HAMARI ADHURI KAHANI(One Shot OS)
First of all, a big big SORRY for being sooooo late in posting my updates…But what to do, I’m currently overburdened with my studies & above it, my legs got fractured couple of days back while driving…uff…..& friends, what is this going on in our TU…….our friends are leaving one by one……I request all my writer friends to plz come back, I know, that the recent track is a bit disappointing, but still, we all are here to accomplish all our unfulfilled wishes…our wishes which couldn’t be fulfilled in the show….ok ok…….before u all get irritated by my continuous blabbering & start cursing me…..let me start(my rest chattering will continue at the end of this story…which u can skip, if at all u get irritated…what to do, returned to my family after about one long month…lots of talks, while time is short)
Now, a big thanks to Riru(Reni), Anu, Ashnita, Rishu, Kachi(Vrushti), Arpitakrish, Dhruvi, Aafiya, Ruwani, Dhruti, Amnaa, Ishi, Swetha, Urvi Shah, Niyaa, Kajal, Tumpamoni, Priyanshi, Sanyukta, Rushi, Sayani, Shivanii, Anuradha, Anee, Mitali, Divya, Abhilasha for liking my previous OS….& never to miss, all my friends, who took out their time & read my post & liked or disliked it……..plz friends, when you don’t like the plot, plz let us know, what flaws exist in our writing so that we could rectify it & not repeat this mistake in our next post…..
Without wasting any more of ur precious time, let’s get started….
I am Sanchi…Sanchi Mishra. Or should I say “his” broken doll. He was my past, is my present and will be my future till my last breathe. It won’t be wrong if I’ll say he was a blessing in my life.
It all started when I was in class 8. Yes, that was the time when that blessing entered my life as my friend. But as time passed by we became Bestie. Though we have many friends in our group but still we share the best bonding as compared to all our friends. We have nothing in common he is studious and I am loser who don’t even like to study. As time passed by, our bonding became more and more stronger.
Now we all are in class 11. Till now many things have changed I am no more that Sanchi who escapes from study and all credits just goes to him. He was only one who brings the best in me. He wasn’t a random guy but he was my human dairy… One, that I kept locked with not just by password but promises. He was my Kabir…Kabir Kapoor.
It’s a pleasure to reminisce all the moments spent with him. But after some days, our life took a sudden turn or should I say everything changed but still remained unchanged, noticed but still unnoticed. We passed our 11th with flying colors. But as we entered 12th he started behaving differently. It took me sometime to realize that he had started developing some feelings for me. I used to ignore that as we were besties and he also didn’t confess his feelings for me.
Sometimes he used to send me some pictures. I still have them with me. It was fun to go through those pics “Zyada ladhte hain aur har baar kehte hain ki ‘BAAT MATT KARNA KABHI’ par unhi ke bina ek pal bhi nehi reh sakte”. But those lines are completely true ones. Yes, we aren’t in any relationship but still we used to talk with each other whole day and night. It’s fun to spend time with him.
I remembered once I asked a silly question to him.
Fb shows
Kabir and Sanchi talking with each other.
Sanchi: Kabir I wanna ask something.
Kabir: Ask
Sanchi: How does a real angel look like?
Kabir: Just like the one who is asking this question.
Fb ends
And again 7 months passed and with him I never realize the time. It’s time to bid goodbye to our school i.e. farewell. We all had to participate in this as it was compulsory. And I decided to sing my favorite song,“WHAT DO YOU MEAN”!!
But I had never hoped that the farewell day will lead this to happen. That song which I chose to sing “What do you mean!!”…he had planned to reply me on that. Yes, finally he directly confessed his feelings to me.
Fb shows
Sanchi singing the song. While everyone else was hooting on the lyrics. As soon as the song ended and Sanchi left the stage, Kabir came from somewhere and took Sanchi along with him holding her hand.
Sanchi: Where are you taking me Kabir?
Kabir: Wait for sometime. You’ll get to know soon.
Sanchi, like an obedient child, followed his order. They reached to the backyard of school when Kabir asked Sanchi to wait and went from there. While Sanchi was waiting for Kabir, someone closed her eyes from back. The person was none other than Kabir.
Kabir: Sanchi, don’t open your eyes until I ask you to…(Sanchi just nodded)
Then Kabir sat on his knees.
