HALF GIRLFRIEND–a relation much more than frndship n much less than that kind of love..there is love b/w them bt not that which leads to marriage,,frndship love….!!!shivaay n annika share a beautuful bond….n this is definately not love or crush like thing,…!!!they dont have that feeling for each other….!!!bt they can do anything for each other….!!they spend most of the time with each other…!!they cant imagine their life without each other….!!
So lets go,,we peep in SHIVIKA’S life…..!!!!
12:10 AM
Where is she….!!!everytime she came late here,,bt whenever i came late,she behaves like i’ve done any crime……such a dramebaaz is she…..!!anika come fast yr…..!!! “Shivaay murmred to himself…..
A girl shown wearing white,simple anarkali suit….with open hair……she comes n closes shivaay’s eyes from behind,….
Soo finally u’ve came…..u know i m waiting here for 10 min….”shivaay said,making annoyed face….
Awwe shivaay u look soo cute when u get angery,,,,..””anika said,,pulling his cheecks….
Now dont make fun of me…!!so r u ready for todays masti…..u dont know what stupid things i had done to arrange todays night….””shivaay said praising himself
Soo…have u done any favour to me????no Mr….today is my b’day n i’ve full right on you…..””said anika while winking to shivaay
Now lets go……first we’ll have ur fav ice cream….!!you know how much i’d to convice your fav ice cream vendor to be here at this time….””said shivaay..
Thats why i love u yr..(not that love),,,u r such a sweet heart..!!n today we both will eat,,,u also have to eat n u’ll eat my fav flavour,….done..???..”asked anika with full rights
How can i tell no to you anika,,u know that….now come fast otherwise that vendor will kill me…i know we r mad bt people generally sleep at this time……”said shivaay n hold anika’s hand n run towards vendor….
Bhaiya,,give two chocolate ice cream…!!”said shivaay…..
N vendor forward him two ice creams……
Sivaay n anika munched anika’s fav ice cream,…anika is eating like child,,ice cream is there on her face…
Anika u r still kid…..”said shivaay wiping her face
U know i hate chocolate flavour,,just ate becoz of u…ugghhh…..now lets go….”said shivaay making wierd face
Wait…..i want to eat more….!!!what will happen with one….”said anika pouting
Okkk….u eat bt i wont…..bhaiya give her one more…..”said shivaay,,
No,,.today is my b’day…u’ve to fulfill all my demand….u’ll also eat…..”said anika with full right …..
Vendor stand there with confused expression…
Bhaiya give two more….”said shivaay making face……
Bt this was also not enough for anika,,,,she ate ten ice cream n made shivaay to eat too….!!
Meri maa…!!not more….please…..”said shivaay sitting on floor with fearful voice
Okk….i m done now….!!!so whats next surprise ….??,…”said anika excitedly
Yaa…this is is definately a surprise for u…..”said shivaay
He blind folded her and take her to an amuse mnt park…..n opened her eyes…..
Seeing amusemnt park infront of her,,,she jumped excitedly n literally jumped on shivaay which unbalanced him n soon they were on floor….
Anika……”said shivaay with pain
Sorryy sorry….(holding her ears)…bt how u managed to make this park open at 2:00.am…..”’said anika with shocking xpression
Shivaay singh oberoi can do anything and for u this is very less…..”said shivaay side hugging anika
They both went inside…..anika take almost all ride there….not to forget, along with shivaay….shivaay has phobia of height bt for her he can do anything….!!
Enjoying that night or say ,morning with anika,,,shivaay didn’t realised it is 5:00am now….
Shivaay ,i had to leave now….”said anika unwillingly
No……please stay whole day with me…please….”said shivaay pleading her
U know n shivaay i cant….i can be with u only from 12:00-5:00am….so please i’ve to go now….!!!dont make this difficult for me please…”said anika
U know we met everyday this time n due to this i’ve to sleep in day n i go to office at afternoon…n whole day i wait for this time….bt today is ur b’day u should be with me….ok i wont force u….i know ur situation….we’ll meet here tomorrow n dont be late…..”said shivaay heavy heartedly
Thnk u shivaay….love u….”said anika
Shivaay hugged her n they bid good bye to each other….
Shivaay reached home n went to his room smiling….
