Hyπ. Must be thinking why the hell i am posting this much fast nhi toh mai gayab rehti hu. Yar excitement. Soo
50 POSTS!!! YOOO!!
sachi yar i am too happy. So tell me kaisa hai yeh wala ts kuch suggest karna h toh comments me zarur btana. Ts matlab 2 ya 3 shots i am also confused kitne parts rakhu
And ya bechare vanshu ko phir se torcherππ. Yeh wala bohot pehle likha tha par kabhi complete nhi kar payi. Ok ok no more pakana read it.
THE OS STARTS WITH…..
Riddhima took her laptop and did something then smirked. (Pta nhi kya pachar pachar kiya hai)
Riddhima: you snatched everything from me. Now i will not leave you. (angry) (aisa kya hua riddhu)
She took shower and left somewhere. She entered a small house. Then she entered inside. And….
It was filled with electronic devices. All are used in hacking. She started coding and hacked an mansion. (readers be like malum hai re baba)
She saw the cctv.
Cctv footage…
Vansh was sitting and doing his work in his laptop.
Riddhima was eating apple and she did something in her mobile and then…
Vansh mobile started ringing….
Vansh: hello angre tell.
Angre: boss…wo
Vansh: tell what?
Angre: someone hacked our system.
Vansh: what!? (Shock laga shock laga lala)
Angre: yes boss. Please come fast.
Vansh rushed to his office.
Riddhima was sitting and smiling.
Riddhima: this is one percent of what you did with me.
Flashback starts….
Vansh: who are you?
Riddhima: vansh! What are you saying?(shocked)
Vansh: ahh first tell who the hell are you. Guards!! (Angry)
(Guys idhar ahana the chipkali nhi hai)
Riddhima: vansh!!
Ishani: oh come on bhai let me deal with her. (Smirks)
Ishani held riddhima and threw her out of mansion.
Riddhima got up and left.
She was walking and suddenly felt pain in her stomach.
Riddhima fainted there. And someone took her to hospital.
She was all alone for 2 years and did hard work.
Flashback ends….
Riddhima: that was ok but….
Flashback starts….
Doctor: i am sorry ms riddhima.
Riddhima: what happened doctor?
Doctor: you had a miscarriage.
Riddhima was all broken. She remembered how ishani threw her. And then she was in depression for 2 years.
Flashback ends…..
Riddhima: what was fault of that baby who didn’t saw the world. Anyway leave now.
Vr enterprises….
Vansh reached there and was shocked to see that his all data was hacked.
Vansh: angre any information who dared to do this.
Angre: actually boss…he left a message that says.
‘mr vansh enjoying being hacked arey Don’t worry i will give you more shocking news π’
-HR
(Hr? Arey hacker riddhu)
Vansh:. Who the hell is he!? Angre i need each and every information! (Angry)
(Correction he nhi she)
Angre: yes boss!
Other side
Riddhima was watching each and every move in vr mansion and enterprises. (Background music please)
Behdardi se pyaar ka sahara na mila
Sahara na mila
Aisa bichda wo mujhko na dobara mila
Dobara mila.
Behdardi se pyar ka….
Hame pyaar ab dubara hona bohot hai mushkil
Choda kaha hai tumne hamko kisike kabil. (*2)
Hame churag leke chane hai raste sare
Paya nhi hai kisiko dil ne siva tumhare
Kehte hai dhundho toh rab bhi mil jata hai
Haye naseeb ishq na hamko hamara na mila.
(Jubinπ)
Riddhima was thinking for her next step.
Riddhima: (humming) idea!
She did something in her laptop and called someone….
Riddhima: hello police?
Inspector: yes who?
Riddhima: sir your one of reporter i have send something to you hope you will take actions. (cuts the call)
Inspector checks and leaves from there….
Riddhima smiles and said….
Riddhima: now who will save you dear. (laughs)
Vr mansion
Police entered there and called out everyone.
Aryan: yes inspector?
Inspector: we are here to arrest mrs.ishani.
Everyone got what? Ya ya shocked.
Dadi: why on what bases? Let me call my son.
On call
Dadi: vansh!
Vansh: yes dadi what happened?
Dadi: beta…wo…. police are here to arrest ishani.
Vansh was shocked and so was angre they both rushed to vr mansion and asked inspector
Vansh: on what bases are you here to arrest my sister. (stern)
Inspector: for torchering mrs raisinghania and to kill her child.
Again everyone got huh? Ya ya shocked
Vansh: what? (Whispering)
Inspector: yes we got proofs and reports and victim so she has to come with us.
Vansh(thinking): child? Means is riddhima doing all this?
Vansh: you can’t.
Inspector: we are not here to take your permission. Constable take her.
They took her and left.
Vansh(shouting): riddhimaa!!
Angre: if that will be a false case i will…
Vansh: i will see her! (Ranged) but if it is true then? (Guilty)
Vansh: take all info of her angre.
Angre: yes boss.
All left from there.
Riddhima: you killed my child you have to be punished.
Someone called vansh
Vansh: hello.
Person: tumhari ulti ginti shuru hoti hai ab vansh. (smirks)
Vansh: riddhima! (Angry)
Ohk soooo tell me how was it! Yar badi mehnat ki hai btana zarur. And ya kuch suggestions h toh btana comments me. Ok bye bye take care.
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Yes work is on on it’s second part i will post tommorow today toh possible nhi hoga toh today. Sorry for waitπ₯Ί. Thanks a lot radhika. Kidhar aana h boloπ. Yar itna achha comment mere ts koπ€§ thanks yar
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