com/review-book-for-fanfictions-of-tu-review-of-third-nomination/
Here is the link of my previous epi…
http://www.tellyupdates.com/friendshiplove-and-nothing-else-episode-22/
Lets start our 23rd epi…
SCENE-1
The episode starts with Shruti taking Karthik away from Arnav…
Karthik : (angrily)Shruti!! Why did u stop me?? I would have killed him…
Shruti : Karthi…Just stop shouting…I told I will explain u nah?? Give me some time…Now lets go home…
Karthik stares at her angrily…
Shruti : (to herself)I have to cool his anger down…What to do??(to Karthik)Ok…Then I’ll go by bus…
Karthik : Oh…My maa…Don’t do that…Then I will get scolded by mom…I Iwill do whatever you say…Come lets go home…
Shruti : I was planning to get you scoldings from mom…But you have come from Mumbai today only…I don’t want to start my work today itself…I pity on u…So,I m leaving you now…Lets go..
She sits in the bike…Karthi starts the bike…
Shruti thinks…”I somehow managed to stop you from hitting him…I am paying off by debt bro..I scolded him that day and he returned all that to me today…And I am so lucky to have you as my brother…I could change your mood instantly…That’s so sweet of you Karthi”..She feels a mixed emotion of happiness and sorrow…
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Karthik and Shruti reach home…As soon as she refreshed,Karthi takes her to the terrace…
Shruti looks at him puzzled…
Karthik : Don’t look like you don’t know why I took you here…
Shruti :(With puppy face)Why did u take me here,Karthi??
Karthik: I am gonna kill you…Don’t act smart…So tell me…Who is he??
Shruti : Ok…I will tell you…He is my senior…Arnav Singh Raizada…
Karthi : Why he threatened u??
Shruti : I asked you to keep quiet for sometime…I think I would forget what I was about to say…Can you stop asking questions??
Voice : How could he keep quiet Miss.Talkative?? After all he is your brother…He might have got your genes too…
Karthik and Shruti are surprised to see Sid there…
Shruti : Come….Mr.Siddharth…You never miss a chance to tease me….
Sid bows down as if he accepts her welcome…
Sid : I just came to see Karthik anna…Not you…
Shruti : Then,why I have to be here?? Let me go…
She goes with fake anger..
Karthik: Hey…Miss.Drama Queen…Wait…Answer my question and go…
She goes as if she did not hear him…
Shruti:(To herself) Thank God…I escaped from Mr.Vakkeel’s(Karthik’s) investigations..…Actually,I should thank Sid instead…He played the role of Guardian Angel today…
She goes inside…
Karthik :(Disappointed)What yaar??
Sid : I spoiled everything??(smiles)
Karthik : You are smiling?? I am gonna smack your head…
Sid : Don’t do that bro..I’ll tell you whatever you need to know…
Karthik asks about Arnav and Sid explains all the incidents to Karthik..Karthik listens to him patiently….
Karthik : So u say that Arnav might have scolded her for her behaviour that day??
Sid : Ya bro…I think so…But he is so nice to all of us…I don’t know why he is acting rude with Shruti…
Karthik : Let me warn him tomorrow…
Sid : No bro…Not needed…He is not that rude.. I will talk to him and I promise that I will take care of Shruti…As far as I know,Arnav is a gentleman…Shruti might have done something which made him angry…She does something in a childish way and we bear that because we know about her…But he is serious types and so he might have got irritated…That’s it…Nothing more than that…You don’t worry…I will take care…
Karthik : I trust you Sid…And if he again behaves like this to my sister,I will not even think once before killing him…
SCENE-3
Its midnight.. Arnav did not get sleep yet…He opens his cupboard and takes a picture which he has kept below his clothes…There was a beautiful girl smiling in it…It is VARSHA…
Arnav thinks…
“Why have u left me Varsha?? Why?? U came into my life like an Angel…And why did u leave me without even telling me…How could u do that Varsha?? Did you not think of me once before going?? Don’t u have mercy?? U left and our love story is still incomplete…U left even before it started…I started living with ur memories after u left this world…I thought nobody could replace u in my heart…But now…What is this??SHRUTI…Whenever I see her,she reminds me of u….She walks like u,talks like u,behaves like u…I see u in her…I don’t understand why…I am getting close to her even after trying hard not to….I think I am cheating myself by telling me again and again that I hate her…I don’t hate her and I think I am falling for her..And when I think that I feel like betraying you…I wont do that…Sorry Varsha…I wont fall for her…I don’t want anybody in my life…The last time,u came into my life and sacrificed ur life for that…I don’t want to destroy one more life…I love u Varsha…Forever….”
