RIKARA : RIDDLES OF LIFE TURNS 2 RHYTHM OF LOVE [Part 2, By Renima ]
Hello ishqies, sorry for updating too late…….My love undergone through a critical situation in last week ….. and finally today his health has become better and it will take some time for his complete recovery ……And doctor assured that definitely everything will be fine and I am also started feeling the same….. I am feeling bit relaxed…..So I thought 2 update my article……only…..May be this will not be a gud one as still my mind is fluctuating only…….Another thing with for the first time with his permission am writing this one…..Actually I hided so many articles which I posted in tu from him and before I could reveal he caught me red-handed earlier……{which I didn’t tell any one}and now he is bit fine from his disease , I was literally crying only and he asked me 2 update ff and told me that he want 2 read it…..And specially he has thanked some people ……mukta, disha, priya15, luna, devga,piyali,shaza,sat and other ishqies whoever know Renima as renu and Mahesh as mahi…….. So I don’t know what 2 tell now……Pls read it….that’s all…..
Links 4 previous part….
Part 1
Scene – 3 { @ Sharma House}
{Gauri and Omkara break their eyelock…..}
Omkara : Mmm….come and sleep in bed……
Gauri : I have a habit 2 sleep in floor……I am comfortable here only……
Omkara : U see….it’s cold and better u should come and sleep on bed……
Gauri : I told u omkara….i will sleep here…..
Omkara : Ok….as u wish…..
{Omkara walks outside and reaches the balcony and starts 2 stare night ….He lost himself in certain thoughts……Mean while gauri gets up and finds omkara was missing…..She takes the woolen blanket and searches him 4 every where…finally he find him
@ the balcony….She moved towards him and stares him with confusion……}
Gauri : Omkara!!!
Omkara didn’t reacts, gauri feels strange……She also witnesses night’s beauty and when she find the sky was filled with stars, she also lost herself in thoughts……She recollected her memories about her paapa and starts crying…..Mean while omkara turned behind and finds gauri…..His eyes were already wet and when he found gauri in tears, he couldn’t stop himself from moving near her and wiping her tears…..Gauri is shocked 2 see her husband like this…..His wet eyes were conveying a lot which he could have suppressed in his heart only…..
Omkara : I think u are missing some one…..
Gauri : Paapa!!!! Am missing paapa……May be he is there…{she point out her finger towards the sky….Omkara find stars and stares gauri ……He feels sad 4 her…..}
Omkara : Gauri !!!!
Gauri was unable 2 contorl herself …she hugged him tightly and burst into tears……Omkara was unable 2 stop it as he also felt some sort of feeing which was far beyond his knowledge…….
“Jab kisi ki taraf “ [pyar toh hona hi thaa]plays….
PRECAP……DON’T KNOW…..AS AM FEELING …..REALLY ….HARD 2 CONTINUE……
Sorry for troubling and making short one…….
21 Comments
Awesome one.
Thanks….yaar
Please post longer one next update….Nice one
Thanks..but right now…i can’t make sure 2 post next as long one…..and i have updated it…u can have a look…it’s not longer….and will try 2 make longer in upcoming episodes……thanks a lot
Awesome
Thank u
Awesome dii…. God bless you and your love good health and care..
Thank u nikita…..for ur support and prayers…
THANKS A LOT……2 EVERY ONE ……I WILL TRY TO MAKE NEXT ONE LONG…..BUT I DON’T KNOW WHETHER I CAN WRITE OR NOT……AND THOUGH HE SAID HE IS FINE…..AND HE ASKED ME WHY I WROTE A SHORT ONE…..I…..DIDN’T GET ANY ANSWER 2 TELL WHAT I AM UNDERGOING IN MY HIND…….YET HE IS NOT COMPLETELY FINE AND AM FEELING BIT TENSED….SO PLS PRAY FOR HIS SUDDEN RECOVERY……AND SORRY FOR MAKING A SHORT AND BAD UPDATE….FOR HIM AM WRITING THIS ONE ONLY…….pls pray well guys….
Hey di….
I am happy to know that now ur luv is fine……and I pray for his quick recovery…….
This was not at all bad…..
And about a short update then I understand what u must me going through…….. So plz….don’t say sorry……coz u don’t need to say so…..
I loved the update…….and I missed it a lot….
I pray for the well being of u and ur special luv…….
Take care di….
@renimadi’s luv….u too get well soon……
See u…
Kehkasha…..thanks a lot for ur support…and ur prayers….and u commented from heart….that’s what i felt while i read it…….and thanks 4 remaining as our well -wisher……as well as my friend….really…thanks a lot…..
Awesome n for ur love my best wishes…
Awesome update di and don’t worry mahesh bhaiya (can i call him bhaiya?) Will be fine soon?my best wishes to you and him.
Sure….chandini…..u can call him bhaiya…..
SUPERB
thanks a lot 4 the kind support …uf
Interestin.
Thanks a lot
Diiii I have mailed u.. Though I am saying here.. If mahi bhai is reading this.. Then also no prob…. This cmnt is for him…no need for tqs bhai agar mera khud ka bhai hota toh mei pray karti na aise hi Maine aap ke liye pray kiya.. It’s not such a big thing which deserves tqs.. I m soo happy that u r fyn … I consider u as my bro only but one request… Pls don’t consume alcohol from now on at least for ur frnd renu.. Pls…
And renu dii now it’s my turn to be ur sis..pls ab aapka kyal rakhiyega.. I know that u l be crying all these days so go n sleep well.. Ha..otherwise ur sissy well get angry on u… Lots of love diii.. And Mark my words remahi will always be together… Remember this I said in my os tooo…. Luv u dii.. Tc
I have read and replied…..priya……and don’t worry…..am feeling relaxed now……And this time he has promised 2 his mother and hope he will not consume drinks……And yeah i cried a lot….but now…..am not crying….since he don’t like my tears….thanks 4 commenting and giving support…..
Omg diii aapko Hindi samaj nahi aati hai… I said no tqs… Soo pls dii don’t say me tqs.. U know there is a rule ..no tqs and no sry btw sissies.. Yeh mat puchiyega isse kissne banaya hai.. I don’t know ???