Hey guys,I’m back with a new FF. I hope you’ll like it. And yeah this story is which I read a book and I liked it. So i thought to write on it. I will change some parts for sure and if you’ve read that book so don’t throw anything on me😂
So let’s start
Can true love bring someone back from the dead?
Akshara is left devastated by her mother’s death and spends most of her time in solitude at the local park. One day, as she is sobbing uncontrollably, a young man named Kabir approaches her. They become friends and kabir recounts to her a story about the miraculous reunion of a young woman and her dead boyfriend to help ease some of her pain. The story makes Akshara hopeful that she can perhaps see her dead mother again. But she soon realizes that kabir isn’t what he seems to be. Even the characters in his story seem dubious, almost unreal. So what is he hiding? And why? Is there any truth to his story at all? And are you a believer or cynic?
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Chapter-1
A girl was sitting on a bench of a remote corner of park all alone sobbing, while all children of on park where playing and enjoying with their friends. It’s evening around 7’o clock most of children with their parents were heading back to their house but the girl was still their crying. She had her legs drawn up to her chest and her head rested on her knees and all this while she was sobbing inconsolable way but none noticed her as she was not present their. But a person was observing her from the time she came at the park. When hardly 2-3 people were left in the park that person came to that girl and looked at carefully for sometimes and looking her sobbing this much he felt pain in his heart and he sat besides her stretching his legs and girl looked at him while her hands were busy in clearing her tears and man smiled at her but she tilted her head on other direction and again started sobbing but again she looked at other side of bench and found same man sitting their and looking at her. She felt uncomfortable and man understood that and said “don’t worry girl…you can cry. I won’t disturb you.” And again she looked at other side.
Man’s POV,
I was just roaming in the park when I heard someone’s sobbing or you can say crying sound and I saw a girl all alone sitting and crying on bench. I don’t know why my heart preiced to see her crying and this was something impossible for me after so many ages I felt like that. I think she is crying because her parents didn’t bought her favourite toys or whatever she asked for. But crying like this…and inconsolable way like she had no one in this cruel world. And I couldn’t able to stop myself so I moved to her and sat beside her looking at her in expection that she would share with me. But she looked at me, aww…She is so cute like the only one girl I loved till now. But again she looked at other side…not fair…but wait a minute how can she…? Ahh, kabir you are thinking very much maybe she is one of them..let’s make her mood to good one. But she is not looking at me. Ahh…this is why I hate kids. Kabir you can do it let’s start.
POV ends.
K: hey girl…are you alright now? And I think you cried enough for now. And why are you crying for, tell me I will help you.
Girl: leave me alone. I don’t want to talk with anyone. And what I need is impossible thing, no one can help me in that. So leave..
K: okay, I think first we can be friends….did I tell you my name? I think no, so hi I’m kabir Sharma. And you?
A: I don’t want any friends so leave.
K: okay but first tell me your name then I will think of leaving.
A: okay fine…..my name is Akshara
To be continued….
I hope you’ll like it. And sorry for any mistakes. And I don’t know how will it be going nice or bad. So please tell me how it’s going. And yeah please bear ff title because from last 2 days I’m thinking about that only and after that while solving maths sums I got this name😂😂(I’m not good at this✌). Any suggestions then please tell me.
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Ok, so jyoti, I loved this one!
Sry was not able to comment on earlier your posts but trying now!
Just loved it!
Post soon and about the title
“Entry in the devil’s LIFE”
(Just came in my mind)
Take it if it suits ur story line or let me know, I will try to think another one!
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