Kabir: Sanchi, dekh main ghuma phira ke nehi boloonga, saaf saaf kehta hoon jo bhi kehna hai. Dekh, main ye kehna chahta hoon ki, mujhe nahi pata ye kab hua, kaise hua, kyun hua…Lekin, ab jo bhi ho, tu meri zindagi bann gayi hai. Tu nehi hoti hai, toh kuch aacha nehi lagta aur tum hoti ho toh tumse durr jane ka mann nehi karta. Ye nehi jaanta tujhse kya baat karoon, lekin, tumse din bhar baat karna chahta hoon…Dekh, directly boltaa hoon…Main tumse beintehaa mohabbat karne laga hoon Sanchi.
Without even waiting for a second after confession, Sanchi left from there.
Fb ends
I thought that day everything will change. I will lose him forever but no it didn’t happen. As always, he managed the situation. He called me and talked with me, just like before. It seemed like nothing had happened. He knew well how to handle me.
Fb shows
Kabir & Sanchi are shown talking to each other on call.
Sanchi: What do you mean by all that Kabir?
Kabir: I mean I love you Sanchi.
Sanchi: But…
Kabir: I know Sanchi…as per you we are better as friends. Right?
Sanchi: Hmm
Kabir: Don’t think much Mishri, I promise I will never make my love to become hurdle in our friendship. I won’t allow my feelings to overcome my priority which is your happiness. I won’t ever force you to accept my love. But I’ll always love you only. And I hope you’re comfortable as friends. And I’m sorry if I had hurt you.
Sanchi: Tum itne aache kyun ho Kabir?
Kabir: Bcoz, I have you in my life.
Fb ends.
Nothing changed between us. But with time our friendship increased. He cared for me so much. He was my half boyfriend. We were meant to be with each other. Nothing and anything could change the things between us. With the time his care for me increased. He never let his love to get overpowered upon his friendship. His smile, the symbol of that unconditional love was the only thing which used to make me happy even in worst situation.
He was perfect and the best friend that no one else can have. As he was just one piece in this whole world. Or rather I should say, he was my soulmate. It took me sometime for realization…but yes, I realized that I also loved him…he was the one who always bought smile on my face…the one, who changed me in all aspects…the one, who loves me unconditionally and unexpectedly.
That day while we were talking & I was about to tell him regarding my feelings for him.
Fb shows
Sanchi: Kabir, I want to tell you……
Kabir: Sanchi, I’ll call you later. Bye.
Sanchi: Kabir…
But the call was already disconnected.
Fb ends
I didn’t have any idea that his “I will call you later” was never going to come. Earlier my phone used to ring a lot due to him and I used to get irritated but now I just wait for one ring from him to talk which is never gonna come.
Yes, I lost him forever in an accident. I lost him on that day only when I realized my feelings. I lost the one who was mine. Now all the time my wet eyes eagerly wait to see those smile which used to make me happy even in worst situations…but I had lost it. Now all I have is his memories and dairy.
Yes, a diary which made me know, while I was ignoring his feelings for me, on the contrary, I meant the world to him.
In that diary I read a line by him “I WISH I COULD IGNORE U SANCHI…LIKE U IGNORE ME…. BUT I JUST CAN’T!!! ” that broke me into tears.
Now I just think how our destiny made us a PART of each other and how it also made us APART. I just want to tell I love you and will always do till my last breathe. But in the world, full of temporary forever, he gave me his final goodbye.
I somehow controlled myself and added some lines in his diary…
U ARE THE BEAT OF MY HEART, U ARE THE LOVE OF MY LIFE…
I PROMISE I’LL ALWAYS LOVE U, TILL MY LAST BREATH…
FROM TALKING TO HIM ABOUT MOON, TO TALKING TO MOON ABOUT HIM…
“US”…LEFT BEHIND
No one knows when the last goodbye is. We feels like we have enough time but sometimes, we just have limited time to spent with our loved ones. Don’t know when you’re talking to the person for last time. Nobody knows if you can ever meet or be able to talk with the person again. So don’t waste any moment that you can spend with the one whom you love. Not everyone is lucky to live for years, not everyone is that much lucky. A prank may be played by destiny beyond our thinking. We never know how destiny makes people a part of it and how to it makes us apart from them that too when we can’t even think of living without that person.
