Helllllllloooooooooooooooooooooooooooo my friends this your dear Neptune back with a swasan ss.
Actually this concept was playing kabaddi in my brain since a long time.
So thought to pen it down.
Here’s the prologue will continue it only if you people like it…
It’s a ss with maximum 10 shots. Do tell your views about it.
Mumbai :
St joseph convent school…..
A girl : [telling through her eyes] why are you doing this Sanskaar……
Sanskaar : [through his eyes] now what did I do swara, if I do something you get hurt, if I don’t you get hurt, how to make you happy swara……..
Swara just heaved a sigh, passed a glare to him and went away from there.
Swara’s home…
Swara : I just hate you Sanskaar… don’t why am unable to go away from you.. don’t know why I feel attracted to you.. you don’t matter to a bit.. but you still matter to me lot… what’s this.. oh god!!! This so confusing please help me.
Sanskaar’s home.
Sanskaar : why do you always stay away from me. Why don’t you talk to me swara… why do you always want to go away from me.. why are you playing around with my thoughts swara. Just stop this. Go away from my life please go away…..
After a few years.
Sanskaar : where are you swara, I have been waiting for you since a long time. But I will find you now. I will surely find you now.
On the other side.
Swara : [smiling sadly] you must have forgotten me till now Sanskaar… and why will you even remember me. After all who was I to you. [sighing] I wish I could see you once…. Just once……
So guys here is the prologue. I really hope you people like it.
It’s a short story. Do give your views guys….
Love you all… love SWASAN…..
Will meet in the next part.. till then bubye….
48 Comments
Awesome dr!!! Something interesting… I am waiting for the story!!! Continue soon
thanks lot di….. glad you liked it…
Really interesting Neptune…
thanks a lot anu dear….
Go ahead
thanks a lot tani dear…
Awesome dear..continue soon..tc..
thanks a lot kumu dear… will post ASAP..tc
Awsm Dr…. Update soon next part
thanks lot rachna dear.. will post ASAP…
Maast hai dr. Plz give the second part very soon.
thanks a lot dear.. will give the next part soon dear…
looks intriguing .waiting to see how it turns out
thanks lot deepti dear..
hope you like the further parts too…
Interesting go ahead and plzz dont end soon its really very interesting…
thanks a lot sam dear.. and it’s a ss dear.. so i will have to end it soon only.. really sorry for that..
Awesome.. Continue..
thanks a ton shiksha dear..
Interesting dear continue soon
thanks a lot di.. will continue soon diiii….
Interesting and I m eagerly waiting nepuu plzz continue soon
thanks a lot marsuuuuuu…. will continue soon dear…
nyc intresting continue
thanks a lot anu dear.. will surely continue dear…
ahaaaa.. so tempting story Neptune
thanks a lot micu diiiiii….
Interesting Story dear..
thanks a lot simi dear…
Interesting waiting to read more dear
thanks a lot chaitu dear…
interesting dear ,eagerly waiting to know further
pls post soon
bye
take care
thanks a lot reethu dear.. will post soon.. thanks for commenting..
Awesome
Something is catchy.
Title also nice.❤
Can’t wait for start.
thanks a lot bhai.. am glad you liked it…. will post soon…
So I m first time reading ur ff…
Seems interesting..
Update soon ❤❤
awww thanks a lot vidhi dear for trying my ffs..am glad you liked it..
would me more then happy if you try my other ffs too….
will post soon dear..
thanks alot for commenting…
awesome dear
thanks a lot dear…
interesting
thanks a lot vyshu…
Interesting….
thanks lot dear..
Sounds interesting Neptu! Waiting for first part…
thanks a lot gayu dear…
Interesting
thanks dear…
Awesome dear
thanks a lot dear…