~GORY GAMES ~
Hey guys it’s Aashi again presenting you a swasan os! Hope you all like it.
NOTE: NOT PROOF READ
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“I don’t know when will my wish come true” Sanskaar said with a irritation.
” It will, just you need some patience, soon you will be the king” Swara said consoling him.
“And you be the mine queen”
Next morning
“Life … is a tale
Told by an idiot, full of sound and fury,
Signifying nothing”
They received the letter from the king of Pune that he is going to come and stay there for few days.
Sanskaar and Swara happiness knew no bounds. Their prey, the king, Girdhiraj Singh was coming near to his own death.
Swara, a high ambitious lady left no choice for her husband other than to kill him. That was the darkest night of kingdom. One of the most trustworthy and vigilante soldier was going to kill the king, who was in the heart of people.
They made arrangements, they had spiked the food with sleeping medicine, as they knew precaution is better than cure.
The night arrived, it was raining heavily after the fest, when everyone slept, Sanskaar who became blind killed the king and left from there. He was in disbelief that how could he do this but his black ambitions was much more powerful than this.
Tonight the sun had died like an emperor…. The night was extremely caliginous.
The tragedy took place in morning, the dulcet sounds of funeral took place, the kingdom weeped. The king had died leaving everyone shocked.
Messangers and detectives were sent everywhere, to know the murderer of king. As everyone know , internal enemies are the biggest threat to kingdom. With no proofs left, Sanskaar and Swara were caught. Still they were in the list of suspected one.
Having no other option, people had to vote for a their de facto king as the prince Udayveer Singh was too small.
Thus Sanskaar was crowned as the new king
We glorify lust, greed& pain
We drown our hope in poison rain
We point the finger, shift our blame
Ambitions makes us whores
Swara and sanskaar started to enjoy their life. They were happy in the luxuries of king. Sanskaar as a king, always used to take care people’s will and was in their heart. Just and facilities were provided to all. People were happy so was the king and queen.
For where jealousy and selfish ambitions exist, there is disorder and every evil thing.
Time passed, Sanskaar became more ambitious.
After few years, when he felt that Udayveer will took the thrown from him, he even tried to kill him but Udayveer he flew away.
Swara, in the guilt of making her husband killer started living in grief, she used to cry, behave like a miniac. After all bad deeds she had done guilt took over place.
But Swara as a strong lady never expressed her fear of getting caught. She was the pills of evil intention of Sanskaar. Her ambition of becoming a queen was much more higher than that of becoming a king of Sanskaar.
Time flew, Every thing was in peace but one day all the kinsmen in the direction of The prince Udayveer attacked the kingdom.
Swara and Sanskaar tried to fly but they were caught. Udayveer came infront and started to narrate.
Flashback
The day sanskaar killed the king, a pair of eye had watched them, and I was none other fiancé of the prince Manyata. She had shown all proofs ie the knife with which he killed and then with the help of kinsmen he managed to take revenge from him.
Udayveer: You thought you will kill my dad and won’t ever pay for your deed. You were the most trusted man of the kingdom. Never in my dreams my dad had expected you too kill him. You are fraud person.
With this he killed Sanskaar with the same his dad was killed.
The fiery, golden orb rose up from the horizon spreading its magnificent rays of light everywhere. The darkness of the night lost once again and parted away like a defeated king giving up his thrown.
Swara was sent to jail, where she had died due to grief and extension.
He who sacrifices his conscience to ambition burns a picture to obtain ashes.
Now as a man is like this or like that,
according as he acts and according as he behaves, so will he be;
a man of good acts will become good, a man of bad acts, bad;
he becomes pure by pure deeds, bad by bad deeds;
And here they say that a person consists of desires,
and as is his desire, so is his will;
and as is his will, so is his deed;
and whatever deed he does, that he will reap.
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Hope you all liked it. Do shoot your comments whether you liked it or not and do tell is the story quite interesting and nice.
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By love,
AASHI!
41 Comments
Very nice…keep writing…different story…good job
Thank you!
Awesome aashi it was so good yes the message u conveyed is really liked by me a lot
Bye by unknown girl if u accept ur friend
Thank you! I’m glad that I can be your friend!!
Well m not so pleased with this OS Aashi… I guess you adopted it from Shakespeare ‘s Macbeth…. in that lady Macbeth was really a very ambitious lady , she was such a evil minded character…. and in this I guess u emitted prophecies of the witches …. and added that fiancè scene
But still it was good
And swasan don’t suit their greedy characters…. especially that of lady Macbeth
You can say kind of it is adopted but I have tried my best to mould the story!
Thanks for liking it, that’s a story babe, everyone knows swasan can’t be greedy! They are selfless
Yes I know this is just a fiction… But i just said what I felt… M not saying that u did wrong… Well waiting for ur next work… But now a happy ending is needed?
Yaa sure I will definitely give a happy ending one os
Guys really I don’t know whether you will like it or not , do tell what could be done, so it can become better?
Hey it is a story from some play or novel na…….i don’t remember the name……but i have read similar
Vaise its nice
Yes its from Macbeth…and thank you!?
Superb
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Awesome
Tysm ?
Superb
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Ty
Sorry bt i didn’t liked it…
Actly i dun feel we can rlte to dis evil swasan ever…
Awww…no problem babe…but this was I had thought!!,thanks for commenting
Nice
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Thank you ?
its nice and different
Tysm dear ?
nice..
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its a different story aashi sisyy !! i like it.. swasan what they did was very bad?? … * cries* my swasan die… ahhhhhhh … but they deserve it according to the story!!!.. otherwise all was superbb os … of swasann….
Thank you so much bae!! Glad that you liked it <3?
awesome…!! It’s nice…!!
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This is from Macbeth.. Isn’t it?
This was good dear. But i don’t like using swasan as greedy charters. I’m sorry to hurt you dear.
No problem..that’s your veiw.. I have written what the story demands… Glad that you liked it??
Superb..
Tysm ?
Quite different…. Nice
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Nice
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