Hlewwwwwww guys….!!!!
Thankxz for ur comments…. m glad u all like it…. achaa ek baat btao…. how many of u watched kitni mohabbat hai2…. nd if u watched it dn tell me if it is same as kitni mohabbat hai2…. bcoz 2-3 of u told me it is same….. saby u told me it is remind u of kmh2 i agree bcoz of d gangster nd police which is same as kmh2….. but neha dear u r saying dat it is same as kmh2 but do tell me…. twiraj bonding nd twinj first meeting in my part1 is same as aarohi nd arjun… i think noo…. yaa i’ll tell u all…. dat diz idea strikes in my mind whn i was watching ek villian d role of police nd gangster showed in dat…. nd honestly whn i wrote d intro of diz i told my friend to read it first…. nd she immediately told me it is same as kmh2 dn i searched nd find dat she is right but dn also i told her to read first part dn tell me again….. i also agree in dat kunj nd arjun are same but twinkle nd aarohi are totally different…. nd i think aarohi didn’t have d brother lyk twinkle…. overall d concept is same gangster kunj nd police twinkle but d story is totally different….. WHEN GANGSTER FALL IN LOVE if u think about d title dn u will get d hint of d story….. now enough of d explanation…. read nxt part…. tell me u like it or not nd yes u r free to tell me if u still find it same as kmh2….
Episode starts
At present…. in mall… twinkle goes to achal’s shop at 10th floor….
Twinkle: i m not liking d dresses here u’ll select here… m going to another shop….
Smita nd aarti nodes
Only 2 shops r in dat floor as construction is going on der….. twinkle is going to another shop…. while kunj follows her…. kunj signs his men to go to her…. but dn see a guy stops twinkle…. kunj signs his men to stop der….
Twinkle(to guy): what….
Confused Kunj(thinks): now who is dat guy….
Kunj hide der for hearing der convo…. dat guy looks at twinkle top to toe…..
Twinkle(again to dat guy): hlo… m talking to u…. kbhi ldki nhi dekhi kya….
Guy: dekhi to h prr….. tere jesa maal nhi dekha….
Twinkle: mind ur language….
Saying diz she starts leaving but guy holds her wrist…. nd to his sudden action…. twinkle also… with a jerk holds his hand nd twists it…. nd kick him…. seeing diz frnds of dat guy comes nd twinkle apply her martial art on them also…. but dn one of them takes out knife from his socks nd from behind… he place it on her neck…. twinkle stops nd stands lyk a statue…. when other guy comes near her nd touches her hand with his fingers from shoulder to palm…. nd holds her both hands tightly nd comes towards her lips….
Twinkle: stay away from me…. leave me…. i will not spare u….
Kunj (to himself): it’s better her story will end here only but no…. i need her to take d revenge from yuvraaj taneja…. i will use her as a trum card against her brother…. kunj u have to save her….
He goes from der nd hide behind pillar from where he is able to see all of them clearly….. when d guy is abt to kiss her kunj takes out his gun nd first shoot him nd dn all of them except dat who holds twinkle….. dat guy gets scared….
Guy: who is here…. who shoot them (to twinkle) u r not alone tell me who is with u…. who is here…. come out…
He holds twinkle tightly… nd steps backward looking here nd there… still knife on her neck…. whn some1(kunj) is pushes him a lil from behind…. knife falls from his hand…. but he holds twinkle tightly… within neno second kunj picks up d knife from floor….
Guy: give me d knife…. who r u… u shoot them….
Kunj shows him knife nd acts like he is giving it to him nd is scared….
Kunj: sh..shoot…w..wht r u saying… plz plzz don’t kill me…. i didn’t see anything…. (pointing towards twinkle) if u want to kill her…. i won’t stop u… plz carry on… but spare me…. (Joins his hand)
While kunj is talking to him twinkle bits his hand nd kick him on his manhood…. he winchs in pain nd falls on floor…. kunj understands his pain….
Kunj: uiiiiee maaa….
She snatchs knife from kunj’s hand nd say….
Twinkle: leave from here….
Kunj: areeeee but i save u…. instead of saying thankx u…. r…. turn…. turn….
Twinkle: wht…. turn… turn….
She turns nd see d guy is standing nd holding gun…. she looks at kunj but he is nowhere he leaves…. d guy points it on twinkle…. but sm1 shoot him from behind…. he falls down nd twinkle looks up to see… its yuvraaj…. she goes nd hugs him….
Twinkle: bhai….
Smita nd aarti comes der…
Smita: i called him… when we hear sound of shooting… we got scared…. so i called him….
