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Mumbai:
A girl is seen working out in a room and a lady is calling out for her.
Lady: Ayesha…
The girl turns and her face is revealed. She exactly looks like Shivani but a little modified version of hers. In her gym wear and hair tied high up, Ayesha walks to the nearby sin and smashed water on her face and turned drying her face. The lady enters the room and sees her arranging the things back at their places…
Ayesha: wht happened mom???
Lady: ur letter has come they want u to join today…
Ayesha: office….
Lady: behrahampur…
Ayesha turns as she remembers the stories she had heard regarding Berahampur…
Lady: say a no to them Ayeshu… I will not allow u to go there….
Ayesha: mom it is my job and I will go…
Lady: and if anything wrong happens…
Ayesha: I am going there for my work ok… so don’t worry…
Lady: come for breakfast I will pack ur bags….
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Behrahampur:
Rangeela’s house:
Rangeela is sitting in his room as trying not to crying but whenever he remembers Shivani’s face his eyes fill up with tears.
There s a knock at the door. Rama goes to open it and finds an old man standing there…
Rama: mamaji…
Rangeela hears this and comes out of the room. Mamaji walks up to him and gives him a tight slap.
Mamaji: u killed my Shivani…
Rangeela keeps quite and keeping looking down.
Mamaji: ur silence will not bring my Shivani back…
Rangeela: I know and who told tht I am silent…
Mamaji looks on as Rangeela walks away. Rama comes to mamaji and takes him in.
Rama: he is not in himself give him sometime…
They see Rangeela going out with a gun.
Rama: Rangeela where r u going???? This is wrong…
Rangeela stops and turns: I will finish it all today…
Rama: no… we have to plan first not out of anger but with cool brain…
Rangeela: before tht I have some work…
Rama: wht???
Rangeela does not reply and goes away.
Rama: I don’t know wht is he upto oh God plzzz don’t let him do anything wrng….
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Mumbai:
Ayesha sits on the breakfast table and goes through the news on net. There is gets a news regarding Berahampur.
Ayesha: it s tme to put an end to the evil there too…
Her mom comes there with the breakfast and serves her. She eats it without a word and os abt to get up when her mother holds her hand.
Lady: I never stopped u from doing this job… it was ur choice to be a police…
Ayesha: mom…
Lady: all I can say is tht don’t die there… stay alive for ur mom to see ur marriage and have grandchildren…
Ayesha hugs her and goes to her room.
In her room is opens her cuoboard and takes out her uniform.
Ayesha: my first day as as an inspector will be at the place where no one dared to last for more than a month… but I will stay there tll I end all these…
She wears her uniform and goes out.
She comes down stairs and takes her mom’s blessing and kisses her n her forehead and leaves.
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Behrahampur:
Rangeela comes to the haveli and sees everything silent. He is stopped at the gate by the guard. He smashes the guard and shoots the other who comes to stop him. The sound of the firing brings everyone out.
Sarkar: wht is happening???
Rangeela: Bhisma Chaudhary…
Sarkar looks on…
Rangeela walks up to him and stands infront of him looking straight towards him…
Sarkar: wht do u want here???
Rangeela: to kill u all…
Gulguli: Rangeela…
Rangeela: sshhhshshhh…
He signals her to keep quite.
Rangeela: where is tht girl whom I had kidnapped for ur son….
Gulguli signs a lady to bring the girl. The girl is brought. She is crying like hell seeing the Chaudharys.
Rangeela opens his jacket and make her wear it.
Girl: plzzz leave me… plzz let me go…
Rangeela: come with me… I will get u back home….
The girl smiles. Rangeela looks at Sarkar who stands silently.
Veer comes there just then and sees Rangeela leaving with the girl.
Veer: stop…
Rangeela stops.
Veer: she is my wud b wife…
Rangeela turns and sees Veer in his wrestling avatar.
Rangeela throws the gun on the ground and opend his t-shirt and walks towards him.
Rangeela: then lets have a fight. The one who will win will take the girl… ok…
Veer looks on as he sees the cold anger in his ghulaam’s eyes.
He nods and they walk to the wrestling ground.
PRECAP: Veer is tossing Rangeela on the ground and blood is coming out from Rangeela’s mouth and he thinks abt Shivani and her death, other side Ayesha walks into the police station of Berahampur and all the constables there starts laughing sees a lady inspector. Ayesha looks on determined while Rangeela punches Veer on his stomach.
7 Comments
Hello dear its fantastick nd wt a entry great amazing update.lov to read it.thnku dear.
thank u
Oh so Ayesha is the new girl opposite Rangeela n she looks like Shivani n i love this revengeful Rangeela keep it up ?
sorry to disappoint u but Ayesha is not opposite to Rangeela… actually Rangeela will not have any heroine and Ayesha will be his support system in taking revenge and she will help Rangeela to bring law and order to the village and make things under control… they will share a special friendship bond and Ayesha will have her own love interest… i have already told u abt wht i have in my mind… if u think it is not ok then u all can give me suggestions…. btw thank u for commenting…
That’s even better actually! I thought it was some double role. Then it’s okay ya it was a bit hard for me to accept Ayesha n Rangeela but friendship will do
Hey..very Good update..yes no need of Ayesha opposite Rangeela..friendship will do..but show flashbacks of Shivani in between through Rangeelas eyes..it will reinforce his revenge
Hy dear i jst wona read ur thoughts ur imagination.it’ll be intresting for me.