Hi I. M back and pair is ragsan and swalak then sorry for changing pair if now also I didn’t get response I will stop dis ff because I want atleast few to read because dis r d things happen now a days previous link
Episode 1
He is sleeping in his bed ramu kaka goes to him sans beta coffee with heavy head he get up kaka my head paining so much go and bring lemon juice
Kaka: beta did u again go with ur friends I told know don’t go with them they r not good they r spoiling ur life alcohol is injurious to health???stop Kaka u go and bring wat i say….his head is heavy my God I don’t know how I drink dis much I didn’t feel dis type before later he drink and move to washroom his body with nail mark oh God it’s not going wat to do if it stay like dis ( but sans doesn’t know his mark may go..but tat girl bad name mark does it go…??, ) then he took his clothes to wear then took his belongings in his old balzer Thier he found her earing wat dis…? Oh may be tat girl earing but who is she y she sleep with me she is….then y she oh leave it but I should keep dis earing with me then he keep dis with safety locker then he moves
Ap; ji did u ready it’s already late where is laksh swara, I will call sasuma( here swara is ap brother daughter no parents for her she love laksh but laksh doesn’t know dis) mom I m here said by laksh then where is San ramu kaka
Ji madam he is ready for office
Ap; wat office I told know v all going temple today so irresponsible boy
San : mom I. M here only mom I have meeting I have to go
Wat go San ramu kaka told ur not well y u going to office instead tat come with us v r doing pooja because of u…u can come with us know Said ap,
No mom I. M not at all interest in God please leave me alone,, he went off
I dont know y he act like dis then they all went off..
Here rag bring dada to spot c dada dis place only I get more chocolate u know uncle give dis much chocolate…stop it gulaboo now u search any watch bracelet karchief anything u c here
Ra: k dada
She searches everywhere even dada searches didn’t get anything he sit helplessly oh God y I. M not getting any clue who is he,, did he is criminal or rapist oh God dada c I got so many she bring paper dry leaves and show to him
Dada: gulaboo wats dis
Ra: dada u told know u bring all things I find dis so I bring dis.. he slap u dirty girl u make me shame y u not understanding dis ur life has spoiled ur ruined fruit no one like u…now who can help us every doors r closed to us u get lost from here I don’t need u go away from me he pusher her in angry..dada she said in pain,don’t say my name from ur mouth s don’t show ur face he left her alone and moves off …she cries dada what I have did y u scolding me like dis wat tat uncle did to me,, k u go I hate u…u always beat me then she moves…
Epi 3
Temple
All did pooja and comes outside to give prasad to poor pupil ap went to take water bottle while she crossing road one truck coming she feel restless she is falling one girl hold her and scream unty ji all rush to them tat truck go side ways,, pupil rush to her laksh hold her face mom what happen hey girl wat u did she says I did nothing I didn’t do anything he said swara bring water..she brings and put on ap face she opens her face and says laksh.. mom wat happen what she did to u he make her sit nothing laksh ap r u k come v can go to hospital when u falls my hearts skip one second..ya ji if dis girl doesn’t Thier I don’t know I may not alive today mom pls don’t say like dis…between thank u miss,, hey uncle I. M not miss I. M student of 10th A my miss name is sushmita all laugh for her crazy act..no no girl k what’s ur name my name ragini wow wat a good name said by laksh not only good ur cute said swara, not only cute ur too brave u save my wife and my life too..she is not only brave she is baby doll said ap, oh oh mom stop appreciating her can v move,, oh laksh u feel jealous said swara, not tat like oh oh v all know wat u mean jealous cat..no no both swalak start fighting k now u all stop na..between come beta v only drop u home…no ap not only dropping her home she has come to our home and she has to take food said dp,,
Beta did u come to our home ask ap,,
Ra: s unty I will come but I want more chocolate with all flavour did u have chocolate in ur home ..k I will get u all chocolate said ap…
They moves to home she eat food chocolate etc beta now tel me where is ur father house she said I don’t have father and mother they went to far house where God is Thier oh so sad then where u staying I staying in dada house but he also leave and he…. by then so sad of u ap if u agree can v keep in our house ofcourse ji I. M happy with ur decision ragini can u be with us ask ap..s unty ji but I…oh we know u want chocolate rite laksh today onwards daily u shd bring chocolate to her k mom said laksh…swara show ragini room come ragini said swara they moves…so innocent girl know but sad to know she don’t have any one God is cruel,,( they think Thier dada too died)
Evening
Ap brings coffee ..