THE END
So friends, I just hope it was worth reading. I’m really thankful to those who read my story, thanks a lot friends. Plz do share your views regarding this plot through your comments & of course, once again, if you didn’t like it, or found any flaws in this, plz let me know through your comments, so that I could rectify it….
Friends, I can understand, u would have already started cursing me for this emotional OS, but sorry for this…So Dhruti, Sanyukta, Prachi, Niyaa, Vrushti, I hope now you all would forgive me for getting late in posting this, coz I compensated by posting this OS…haha…Anuradha, dear plz take care of yourself, Ashu, plz come back, we r missing our suspense queen, All the best to all my friends who r going to face their exams…& never to forget, my jungleeyon…my TU BAK BAK GANG….& a biiiig thanks to everyone as well for bearing all my blabbering…haha…
With lots of Love,
Priyanka ?
37 Comments
Dear this Os Is sooo emotional? It made me teary? Great os! Keep posting?
so so sorry for making u emotional……….but ab kya karoon, whatever came in this chotu sa dimaag, I wrote it……..thanks a lot for liking it………bye…….tc………& yes, I’m really enjoying reading I’m Selfish………keep rocking dear……….
Brahmu haaye haaye brahmu haaye haaye??.. Kya tha ye itna emotional kisne bola tha likhne ko??? tujhe pata h naa m kitti senti hun ro padti hun????.. Hehe???chalo jao maaf kiya kisi hi bahane TU p wapis to aai.. Ab jaldi se ff bhi post kar… Os is outstanding.. Fadoo.. Gajabbb.. Rondu ??.. Nd meko teri bak bak pasand h itti pyali jo krti h kabhi kabhi samjh m bhi nhi aati??.. Just kidding tujhe to pata h mujhe bak bak kitni pasand h aakhir dono isi kaam m expert hain???Lovvv u yaar came back asap with ur ff or os..??? bye tc gud nit???
haye……….zombu……….tune mujhe maaf kardiya………..haye……….& waise bhi, tu agar mujhe maaf nhi karti naa toh tere dimaag me ghuske tujhe raat bhar sone nhi deti andaa ki tarah, phir ghoomti rehti yahaan wahaan ye bolte hue, ki kaash maine brahmu ko maaf kar diya hota toh mera ye haal na hua hota………haha………just kidding……shukriya tareef karne ke liye…….btw, main intezaar kar rahi hoon Ishq dua ya hai sazaa ki……..tere liye ki…….& sabse zyaada mere nishaan ki……..ab agar jaldi se nhi likha naa…….toh main teri………kya ukhaad loongi……..yahaan se thodi na tujhe kuch karpaoongi………saamne hoti toh dekha jaata……….arey dekh………yahaan bhi bak bak shuru…….baaki baatein insta pe…….haha…….luv u yaar
Yaar maan gyi tujhe tere liye bhi yaad h m khud bhul chuki hun usse tu nahi bhulne degi maregi kya bachchi ko ek to complete
nhi hota teen. teen k iyaad dila de ????..
haha….brahmu jo hoon…apni zombu ki writigs thodi na bhooloongi……luv u yaar
The end made me cry…. Its so emotional and well said…. Loved it very much
so good to be able to communicate with u once again……..missed u a lot dear……& sorry………aate hi tumhe rulane ke liye………I’m really glad that u liked it…….luv u a lot sweetieeeee………bye………tc
prinku what to say about your os because i have not a single word to describe my feeling while i read your os it was too emotinal and made me teary but i control my self to not cry because itne dino ke baad teri story read karne ka chance mila to me kese ro sakti hu???? right and i already forgive you because bestie se jyada naraz bhi to nahi raha jata na!!!
i was a little sad because many of writer are specially old writer left TU and iknow show me bahot hi disappointing track chal raha he or u know mene to show hi chhod diya shirf read kar leti hu TU or jab kanchi ke scenes or vo bhi sad scenes aate he to vo voot pe yaaa insta pe dekh leti hu………
but it’s good that you all are posting something on insta so there we met…………
so prinku how are you feeling now?
take care your self and don’t try to unnecessarily move anywhere and take rest and get well soon…..love you khub sara my prinku……………..see you soon…………..