OmRu watch this…
O see…bhaiya is sooo happy,,today is anika didi’s b’day…..”said rudra excitedly
I m very happy for him…only we know shivaay meet her daily….i hope choti ma wont come to know this otherwise she would be stressed…”said om
OmRu also headed to their respective room….
Next day passes like always….shivaay was just waiting for night to come……!!!
I’ll make aloo puri today…anika loves it n when i’ll make it…she’ll be very happy….”’shivaay said to himself…
12:15am
Finally that time has arrived….
Again she’s late….she comes late bt go on time…!!”’said shivaay
So again u were complaining about me…hmmm????u bhagad billa…”said anika
Yes i was…..!!now come here n sit,i’ve brought something for u….”said shivaay while opening the tiffin having alluu puri…..
Aalu purii……!!!!thnk u shivaay….”said anika very excitedly…
They both ate allu puri…..then shivaay takes her to juhu beach….they are sitting near sea,,putting their legs in water…..anika’s head was on shivaay’s shoulder…..!!
They were continuously talking n remmbr their childhood…..
FLASHBACK
Oberois n Singhanias were neighbour n family friend…..
Anika has lost their parents when she was 5 ….there was no one in her family other than her parents….so oberois decided to keep anika with them….
Soon anika was shifted to oberois’ house bt she always stay lost in her own thoughts…after her parent’s death ,,she didn’t even cried….she was still in shock…
OmRu n prinku tried their level best to be frnd with her n convince her to play with them…bt all went in vain….she always stay in her room…!!!
Shivaay being elder n mature decided to to help anika to come out of this trauma….
He went to her room…..tried to talk to her bt she was not in mood…
Anika just lied on bed covering her face with pillow,….
What happened anika…!!why r u sad…??…little shivaay asked little anika holding her hand….
I dont want to talk to anyone ,,,u go from here….”said anika jerking shivaay’s hand…
U know my teacher told me that when we share each others pain,,,it get reduced….”said shivaay with a mature xpression.
Listening this anika removed pillow from her face n gets up sit on the bed….
Really…???bt how is this possible…!!..”said anika with interest of knowing more…
Dont know…bt my teacher never lie as its bad habit to lie n….”said shivaay with childish gesture
U know my mama papa left me here alone..they dont love me….”said anika with a painful voice n starts crying….
Shivaay consoles her n wipe her tears….
Are u mad….!!they love u a lot….see they went to god to personally ask God for ur happiness…see how much they love u…..”said shivaay wiping her tears….
Really..!!they love me soo much…..”asked anika being surprised…..
Han buddhu….n u were sad….!!we’ll enjoy here….u can treat my mama papa as urs….god is very far no,,,so it’ll take soo much time to return them…..”said shivaay with innocence….
Okay….i’ll wait for them…u r very sweet….”said anika smiling….
No…i m not sweet…dont call me that..understand….!!!”said shivaay with full tadi..
Ok baba…..so friends….???”asked anika forwarding her hand..
Of course….”said shivaay shaking hand
Anika kissed shivaay on his cheeck,…..
Hawwww….what is this,….!!!”’said shivaay angrily rubbing his face
Dont show tadi,….”said anika smiling…
They become good frnds n soon anika mingled with whole family….she starts playing with OmRu n prinku bt her fav time was with shivaay…..
Soon they all grow up bt there was no differnce in their frndship…!!
Anika n shivaay promised each other,,they will always be together no matter what will be situation,..
FLASHBACK ENDS
( u must be wondering if anika was living with oberois then whats this 12:00-5:00 am matter n why pinki would be stressed to know this.?.so move on to know)
U used to show so much tadi even in ur childhood…..”said anika giggling
Shivaay just glare her….
Now i’ve to leave shivaay,,,its 5:00 am..”said anika….
Soon they bid goodbye to each other….
Like this they used to meet every night like this…two months passed like this…..
12:45am
Its too late…anika hasn’t came yet…!!!she never have been this late…..i hope everything is ok…..!!
Now its 5,,,still there is no clue of anika….
Shivaay thought there must be some reason so he left…..
Next day….again he is waiting for her,,its 2:00 am bt anika didn’t come yet….now he is really worried….
