GAURIKARA Three Shots : RIDDLES OF LIFE TURNS 2 RHYTHM OF LOVE PART 3-B [By Renima]
Thanks 2 all dil-e-ishqies for supporting my love and me with ur prayers……Today finally am feeling much better and have decided 2 give longer updates of my article….So will try my level best 2 give longer update…And another thing, tmrw I will end this one , since it is 3 shots only…….Without telling much am presenting this part…pls read it and give ur valuable comments on it……
As usual….here are the links 4 previous parts…..
Part 3
Part 2
Part 1
Scene- 4 { @ Sharma house}
.Gauri and omkara were talking late night yesterday @ balcony and finally they themselves don’t know when they fallen asleep…..Next day , Gauri wake up early mrng and stares her jatadhari hippy pati’s face……She gets up from from the basement ……and smiles @ him….. She couldn’t lost herself in his smile, as her brother naughty bunty came there and shouted ….Didi”……
Gauri : Sh!!! Ur jatadhari jiju is sleeping……don’t shout……
Bunty : {comes closer 2 gauri and omkara} I think u have gone mad by staying with jatadhari jiju…..
Gauri : What ?? U mean my husband and me are mad …..
Bunty : No…..u both are mental……U don’t find even a single room 2 sleep……in this house??
Gauri : Actually yesterday we were just talking certain things and we slept here….only….
Bunty : Really ?? I wonder how jiju tolerated nonstop bolti harharai express!!!
Gauri : Haa……u said it again…..Stop there…..i will…..{bunty started running and gauri also ran behind him…..bunty hides beside the basement…and gauri fails 2 find him}
Gauri : Bunty…..where are u ??
Bunty : Ah!!!{screams }
Gauri : Bunty…{she turns behind and finds that omkara has pressed bunty’s ear…..}
Omkara : Naughty boy…..gauri catch him…..he was hiding here only……{omkara stares gauri and smiles}
Gauri : Haa…bunty……now I will show u……{gauri moves ahead 2 catch bunty, but her leg slips and she falls on the floor……omkara released bunty’s ears from his hand and rushed towards her…..mean while bunty runs from there……}
Omkara : Are u okay ?? {omkara extend her hands and manages gauri 2 get up from the floor…..}
Gauri : Am fine…..omkara…..
They stare each other’s eyes for a while and soon both of them together said ….”Bunty”. Gaurikara ran downwards 2 catch bunty and finally they find bunty was sitting @ sit-out of the house …….Gaurikara smiled and moved beside him….
Gauri : Bunty…..so u are sitting here……I will….{she touched him from behind, bunty turned and hugged her tightly and burst into tears}
Gauri :Bunty…..what happened ? Why are u crying ?
Bunty : Didi….today u will go with this jatadhari jiju forver …..Then who will play with me ??
Who will narrate stories for me ??
Omkara : Beta….bunty…{omkara moves ahead and place his hand on bunty’s forehead..]
Bunty :Don’t talk with me…u are too bad….u are here 2 take my diddi from me…I don’t like u….{bunty removed omkara’s hand and released himself from hug and walks away….}
Gauri : Bunty..listen….bunty……{mean while she finds that omkara was feeling upset] Am sorry…..he is kid….and….
Omkara : It’s alright……I deserve it…..Whole life whoever surrounded me have suffered pain and this time I have rewarded pain 2 an innocent kid also…….{omkara smiles with wet eyes}
Gauri : Omkara…..
Omkara : Am fine….gauri…..{omkara walks towards outside the house ….gauri stares him and feels sad 4 him}
Mean while gauri’s maa arrives there and stares her……
Maa : Gauri…..these are some coconut barfis….u both can eat it on the way……{she handovers a tin to her}
Gauri :Maa…..u should have called me ……I will make it….why u put the effort ??