Rag: unty how many members r Thier in ur family.
ap:many r Thier y beta y no one playing any game here all they went to tuition
Ap: not tuition but office
K now go and give dis coffee to sanskar..
Who is sanskar uncle
Ap: not uncle he is smaller than me u can call San and even for laksh u call laksh..no uncle unty…v shd call uncle unty those who married like me and dp uncle samji
Rag: samji unty between where is chocolate I didn’t get one also
Ap: I will bring u go and give dis to sans his room is dis side↗↗ k unty ji then what’s his name
ap: sans
Ragini : San San San she knock his room sans sans
Sans : standing in front of mirror he think swara comes ah swara come in…
She comes in sanskar coffee————->>>>>>
He see d image in mirror and shocked ////
Precap: Thier face off…??,
Tomorrow u want dis or payal mera pyari beti….and tel me anything shd change r u k with ragini age I thought to give 8 or 9th std but 10th is k know ///
131 Comments
Swasan pls
I’m a silent reader..sry..hereafter I’ll send my comments.. But plz dnt stop dis ff.. But only v want Ragsan
You were writing on Swasan na ? 🙁
Ya she hae change pair because of comment!!
I don’t read Ragsan so thank you dear :@
You know what dear these types of people who loose their readers like these types of activity and you know what i found out if some genuine things are said by swasan fans they also take them negative.
And what i should say rag…….san fan
God knows them they can pair anyone with anyone no doubt
They can make bro sis any thing hahah u know really husband. I really don’t find any hint in serial of making rag……san as pair. Even from first day raglak engaged she assumed laksh as she her husband. Ohhh God
But never mind may be this actually happened there
Thank you so much for ragsan story
R u happy with my decision dr
Dear I think u have written wrong name at last where u needed to write ragini enter the room u wrongly wrote swara
I think u also forgot u have changed pair
Ragini only enter but he think swara has she is in home
I want only swasan pairs not swalak pls make a swasan pair.
Realy this Ragsan ff
Sanskar think Swara outside
hmm…u changed pair…its ur wish…but DELETE THAT FIRST CHAPTER WHICH IS MENTIONED AS SWASAN FF…FOR US WITH STORY OUR EMOTIONS ALSO MATTERS…ORELSE FURTHERLY SWASAN FANS WILL MISUNDERSTAND AND READ…AND IN THIS CHAPTER IF THEY GOT TO KNOW IT IS Rag_________san ff…They will get hurt and may bash u…so kindly delete first part…and write with whom ever you want…thank u
Wow dear hats off to uh!! Uh changed the pairs just because of the comment!! Wow thanks uh so much!! I m really gratefull that i didnt read ur story!! Uh r only a commentholic!! Nd please i pray to uh never rgt anything on swasan from now on!! Pleaseee otherwise dont know when uh will change the pair!! If uh wanna write on bhai behen jodi aka rag………san then why did uh write on swasan!!
Nd plz if uh want uh can call urself as rag…….. san fan…. swalak fan or raglak fan but please never tag pur swasan name with uh…never call urself a swasan fan!!
Thank you!! So much….
K I don’t say I keep in my heart whatever usay I don’t bother I want pupil to read and understand my pov…I will give my link of previous Ff and os I challenge no one writes moral story like me do u know for transgender story I get 8 comments what respect they given they bother for love stories pairs tat dis no value for good story..