God,,why r u doing this….please anika come n…i m waiting for u…..”’said shivaay with trembling voice
He break down there n start shouting anika’s name….tears start rolling from his eyes,,.bt there wasn’t any clue why hasnt she came…
Shivaay went to his home….whole day he was disturbed thinking about her…!!he was really worried….he couldnt concentrate on any work….!!!
N tomorrow is shivaay’s b’day….
12:00 am
As usual shivaay was waiting for her….!!n by his good luck,,,,anika arrived today..
Happy b’day shivaaay……”anika exclaimed
So many balloons are there in her hand..wearing white saree with full sleeves blouse..
Shivaay just saw her n run towards her…..
He takes her in bone crushing hug….
Where were u…??i hate u anika…i just hate u,….”said shivaay with trmbling voice
Tears are flowing from his eyes….!!!
Shivaay calm down…..i know u r hurt bt i can xplain…..”said anika patting shivaay’s back to console him
Trust me anika u cant….u know how was i feeling..u should have told me,,,,i would have definately understand u….”said shivaay angrily breaking hug….!!
If i would have told u,,then what would be the surprise…!!!u dont want to know ur surprise….!!”said anika pouting
What surprise,…!!”asked shivaay being confused…..
Ur b’day surprise….!!!on ur b’day i’ll be with u whole day…now please forgive me n smile…..”said anika
Listening this,,,there was no limit of shivaays happiness….!!!
He again hugged her tightly…..!!
As i m not SSO ,,so i couldnt do what u have done for me…so i did this…u know i can meet u only from 12:00-5:00 am…so i skipped two days to be with u whole day today….”said anika smilingly…..
So lets go to OM….”said shivaay
Soon they reached to OM….they spend their whole day together…..!!anika rearranged shivaays room…she decorated whole room….arranged cakes n candles there….shivaay cut the cake n they fed cake to each other…!!they danced on each others fav song…..shivaay was making anika’s fav dish…they were in kitchen…
OmRu were watching this…
Shivaay is soo happy with anika,,,”’said Om smilingly
Yaaa O,….i wish they could be together bt destiny had planned something else for them….”said rudra being sad..
Just then pinki passes from there n she is shocked to see shivaay so happy like this….
Shivaay is soo happy today.,,.any special occassion…”asked pinki to OmRu
We all know today is shivaay’s b’day bt more than that anika is witn her which increases his happiness to hundred times….”said Om
Listening this pinki stumbled….OmRu give her support….
How is this possible….i know how much anika is important for her,..i also love her bt they have no future….i’ve asked her to not do this….shivaay will never move on….”’said pinki with a painful voice
I can understand ur situation choti maa,,,,bt no one can replace anika didi’s place in bhaiya’s life…”said Rudra consoling pinki…..
We all know what was shivaay’s condition after ANIKA’S DEATH….”said Om with tearful eyes
FLASHBACK
shivaay n anika have gone for shopping….shivaay was waiting for anika outside mall n talking to someone on his phone….!!
Anika comes out of mall n she sees that a truck was coming towards shivaay…it seems its break has failed…!!
Anika shouts shivaay’s name bt he ws bsy on phone…..she runs towards him ,,,pushes him n she herself got hit by truck…..
N soon she was in pool of her own blood….
For a minute shivaay was unable to understand what has just happened….!!!
He shouts ANIKA n runs toward her….he takes her to hospital….bt he won’t know destiny doesnt want them to be together….
He was shatterd to know about anika’s death…he was sure in his mind,,it can never happen…his anika,,,his life….can never leave her like this….she has promised her that she’ll never leave him,..how can she break her promise….not a single tear fall from his eyes…..listening this news,,he starts walking to his home..there was no soul in his body,,,,he is just a body in which heart was beating bt there was no need of it….soon he reached home n went to her room ….closed the door….put all lights off n sat in a corner…..
Soon all oberoi came to know about this ,,,they went to hospital,,,take anika’s body,,performed last rituals….OmRu went to call shivaay….bt he didn’t come….why would he come,….he knew all this is rubbish…her anika cant leave her…!!she’ll come….n he’ll wait for him…..
One week passed….bt shivaay was still in his room….