I AM REQUESTING YOU REMAING WRITER OF OUR KANCHI’S PLEASE COME BACK ON TU………
haha……meri ghar waapsi ki sabse badi reason, tu hi toh hai……..luv u yaar…….& btw, iss namoone show kuch kare ya naa kare, but mujhe bohut bohut pyaari family de di hai…….TU ke through……..I’m really blessed to have such a lovely family of mine & more than that, u as my frnd cum sis………luv u a lot sweetieeeeee & haan, thnx for ur concern……..koi nhi…….thand ka season hai naa, so thoda time lag raha hai, recover karne ke liye………luv u dherrrrrrr saara & a badi waali jaadu ki jhappi for u Shona
Nice… Superb.. Keep posting.. Take care of yourself..
Aafiyaaaaaaaaaaa…….missed u a lot sweetieeeeeee………I’m on cloud9 after reading ur cmmnts…..u r one of my regular readers & commentor……..& thnx a lot for being so sweet……..luv u a lot & a big teddy hug for u……..
MRP ki bacchi!!! Maine tumhe poocha ki os romantic hai ya nahi? But aab pata chala ye toh senti wala hai!!! Kya yaar aate hi rula diya! Not fair…. Os bohat hi rula dene wala tha?? but I loved reading it… Amazing yaar jaise tumne har ek scene explain kiya….sachi sachi wala pyar kanchi ka….but ye sachi ne bohat late realise kiya…huh!…aab rest karna Aur jyada khel kud mat karna.. Love u a loadsss meri MRP…???
CVR jee………haha………yaar, hamesha romantic hi kyun, tu ek baat bata, khaane me kya tu hamesha meetha khana pasand karegi……usme agar thodi namkeen thodi teekhi ka twist na ho, toh kya wo achha lagega? waise hi maine exactly yehi kiya………..iss os ko likhke………..thoda pravachan types ho gaya naa……..chhal jaane de……..pehle ye bataa…….be my girlfriend swaram kab post karegi……….yaar 2 mahine hogaye hai, ab kya next saal tak wait karna padega………& shukriya, meri chintaa karne ke liye………& khelna kya yaar, jab theek se chala bhi nhi jaa raha………haha……….luv u meri CVR wo bhi bohutttttttttttttttt saara………..hehe
soooooooooo emotional
but what you said is very true and don’t know what happens in next second
love you dear for this wonderful os
swetha dear, its so good to communicate with u once more………missed u a lot dear……..& yes, u r right, life can be really unpredictable at times…..ur comments alwz bring a big smile on my face & I’m eally glad that u liked this plot………luv u a lot sweetieeeeee & a big teddy hug for u……….bye…….tc
Brahmrakshas??????…tre leg m kab facture hua??…tune btya nhi ig pe….aur btya bhi hoga toh m nhi houngi….but koi ni ab apna dhyan rkhna aur coming 2 OS, it was superr duperrr achaa, dil de diya h❤….and abhi toh tune senti vala likha…but jab tu thik ho jaye naa toh happy vala vhi likhna….tata bye bye, c u on ig?
dhruvi ki bachii……….bataya toh tha……..kameeni, apne sapnon ki duniya se niklegi tabhi toh dusre log, I mean, junglee dikhenge naa……….haha………just kidding………& yaar, zyaada tension mat le…….ye brahmu itne jaldi tum logon ki watt lagaye bina tum sabko chodke kahin nehi jayegi……….pehle tum sab ka dimaag kharap karoongi & uske baad……..jinga lala hoo…jinga lalaa ho….hoo…hoo……jungle dance karoongi…………ab yaar, jaldi se apni darshan de do ig pe…….hamesha bhaag jaati hai……..baaki baatein ig pe…….luv u….bye……..tc
so nice..