Maa : Beta….now onwards I have to make the habit of doing things alone ……Beti has 2 leave her maayka…..one day….{emotional]
Gauri : Maa……{gauri hugs maa and cries}
Maa : Gauri……I think daamadji has suffered a lot in his life….Don’t know why when he called me as maaji and hold my hands I was staring his eyes only……His eyes tell much which his mouth is not capable 2 tell……Promise me that u will always stay with him in his ups and downs of life……U should stay as best partner throughout his life…..Khaa meri kasam……{ maa puts gauri’s hand on her head}
Gauri : I promise u maa……I will value this relationship and I will be his partner forever…..i will stand with him in his sorrows and happiness…..Gauri kumara sarma will always stay as the best wife for her pati omkara…….{gauri bursts into tears}
Maa : God bless u …..gauri….{maa moves ahead, omkara overhears their conversation and stares gauri with wet eyes…..gauri turns her eyes and gets surprised 2 see omkara…..they share an emotional eyelock……” Main jaan ye vaar doon….har jeet bhi haar doon….keemat ho koi tujhe beintehaan pyaar doon…..saari hadein meri abb maine thod di….dekar mujhe pata awasrgi ban gayi..haa hasi ban gaye…..haa name ban gaye….tum mere aasman…meri zameen ban gaye…..”{haa hasi song[female version]…..movie-hamari adhuri kahani }plays}
Omkara and gauri move ahead ….and come closer 2 each other….
Omakara : Go and get ready soon….within one hour we have 2 leave…..
Gauri :Yes…..{gauri shook her head with a fake smile and goes inside….omkara feels sad for her]
In the midst omkara’s eyes went on bunty who was sitting in the kitchen with gauri’s maa… He was still weeping in tears only…..Omkara goes there and stares him…..
Gauri’s maa : See….bunty….who has come….ur jeejaji……
Bunty : I don’t want 2 talk 2 him…….{gauri’ maa feels bad and stares omkara….omkara signs her that he will manage it by a sweet smile and sits near bunty…maa gets engaged in work}
Omkara : Ok…..don’t talk with me….But I think u can talk with him …..{omkara takes a paper from his base coat and handovers it…….bunty stunned 2 see a drawing of chota bheem }
Bunty : Chota bheem…….I love it…..JJ …….U have drawn this pic……
Omkara : Yes…..And what is JJ?
Bunty : Jatadhari jiju…… [bunty waves his hand through omkara’s hair and smiles]
Omkara : So now don’t be a cry baby…..ok…..
Bunty : Cry baby??
Omkara : Actually I have a chota bhai who use 2 cry on small things and we calls him as cry baby……Today u reminded me him…..
Bunty : I think ur chote bhai is a superhero…..
Omkara :Mmm….yeah rudy is cool super hero…..how u know it ??
Bunty ; Because bunty is always Hero.No.1…{he gets up and mimics salman’s style}
Omkara : [laughs] U know what….ur didi told that u are NO.1 Naughty Child …..
Bunty : I know ……BHE will tell like that only….she is jealous of me…she thinks that only she can do sallu bhai’s style…..
Omkara : Now….what is this BHE……
Bunty : Oh!!! U talked her wity whole night and didn’t get 2 know what is BHE……
Omkara : I swear….bunty….I didn’t get u….
Bunty : Only ur hair has grown up….not ur brain…..BHE…..means Bolti Harhari Express…. Got it ??
Omkara : Of course……my superhero…..{bunty and omkara shake their hands and hug each other}
Bunty : But jiju….whatever u will tell me ……2 make me happy I know that u will take my didi with u…..
Omkara : bunty…..if u want u can also come with us….
Bunty : No…I will not come….{bunty released himself from hug and stares omkara}
Omkara : Why ?
Bunty : If I will come…..then who will look after maa…..gauri didi will certainly ask me why I didn’t take care of maa??
Omkara : Bunty…..really u are a hero…a gud child….{omkara pats bunty’s cheeks and smiles]
Bunty : I will go and meet gauri didi….{bunty runs fast 2 gauri’s room}
Omkara : He’s crazy……
Maa : Daamadji……Now am really feeling very happy 2 see my daughter with u…..But I think there is something in between u and gauri because yesterday night when I was shutting the windows because of wind, I find that u was walking towards the balcony……Is everything fine?