One night..12:00AM
Shivaay hears a voice
SHIVAAY….SEE WHO IS HERE…I PROMISED U I WON’T LEAVE U ..HOW CAN I BREAK MY PROMISE..SHIVAAY
shivaay turned behind n sees the most beautiful lady of his life i.e anika….she is wearing white gown….shivaay rushes to her n hug her tightly…
I know u cant go…that doctor,OmRu,,mama all were just saying rubbish,..lets go i’ll make them realise their mistake….”said shivaay with a confident smile
Shivaay i m not in ur world now….i have gone verry far…u told me n my mama papa have gone to God to ask for my happiness…i’ve also gone to God to seek ur Happiness….!!bt i dont want to break ur promise also n….so i m here…..!!”said anika making shivaay to face the reality…
Listening all this shivaay break down….he just hugged her n starts crying uncontrolably,…!!!
I cant live without u anika,,,,u r my bestest frnd….why u left me….
Shivaay…i told u n,.i’ll be always with u…..now stop crying n come we’ll eat dinner together….”said anika wiping his tears
FLASHBACK ENDS
choti maa please dont do this to shivaay…let him live his life…”said Om pleading pinki
But om…”said pinki but soon cutoff by rudra
Please choti ma….”said rudra
Okkkk…..”said pinki….
(So guys anika is no more….it was her soul who come everyday to be with shivaay….she is allowed to come here only from 12:00-5:00am….thats why she wear white dress always….that two day she didn’t come becoz she wanted to be with shivaay on his b’day so it get managed…!!only shivaay can see anika bt he has told everythinh to OmRu n everyone…pinki wasnt happy with this,,,shivaay n anika met once in OM n shivaay went outside to bring something as pinki knew anika was there so she asked her to leave his son’s life….bt anika couldnt do this..shivaay is very imp for her n she couldnt break her promise….after that that shivaay shares everything about anika with OmRu only )
Pinki left to her room n OmRu also went to thier room….
Shivaay has made the food….they both fed each other….
Shivaay lay down on floor with his head on anika’s lap….
Our relationship is so strange n anika…..we share a unique bond….u never left me….n u dont u dare to do that ever…we dont have feeling for each other bt we can do anything for each other….our relation is beyond to frndship n our love doent have any limit…we r not like typical boyfrnd n grlfrnd….bt we r differnt….”said shivaay while resting in her lap..
Yes shivaay I AM UR HALF GIRLFRND N U R MY HALF BOYFRND…not like that typical boyfrnd grlfrnd,,,,we share much more than that..”said anika completing shivaay’s line
Anika rested her head on his…..n screen freezes on this scene…..!!!
(If they would have together then may be they started feeling for each other in that way bt destiny has something else for them…)
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I hope u all liked this…this idea popped up in my mind so i thought to pen it down…it takes me one n half hour to write this….
Please guys commnt n this time little longer,,,how u feel about this please…..
N i’ll post next part of my ff tomorrow or may be at night today…..
Lots of love
Kanfi
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Superb knafi
Gazab likhte ho aap
Thnx fenil…..
I m glad u liked it,,.
It was awesome n heart touching one… Loved it…. waiting for your ff…
Thnk u sagi…i m soooo happy u liked it…love uu
Wow! Di it’s very unique.
Thnx dwet..i m really hppy u read it..
I seriously didn’t expect that it’s was ghost kind of thing I don’t know how to explain it seriously kanfu Di how do u write this kind of good stuff better do medicine become a doctor n write some beautiful novels if u write give first copy to your mom n I want one copy for sure I know I am dreaming toooo much but your writing is too god I read ff’s but I leave many in middle but I read each of your works fully.u just may be what will happen next?? Kind n this was fab they say right when we want some one from heart we will be close with them
How far they are I am just keep writing diiiiii.u didn’t write 10 OS but one which I will remeber life longggg #Rufina I am Rufina who typed this no said it with heart.love uuuuu diiiii
Rufiiiiiikk
First i m very happpyy,,u read it….
Most long commnt i’ e ever get,..
I m smiling throughout reading this n u wont believe i’ve read it 5 times in last one min…..
Thnk u soo much for such a cute wish,,if that happen sure i’ll….
I m really very glad,,u liked my work….
Loveee uu from dil se yrr
Khidkithod update kanfi
U brought tears in my eyes.
Loved the way of your writing.
U r an awesome writer.