Tears start falling down his eyes…He feels dizzy and suffocating…He reaches for tablets and takes one..
rang thay, noor tha
jab kareeb tu tha
ek jannat sa tha, ye jahaan
waqt ki ret pe kuch mere naam sa
likh ke chhod gaya tu kahaan
Hamari adhuri kahaani…Hamari adhuri kahaani plays…
Tamil: Amarndhu pesum marangalin nizhalum,unnai ketkum eppadi solven…Udhirndhu pona malarin vasama…(ninaithu ninaithu paarthal (male version) from 7G Rainbow colony)
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It is the next day…Shruti,Abhi,Swadhu and Sid are in the class…Suddenly,the peon comes inside the class and says that their results are to be declared in half an hour…
Abhi : Oh God…What is this?? Why are they declaring the results so soon??
Shruti : Only to screw u up…
Swadhu : Hey…Don’t worry yaar…U will get good marks…But I am also worried…
Sid : Swadhu…U don’t worry…U will pass in first class…But,I have doubt about Abhi…
Shruti : (thinks something) How nice it would be??(sighs)
Swadhu : What darlo??
Shruti : I was just thinking how it would be when all of us finish our second semester exam and Sid would be struggling with the arrear paper…We would be spending the vacation and he would be spending it with books…This idiot deserves it…
Swadhu : Ya darlo….That would be nice…I will be really happy if this happens…
Both of them laugh at Abhi….
Abhi : If that happens,I wont leave u guys to enjoy the vacation…I would ask u guys to teach me…By then,I would have forgotten everything and I would ask u to teach me right from the first…
Swadhu and Shruti widen their eyes…
Sid : My goodness…I did not say anything…Or else he would have asked me too to teach him…
Abhi : Don’t worry…I wont ask u to teach me dude…
Sid : I know about u Abhi…U wont trouble me so…
Abhi : Ya…I will trouble u more than that…I will vacate my room in hostel and I will come to ur house…I will keep u awake all night until I finish studying everything…And I will not let u sleep in the day time too…I will make u drop me in college and pick me after I finish the exam…
Sid gapes…Shruti and Swadhu laughs at him…
Sid : U r so dangerous Abhi…I wont mess with u…
By then,a girl shouts “Results are posted in the noticeboard”…
All the students run…Shruti,Sid and Swadhu also go…
Abhi closes his eyes..
Abhi : Sid…Don’t ask me to come…I wont come and see myself failing…I cant see it…Shruti…Don’t pull me…Swadhu…Don’t compel me to come…
A girl passes by…She sees Abhi blabbering…
Girl : Hey…Abhi..What happened to u?? Have u gone mad??
Abhi : (opens his eyes) I thought my friends would call me to look at the results…
Girl : They have gone a long back…See there u idiot…
Abhi :(Grins) Oh…Ok u carry on…
The girl goes..
Abhi :(to himself) U idiots…U have framed me like a mad man in front of A beautiful girl…My goodness…Nobody saw when she scolded me…
He also goes there…He could not look as the place was crowdy…He stands over there…
Sid,Swadhu and Shruti comes with a sad face…
Abhi : Hey.. What happened??
Three of them make pout face…
Abhi : What?? I failed??
Shruti nods….Swadhu shooks her head…
Abhi : U guys are confusing me…I think u guys have also failed…
Sid nods…
Abhi : Wow…That’s awesome…But,that cant be possible…(he thinks)
Shruti,Sid ,Swadhu : U have passed in first class!!
Abhi : What!!!!!(he opens his mouth wider)
Swadhu : All of us have passed…Shruti topped our department…
Abhi : Enda guruvayurappa!!(My God)!Thank u so much…
All of them have a group hug…
Sid : Three (Sid,Swadhu and Shruti)of us have passed in distinction Abhi….
Abhi : Wow!!!! It means CELEBRATION..????
They dance…
Arnav and Vicky sees them dancing…
Vicky: This reminds me of our first semester results…U were the topper and Varsha,the second one no?? We celebrated like them… Those were the golden times….
He sighs…Arnav becomes sad…
PRECAP : Shruti giving treat to all her friends…Vicky and Arnav also joins…They are about to go on a tour…
Keep on commenting guys…Even A single word would mean so much to me…
Regards,
Anokhi…
11 Comments
unique concept…..just love it…..keep going up….and not to forget update the part soon…
Tq so much yaar….Keep on supporting…
Congrats dhidhi fa the rating u got…super epi yarr..kepom on rocking….I felt happy when u mentioned my name…in thanking list..
Tq d…Keep on commenting…
Very nice episode and especially that puppy face that’s so cute
Tq yaar…And keep on supporting…
First of all di a very big congrats for ur rating . You totally deserved it . Episode is so cute & lovely ? ….Wow shruti is topper ….Loving it …Keep rocking di & Keep smiling.Love u ? ?
Tq my dear….Keep smiling…
Fantabulous . Your story define a lot of friendship . I am loving it . Looking forward the story.
Glad to know that u like our rating . That’s really sweet of u .
Tq so much dr