Dear u may be the best writer.. ..and it’s ur story ur wish but about getting less comments how much it matters.. .I Am too a writer it feels satisfied after reading. ..don’t u feel so??
U may need comments as encourage ment but honestly say r u liking this kind of response! !
Sorry if I hurt u but ur comment may exceed 100 this tym but it seem futile as they r not commenting about ur story..
Nice.. Keep going
Superb dear…..
N pls in between the dialogues give some space so that it is understood…
And also don’t bother abt the comments of ppl who r bashing u… Just keep going… Continue this ff amd I’m sure everyone will love it…
Oh first chappy u wrote on swasan n in second chngd it to rag–san ??
I thought u wil undrstnd bt nvr mind…
U can write on any othr couple bt dun ever tag urself as swasan fan… coz dey can nvr imagine swasan wid any othr chrctr…
U said only pairs mattr dan u r wrong even story n wrtng style also mattrs…
Jus for comments u r writing… thnx for clearing evrythn so dat we can avoid ur stories… kya pta kab pair change krdo
thx fr ragsan nd Plzz continue irrespective of neg comments..see when u try diff neg comments r common….BT Plzz assure tht it’s gonna b ragsan
Hey dear!! No one is giving a negative comment they all r showing their disappointment over sudden change in pairs.. .
As a ragini and sanakar fan would u like to read a story whose first chap show them as pair but on the very nxt chap show SWASAN. …
Least think about those who read stories because of SWASAN. ..a sudden change bcoz of one comment make other readers comment useless. ..
She didn’t tried anything new she just changed the lead.. That’s it
Sorry if my words hurt u
Thank you
dear..I said neg comments ..Bcz in first Chappy ..Bcz of one of swasan fans she changed pairs..I was saying ABT those…evn I was happy fr ragsan..I m saying she SHLD nt have changed pairs Bcz of one comment..so tht whole her planned plot changes (ofcourse only as pair)..hope u got it now .
Kuhura my lil girl, you said correct dear..! I’m proud of you..!! *hug..!!
Anuuuuuu, I’m soo glad that you understand what Kuhura meant..! *hug..!
It’s just our disappointment towards her n her ff..!
Well to be frank I was not disappoint because I know DIVYA IS WRITING THIS ONLY FOR COMMENTS ..nothing else..! Otherwise she wouldn’t mind continue her story with SwaSan only..!
So m having no problem at all..!!
We are just sharing our pov here..Don’t take our pov as negative comments dear..!!
Hope you understand..Thnk u.. 🙂
bcz of some comments she change pair s ( I Donno whether it’s swasan r nt) so ..I said lyk tht
Sorry…we didnt comment any thing negative…she is the one who said i will change pair…afrer that ppl who read will basically react i think…
Superb.eagerly waiting for next part
Its really good
awesome
Nice dear continue story further what ever your heart say dont go through comments or pairs if comments are less also you can continue the story for some readers those who comment and for silent readers if you want to reach your moral message through your story what is happening around us.
Dear it is just suggestion or an advice for your future moral stories during introduction or chapter 1 just mention the protoganist male only and keep female protoganist as suspense because if your story reach no of comments and that pair more response which is in your mind you can proceed with that pair or else you can change pair that moralstory which does not causr you harm neither readers.But not opt voting here because here all are obessed with there pair to some extent iam possive with particular pair.
I hope you follow or keep my words in your pair while writting another moral story.Sorry if i have hurted you in away by my comment i just want to give an suggestion as a sister/friend dear thats it.
Sorry once again if talked anything more that which i should not talk.
But continue your story for that some readers who read and don’t take negative comments to your heart and enjoy your passion of writting.