Do write more os
Thnx rishi,…
I didn’t think u all will like it sooo much,….
I m really happy after seeing ur commnt….
I’ll try to wrte more….
Love uu
u made cry. really nice os. next time Nobody should die plz.
I m happy u like it….
Ok i’ll come soon with happy ending OS….
I also write n ff…
If u want ,,u can read..
http://www.tellyupdates.com/user/9956/?profiletab=posts
am regular and silent reader of ur ff kanfi. i like ur ff verymuch.
Awwwweee..thnx dear…love uu
dear its so nice it made me cry.it remains me of my past.a question to all?why will he/she leave us alone in this world,why do they go from us?they no that we can`t live without them.then why does this happen? why will god take those people away from us without whom we can`t live.why is this god so selfish why do he do this to us?there are many questions awaking in me.thanks dear for writing this os it`s really heart touching.
Hi aiha….
I m sorry if it hurts u n remind u of ur past….
N i m happy u likee it….
I can understand how it feels when someone close left us….
Be happy…we cant chnge our past,,so betttr we deal with it…
If u’ve time u can read my ff
http://www.tellyupdates.com/user/9956/?profiletab=posts
no,di your not hurting me.but u may thing that a 11 yrs girl had such a bad past.i am sorry if I wrote anything wrong.i will surely read ur ff`s and o.s
No u didn’t hurt me at all…..
I was just worried for u….
Dont think about past much…it’ll just hurt u…!!
Be happy..
Love uuuu
thanks to all the t.u guys because of them I am so happy now and I forgot everything that happened.love you toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo di
Hey Kanfi, the update is super amazing.
Lovely. Anika’s soul, oh my god.
Everything you described was crystal clear and perfect and I know their relation is far more beyond that bf and gf.
I loved it, seriously, damn amazing.
So emotional and super cool.
You are an awesome writer.
Do come with more.
Love yaa❤❤
Thnx jerry for such a long commnt….
Im really happy u liked it….
Trust me i didn’t thought u all like this sooo much….
Lovee uuuu toooooo
Hossom kanfi.Bahut hi kammal tha.Apki soch bahut nayi thi.Really didn’t imagine that anika would be a ghost.But, sabse zyada Yeh aacha laga ki Om and rudie were supporting his bhaiya. You have clearly explained ki dono bhai shivay and anika se kitna pyaar karte hai.Liked the concept of half girlfriend n u gave the perfect definition. A very heart touching and heart robbing story I would say.Do write and post ur FF and OS,as I am eager to read and comment.U r really fabulous writer!!!
Thnknu soo much radhika….
I m very happy after seeing ur commnt…
Thnk u for ur appreciation,,,,,
I m writing an ff,,if have time do read..,17 epi r already wrttn
http://www.tellyupdates.com/user/9956/?profiletab=posts
Yes Dear will surely read it for u.
Loveee uuuuuu
Love u too dear.
Dii?! maine kabhi apne sapne mein bhi nahi socha tha ki it’ll be a ghost kinda thing!! surprised to the core yaar!! pata hai, all the while when reading the ff I controlled my tears and was continuously assuring myself ki beta, yeh koi adhuri kahaani hi hogi so don’t give hopes for complete ending…aur i was LITERALLY SURPRISED when i read the last part..! ( usually koi bhi happy ending expect karta hai…par aaj kal IB fans ko HUMARI ADHURI KAHAANI title track use karne ki bohot shock hai shaayad…. toh i always hope for a COMPLETE ending!! )aur main nahi keh sakti that it was sad…yeh happy tha par adhura tha….u know it’s like one of a telugu film that I’ve watched( Ekkadiki pootavu chinnavaada ) meaning_ where will u go baby?(jo mere samajh mein aaya uss se translate kar diya..??maafi?
Thnk soo much akshaya….
Yaaa it waas kind of sad ff…..
I m happy u liked it…..
Where will u go baby:-P 😛
There must be some other name in its dubbed version….
Loveee uu
I also write ff,,if have time do read.
http://www.tellyupdates.com/user/9956/?profiletab=posts
???yaaar dii sorry mujhe translate karna nahi aata…
aur dii i read ur ff love at first sight…..i loved it from the start only…and just read ur ff on ur bestiee Sumitha…how sweet of u….!!
