Im here with a crime thriller one shot….
There were couples named ragini and laksh…they find it difficult to meet each ends…during that time they got a golden opportunity to participate in a quiz competition which lead them to a trip to mumbai….
At hotel
Laksh:wow….rago…im very much happy…see we have our honeymoon…
Ragini:bt for that we need to win the game naa
At that time a middle aged man comes to them
Man:hii guyz…im shekar, im the organizer of this quiz….so u can get ur keys and can mingle with other participants
Raglak nodes and goes to their room…
At stage
Shekar:before conducting this game, I need ur signature, that whatever happens in this game, we are not responsible
All sighs the bound..
Like this way all contestants were eliminated at last it reaches raglak
Shekar:okk…now our question is..laksh, what do like or love in ragini
Laksh:I liked her long hair…it looks stunting when she left it open
Shekar:nice…so u r awarded 10crore rupee to ur account
Raglak:wow…thanku
Shekar:does u wish to go towards next level..
(Its a live show)
Raglak:yes…
Shekar:thats good..
Like this way many rounds were passed…all were quite easy…by their truthfull answer, they passed each level
Shekar:laksh….what happened
Laksh:ragini
Shekar:she is hear only
By saying shekar open a door..
Laksh she shocked to find ragini stuggling to breadth due to lack of oxygen
Laksh:raginiiii
Laksh was about to go
Shekar:its not easy laksh…..
Laksh holds his collar
Shekar:u r a part of game…if u want to rescue her, add a drop of blood to key hole
Laksh was shocked
Shekar:its simple laksh…go and save ur ragini
Laksh stood there
Shekar:ohh I forgot, u r scared of blood naa
Laksh in mind:how can he knw that
Shekar:ur time is very less laksh….save her or
Laksh; I will
Laksh goes towards the door and with much try, he was able to pick his hand..blood drops and he somehow managed to keep calm…
Like was saved….
At that time they heard a sound of laughing
Shekar:wow….now if u want to go out of this room….u need to do as I say
Ragini was suffocating..
Laksh:what the hell it is…is this a game
Shekar:we have alredy warned u..bt u guys are busy and greedy with money…so its ur duty to save each other
Ragini:what we should do
Shekar:simple, there is a scissor and a trimmer. .just shave ragini hair
Raglak are dazed
Laksh:u bastard…what are u sayinh
Shekar:(again laughs)
Ragini:do it laksh…else
Laksh with closed eyes, shaves away all her hair in head…
Ragini breaks down and cries
Ragini:my hair…
Laksh:im sorry ragini…bt we need to do it
Shekar:wow…see ur doors are opened..now move…
Raglak moves and tbey reaches next door
Shekar:now laksh…what u should do is…walk through the glass pieces
Ragini:what are u saying
Laksh:sir…plz leave us…we didnt do anything
Shekar:just do it…every time it was ragini who suffered now its time for u laksh…
Laksh walks through that with much pain..
At last they reached a room
A gun was kept infrnt of them
Shekar:take that
Laksh takes it
Shekar:now shoot the individual seen ryt infrnt of u
Laksh looks and finds a girl laying on the coat…
Laksh:I cant kill anyone
Shekar:then we will kill ragini….so choose
Laksh pulls the trigger and aims the girl…bt
Laksh:I cant..plz….ivant kill her..I cant kill her
Raglak comes near that girl..
They are shocked to find the girl
Raglak:SWARAAA
FLASHBACK
RAGINI WAS THE HEART THROBE OF THE WHOLE COLLEGE..THERE WAS NO ONE TO BEAT HER IN STUDY BEAUTY AND SPORTS..LAKSH WAS HER BOYFRIEND…THEY USED TO DATE EACH OTHER…BT ONE DAY
IT WAS FRESHERS DAY AND AS USUAL RAGLAK WERE BUSY IN RAGGING…AT THAT TIME THERE ENTERS OUR BEAUTY…WITH BLUE SALWAR SUIT LIKE A PRINCESS, WHOLE COLLEGE WERE AMUSED TO SEE SUCH A BEAUTY..EVEN LAKSH EYES WERE WIDE OPENED…BT GOR RAGINI, IT WAS A DEFEAT….
RAGINI WAS FUMING IN JEALOUS
RAGINI CALLS HER
RAGINI:HEY..U..WHATS UR NAME
GIRL:SWARA….SWARA GADODIA
RAGINI:I JUST ASKED UR NAME..NOT UR SURNAME
SWARA:SORRY MAM..