Superb, please do ignore the bashers, because they don’t have anything better to do, so they started bashing you dear
Dear crazy girls. P noone is bashing they all are just showing their disappointment over sudden change in pairs. …and they r also right somewhere in their point
I agree may b story is gud but sudden change in pairs for comments is just not justified
No offense pls. .thnk u
None taken dear, it happend in my story my evil heart as well, I wrote that it will be a RagSan or RagLak ff, I actually showed both couples eventhought I’m not and RagLak fan, I just was going woth the flow, so I meant that it could be either couple
With the flow*
Dear.. we know ragini fans will read whoever pair is…so for them it is not matter…but for swasanians story +pair both matters…we read and commented bcs pair is swasan…hope u understand…sorry if i hurt u
No problem dear
You didn’t hurt me
But this case is different dear! !the story promised to be a swasan ff ragini and sanskar were nowhere. ..
May be u r right somewhere but this story in the very first chapter promised to be about swasan but.. .REST U KNOW BETTER
i don’t know about ur story as I am new but one thing I can easily guess that u didn’t promise that it will be on particular couple. .u took couple as suspense but this case is totally different hope you get my point
Thank you
Yeah I didn’t promise anything, because I didn’t want to hurt anyone with my preference, so I tried to write about both couples! I do get your point, it always does hurt fans, when someone promises, that it will be about their favourite couple and then it turns out that it isn’t anymore
Hi Sam..!! Waaaa we are meeting here again..!!
Well as you are saying about SwaSan fans sooo m definitely one of them and ur words mean to me also..!
Sam, we are not bashing here. Just Sharing our pov and some other people’s disappointment about the sudden change in pair..! That’s all..!
I, SWASAN FANS HAVE SO MANY WORKS TO DO RATHER THAN BASHING..!!
Hope you don’t mind my words..! Sorry if I hurt you but whenever thing comes to SwaSan n their fans i can’t stop myself from blabbering..!! Huh! Addat se majhbur u know..*hug..
Sorry if I hurt you Kakali, I’m aadat se majboor as well and I know how you guys feel, I felt very dissappointed with the CVS after they changed the couple from SwaLak to RagLak or to SwaSan. A teddy bear hug to you my sweetiepie and love you?
Nopeeeee Sammmmm..!! You didn’t hurt me at all..!!
Weeeei, I understand ur disappointment after that swap of couples..!!
But meee waaaa that was a blessing for me as well as all the SwaSan fandoms..!! We got our ever heavenly SwaSan..!!
But believe me I somehow knew Ragini was for Laksh only that y I was never attracted towards Swa______Lak..!!
But still it had hurt people a lot..!! Love u dherrrr saraaaaa..*hug
Love you more my cutiepie??
Wow ragsan..thank u so much..
sorry guys..if some people here are thinking that swasan fans are bashing her…that is not bashing…we are saying her to not post swasan ff and then change it…how will you feel if raglak ffs are changed into swa___lak or swasan ffs…thank u
Ragsannn…… sssss
Dude.. U changed the pairs because u want ppl to learn about the realistic nature of the world?
Ur right… I’m glad you did that. I now know how u think.
U could have continued with swasan. If u were so passionate about the story, comments would have come automatically. Now u may be glad you have so many comments, but look deeper and you’ll see that they are not about the story at all.. Rather they’re about ur so called pairs..
Hell disappointed in you
Superb dii !!!!! Ragsan yipeeeee !!!! Continue sissy .
My God I don’t know y u bother for pairs and all its just name changing tats it…when I update first part only 4 to 5 commented then I feel disappoint because no one reading swasan ff…because all swasan fans busy in devanshi and savithri devi tat dis I told before only in advance I m changing pair…then I don’t del anything don’t tell me to del also…I want my story at least few to read as it’s based on real incident..then sorry if I disappoint u…if u really like to read to swasan pair I. M posting in ff/os page in fb just it’s change of name I can do it….even in prostitution story many bash me i just writing dis as few raginI fan reading it i.m happy for them they really support me thx to all…u think I bother for comment no problem whatever u think pls do comment and tell me bye
Sorry for commenting due to my exams a big thanks for ragsan and ha plz continue even if u get 1 reader because there r many silent readers…awesome one dear
Ofcouse dear they can assume ragini with anyone ( so no offence with that lol. Aweeeee), why will they oppose you
We will definitely oppose becoz we are genuine fans of swasan.