Awwwwwee..thats soooo sweeet of u dear..
LOVEEE UUUUU
Di u made me cry????….
It was mindblowing….heart touching story…keep it up.. .nd come back wd another OS….
Thnk u dear…
Ya it was emotional….
M glad u liked it….
I also write an ff….if have time, read it..
http://www.tellyupdates.com/user/9956/?profiletab=posts
Heyyyyyy kanfiiii really I love but I was emotional when I came to know anika soul. …..amazing update yaar write more more os. ….
Thnk u sumi….loveee uuuu
Wowwww Kanfiii…!! So beautiful yaar…!! So damn emotionally beautiful love story??Loveeddddd every bit of it..!! And wo suspense kya suspense tha yaar…so hard to imagine that the girl was a soul..i m soooo amazed kanfii…!! I am still playing the whole episode in my head. Its soo touching…!! Ur truely an awesome writer…and i just loveeee the way ur ff connects with us..!! Definitely keep posting more ffs…Eagerly waiting for more awesome epi..!! Luv uuuuuu kanfiii????
Awwwwwee thats sooo sweet of u rakveen…..i m really happy after seeing ur commnt….!!!
Ur aplreciation made my day..
U r indeed a best frnd….there r mny school frnds r there,,,bt only u read my work n appreciate it…
Loveeee uuui
Awwwweeee…kanfiii..!! This reply made my day..!! Feeling soo blessed to have a best friend like you??!! And u dont need to feel thankful to me..ur work is worth appreciation. Just keep it up and keep going…!! I am and will always be ur best friend and ur biggest fan?????
Superb update
Thnk uu sooo muchh
I am speechless to read this Kanfi…Its Soooo Brilliant…Love has no bounds n its prove by your writing…Its soooo mesmersing i am very emotional to read it…Anika’s soul is still for Shivaay…And everyone knows that…It looks sooo beautiful that after anika’s death also Shivaay is there for Anika’s soul…There love status actually should like “Half Girlfriend n Half boyfriend”….Superbbb ?????????????
Thnk uii sooooo much riana….
I m glad u read it n liked it….
N i m able to make u understand the concept of half girlfrnd.—
Loveeee uu
Kya bolu,.???….??
Nai tum hi batao kya bolu..??.
U know i read 2 story of shivika today..first i had read tellyupdate love story of dem..n today urs..
I….
Wo actually….
I…ummm …. It wasnt goood
Sachchi..but sorry IT WAASNT GOOOOD…
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OK..OK..
IT WAS suoerb…ekdm amazing..bole yo jhakkaas…
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Unique one .
I loved ut…u know i loved der bond in d beginning….
But at d end..knowing d truth..i felt emotional n nostalgic??..
But it was beautifullly written…
????…
Superb job dear…
Loveeeedddd it…
Lovee u..!!??..
I dont read IB’s ff..so wenever u wrote..do tell me..i will surely read…
Ummmaaahhh..!!???
thnk uuuuu aamuu..
I m really happy u liked it…..
It really meant a lot…
That tellyupdate story is of sana…n it was just fabulous…
I write an ff too….if u want u can read
http://www.tellyupdates.com/user/9956/?profiletab=posts
I literally went speechless on reading this update . you have given such beautiful or say soulful story with lot of emotions in it perfectly. It was just flawless and most beautifully you essayed characters beyond the limits. Seriously great . Hope to read many more . God bless your writing skills much more .
Thnk u sooo much ashwineee…..
I m happy u read it n liked it tooo…..
Ur appreciatiin made my day…..
Yaa i’ll…..
Lovee uu
I also write an ff,.if u want u can read..
http://www.tellyupdates.com/user/9956/?profiletab=posts
Thank you for the link. I literally wanted it.
And Kanfi both of us may remember each other or not But this story especially will always be in my heart . Thank You sooooooooooooooooooooo much.
Awwwwee so sweet of u dear…
We’ll also remmbr each other…
Frnds?????
Love uuu
Awesome one di
Thnk u archu..love u
Awesome dii
loved it
Amazing
Superb
Post more os like this
Love you
take care
byeee
Thnk uuu ishu…
I m happy uread it n liked..
SURE I’ll come with many more..