RAGINI GIVES HER A BOOK
RAGINI:COMPLETE THIS ASSIGNMENT AND GIVE IT BACK BY NOON…
SWARA WAS SCARED
SWARA JUST NODES AND MOVES…
AT NOON..
RAGINI NOTICES SWARA PLAYING BADMINTON AND GOES TO HER
RAGINI:DID U FINISHED ASSIGNMENT
SWARA:YES
RAGINI:SO U PLAY SHUTTLE
SWARA:YES..ITS MY PASSION
RAGINI:THEN PLAY WITH ME…U KNW IM THE CHAMBION OF THIS COLLEGE…LETS SEE WHO WINS…
ALL STUDENTS GATHER THERE
IT WAS A TOUGH GAME..BT OUR SWARA WINS..ALL CHEERS HER UP, SOMEONE INSULTS RAGINI L..WHICH CAUSE HER TO DESTROY SWARA…..SAME HAPPENS WITH EXAM….SWARA TOPPED IN THE UNIVERSITY…NOW ALL TOPIC WERE SWARA SWARA….ALL IGNORED RAGINI……
ONE DAY
RAGINI CALLS LAKSH
RAGINI:WERE ARE U
LAKSH:IM WITH SWARA….
RAGINI CUTS THE CALL IN ANGER
LATER
RAGINI:U FORGOT ME NA….
LAKSH:NO BABY…SHE IS JUST A TIME PASS
RAGINI:BECAUSE OF HER IM NOT ABLE TO RAISE MY HEADS…HELP ME LAKSH..
RAGINI STARTS TO CRY….AT LAST TBEY DECIDED TO DESTROY HER BEAUTY…
RAGINI CALLS SWARA AND ASK HER TO COME TO AUDITORIUM
AS SOON AS SWARA COMES THERE, RAGINI DRAGS HER HAIR AND MAKE HER FALL ON STAGE
SWARA:MAM…PLZ…LET ME GO
RAGINI:HOW CAN I…BECAUSR OF U ALL IGNORED ME…
SAYINF RAGINI TAKES OUT SCISSOR AND CUTS SWARA LONG BEAUTIFUL HAIR…
SWARA WAS CRYING LOUDLY BT NO ONE COMES TO HER AID
SWARA:RAGINI….UR HEART IS VERY BAD..THATS Y NO ONE LIKES U….
RAGINI WAS NOW OUT OF CONTROL
RAGINI:THEN LET ME SEE UR HEART
SAYING RAGINI TORN SWARA DRESS AND STABS HER HEART WITH KNIFE….
LAKSH WAS CLOSING THE MOUTH OF SWARA SO THAT NO SOUND COMES OUT….
TJEN RAGINI TAKES OUT ACID AND POURS ON HER FACE….AND THEN BODY…
RAGLAK LEFT
FLASHBACK ENDS
Raglak were terrified..at that time shelar comes there
Shekar:wondering how she got saved naa….
FLASHBACK
AT ALL TIME THIS WAS WITNESSED BY SANSKAR, WHO HAD A CRUSH ON SWARA..BT HE WAS NOT ABLE TO DO ANYTHING…INCE THEY LEFT HE GOES AND TAKES HER TO HOSPITAL
FLASHBACK ENDS
Raglak were crying in guilty
Shekar:what sin my shona did to u..y u did this to her
Ragini:shona
Shekar:she is my daughter swara…swara shekar gadodia
Raglak falls down
Shekar:just because of ur jealously…u destroyed my daughter naa…..y ragini y…..(shekar breaks down)
Soneone put hand on his shoulder
Shekar:sanskar…ask them beta…
Sanskar:baba..olz….we dont want to do anything…see tbey are in guilt..tbey will never be able to sleep peacefully…
Raglak:sanskar…we are very sorry
sanskar:does ur sirry bring bavk my shona…my wife
Raglak:wife
Sanskar:she is my wife…..now look at her..she is in come for past 5 years..will u be able to return her to me..as my old swara…no naa…
Shekar:I wish to kill bt I cant because, whenever I see u all, I feel like my shona is standing infrnt of u….else I would have killed u all……now get away…..
Raglak leaves frm there, with guilt in their heart…..
Sanskar comes to swara and hold her hands
Sanskar:whatever situation…I will nevrr leave u shona…u r my life…I have full faith in god….one day he will understand my love and return u back as my old cripy swara….
Suddenly swara hand starts to move…..sanskar notices this
Sanskar:thanku god…with my love , I will get her back….
Shekar too joins and hugs them….
The end……
Jealous can lead to worse circumstances…so be hapoy with what u have
How was this guys….enjoyed….anyways give ur feed back……
Urs salluzz