Still a suggestion if you want that ragini fans the the onscreen couple were raglak you can also post with them on raglak fb page and people will really admire your story. If you want so many comments and want many people to read that.
Just name changing pairs right…then y u changed madam…and i’m not saying to delete ur ff…but saying delete first part which is mentioned as swasan…bcs we readers felt as cheating…then u right rag____san or swa____lak…whatever you want…but stop behaving childish….for your kind information swasan fds are getting awesome comments….so better say that your ff is not getting comments…we are not even saying dont write on rag______san,we are just saying delete that first part bcs swasan names r used….we didnt even commented negatively but some ppl showed their disappointment…and one more question can ragini fans will read swara ffs…you are saying just name change n pairs change…till now so many fights happened bcs of pairs…sorry for hurting u…i apologize u for this…but it deeply hurted me…
Thank you
Divya, I had already said dear You have chosen a quite complicated matter as the concert of your story. So for some readers it’s hard to comment anything. So due to that problem may be some readers didn’t comment.. BUT what you did,? what was your motive to upload this ff?
You wanted to let people know na that “THIS KINDA THINGS ARE ACTUALLY HAPPENING IN NOW A DAYS WORLD”. rit?
Sooo in 1st part you get less comments n now that y you changed the pairs as Rag_________San.
Common dear you could have waited for a few episodes.! Why was you in so much hurry?
Duh! Have you seen the SwaSan ffs,? well most of them are getting good response. REALLY VERY GOOD.! Then why not you? eh! let it be now.!
One more thing DON’T DRAG SWASAN FANS TO DEVANSHI & SDCH.. We are SwaSan fans only, n reading commenting on every SwaSan base story..!! Just mind this dear..!!
You call yourself as a SwaSan fan*chuckle..!!
It’s almost impossible coz SwaSan fans can’t Stand Rag________________San anyhow..!
Best wishes! Continue dear, in this episode I BET you are going to cross 50 comments..! *hug..! Lots of comments dear.!
Let it be kaku… she will not undrstnd…
Bt we shud b glad from now own we wil avoid reading her stories…kya pta kab pair change krde???
See here no one is praising her story bt jus talkin abt pairs ???…
Then you should not have started it with swasan if you were thinking that swasan fans don’t care about their favorite. You might not care about of Ragini fan might not care about with whom she is being paired but swasan fans do care they don’t read other pairs. It was so bad specially to see ragsan as we don’t think them as lovers.
Correct phonies.. …but I would suggest not to comment on this more as it will only hurt both swasan and ragini. …sanskar fans
There r ragini fans who care about her specific pairs ok..!!! Some like only raglak.. some like only rag…san. So, u need not say that word, “whomever”. Just why don’t u keep ur verbal in control.
What’s your problem?our ragini shines wherever she is but your Swara can’t without sanskar.this one line don’t make her patirvrata or ragini as something else. So, what am saying is.. it’s our wish.you need not poke ur finger.
Kumari21 Saryu
That is the problem. You are specifically ragini fans which will make you the fan of anyone paired with her. While we are “Swasan” fans. Of course, dear swara doesnt NEED to shine without sanskar. We can’t and dont want to see her with anyone other than sanskar. You see, loyal fans 🙂
*not commenting
hi.. Shri.. so you read the previous chapter but kept yourself AS SILENT READERS ?
well…hmmmmm..
I don’t agree that swasan fans not reading swasan ffs, you can check swasan ffs . They are receiving good response . Sometimes it takes time to gain comments, well completely your wish do whatever you wanna do but just for some comments it’s wrong to change pairs.
Hi divya when’ll u write ff on sukor.ur writing skils are amazing.pleeeeeeese write ff on sukor m waiting.swragini ff is nice n ye pairs k liye itna bother mtt kro gys story must go on divya.
loved it
Too good loved it…
Nice