hello reihana dear………it feels really nice to get comments from new readers & thnx for this dear……..so, u r barun sobti fan……..so……..hi five dear……..even I’m a big fan of arnav……..oops……iss pyaar ko kya naam doon…….wow…….Arshi……..my fav couple…….currently, its kanchi………hehe……….I know, u must be already irritated with my chattering…….so,I end my patar patar here only……..luv u a lot sweety…….& hope, u would write something for us, a kanchi os(haha………kanchi fan hoon naa……so demanded kanchi os)……..bye….tc
Yaar tujhe main kya bolu tera koi jawaab nahi hai.. Tu toh lajawaab hai.. Os is awesome yaar.. Thoda sad tha but story was just fabulous… Tu please apna dhyan rakh OK.. Love you dear
Anu Anu Anu………teri comments hamesha ki tarah, iss baar bhi mujhe asmaan mein pahunchaa di…….arey, udte udte asmaan me pahunch gayi yaar……..haha……….hamesha tere comments ke liye wait karti hoon…….& btw, ab tu kaisi hai……..theek toh hai naa……….khaana medicine, sab time se le rahi hai naa…….dekh, agar aage phirse bimaar hui toh……..toh main tere se katti ho jaoongi……..samjhi naa…….luv u a lot Shona & ek badiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii waali jaadu ki jhappi for u……….bye…….tc
Sorry for commenting this late Riya ??? I just got time to read your os and you got me on the verge of tears ??? not fair!!! But it was so nice and so beautiful dear ???
aww..cholly…..maine apni luwani ko lula diya…..gandi baat riyu,gandi baat……….cholly yaal………haha……really missed u a lot Ru, & more than that, ur inspiring words……..u r a great writer..& getting appreciation from a writer like u, really means a lot for me……..u r undoubtedly, one of my fav writers on TU……….& Shona, congrats for ur half century…….ab issi baat pe…….lets naacho…….haha………luv u dherrrrrrrrrrrrrrr saara & a big waali jaadu ki jhappi for u……….bye…..tc
Priyanka yaar tu to hum sab ko tula diya re……..iss ke liye kya comment karu pata nahi ……..it’s amazing,outstanding,mind blowing,superb and awesome yaar…….you are really rock priya………love u dear……..
Anuuuuuu……..thanku thanku thanku soooooooo much for itne saare appreciation & cholly(sorry) tujhe rulaane ke liye…….ab itni pyaari cmmnts se mujhe rulayegi kya pagli……..btw, tumhari God makes pairs ka mujhe besabri se intezaar hai, jaldi bataao, kab post karogi……socho socho & jaldi bataao……I’m waiting…….haha……..luv u a lot dear & a big teddy hug for u………..bye……tc
Thora sa wait kar priya ……..I am trying to post soon yaar……….love u too yaar………..
hehe…….luv u 2 3 4 5…….& so on……..haha
Such a an emotional os
You are a phenomenal writer every time I read any of your os I get amazed with ur writing
Keep it up dear
aww…..Ishi dear, I’m on cloud9 after reading ur cmmnts…….so much appreciation……sweety, itni bhi achhi writer nehi hoon, phir bhi……..thnx a lot sweety for ur kind words…….really, ur appreciation means a lot for me…….luv u a lot dear & a big teddy hug for u……..tc
Ye kya yaar??????? par ❤ mein hua ??…..awesomeeee
haha…….bibu ko maine rula diya………..cholly………..maaf kalde……..aage se dhyaan lakhungi ki jo tele bache kuche anchoo hai, wo bhi nikaal doon……….haha………..just kidding……..luv u meri pyaari vampu………baaki baatein ig par
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it made me teary i have no words …awesome wonderful writing skills……….
so so sorry erika dear for making u cry………ur words bought a big smile on my face………thanku so much for liking it………a big teddy hug for u sweety……..bye…….tc
OMG itna emotional os on dear Kaanchi…..rula diya????waise inn tears par bharosa mat karna….they r crocodile tears.
Hats-off to ur writtings dii.Dii aap ek number ke dushtani ho aapne bataya nahi fracture ke baare mein ,not fair…..waise dushtani naam jach raha hai aap pe.?????Par thank god!! derr aaye durust aaye.
Keep writting dear.
And yaa di batana bhul gayi….if possible next time no adhuri kahani on Kaanchi,only poori kahani.
Show mein bhi adhuri hi kahaani chal rahi hai.
haha……….don’t worry durgeshwari………agli baar, aisa kuch nhi hoga(hmm……koshish karoongi…….promise nhi kar sakti, coz kab iss chotu se dimaag me kounsa khoorafaat aa jaye kya pata) haha……..ab tu kab tak post karegi??? maine toh kardiya……….ab teri baari hai………& yaar, abhi thoda sa better hai mera pair………..luv u Shona & jaldise apna os/fs post karna