Love uuu
First,love u di.I m speechless.I m very emotional with this os but loved it.Hats off to u.What an idea di.Amazing,Awesome,fantastic os ever for me.
Thnkkk uuuu mehak…
LOVEEE UU toooo…..
Soo much apprecition..really thnk u
Isse difine karne ke liye alfazz nahi he mere pass…it made me speechless. ……just beyond of words. ….it is sooo heart touching and heart wrenching os…..thnx kanfi dear for this beautiful os..
Thnk uu soo much arpita for appreciation,…
Lovee u…
I also read an ff
http://www.tellyupdates.com/user/9956/?profiletab=posts
Surprised dii….
Aap toh maine socha tha usse b jhakkkkaaas writer nikli ????????
Thnk u cutie….
I m happy u like id..
Love uu
I never expected this type of climax. This is one of the best stories I have read. I was reading this with my complete attention and the point where Om said thar word “Annika’s Death”, I was like….. “hain? Abhi toh yahin thi” then the way you described Shivaay’s condition after Annika’s death, it litreally brought tears in my eyes. Superb update! Hats of to you!! And that little Annika and little Shivaay convo was so cute! Little babies consoling each other! Shoo shweeetttt! <3 <3 <3. Do come up with more OS' like this. Love you! <3
Thnk u soooo much zainab…
I m soooo happy u like it….
Yaa little ones convo was cute….
Yaa i’ll
I also writw an ff.
http://www.tellyupdates.com/user/9956/?profiletab=posts
It’s awesome Kanfi….when I read the title I thought it will be the old cliche story, but this was so different…..It’s really very nice….
Thnk u nita…
I m happy u liked it,..
Love uu
Amazing… Fabulous… superb… mind blowing.. n what not… ??? u just nailed it… keep writing this type of Amazing story dear… waiting for another master piece….
Thnx ankita….
I m really glad ulike it….
Thnk u sooo much for ur apppreciation….
I also write an ff…if u have time,,,,u can read….i m rmmbring i’ve seen ir commnt there bt i m not sure…if u r reading then thnk uuu…bt if not u can read…
http://www.tellyupdates.com/user/9956/?profiletab=posts
yes, I m regular reader of ur ff…
the way u write.. Excellent..
It is awesome dear… You make me cry…
Awwee…thnx nikita
To be honest, I never ever like sad ending. But this is very different! Heart touching OS dear!! Its really expected ending for me. Now I m literaly crying dear. Very good concept Kanfi! Write more os dear but give happy endings also!
*unexpected
Thnx vishu..
I m glad u liked it..
Okk i’ll come up with happy ending OS
NYC update l really didn’t expect the twist that anika would be dead it made me so sad anyway hats off to your idea nd keep writing
Thnx aradhya….
I m happy u like it….
I read an ff too.
If have time,,u can read..
http://www.tellyupdates.com/user/9956/?profiletab=posts
I am extremely sorry kanfi di but I don’t have time to read ur ff I am in 12th std nd is too busy with my classes nd tuition which leaves me with no time so sorry…
Ohhhkk…
No problem dear..
Studies are first priority..
All the best
Hey, such a peculiar story but filled with soul! Hehe ?
You know wired stories amaze the readers, rather than, usual mundane types.
You really did hold the suspense,, and I never imaged Anika to be a soul.
Great update
Fascinating storyline
Interesting
I hope you develop, more Os like this and explore a lot as a writter.
Love ya !
Even our friendship is beyond words and I duely respect it.
Awwwwweee…
Thnk uuu soooo much neha……
I’ll definately come up with other one..
Exactly……lovee uuuu
Omg ! This is something unexpected and shocking . You are awesome di to come up with such a story . I thought I was quiet long but I couldn’t stop and I finished all in one go !
The friendship of Shivaye and Anika are so sweet and cute .
This is a little wierd but a different amazing idea , I totally loved it .
You said that only Shivaye can see her ? What about our ice cream vendor ! Just asking and I remind you di that this is superb and suspense was killer .
Keep writing more and I’m really sorry for commenting late !
Love you , take care ?
Thnk uuu sana…
I m really glad u liked it….
Thnk uu sooo much for this appreciation….
About ice cream vendor i’ve mentioned there that he gave confused xpression bt later forget to cleae why…!,,
N dont be sorry..
Love uu