Omkara : [tensed] Yeah….maaji…..everything is fine……And I was just ….mm….{omkara finds hard 2 give an explanation}
Maa : I can understand….my beti is a village girl and u hire from a city…..May be u will feel bit uncomfortable 2 mingle with her….
Omkara : Maaji…I never thought like that……Ur beti is true from heart and I really admire the way she spoke 2 everyone in a genuine way…..It’s not so easy 2 be social like that…….
Maa : I trust u as my beta…..i hope u will never let down my beti…isn’t it ?{maa holds omkara’s hand and stares him wet eyes}
Omkara feels confused…..But the tears in gauri’s maa’s eyes reminded him his mother jahnvi also….He was unable 2 refuse or tell any thing….So he simply touched her hand and nod his head with a smile…..gauri’s maa feels happy……
Scene shifts 2 gauri’s room……
Bunty and gauri spend some time together and when omkara entered the room, bunty hold gaurikara’s hands and smiles @ them…..Gaurikara share an eyelock……
Bunty : JJ and BHE …..I love u both…..{he hugs both of them , gaurikara wave their hands on bunty’s head and their fingers got entangled each other……They stare each other’s eyes}
Mean while maaji calls bunty and bunty leaves the room…..Gauri and omkara breaks their eyelock ….
Gauri : Am ready……{she moves and tries 2 lift the brief case ….omkara helps her in lifting it…..}
Omkara : Gauri…..Few minutes…. ….I will get ready….
Gauri : Sure…..[gauri goes outside the room and stands @ the corner]
After some time omkara takes luggage and comes outside…..A gentle breeze was passing and gauri’s dupatta was waving and was about 2 fall….Omkara hold it’s edge and gauri stares omkara……they share an eyelock…..”Hum tumhare hai…..tumhare hai sanam….jaane mann mohabbat ki har kadam ki kasam….naa judaa honge hum..”[ film- hum tumhare hain sanam] plays…..
Omkara : [breaks the eyelock and gauri takes the edge of dupatta from his hand] Shall we go ??
Gauri : Yes……But before that I have 2 go mandir…..and want 2 attend shankarji’s puja
Omkara : If u want u can…..go…But I don’t believe in baghwan….
Gauri : But I believe in god……In fact I trust god …..omkara……
Omkara : Trust……If u really want 2 trust any one the first u should trust in urself only…….
Gauri : I trust myself …..and I trust bhagwan ji also…..Because I know that my trust will never get lose since bhagwan ji will always show the right way in life…..
Omkara : I don’t want 2 argue with u about belief and disbelief….We will get late….So it will be better if we leave as early as possible…..
Gauri : Ji…..
Finally both of them left the Sharma house…..Maa and bunty send off them with teary eyes only, but they were happy that omkara was a gentle man and they know that he will take care of gauri……
Scene – 5 {@ Temple}
Gauri : Omkara….u will not come, won’t u ?
Omkara : I will stay here….u just go and pls make it fast…..
Gauri : yes….
Gauri climbs the steps of the temple and omkara watches her from the corner of road…..”Arrey she has forgotten 2 take the flowers “ Omkara turns behind and finds a man holding a plate of flowers in his hand …..
Man : Saab…..pls give this 2 that girl…..Actually she paid the money and bought flowers for puja…But she has forgotten 2 take it…..with her……pls go and give it….{he places the plate and leaves…omkara stares it in with confusion….}
Mean while gauri runs downwards the stairs by finding that she has missed the flowers…..Omkara takes his eyes from the plate and finds gauri…..She collides with some one and before she fell down , omkara holds her …the plate goes up and flowers falls on them……gauri’s heart was beating fast….she stared his eyes….omkara also stare gauri’s pretty eyes…..
Gauri : Woh …..woh…
Omkara : {slowly released gauri from his hold] Can’t u see and walk properly…..
Gauri : Actually flowers…
Omkara : It has gone…..don;t worry….i will buy another flowers 4 u……[omkara walks away….gauri smiles and stares him]
PRECAP…….GUESS IT…..GUYS…….