Uv: who shoot them twinki….
Twinkle: i don’t knw…. sm1… (thinking) sm1 from i thnk behind dat pillar…(showing him a pillar)
Uv: okay leave it… i’ll find out… let’s leave from here….
They leaves…. nd kunj who is seeing all diz from far….
Kunj: yuvraaj taneja…. i won’t let u spoil my plan….. diz tym i leave bcoz of u but nxt tym…. will leave with ur sister…. he smirks nd leaves….
After sm days….
Sarna mension
Lucky kunj’s right hand…. nd vicky his left hand…. (aree vo hota h na yrrr…. right hand left hand…. mtlb uske important bnde… khas aadmi typs… vhi)
Lucky comes to kunj….
Lucky: sir u told us to spy her…. she is going out today from amritsar wd her friends…. don’t knw where…. but they r going by train….
Kunj: what…. u r saying me now….
(Smirks)Vo jaa rhi h to me yha kese rh skta hu…. mujhe bhi jana hoga…. (if she is going dn how can i stay here…. i also have to go)
Manohar hears diz nd say “u r not going anywhere kunj…. i told u to not mess with dat malhotra’s but u didn’t listen any1u killed his only brother…. now they r searching u everywhere…. it’s not safe outside amritsar even i advice u to stay in d house for sm days”
Kunj: noooo way…. in d house for sm days not possible…. nd yaa… dad (serious)he grabs my collar…. so i shoot him…. nd if he died it’s not my problm….
Manohar: y r u so stubborn kunj…. kyu nhi sunte ho kisi ki…. (irritated)do whtevr u want…. he leaves…..
Kunj(to lucky): wht…. go… nd spy her…. he leaves
At station
twinkle,smita,aarti are shown sitting in d train…. lucky follows her with some mens(goons)…
At Jalandhar station…
Twinkle looks at smita nd aarti…. both r sleeping….
Twinkle: i m thirsty…. they both r sleeping…. god how they both sleep peacefully in train…. anyways… i should go nd buy mineral water….
She leaves nd lucky with his goons follow her…. she feels sm1 staring at her…. she turns nd sees lucky nd his goons 4 or 5… nd feels smthng fishy….
Twinkle(to shopkeeper): bhaiya pani ki bottle dena…. (give me water bottle plz)
Twinkle(thinks deeply): wht they want… y r they staring at me…. god i m not feeling safe here…. it’s better i will take my bottle nd leave diz place…. it’s too late also….
Shopkeeper shouts loudly in her ear…. ‘ooo madam’ she comes into her sense….
Shopkeeper: ur bottle….
She pays nd drink water…. when shopkeeper says….
Shopkeeper(looking at train): vese aap jalandhar me rhti h yaa aapki train chut rhi h…. (umm…. u lived in jalandhar or u r missing ur train)
Twinkle(shocked): wht….
She turns nd runs behind train…
(Same as jab we mat but love diz scene…..now twinkle ka kareena mode without shahid/kunj)
Twinkle: oy ruk jaa…. menu chd k naa jaaa…. oy chain khicho koi…. aree koi to sunoo…. saree kumbhkaran ki family members isi train me h kya…. mera saman to dedo chor…. oy rukk jaa naa….
But train leaves… lucky calls kunj nd informs him…. kunj tells him to follow her ONLY….
Kunj: great chidiya khud hi pinjre me aa rhi h….. ab kya krega ACP…. ur sister is finished…. vese kis typ ki ldki h ye… siyappa expert… lyk seriously… train chutgyi…. koi itna careless kese ho skta h… koi ldki itni careless kese ho skti h…. nywys…. it’s good for me…. (great Sparrow itself coming in d cage… now wht will u do ACP…. ur sister is finished…. but wht d typ of girl she is…. siyappa expert…. lyk seriously…. missed her train…. how can sm1 be soo careless…. how can a girl be soo careless)
Twinkle decide to go inquiry office.. she walks nd see a shadow is following her…. she turns nd see lucky nd his goons der…. they pretends lyk they r talking nd doesn’t follow twinkle…. she feels unsafe nd starts steps backward looking at them…. when lucky with his goons starts forwarding towards her… nd she starts to run… they also runs… she runs outside station nd runs nd runs butt lucky catches her… he hold her hairs tightly…
Twinkle: leave me.. i said leave me u don’t knw me.. i m…
Lucky: shut up(pointing guns on his head) ye dekh rhi h na.. 6 ki 6 tere bheje k andar jayegi….
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